Saints of Brawl Episode 1 Part 2 Introduction

[DoinkTonberry]

The voices stink, but you can fix that.

[firegirl6464]

ths is awesome!!!!!!!! is zelda in this? cause she's awesome!!!

[Mythinu]

umm! last time i checked, falco was above 20 years old or something. no offense

[masterbrawler111]

Seriously, you have GOT to do something about the falco voice.

[masterman280]

wrong choice for falco voice

hey that rhymes

[NintendoFan298]

i liked it

[TehEliteTeam]

Ok machinima didnt want to put this on their youtube channel because of Falco's voice.

[theblueflashx99]

Falco needs to hit puberty. but very good job

[Hanser68]

captain falcon sounds like hes constantly shitting himself...

[Hyrulianfan]

Lower the background music so we can at least hear wtf they are saying.

[sonicshooter15]

that was odd the was creepy

[o0GolDFisH0o]

Wheres the other episodes??

[ToonethLinkage]

It was a good machinima but you need to put the music down a bit.

[Y2kain2]

ok this is all i will say to the haters

if you dont like it dont watch it

but yea pit needs to speak up abit only thing every characters voice is differeant and gives them a new persona

like no one would expect for ike to have a british acent and yet he does so leave off the kids

[ninjadude13z]

I like falco's voice!

[crushingon]

kirby's vice should be softer...... and pit's voice is too low XD

but anyways good storyline

[Ultimate7Maker]

Never use a kids voice in videos.

[Hanser68]

Falco's voice deosnt fit...

[Speedjolt101]

Get a new Falco.

That is all.

Otherwise, it was a really great machinima.

[TenCentMurders]

Well, uh...I guess it's kind of interesting. Part 1 caught my interest enough to watch part 2, but it kinda went downhill for me. I think it was Falco's voice. He sounds like a little kid. I mean...I'm not saying you have to match the real character's voice, but at least try to give him a voice that fits. Eh. It also kinda amused me that Kirby's speaking voice was deep, but he made his cute little high-pitched "hah!" when he punched. xD

I dunno. Just kinda bugged me.

[Mariobro4]

SPEAK UP PIT!

[ColeProductions140]

pit was kinda hard to understand.

good job, btw.

[semperfiman550]

let me guess bowser, ganon are the generals.

[goodgen]

OK, quick review for both parts. Storyline isn't as original, since it's actually telling the concept of SSB. Master Hand brings other guys from different franchises, turning them into trophies, and making them fight, but we do have some difference between this and the original concept, which is nice. The ending to part 1 actually did make me wonder about Link and how he could understand this Pika. Voice wise, Fox's voice is good, but audio quality was poor, Falco also sounded like a 10-year old

[goodgen]

OK, so we have an existing storyline, mixed with some original ideas. Voice Acting:-For some parts good, but the audio quality for some characters were poor. This also applies to editing. It was 72% good(% is the only way I can go in depth for telling how good something is), but the in-game sound effects seemed to be louder than the voices, also different people's voices volume differ from one another, something you'll need to improve on.

So far, I give the episode (and series so far) a 69%

[RyeDragon]

since when are you "Simon" of the machinima world?

[goodgen]

"Simon"? I'm...not following you. Look, I think the story is great and this has great potential, but I'm just saying the editing could have been better.

[RyeDragon]

Ehh... oh well.. I know, I sometimes can't stand to watch it myself thanks to my poor editing skills, but, practice make perfect

[thanyou]

And plus, this is only the beginning, I don't know ANY good Machinima that didn't have a bad/lacking 1st episode

[transformersisaswome]

don't listen to the idoits who are bashing you vid because falco has a high voice this rocks and they need to give it time

[NintendoFan298]

falco sounded like a 9 year old not 10

[yoshiguy51]

good second part

[Hanser68]

Falco sounds like a little girl..or is a boy

[adaman2122]

lol! Dedede's a wuss! lol awesome.

[Y2kain2]

yay its good ^^ but kirby sounded kinda butch XD

[Dangerdogg16]

im not sure if thats a compliment but i... well its ok

[Y2kain2]

well in the game and cartoon kirby has a baby voice but now BAM MAN VOICE i was amused so yeah its a good thing

[Dangerdogg16]

awesome thanks

[Technicality235]

It's good. But..not the best. I STILL LOVE IT THOUGH!!!^^

[chuggaaconroy]

As a bit of a tip, it sounds a bit unnatural to have the characters say "he or she" when referring to the being they're hoping to be saved by. Simply using "Them" or "They" might work better. Other than that, this turned out better than I was expecting and most of the voices fit. The only voice I don't really think that fits is Falco's since he normally has a Brooklyn accent and all the other characters sound close to their Brawl voices like Captain Falcon does.

[coocoo568]

go us lol nicely done rye and the rest of the VA

[NintendoFan298]

epic

[Kacterr]

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[RyeDragon]

holy crap......

[Dangerdogg16]

rawrz

[PMK94]

awesome! should prove to be a great machinima

[Torchtobin]

All i gotta say is...

EPIC

[Hanser68]

lol Kirby...wtf...sounds wierd...good job whoever did his voice though..makes Kirby seem more toughass :P

[Dangerdogg16]

YAYZ!

[Hanser68]

which character did you play?

[Dangerdogg16]

kirby... didnt you watch the credits?

[Hanser68]

lol not really...I guess I didn't read everything

[eepmonster123]

yes! epic sweetness! =D

[EpicStudiosMagnum]

WOOT!

[Hanser68]

whoever was Samus rocks...very good voice acting

[Hnilmik]

Thankoo~

[LilRiceEater]

SWEET!

[Hanser68]

wow good voices

[thekurtwood]

cool

[lepardwolf0leafeon]

fosrt sweet!!!!