Nice and concise! I liked the PowerPoint integration. I see what you've done and how you can help, but I might suggest a focus of where would be best fit. I know people want to cast a big net these days, but are your skills suited for a candy store that wants to 'increase profits'? I can deduce, but it could be crisper with a call to action by (ex utilities, contractors, developers, etc). As a Toastmaster, I'm addicted to feedback, but it's just an idea. Good job! - JP AC-S, AL-B, MBA
Nice and concise! I liked the PowerPoint integration. I see what you've done and how you can help, but I might suggest a focus of where would be best fit. I know people want to cast a big net these days, but are your skills suited for a candy store that wants to 'increase profits'? I can deduce, but it could be crisper with a call to action by (ex utilities, contractors, developers, etc). As a Toastmaster, I'm addicted to feedback, but it's just an idea. Good job! - JP AC-S, AL-B, MBA
girohead1 1 year ago
@girohead1 Thank you for your comments and suggestions. I will keep them in mind when I develop my next video. Good Luck with your projects.
- Joseph
JosephGarcia03 1 year ago