your awesome. thats all i have to say.
AlDorDor101 2 years ago 3
OMG, pain seeps from every word, every phrase just gut wrenching.
DoorsChick1967 2 years ago
I like this one a lot, I got chills ! Nice Job !
Dallass33 2 years ago
that was a really good poem...
quixot1c 3 years ago
A very strong piece of poetry in more ways than one. Powerful on many levels.
TheFlawedPoet 3 years ago
blatant obvious metaphors.
joedruo 3 years ago
very powerful, when I see work like this I feel that you are working on life. I know that it is not so simple as getting past the hurt, but I think I see some moving on when I see your work
Jacob
newkirk915 3 years ago 2
Thanks Jacob for your comment. Forward always forward :o)
reVerse2bfree 3 years ago
powerful poem spoken with a gentle voice. well done - stand up for your rights Sister!
sadiebroom 3 years ago 2
This is an awesome poem. I can relate to it on a personal level. I thought it was beautifully written. Thank you
goodnewsmama 4 years ago 3
Goodnewsmama thanks for your comment.
gigi wipes tears from her eyes....thank you..peace love and real hugs my sister!
gigibranch 4 years ago 3
your awesome. thats all i have to say.
AlDorDor101 2 years ago 3
OMG, pain seeps from every word, every phrase just gut wrenching.
DoorsChick1967 2 years ago
I like this one a lot, I got chills ! Nice Job !
Dallass33 2 years ago
that was a really good poem...
quixot1c 3 years ago
A very strong piece of poetry in more ways than one. Powerful on many levels.
TheFlawedPoet 3 years ago
blatant obvious metaphors.
joedruo 3 years ago
very powerful, when I see work like this I feel that you are working on life. I know that it is not so simple as getting past the hurt, but I think I see some moving on when I see your work
Jacob
newkirk915 3 years ago 2
Thanks Jacob for your comment. Forward always forward :o)
reVerse2bfree 3 years ago
powerful poem spoken with a gentle voice. well done - stand up for your rights Sister!
sadiebroom 3 years ago 2
This is an awesome poem. I can relate to it on a personal level. I thought it was beautifully written. Thank you
goodnewsmama 4 years ago 3
Goodnewsmama thanks for your comment.
reVerse2bfree 3 years ago
gigi wipes tears from her eyes....thank you..peace love and real hugs my sister!
gigibranch 4 years ago 3