In response to ur post that u sent me I found the piece Really Relaxing and Also very emotional with the string part which was the main part that i liked in particular and i liked it so much i gave it another listen :) .
yeah life's trip but i don't take baggage, pain I bandage, devils a savage but I won't let him salvage nothin from it, look up at the summit an see I got long way to climb, most go by never to be seen again so when I say hi i treat it like its my last greetin, I ain't never cheatin or cheap I'm speakin courage to for those that leaped up to protect ther peeps from cheap shot, I got nothing to lose but somethen proove thats from pac, just show my mood when i talk my voice is like moon ring
It was ok, and your mind is in the right place. But, don't be afraid to venture beyond the monatone world of computers and "straight" sounds. This sounds a bit monotone, and if your going to use a drun machine, just be aware that there are endless possibilites. But, in hip hop and rap, I feel we become to dependent on the drum machine when forming beats. I guess it's ok, but don't be afraid to experiment with the sounds, so it doesn't sound boring. Use Timbaland as a good example...
ur shit is lame i spit game,im so hot its like i spit flames im a pimp mayne,u cant stop me im young an cocky,with a vicious mindset an the sickest rhymes yet,i got enough decimals to turn u to a vegetable,my wordbase is flexible rap skills incredible,nothin but G shit is acceptable ill eat this beat up like its edible,now i gotta fend for myself im the champ ready to defend the belt, u guys are a bunch of nacs sorry ass saps, about to get slapped by a pimp mak,straight bitch slapped haha im 16
@WillBattleyou Wtf is this coming at me with these disses/Im about to have a field day like Christmas cause u just stepped into my business/Things getting viscous im gonna gut u till the blood runs viscous pick it up and eat it its delicious/U r defeated for coming after mr suspicious mixer of verbal dishes /Spinning them faster than i whip bitches grinnin while i pass u yellin "ur a bastard and i outcast u"/I see ur face again and ima displace ur insides during drive by 10 to 5 you cant survive
NO MATCH TO ME my FLOW's CRACK YOU BLEED stab you get flicked like STOGUE's THAT YOU FIENE.
ADDRESS YA PICTURE BRO, scary shit but THAT's JUSS A PICTURE HOE you can't ATTEST THE RICHER FLOW cuz my shit's nasty, like if i PICKED YUR NOSE!!!! Listen.... with yur tunes the LESS MUSIC BETTER but even with shitty sound my ears__ **DEATH MUTE THEM NEVER**, you strike i RETRIBUTE IN MEASURES, you die i **READ TRIBUTE IN LETTER's** turn you to another DEAD DUDE DISMEMBERED,
@WillBattleyou Your messing with a criminal mind/Subliminal lines tell you you should die/Jump off a building and you can fly thats the picture im selling in these rhymes/im telling you im a product of my time caught up in an age where violence is waged day to day/Fucked up shit on display kinda like how i decapitate children while they play/Thats a chillin thing to say but i was born to slay torture and maim/Thats the culture of the insane sworn to bring pain and make red rain from the slain.
rideing on 22 fealing o so good like if im on X / i got these nikkas wonting to plex / but i just flex and hit them in there chest and watch them cave in / call them nikkas cavemen / i aint playing man / im just trying to make it / i aint got no bills cause there already paid so now its time to spend some change i aint never gonna change been in the game so long i should walk with a cane wait i already said that on anthor flow but fuck it im still cold like a polar bear with out any fur
but these bitches most think im crazy im like Pimp C ill never fuck a bitch with out a rubber im stright gutter thats why these hoes love me or maybe its my tatts that got them showing me there fat cats / i never slack im always working on a way to make a stack / ya youngsters better fall back / i dont drink but i do blaze dam this beat is insane / and if thats the case then im a lunatic more crazy then the looney tunes im still makeing moves at the age of 21 but after 7/18 ill be 22
i got 2 jobs i got a 2 bedroom and i got a 22 that would handle each and every one of you but truth be told i dont wont no beff i just wont some weed and some green to help me make it to next weak and most of these rappers are weak they aint even reach there peak and they come and fuck with me but me ive already been up there and pissed from up there now im back down standing on the ground working on my ground and pound see im hustleing daily i got these bitches wonting to have my baby
spittin legit it's original like yes to every thing that i says no it's not chess it's not rocket science but then again maybe to the nigga who can't phase me clowns around the world tryin to be like wayne brady but the nigga was shady a clone in disguise look at his heart you won't see shit shine just an animal ignoring what is real and denying what is true took em so long he chose to rep red or blue like wtf nigga i thought you was a leader nah just a deceiver in the mix with the pricks
spittin freestyle like it ain't no thang instrumental packin my head with that goodgood grain slangin hang ten there go a fed didn't look at him my mind on my bread stackin cheddas my mission it's that good expedition and everyone should know i been spittin so long i'll kick yo ass out the doe that is fosho idont give a dam i flow like the nile river make ya bones shiver with the choice silver i'll tame all the evil come up to me hungry you gon find yo ass like a black hole in the deep blue sea
stayin true to the game but i ain't about them lames got me runnin round in circles hittin weed to the brain tryin so hard to flow with a nigga who aint real and i'm chillin i'm chill tryin to have a good deal but come to find out he's a joke a damn hater came to my senses i won't see him later i'm like darth vader who abandons a baby nigga got me fucked up and he aint about to blame me so i spit freestyles to take away the stress be4 i grab that ak put a bullet to his chest
ima hold it down for my hood / what you bout to do / and if your answer aint whats good then you gonna have to move around dude / cause you got miss understood / i can leave you laying where you once stood / i never wish a mother fucker would cause in my hood wishes come true / im stright hood / chilling with the nikkas in the hood blowing on the best wood / looking clean dress to impress with money on my mind nothing less .../ ya $tay True
dawg im different / dissimilar / me and you will never be similar / not alike in any type of character or any other type of form / im a alien your just a pedestrian a good hard working american / im a young Mexican trying to fuck with his his next to kins trying to get this money in / never fucking stoping ima keep on going in tell that bitch tells me she cant cum again / i can tell me and u will never be friends / ur just to ordinary / im extraordinary / naw im just real / Trill / im foe reals
Thoughts kickin in my mind, lookin thru the dark, thru space & time, do what i can just to get a punch line, twist words like they a plant like a vine, the grapes make the sweetest wine, thats how i find my rhymes,
when im chillin in the moment, they mistake my kind - ness for weakness, i can be as sour as a lime, a lemon, you will find, that i can be heartless, because love has made me blind, do anything to make her mine, and every time i think of her i always end up cryin.theres no denyin
Nice beat, enjoyed it. Something you can relax to and get the thoughts flowing through your mind. Well done, for the next beat i would like to hear something RRR. Rough, Rugged and Raw. Stick it to it, my support always. Peace
definitely diggin this
onlyGOODmusic521 2 weeks ago
Not to bad bruv
MrSockoOck 1 month ago
I really like the beat on this good instrumental
hangthomas10 1 month ago in playlist Favorite videos
Sounds aiight.
manstaahh 1 month ago
@TheCadisrad I'm glad you like it
manfredicomposer 2 months ago in playlist Favorite videos
Now this I can rap to NICE JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
TheCadisrad 2 months ago in playlist More videos from PDBPRODUCTIONS
i fux wit it lol
flyersfan223 2 months ago
nice, nice
tristanandrews7889 3 months ago
THIS .. IS..The..Shit uhh yea sittin here drinkin a beer at my dj set up lessoin to peoples beats feelin my head up
greenthumb858 3 months ago
eh, not half bad
stiffmeisterful1 3 months ago
@ifishbetterthanyou Thanks very much. I'm glad you like it (:
manfredicomposer 3 months ago
THIS IS MUSIC !!!!!! KEEP THEM COMING !!! THANKS FOR THE NOTIFICATION :) so glad i heard this
ifishbetterthanyou 3 months ago
@xTheoryOfficial Sure you can, what would you like to use it for?
manfredicomposer 3 months ago
Would u mind if i use one of your instrumentals ?
xTheoryOfficial 3 months ago
Hey, got the message you sent. Nice work.
TheOfficialBlackTear 3 months ago
Its so peacful dont you agree? lol good work
Gdepjr 5 months ago
pretty decent stuff keep up the good work!
briannewyork9876 6 months ago
not bad its not the best doe
newtonamani 6 months ago
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newtonamani 6 months ago
@TheKidkash94 I think its missing some pro vocals lol (:
manfredicomposer 6 months ago
shyt crank i should upload some new shyt it feel like its missin sumthin doe..idk its jus not kickin
TheKidkash94 6 months ago
Nice beat!!!
MJNympho4Eva 6 months ago
:D u guys fucking rock:) love it!!!!
skyluvsu1 6 months ago
Like it!
Jr0Music 6 months ago
suppoesd to be like 90's shit??? XD
silvermaniamania1 6 months ago
good beat
treysexylewis 6 months ago
the beat is fresh compared to everthing nowadays
some pretty chilled out stuff :)
ryan187100 6 months ago
no singing, beat too slow for me but i wont dislike cuz you probably spend some time on it and other might really like this
MrBFHguy 6 months ago
Dope
Oozy669 6 months ago
sick music bro
TheAride133 6 months ago
This is dope .Fresh Beat
senthious 6 months ago
@bruceyboy180 We appreciate that. I'm glad you like it (:
manfredicomposer 6 months ago
In response to ur post that u sent me I found the piece Really Relaxing and Also very emotional with the string part which was the main part that i liked in particular and i liked it so much i gave it another listen :) .
bruceyboy180 6 months ago
awesome.... this is relaxing and all sounds go well together :)...
TheCraftingMiner 6 months ago
yeah life's trip but i don't take baggage, pain I bandage, devils a savage but I won't let him salvage nothin from it, look up at the summit an see I got long way to climb, most go by never to be seen again so when I say hi i treat it like its my last greetin, I ain't never cheatin or cheap I'm speakin courage to for those that leaped up to protect ther peeps from cheap shot, I got nothing to lose but somethen proove thats from pac, just show my mood when i talk my voice is like moon ring
tomwhotomme 6 months ago
It was ok, and your mind is in the right place. But, don't be afraid to venture beyond the monatone world of computers and "straight" sounds. This sounds a bit monotone, and if your going to use a drun machine, just be aware that there are endless possibilites. But, in hip hop and rap, I feel we become to dependent on the drum machine when forming beats. I guess it's ok, but don't be afraid to experiment with the sounds, so it doesn't sound boring. Use Timbaland as a good example...
Cuishi10 6 months ago
This shit sucks harder than a starving portuguese hooker.
Quit polluting the internet with your god damn noise.
d33pS3Ad1v3r 6 months ago
@d33pS3Ad1v3r Boooooooo! LOL! Be Nice...
Cuishi10 6 months ago
That was dope bro!!!!
rnxj23 6 months ago
ur shit is lame i spit game,im so hot its like i spit flames im a pimp mayne,u cant stop me im young an cocky,with a vicious mindset an the sickest rhymes yet,i got enough decimals to turn u to a vegetable,my wordbase is flexible rap skills incredible,nothin but G shit is acceptable ill eat this beat up like its edible,now i gotta fend for myself im the champ ready to defend the belt, u guys are a bunch of nacs sorry ass saps, about to get slapped by a pimp mak,straight bitch slapped haha im 16
jasonmcleish74 6 months ago
@HeadshotZealot Thanks man, good marketing skills there huh (:
manfredicomposer 6 months ago
@WillBattleyou Glad you like it (:
manfredicomposer 6 months ago
THIS SHIT IS SICK. IMMA SPIT TO IT FOR A SEC
WillBattleyou 6 months ago
Haha nice i like the river of blood.
HeadshotZealot 6 months ago
you PHONY MIC, keep wishin you wuz me well BLOW ME ITE!!
you strike me as the LOATHING TYPE break chin wen APPROACHING FIGHT's i take wind and UNLOAD THEE LIGHT, uhh
make you fly high on a GHOSTLY FLEIGHT, yur future was dark now GO SEE LIGHT,
who want's to STRIKE AT ME i KNIFE PACK SPLEAN's and smoke the life out of dope just LIKE CRACK FIENE's,
i don't play GAME's WITH FAGGET FOLK's, nor STAY LAME WHEN CRACKIN JOKE's i'm not chick nor lay eggs just CRACKIN YOLK's
WillBattleyou 6 months ago
@WillBattleyou Wtf is this coming at me with these disses/Im about to have a field day like Christmas cause u just stepped into my business/Things getting viscous im gonna gut u till the blood runs viscous pick it up and eat it its delicious/U r defeated for coming after mr suspicious mixer of verbal dishes /Spinning them faster than i whip bitches grinnin while i pass u yellin "ur a bastard and i outcast u"/I see ur face again and ima displace ur insides during drive by 10 to 5 you cant survive
HeadshotZealot 6 months ago
@HeadshotZealot
NO MATCH TO ME my FLOW's CRACK YOU BLEED stab you get flicked like STOGUE's THAT YOU FIENE.
ADDRESS YA PICTURE BRO, scary shit but THAT's JUSS A PICTURE HOE you can't ATTEST THE RICHER FLOW cuz my shit's nasty, like if i PICKED YUR NOSE!!!! Listen.... with yur tunes the LESS MUSIC BETTER but even with shitty sound my ears__ **DEATH MUTE THEM NEVER**, you strike i RETRIBUTE IN MEASURES, you die i **READ TRIBUTE IN LETTER's** turn you to another DEAD DUDE DISMEMBERED,
WillBattleyou 6 months ago
@WillBattleyou Your messing with a criminal mind/Subliminal lines tell you you should die/Jump off a building and you can fly thats the picture im selling in these rhymes/im telling you im a product of my time caught up in an age where violence is waged day to day/Fucked up shit on display kinda like how i decapitate children while they play/Thats a chillin thing to say but i was born to slay torture and maim/Thats the culture of the insane sworn to bring pain and make red rain from the slain.
HeadshotZealot 6 months ago
Hard
CypriotVibez08 7 months ago
can ya bitch ass fools say burr / lol gone ya $tay True
payperchase713 8 months ago
rideing on 22 fealing o so good like if im on X / i got these nikkas wonting to plex / but i just flex and hit them in there chest and watch them cave in / call them nikkas cavemen / i aint playing man / im just trying to make it / i aint got no bills cause there already paid so now its time to spend some change i aint never gonna change been in the game so long i should walk with a cane wait i already said that on anthor flow but fuck it im still cold like a polar bear with out any fur
payperchase713 8 months ago
but these bitches most think im crazy im like Pimp C ill never fuck a bitch with out a rubber im stright gutter thats why these hoes love me or maybe its my tatts that got them showing me there fat cats / i never slack im always working on a way to make a stack / ya youngsters better fall back / i dont drink but i do blaze dam this beat is insane / and if thats the case then im a lunatic more crazy then the looney tunes im still makeing moves at the age of 21 but after 7/18 ill be 22
payperchase713 8 months ago
i got 2 jobs i got a 2 bedroom and i got a 22 that would handle each and every one of you but truth be told i dont wont no beff i just wont some weed and some green to help me make it to next weak and most of these rappers are weak they aint even reach there peak and they come and fuck with me but me ive already been up there and pissed from up there now im back down standing on the ground working on my ground and pound see im hustleing daily i got these bitches wonting to have my baby
payperchase713 8 months ago
spittin legit it's original like yes to every thing that i says no it's not chess it's not rocket science but then again maybe to the nigga who can't phase me clowns around the world tryin to be like wayne brady but the nigga was shady a clone in disguise look at his heart you won't see shit shine just an animal ignoring what is real and denying what is true took em so long he chose to rep red or blue like wtf nigga i thought you was a leader nah just a deceiver in the mix with the pricks
itsyaboybaby 8 months ago
spittin freestyle like it ain't no thang instrumental packin my head with that goodgood grain slangin hang ten there go a fed didn't look at him my mind on my bread stackin cheddas my mission it's that good expedition and everyone should know i been spittin so long i'll kick yo ass out the doe that is fosho idont give a dam i flow like the nile river make ya bones shiver with the choice silver i'll tame all the evil come up to me hungry you gon find yo ass like a black hole in the deep blue sea
itsyaboybaby 8 months ago
@payperchase713 Yo,
stayin true to the game but i ain't about them lames got me runnin round in circles hittin weed to the brain tryin so hard to flow with a nigga who aint real and i'm chillin i'm chill tryin to have a good deal but come to find out he's a joke a damn hater came to my senses i won't see him later i'm like darth vader who abandons a baby nigga got me fucked up and he aint about to blame me so i spit freestyles to take away the stress be4 i grab that ak put a bullet to his chest
itsyaboybaby 8 months ago
like your videos!
thumbs up!
o0rayzer0o 8 months ago
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1boydjamesboyd 8 months ago
@PDBPRODUCTIONS Great Beat keep doing you / ya $tay True
payperchase713 8 months ago
ima hold it down for my hood / what you bout to do / and if your answer aint whats good then you gonna have to move around dude / cause you got miss understood / i can leave you laying where you once stood / i never wish a mother fucker would cause in my hood wishes come true / im stright hood / chilling with the nikkas in the hood blowing on the best wood / looking clean dress to impress with money on my mind nothing less .../ ya $tay True
payperchase713 8 months ago
dawg im different / dissimilar / me and you will never be similar / not alike in any type of character or any other type of form / im a alien your just a pedestrian a good hard working american / im a young Mexican trying to fuck with his his next to kins trying to get this money in / never fucking stoping ima keep on going in tell that bitch tells me she cant cum again / i can tell me and u will never be friends / ur just to ordinary / im extraordinary / naw im just real / Trill / im foe reals
payperchase713 8 months ago
Thoughts kickin in my mind, lookin thru the dark, thru space & time, do what i can just to get a punch line, twist words like they a plant like a vine, the grapes make the sweetest wine, thats how i find my rhymes,
when im chillin in the moment, they mistake my kind - ness for weakness, i can be as sour as a lime, a lemon, you will find, that i can be heartless, because love has made me blind, do anything to make her mine, and every time i think of her i always end up cryin.theres no denyin
BJJisLove 8 months ago
Good job :)
ts4lecho 8 months ago
Best i heard today, good work!!
itssol7 8 months ago
sounds good
gokartlawnmower 8 months ago
Good job
bakubrawluh 8 months ago
Amazing work.
SilenceRapper 8 months ago
yeah bro nice beats cheers for the msg . i'll add you.
Kabbeats 8 months ago
Nice beat, enjoyed it. Something you can relax to and get the thoughts flowing through your mind. Well done, for the next beat i would like to hear something RRR. Rough, Rugged and Raw. Stick it to it, my support always. Peace
onlytheunderground 8 months ago
Lively catchy tune. really involving. well done matt x
chrissie49manfr 8 months ago