Family Guy - Brian Novel Typography

[spinemelter2000]

So, Brian, how's that self-help book you've been writing? You know, the one you've been working on for about three hours?

[rudigerjohnson]

Excellent, some feedback:

At "Stack of pares" the letters could be a stack of papers"

Just basically more imagery and i would have got wood for sure.

[pezaoBsb]

What episode is that?!



[phillydogger]

I should start playing this to myself whenever I start slacking off on my own writing.

[Railenthe]

This cracked me up. I never would have thought to do something like this. I love watching these things. It was pretty easy to read in my opinion, and the way that a lot of phrases started in the middle of another one was a nice touch—the way that Stewie went back to. Now you just have to do that higher pitched one, hmm?

A little continuation, maybe, bring the point back to center? Hmm?

Gotta running gag, hm? Little recurring joke? Hmm?

Nah, that's OK, get to it whenever. =D

[AceEstwick]

improve the readability maybe by having it flow more

[TheKurisu90]

Oh yes. That's brilliant. Find someone who's working on a novel and show them that video!

[vladx22]

watch the second one in related videos, wheres my money

[vladx22]

Try improving the flow and i don't really like the fonts. But nice try.

[adrram1990]

The word is "monologue," not "dialogue."

[dano555666]

Terrible.

[gefallt]

Fail

[counterclockwise123]

You missed the little sound he makes at 0:15 but other than that its ok ***

[crazzygirl100]

it was a little hard to follow,but overall aa great idea

4 stars

[chickenbuttlolhaha]

Very nice, but i could've had more colors..it was a little boring on the eyes.

[Creolesbackfire]

its ok try doing some more camera moves and turning text and stuff like that other than that i like it

[skateEnjoyLive]

seriously, thanks for that extremely helpful comment lacking any constructive criticism at all

[nomologic]

did I mention my intention to be helpful? no I did not.

[DeadCrocChaosRider]

then your just an idiot. i doubt you could do better.

[VukanAlps]

Does that even matter? I agree it's bad.

[trashcan666]

agreed, it's poorly done. Man up and just turn off the comments if you can't take some criticism

[joelhbrewster]

haha I liked it!

[themachine43]

@skateEnjoyLive

dont worry, nomologic is from the netherlands.

[GinGeeK]

@nomologic youre actually right ...the typography is not that great

[LilMissae]

I love this part from family guy, i want to try and make my own typography and i think id use this monologue too :D

How many hours did it take you to make this? I want to do the really long part but it would take me forever

[hot1gs]

good but u forgot some of the words

[finnstertrax]

hi, i love this! just wondering what program you used to make it? like apple motion or something?

[skateEnjoyLive]

I did it using After Effects. Thanks :D

[swtpnaisinger]

Legit! Good job on this! It looks so professional!

[scsarulz]

nice one.

[Love0723x]

HAHA i LOVE this!!!

gotta gotta nice little video you've been workin on, huh?

[skateEnjoyLive]

haha thanks!! :D

[theheaton]

lol. Great scene. Check out some of my kinetic type videos!

[KeyframeHolder]

That line from Stewie is a great choice (in other words you beat me to it!). Great job man!

[skateEnjoyLive]

thanks man, much appreciated

[edr1882]

Very nice! A lil correction on description: It's a monologue; not a "dialogue"

[AgentR81]

Gotta gotta... GIVE IT 5 STARS!!

[iRemixVision]

crazy fresh!!!

[koopz32]

can you do the second, higher pitched one?