umm what about a girl how had been in foster care for about 5 years and got tooken when she was four and lifes full of hard times but u always know u can get through it if she belvies
i was wondering if you could write me a dark song.... i know it sounds weird but thats my stayle and i havnt been able to write lately and ur amazing .... all i need is a chorus for a dark torturous song sort of along the lines of rihanna's "run this town"
dude back off i was being fucking curious and for your information she replied in a private message letting me know that there are still chances. Dont start flaming when you dont know the full fucking story you fool.
damn if I could come up with ANYTHING I'd kick down to u. but, I suck, do u do covers, like If I request something?? either way u must have lots of confidence. I have one now, he he How about Etta James-at last. hmmmm ?
Hey Dylan. I posted a video I made awhile back for the song I mentioned. I would be thrilled if you would consider writing a piano version of it for this contest or otherwise. I think that stylistically, it might resonate with you.
I have an idea =D I would write actual lyrics, but I couldn't write poetry to save my life...my idea for a song would basically be about nonconformity. Everyone here always talks about the cold of the rain. How they wish the sun was out instead because with the rain comes cold weather. But then there's me. I love the rain--it may be cold and wet, but it's comforting to me. I don't know why, but I've always taken much more comfort in the rain than the sun. I secretly miss the rain when it's gone.
(I'm lost right now I just wanted to edit more...AHH I SRSLY NEED TO FINISH MY ESSAY oh how I hate essays and would rather write about how much I hate essays - sorry)
PROTOZOA WEEPING Where are you god? The proto cried It weeped, it seeped It's love untied The hollow, empty, answered back The blackness stared, The creature cracked. And in the ocean Where all they fed A thought had come to the protozoa.
I have an old tune I wrote a few years ago that I think would sound wonderful on piano and sung by you. Would you consider it even though it was already recorded? I think you could make it magical.
can you write themusic of my song,i have lyrics but i need guitar,piano,ect
emma1234588 2 months ago
so why dont you give me your email so i can send you a story so you can make it a song for me plsssss
brianosei18 6 months ago
can u write me a kind of song to make you happy after someone said no if u asked them out
kimikocordero11 7 months ago
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BreanneG19 7 months ago
Let's not and say we did.
MoldyMooseTeeth 11 months ago
you are such a pretty girl, your voice is so sweet , you are the taste of honey after a sip of wine
joserock2587 1 year ago
20 years of snow as background music is always a win!!
Evangeline30575 1 year ago
uuummmmm about a guy that was my really good friend and then al of a sudden I don't wanna be around him at all cuz I am scared of him
mikibieberlove 1 year ago
umm what about a girl that has been
1398star 1 year ago
umm what about a girl how had been in foster care for about 5 years and got tooken when she was four and lifes full of hard times but u always know u can get through it if she belvies
1398star 1 year ago
will you still do this?!?!?!?! :)
allthelovelybadones 1 year ago
i was wondering if you could write me a dark song.... i know it sounds weird but thats my stayle and i havnt been able to write lately and ur amazing .... all i need is a chorus for a dark torturous song sort of along the lines of rihanna's "run this town"
ladygagaluvr12 1 year ago
hey guys send it too to me yeah i want it becease i do this too yeah okey send my a private message yeah okey thanks
TheDenise512 2 years ago
I know this might be a little bit of stupid question but is this offer still on?
x1xBlackx2xRainx3x 2 years ago
"until next saturday" and this was posted jan 26th 2008 what do you think...
hiddengen 2 years ago
dude back off i was being fucking curious and for your information she replied in a private message letting me know that there are still chances. Dont start flaming when you dont know the full fucking story you fool.
x1xBlackx2xRainx3x 2 years ago
back off..? don't start flaming?... all i did was restate what was said in the video buddy, chill the fuck out
hiddengen 2 years ago
well think before you fucking speak, and dont call me "buddy" im not your buddy fool. :/
x1xBlackx2xRainx3x 2 years ago
rage up kiddo!
fingerpickups 2 years ago
*giggle*
x1xBlackx2xRainx3x 2 years ago
i would drink your bath water!!!!!!!
-tell dax i said hi.
xbradx11 3 years ago 3
hey dylan! i am trieing to write some songs but im stuck on the music part heres a verse and chorus:
verse:
i"m putty in your hands, i'll mold to your request,
if you say jump i jump because your the best
i do it all for you cuz you
chrous: love me like your own , lord,
you help me find a way, and anything that you ask of me.. i say...okay
kaykay957 3 years ago
I want you to cover my original "taco meat breakfast."
HubbleTMB 3 years ago
(c)why (A)should (E)you (D)gooooo
(D) you left(D) me(D) soo(D)
[make up your own notes after this]
why did you leave?
were you thinking of meeeeeee
please try to come up with other lyicrs thats all i got
arthurfreda02 4 years ago
I feel alone here... hmm. la la la la la. If sumone could tell me the song in the backround I'll fly u to sea world. eh?
surfnakd23 4 years ago
hey sorry, the name of the song is 20 years of snow, by regina spektor
DylanPatrello 4 years ago
Ohhhh, yes! thanks, it makes me think of you. But what version do YOU have? its like a dreamy harp, and all i can find is piano. what the tits!
surfnakd23 4 years ago
Whats the song thats in the intro?
surfnakd23 4 years ago
wow, i guess you do covers too..and im soo late anyway. dammit everyone.
surfnakd23 4 years ago
damn if I could come up with ANYTHING I'd kick down to u. but, I suck, do u do covers, like If I request something?? either way u must have lots of confidence. I have one now, he he How about Etta James-at last. hmmmm ?
surfnakd23 4 years ago
Oh, that's a lovely song...
derivative250 4 years ago
I'm excited to see what you do with these ideas! Any idea on how long this will take you?
AdymPerry 4 years ago
im posting the results next weekend :)
DylanPatrello 4 years ago
Great! :)
AdymPerry 4 years ago
So, who wins? do they get a cookie? is it next weekend? Today its hump day. so its been a little extra...
surfnakd23 4 years ago
hey can i write a song for you
kevinm4435 4 years ago
Hey Dylan. I posted a video I made awhile back for the song I mentioned. I would be thrilled if you would consider writing a piano version of it for this contest or otherwise. I think that stylistically, it might resonate with you.
chris3ff 4 years ago
Hope you can find a great idea to sing. Keep up the good singing/playing.
conejob77 4 years ago
I have an idea =D I would write actual lyrics, but I couldn't write poetry to save my life...my idea for a song would basically be about nonconformity. Everyone here always talks about the cold of the rain. How they wish the sun was out instead because with the rain comes cold weather. But then there's me. I love the rain--it may be cold and wet, but it's comforting to me. I don't know why, but I've always taken much more comfort in the rain than the sun. I secretly miss the rain when it's gone.
nickylikewhoa 4 years ago
All washed clean the air did tease
The nostrils of the gull
Reminding them of ocean air
That tickled their feathered skull.
Nicky stood by watching them
Soaking in the light
Oh how she would much rather that
It rained and poured all night.
That's all I've got for ya ;)
derivative250 4 years ago
Or maybe there's more
She yearned for quiet hushes of
The minature streams that flowed
The water flowing in the sky
Revealing all nature showed
To hear the water down the pipes
Gave her a calm sensation
And seeing animals hide away
When thunder was at cessation
I don't know about you but all this sounded limericky to me...Haha.........back to homework -_-
derivative250 4 years ago
To hear the dripping through the pipes
Was music to her ears
Seeing animals hide away
As thunder rumbled near
Cloudy skies
Can you hear my cries?
I love all your heavenly tears...
(I'm lost right now I just wanted to edit more...AHH I SRSLY NEED TO FINISH MY ESSAY oh how I hate essays and would rather write about how much I hate essays - sorry)
There would be no such rainbow if
Complete the sentence Patrello.
derivative250 4 years ago
I hope you got the poems I sent you :/ I'm not to sure if it sent or not
TheScreamingLizard 4 years ago
I'm gonna make a video response but it'll probably take me a little bit..I'm going to sing the lyrics, of a chorus perhaps? I dunno, it's up to you!
alexandreakate 4 years ago
anything would be awesome :)
DylanPatrello 4 years ago
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Art sucks!!! Art is burguessy!!! Art is for the philistines and the poor of mind!!!
Ashabara 4 years ago
gtfo logic
kevinm4435 4 years ago
you're a musician? for real?
derivative250 4 years ago
yeppers
Ashabara 4 years ago
you:musician:music:art:burguessy, philistines, poor of mind?
derivative250 4 years ago
No, "music":britney spears; "art": soap opera actor; I: beyond art.
Ashabara 4 years ago
I know what you mean. We all define art differently but I'm sure my impression of it is much like yours, so please understand.
derivative250 4 years ago
I had to post mine in two different posts as well due to the character limit. The first one is the start, and the second one is the ending.
XtremeCraziness 4 years ago
hey thats great, thanks a lot for posting it!
DylanPatrello 4 years ago
By nature, wind, and rain,
Discovering what words can do to destroy.
Understanding nothing and everything,
Having everything thrust upon me all at once,
Never once looking back,
Avoiding all the typical clichés of life, death, and destruction,
Creating a world only known to those who believe,
That anything can happen,
In a fantastical world of nothingness.
XtremeCraziness 4 years ago
"Nothingness"
I can't seem to think of anything to say,
Wondering why I even try,
To create some sort of masterpiece,
Something that won't matter,
To people that don't understand,
How hard I work to make things right,
Living a life that's untouched,
XtremeCraziness 4 years ago
evilsockpuppette PROPS TO YOU for singing your lyrics!!!! awesome job
DylanPatrello 4 years ago
There- my poem is up. Tell me what you think!
Mad love.
LoveCraken 4 years ago
It moved, slowly,
Until it noticed just exactly
What was going on.
The terrifying silence of the firmament
Had been a blessing.
For in every square millimetre of this sprawling mud planet he did not yet understand, there was opportunity- for advancement.
Change.
Ascension.
And he moved confidently,
Smiling.
LoveCraken 4 years ago
LoveCraken 4 years ago
i will post a video reply later.
evilsockpuppette 4 years ago
cant wait!
DylanPatrello 4 years ago
I've posted a poem of mine in the comments (spread over two because of character limit) and I've posted two of my videos as a response.
LoveCraken 4 years ago
awesome videos lovecraken! i don't see the poem though?
DylanPatrello 4 years ago
It should be there. I'll repost if I can't find it.
LoveCraken 4 years ago
what a great idea!!!!
Mike
glock882 4 years ago
wow.. awesome response adymperry
DylanPatrello 4 years ago
Thanks :)
AdymPerry 4 years ago
I had to fix something though, so I didn't see your comment on it :(
lol, could you comment again?
AdymPerry 4 years ago
I have poetry I would love to transform into a song. I'm just too shy and musically untalented to do it on video.
I'll give it a try.
lmm85 4 years ago
Go for it! It'll give you more confidence :D
AdymPerry 4 years ago
awesome video response, derrivative!!!!!!!
DylanPatrello 4 years ago
I have an old tune I wrote a few years ago that I think would sound wonderful on piano and sung by you. Would you consider it even though it was already recorded? I think you could make it magical.
chris3ff 4 years ago
hey! definitely!
DylanPatrello 4 years ago
great. i'll probably make a video with the song and lyrics and post it here in the next few days. thanks, miss patrello.
chris3ff 4 years ago
cant wait!!
DylanPatrello 4 years ago
This is so cool!
Demosthenes346 4 years ago 2
thanks so much! can't wait to see your entry ;)
DylanPatrello 4 years ago
You are absolutely gorgeous!
DeclaNNNNN 4 years ago
Reverse-matrix comprised of a sunny prime,
And the change in x in respect to time
CurtisMeeker 4 years ago
Can I send you a piece of prose?
LoveCraken 4 years ago
yea!
DylanPatrello 4 years ago
In a private message?
LoveCraken 4 years ago
or a video response/comment would be great so other people could see
DylanPatrello 4 years ago
But I don want dem too :(
LoveCraken 4 years ago
oh ok well then yea no problem, just message it to me! :)
DylanPatrello 4 years ago
Thanks Dylan.
Love you to bits, as always.
LoveCraken 4 years ago
Sitting on the cliffs edge,
The conscience has yet to reach a decision.
The apathy of losing yourself one instant...
Then fear;your enemies are closing in.
A shallow soul contrasted by this setting,
Lust-the only emotion ever given.
Facets of sanity altered; a soul faltered.
The shell too thick,layers filling my abyss.
I was never good enough, And as an Immortal
I have been cursed forever in realization...
kurokunakatta 4 years ago 2
awesomeness...
I'm going to send you a vid response soon.
I haven't been able to make a song but I have some old facebook notes I find valuable...aha
derivative250 4 years ago
i wanna send u a poem i wrote lol!
xxxRonaldo7Chickxxx 4 years ago
oh my God im gonna send u a poem of mine lol!
xxxRonaldo7Chickxxx 4 years ago
oh my God im gonna send u a poem of mine lol!
xxxRonaldo7Chickxxx 4 years ago