@MrTkdan thank you so much i really appreciate it i sometimes wonder how i was able to write something so deep but the holy spirit came in me and helped me to do it, this has touched a lot of people and i am so happy it did thank you and i appreciate it god bless you my friend
Poem was powerful! Would like to see next video memorized,not reading from computer thou,background music gave a nice touch,especialy the phone ringing in the background,and the messing room,clean it up,distracting,all in all,bravo!
WOW I love your expressions and how you speak out the words in your poem. I always adore all your poems and writings. You have talent make yourself scene baby keep it up!!!
its alright. better read than said
indoFcknrebel 3 months ago
wack
fpsexcellence 10 months ago
@randygoku, no problem
MrTkdan 1 year ago
Wow mate your words are really moving, I'm a strong believer and it fits with the music, motivation:')
MrTkdan 1 year ago
@MrTkdan thank you so much i really appreciate it i sometimes wonder how i was able to write something so deep but the holy spirit came in me and helped me to do it, this has touched a lot of people and i am so happy it did thank you and i appreciate it god bless you my friend
randygoku 1 year ago
MAIL MUTHAFUCKA.
BeatboxingPanda 1 year ago 4
nice poetry man, but i wasn't that "mail motherfucker!" lol ahh that made me luagh...
i think you would like "spoken word" tracks.
KRONIKAKID 2 years ago
good, except
A. It's not rap; poetry can rhyme without it being "RAP".
B. There's music in the background, so it's more like a song.
thepercussionistME 2 years ago
did u hear dat at da beginnin "MAIL MOTHER FUCKER" lmao"
shoilinninja 3 years ago
very nice...
RevealedAtLast 3 years ago
like it a lot!!! keep it up!
sausage4231 3 years ago
Poem was powerful! Would like to see next video memorized,not reading from computer thou,background music gave a nice touch,especialy the phone ringing in the background,and the messing room,clean it up,distracting,all in all,bravo!
KFJONES64 3 years ago
thats awesome!!! like it alot
rosebud71087 3 years ago
WOW I love your expressions and how you speak out the words in your poem. I always adore all your poems and writings. You have talent make yourself scene baby keep it up!!!
bifnaked1 3 years ago
Very Very Nice! I give you a 99.99%. I told you why. But, very excellant. Your the best.
melissa483 3 years ago
my booboo, one day you will make it somewhere. you have power bebe!
bellasmental 3 years ago
wOw awsome job! Bro i gotta says u did great with dis one, i love it lol
Dragonuniverse81 3 years ago