How To Pay Your Bills

[mrw7871]

3 weeks late but..

I was unclear as to what this was for. If it is to be a commercial, make it fit a time frame of 30 seconds or 60 seconds. The story could have used a bit more of a set up, this is where a narrator would come in handy. Lights and set: take time to really prep each shot using what you have. Music, use it, it makes the show. Good work, Keep Working and trying to get better all the time.

Matt

[palehouse]

thanks for the advice, I wish I had this shoot taped behind the scenes with the only three hours we had but with those hours. I agree with the most part though in respect

[PaulGuido]

fuck that panzy below me. Good stuff kiddo

[palehouse]

mayyyyyyyyyyyyyybe?????

[grifterkh]

And some people get it without asking, ad some people pay for it

[palehouse]

its called a fucking start, im sure you made shit in full sail that sucked ay?

[palehouse]

ps all your doing silly is giving me more attention with this :):):)

[palehouse]

its ok, some people like pussy some people dont.

[ARCYNAL]

good job fam........

[BGVAC31]

Good stuff Rob, your really talented. _ Mark Rosen

[RicardoWilliams]

hah

[solitudesblind]

I didn't get it, and I couldn't see what Connie put in the guy's hand at the end. You definitely know how to position a camera for the most part but the editing is a little overzealous. Except for one overly bright shot by the toilet, I'd say it's a little dark but I shoot things overly bright myself. Nice casting on the part of the dog. -Rick

[palehouse]

thanks bro, much love from the north east to the south west

[Reyes1978]

cool , great job

-michael reyes :)