My Sister's Keeper [Ultimate Writer's Contest: Round 1]

[renesmevato2]

no it was amazing! i feel in love with this!

[JasmineTilman]

This is amazingg!!

[101Skylight]

I like selena in this she is hallarious!

[Mafalda963]

Omg! This was so beautiful. Completely loved it <3

[crazyylilykinsx]

u just make me cry!

god!

in a good way though,im such a sucker for cheesy-witty story

it too adorable!

[chanellovesing]

that's amazing

[RoDiaz96]

LOVED IT! it was really very VERY sweet!

Peace out ♥!

[TheOutsider1996]

you are amazing! you can be so funny but still make it super romantic and sweet. you are awesome!!

[jobrowhoa]

Amazing :) Gotta love Jemi <3 Let's see some Niley though! Lol. And maybe some Jelena :) But no Nelena! LOL Hope you get far :P

[inlovexforxlife]

ahhh god ur such a great writer >_> screw u :P haha jk illyyy

[NileyxIsxForeverx3]

yours was my favorite it was so pretty i loved it so much it was so amazing you are very good !!!i loved it so much i hope you win i favorited it haha it is fantastic (:

[alefonck]

I don't know but this made me cry..this was so good!! I have never cried for reading something romantic..u are definitely an amazing writer

[FaFrJo08]

In the Joe picture when its all 3 of them, Joe looks like Nick. I know there brothers, but they never loooked alike this before

[pinkalioucs]

that really touch my heart

[RitaProductions94]

omg this made me cry...i'm a sucker for romance.This is just beautiful.I love your writing so much.You describe felling flawlessly!

[4mr4you4lifr2]

OMG! That was seriosly fabulous. You never let your fans down. keep up the good work!

[rmandmj]

this was... amazing!(:

you are a great writer&&some serious competition!

[madii4ever]

Wow.. amazing :) <3

don't worry, u r incredibly good at writing, so u'll get through, & if u dont - though u will :P - it's ok, cause u would still be amazing ;D

loved it, gr8 job, but since i have 2 ask, ya ya i have 2 ruin the compliments - what's with the songs? not the choice, the edit of the sound?! i wanted 2 laugh, but the story itself was too good, i just couldn't :P

[TribeSpirit]

Well, first off, thank you ;)

And second, yeah, they turned out hella weird, they sounded good on SV, I used Pich Shift & it was fine, but then I rendered it, & the voices either went more deep or more high :S

[madii4ever]

haha, it's ok, like i said, the writing is too good, it keeps u from minding the sound ;D <3

[EllieNoir97]

Amazing! I'd be frightened if I was in the contest, but you have absolutely nothing to worry about, you'll definitely get through.

I loved it. Their relationship is too cute! :)

[xxJessicacacaxx]

AMAZING

[WinterTepes]

OMG, that was incredible!

[MisNickJ0nas]

i luv every single story u do. seriosuly.

[jocyproduction]

I've always wanted to go see that movie but never had then chance...But you made it seem something worth watching! I am so buying this movie! :)

This was amazing!!!! Beautiful:)

[xbabixg0txbacnex]

great job!

dat was awsome!! :D

[demifan981]

It's definetly the best Movie scene I ever rod (and trust me I love this kind of video so I read it a lot :P)

<3

[superfan15vane]

OHHH SO SWEET!!!!

[emiliaaa7]

wooww, i love this so much!

this is seriously amazing! <3

[twilightluvr73524]

for sure ur not going to lose!!

I REALLLY hope that u pass!!

GREAT JOB!!

:)

[cristy922]

ohmygosh. :O

this was so beautiful !

i loved it ! :)

i loved how joe&demi teased

eachother xD aha. i'm sure you'll

pass to round 2 ! :D

[TrinaTwilight]

OMG this is sooo geat!!! don't think you'll lose!

[hexenkind]

Honey ... you're the BEST!

You leave me speechless ....

I don't even know what else to say more than ... THIS WAS PERFECT!

So beautiful!

[shatteredYou]

aww this was amazing. :] like usual it is. you are such a great writer and i defienetly think you deserve to make it to the next round. and i'm glad you decided to keep your on writing style. it was perfect mix with romantic, funny so on love it. :) great job. haha i try to elaborate my comments i'm just not that good at it LOL but seriously great job. :)

[SarahAlwaysKnows10]

omg that was one of the best storys/parts/..whatever i have ever read.

funny, cute, sad, romantic, ....

you have to be in the next round with this :)

[RBDulceRobertaxAvril]

This is AMAZING :)

Loved it, and I hope that you'll win

''Just keep your faith''

[dmdbx3]

ye of little faith! this was AMAZING!

i know i use that word a lot but this really was fantaboulously great work! : D

you will definitely move on to the next round! this one-shot was really really really good!!! (lame words i know but my brain is fried so sorry haha)

cannot wait to see what this contest brings : )

[xoLivetoLaugh]

that was AMAZING its really sweet.

[simplymme]

who sings these songs, i know the original singers, but who is doing the cover?

[NiIeyLove]

This is REALLLY GOODDD!

i love it, ive read some of them,

and (some) of them just bore me....(no offense)

but this was one was good :)

GREAT JOB<3

[MartuXa16]

I just need to tell you that I'm so glad you decided not try to be like the others and keep being yourself in your writing because this was amazing!

Really really good! I was romantic and it was funny and bit perverted, but all in the right amount... In real amount!

I absolutely loved it!

I honestly hope you pass to round 2... :D

AWESOME WORK! (:

[LibbyJonas]

this is so beautiful..

:) <33

[joylove08]

great but i dont think jelena is good stick to nemi, JEMI.!!!!!DUH! oh and nelena and niley

[chickengoodt]

Can You Use Niley and Joley[Joe and miley] Next Please.

Omg This was hilarious.."Im a girl arent I".. "Well i've had my doubts" LOL.. Then the song "When I look at you" Came on, I was like "THIS IS MY SONG" haha.. Then I heard the kid version and started laughing. Cute cute. Hahah, But about the story, It was beyond Amazing. Your such a creative writer and so Talented. I KNOW your making it to the next Round. your amazing! Keep writing hun :D

[randypandy8896]

omg im lie smiling uncontrollably

[DemiLovatoRoks24]

i'm cool with niley nelena, but jelena is wierd to me but good luck with that. This is amazing!

[articapple]

i LOVED it!!

[lalab9]

WOW that was........FREAKING AMAZING!!!! it was soooooooo cute man i love all ur stories anyways!!! ur such a good writer!! keep up to GREAT work!!!! lol i hope u win!

[DorsyJB]

it was so amazing

i enjoyed it so much

[LovelyLiLAmy]

...wow! u have talent, im amazed, i loved it, aw, joe is so sweet!

demi should definetly trust him. :)

[xoXxXkittyXxXox]

*claps really loud* YEAH DANA!!

xDD

holy shit that was amazing!!!

i will slap whoever says it's bad..

i sware you are at the top :)

[ALEXANDRAIOI]

that was AWSOME!!!

[bballlove10hm]

Your talent as a writer leaves me speechless everytime. Brilliant! ♥

[zanessafanhere1999]

aww!(:

i loved it!

[therealamazing]

(/-^)

Emo face. Haha.

OMG IF U DONT GO TO THE NEXT ROUND I'LL KILL MESELF!!

Hehe, I misspelled 'Myself.'

[RoSinDA33]

Omg! This is so BEAuTifUL!

I definitely think you are making it to

the next round!!!

[kissmeb4theskyfalls]

amazing and even tho its perverted (duh haha) thats what you do and it was still really romantic :)i love what you did to the music hahai hope you win!

[URKOOL13]

Youre winning. End of story. ;)

Ha, no but seriously. You always write the most amazing things ever.

I loved it.

Great job! (:

[mizzfionaa]

holy. oh. my. gosh. o:

this is so breathtakingg.

[guanaca4ever]

this was amazing loved it

[ilubjessemc]

OMGGGGGGGG great !

[EmoScreamox]

OMG, yes!!

Your like one of my best subscribers..I knew i had seen that username xD

Ohh,we should stop writting our comments to each other on this video, it's a bit rude lol xD

ANYWAY!! Woooo!! You rock Dana

[DoYouHeartWaffles]

o.o

<3

[EmoScreamox]

OMG!!I cried at a sex scene :'(it was so happy i cried, realtears and all xD Im a dork..You have got to go into the next round. You've gotta gotta gotta!!

[mzzjudylee]

haha great! Now my chances of moving onto the next round is more slim xD

just kidding, You did amazing! haha, & I LOVE how you started to write your perverted way xD haha. It was funny but at the same time cute :) Good luck !

[MrsNickJonas7531]

Amazing.. best of luck I hope you win :)

[nickjonasl0v3r]

thank u for makin me cryyy

[EmoScreamox]

I totally agree Dontgetthelilacs101...Niley will make me smile,Nelena will make me cry xD Use Niley not Nelena..

Ohmigosh..I know you from somewhere...

Wheredo i know that username from? It's buggin me xD

[sj23564]

I'm going to be honest with you. Watch your grammar. Look at how you use the tenses and stuff, cause I definitely saw some present then past in the same line. I can't be harsh cause you're official language isn't English, and you still write a bit better than some of these 'writers' on here. Anyway, it was very good, just try to use my advice if you make it further :)

[TribeSpirit]

Yeah, grammer isn't exactly my strongest point, so you're going to see more mistakes in the future :P

But in my defense, English is acutally my second language, so...yeah.

[sj23564]

lol. What's life without mistakes?

[xxfudgee]

I agree with DontGetTheLilacs101 nelena kills us Niley fans.

[kitkatkirsty]

OMG! this was amazing! good luck with the contest, but i hope you win:)

[xAshleyxAmyx]

You never cease to amaze me.

You are so truly talented, and I think that this was one of your best stories yet.

I absolutley loved it.

Hope you win!

You truly do deserve it!

:) <3

[sesse1234]

amazing seriously..you did a great job.. i loved it :D

[laurenehhx]

this was amazing!

i didnt want it to end haha

i really loved it!!

[MyImaginationxx]

Beautiful. Seriously, it was simply beautiful.

Did I not tell you that it didn't suck, hm? You should listen to me more often, babe ;)

I fudgin' loved this. I thought it was funny, emotional, and happy. My chica did an amazing job!

[worldofchancesxx]

I read your twitter, and that was not horrible. That was the opposite from horrible, that was adorable.

Joe was SO sweet and even with the pervy side. haha. The slow songs even got me into the mood.

[Nileyloverss99]

I'm fine with the Jelena, writing, but pleaseeee if you care about my mentel heath at all. Don't write nelena.

[oneinamillionkl]

haha i agree with that. i watched a nelena one shot last night because it was in my subscription box for whatever reason, and i seriously almost threw up.

[Nileyloverss99]

haha. xD Niley and Jemi are #1, Jelena is something i can live with. But Nelena would probably make me drop dead of complete and utter disgust.

[oneinamillionkl]

something like that happened to my friend once. she watched a nelena oneshot or something and she fainted. she was only out for like 5 minutes, but it was scary! so, be careful if you ever watch anything supporting nelena.

NILEY & JEMI = <333

cutest couples EVER!!!

[tonyygirl]

loved it,

[xsportzgurlx]

AW!!So adorable :) I hope she didn't/doesn't die :/

[aysii94]

i agree with bunnyboo1423! :)

this is amazing. <3 stop denying. :p

[bunnyboo1423]

OMIGOSH. this was amazing! & stop being so hard on yourself! I bet you ARE gonna win & even if you don't, be proud of yourself that you got to the top 15 & your a truely amazing writer! YOU ROCK & NEVER FORGET IT BABE! ;)

[TribeSpirit]

Aw, thank you! Your comment really made me smile =)

[bunnyboo1423]

No problem :)

[GottaLoveNiley]

LMAO at the pitch shift of David Archuleta

And DAMN GURL, i don't think writing could get ANY better. This was honestly the best entry i've seen.

[TribeSpirit]

Haha! Yeah, it's funny & creepy at the same time :P

So, is When I Look At You. It sounded so weird! :P

Aww, thank you! But yours was WAY more amazing!!

[CatchMeNowx3]

I loved it, best one-shot EVER<33

[actress4life116]

woah baby amazing job!!! *cough cough* this was better than the movie scene in my sisters keeper lol!!! i hope u win!

[oneinamillionkl]

OMG I LOVE IT!

You think you have tough competition?!? THEY are the ones with the competition. You are an amazing writer. They have NO IDEA what's coming.

[TribeSpirit]

Aw, thank you so much! You have no idea how much that meant to me =D

[stacey0191]

well thats what life is for... You never no what will happen tomorow... x

[jbcrazy789]

The was THE most amazing story I have ever read.

How are people such great writers?!

You're amazing..I hope you win. =)

[xxxTakeABreathxxx]

OMG!! This is beyond amazing!!! Your sooo talented! Good luck with this contest! :D

[therealnourah]

I LOVEDD IT <33 it was kinda funny when demi was talking and it was joe's pic. I know you said it was a mistake but it was funny lol.

[ohmyjemilover16]

OMG! This was AMAZING! i Loved it :) I hope you win.You truely deserve it XD hehe.And theres an actual movie called my sisters keeper..haha,.wow..u did SUCH an amazing Job :D I;m going to favorite it :)

Once again,I hope you win