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  • can you write themusic of my song,i have lyrics but i need guitar,piano,ect

  • so why dont you give me your email so i can send you a story so you can make it a song for me plsssss

  • can u write me a kind of song to make you happy after someone said no if u asked them out

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  • Let's not and say we did.

  • you are such a pretty girl, your voice is so sweet , you are the taste of honey after a sip of wine

  • 20 years of snow as background music is always a win!!

  • uuummmmm about a guy that was my really good friend and then al of a sudden I don't wanna be around him at all cuz I am scared of him

  • umm what about a girl that has been

  • umm what about a girl how had been in foster care for about 5 years and got tooken when she was four and lifes full of hard times but u always know u can get through it if she belvies

  • will you still do this?!?!?!?! :)

  • i was wondering if you could write me a dark song.... i know it sounds weird but thats my stayle and i havnt been able to write lately and ur amazing .... all i need is a chorus for a dark torturous song sort of along the lines of rihanna's "run this town"

  • hey guys send it too to me yeah i want it becease i do this too yeah okey send my a private message yeah okey thanks

  • I know this might be a little bit of stupid question but is this offer still on?

  • "until next saturday" and this was posted jan 26th 2008 what do you think...

  • dude back off i was being fucking curious and for your information she replied in a private message letting me know that there are still chances. Dont start flaming when you dont know the full fucking story you fool.

  • back off..? don't start flaming?... all i did was restate what was said in the video buddy, chill the fuck out

  • well think before you fucking speak, and dont call me "buddy" im not your buddy fool. :/

  • rage up kiddo!

  • *giggle*

  • i would drink your bath water!!!!!!!

    -tell dax i said hi.

  • hey dylan! i am trieing to write some songs but im stuck on the music part heres a verse and chorus:

    verse:

    i"m putty in your hands, i'll mold to your request,

    if you say jump i jump because your the best

    i do it all for you cuz you

    chrous: love me like your own , lord,

    you help me find a way, and anything that you ask of me.. i say...okay

  • I want you to cover my original "taco meat breakfast."

  • (c)why (A)should (E)you (D)gooooo

    (D) you left(D) me(D) soo(D)

    [make up your own notes after this]

    why did you leave?

    were you thinking of meeeeeee

    please try to come up with other lyicrs thats all i got

  • I feel alone here... hmm. la la la la la. If sumone could tell me the song in the backround I'll fly u to sea world. eh?

  • hey sorry, the name of the song is 20 years of snow, by regina spektor

  • Ohhhh, yes! thanks, it makes me think of you. But what version do YOU have? its like a dreamy harp, and all i can find is piano. what the tits!

  • Whats the song thats in the intro?

  • wow, i guess you do covers too..and im soo late anyway. dammit everyone.

  • damn if I could come up with ANYTHING I'd kick down to u. but, I suck, do u do covers, like If I request something?? either way u must have lots of confidence. I have one now, he he How about Etta James-at last. hmmmm ?

  • Oh, that's a lovely song...

  • I'm excited to see what you do with these ideas! Any idea on how long this will take you?

  • im posting the results next weekend :)

  • Great! :)

  • So, who wins? do they get a cookie? is it next weekend? Today its hump day. so its been a little extra...

  • hey can i write a song for you

  • Hey Dylan. I posted a video I made awhile back for the song I mentioned. I would be thrilled if you would consider writing a piano version of it for this contest or otherwise. I think that stylistically, it might resonate with you.

  • Hope you can find a great idea to sing. Keep up the good singing/playing.

  • I have an idea =D I would write actual lyrics, but I couldn't write poetry to save my life...my idea for a song would basically be about nonconformity. Everyone here always talks about the cold of the rain. How they wish the sun was out instead because with the rain comes cold weather. But then there's me. I love the rain--it may be cold and wet, but it's comforting to me. I don't know why, but I've always taken much more comfort in the rain than the sun. I secretly miss the rain when it's gone.

  • All washed clean the air did tease

    The nostrils of the gull

    Reminding them of ocean air

    That tickled their feathered skull.

    Nicky stood by watching them

    Soaking in the light

    Oh how she would much rather that

    It rained and poured all night.

    That's all I've got for ya ;)

  • Or maybe there's more

    She yearned for quiet hushes of

    The minature streams that flowed

    The water flowing in the sky

    Revealing all nature showed

    To hear the water down the pipes

    Gave her a calm sensation

    And seeing animals hide away

    When thunder was at cessation

    I don't know about you but all this sounded limericky to me...Haha.........back to homework -_-

  • To hear the dripping through the pipes

    Was music to her ears

    Seeing animals hide away

    As thunder rumbled near

    Cloudy skies

    Can you hear my cries?

    I love all your heavenly tears...

    (I'm lost right now I just wanted to edit more...AHH I SRSLY NEED TO FINISH MY ESSAY oh how I hate essays and would rather write about how much I hate essays - sorry)

    There would be no such rainbow if

    Complete the sentence Patrello.

  • I hope you got the poems I sent you :/ I'm not to sure if it sent or not

  • I'm gonna make a video response but it'll probably take me a little bit..I'm going to sing the lyrics, of a chorus perhaps? I dunno, it's up to you!

  • anything would be awesome :)

  • gtfo logic

  • you're a musician? for real?

  • yeppers

  • you:musician:music:art:burgues­sy, philistines, poor of mind?

  • No, "music":britney spears; "art": soap opera actor; I: beyond art.

  • I know what you mean. We all define art differently but I'm sure my impression of it is much like yours, so please understand.

  • I had to post mine in two different posts as well due to the character limit. The first one is the start, and the second one is the ending.

  • hey thats great, thanks a lot for posting it!

  • By nature, wind, and rain,

    Discovering what words can do to destroy.

    Understanding nothing and everything,

    Having everything thrust upon me all at once,

    Never once looking back,

    Avoiding all the typical clichés of life, death, and destruction,

    Creating a world only known to those who believe,

    That anything can happen,

    In a fantastical world of nothingness.

  • "Nothingness"

    I can't seem to think of anything to say,

    Wondering why I even try,

    To create some sort of masterpiece,

    Something that won't matter,

    To people that don't understand,

    How hard I work to make things right,

    Living a life that's untouched,

  • evilsockpuppette PROPS TO YOU for singing your lyrics!!!! awesome job

  • There- my poem is up. Tell me what you think!

    Mad love.

  • It moved, slowly,

    Until it noticed just exactly

    What was going on.

    The terrifying silence of the firmament

    Had been a blessing.

    For in every square millimetre of this sprawling mud planet he did not yet understand, there was opportunity- for advancement.

    Change.

    Ascension.

    And he moved confidently,

    Smiling.

  • PROTOZOA WEEPING Where are you god? The proto cried It weeped, it seeped It's love untied The hollow, empty, answered back The blackness stared, The creature cracked. And in the ocean Where all they fed A thought had come to the protozoa.
  • i will post a video reply later.

  • cant wait!

  • I've posted a poem of mine in the comments (spread over two because of character limit) and I've posted two of my videos as a response.

  • awesome videos lovecraken! i don't see the poem though?

  • It should be there. I'll repost if I can't find it.

  • what a great idea!!!!

    Mike

  • wow.. awesome response adymperry

  • Thanks :)

  • I had to fix something though, so I didn't see your comment on it :(

    lol, could you comment again?

  • I have poetry I would love to transform into a song. I'm just too shy and musically untalented to do it on video.

    I'll give it a try.

  • Go for it! It'll give you more confidence :D

  • awesome video response, derrivative!!!!!!!

  • I have an old tune I wrote a few years ago that I think would sound wonderful on piano and sung by you. Would you consider it even though it was already recorded? I think you could make it magical.

  • hey! definitely!

  • great. i'll probably make a video with the song and lyrics and post it here in the next few days. thanks, miss patrello.

  • cant wait!!

  • This is so cool!

  • thanks so much! can't wait to see your entry ;)

  • You are absolutely gorgeous!

  • Reverse-matrix comprised of a sunny prime,

    And the change in x in respect to time

  • Can I send you a piece of prose?

  • yea!

  • In a private message?

  • or a video response/comment would be great so other people could see

  • But I don want dem too :(

  • oh ok well then yea no problem, just message it to me! :)

  • Thanks Dylan.

    Love you to bits, as always.

  • Sitting on the cliffs edge,

    The conscience has yet to reach a decision.

    The apathy of losing yourself one instant...

    Then fear;your enemies are closing in.

    A shallow soul contrasted by this setting,

    Lust-the only emotion ever given.

    Facets of sanity altered; a soul faltered.

    The shell too thick,layers filling my abyss.

    I was never good enough, And as an Immortal

    I have been cursed forever in realization...

  • awesomeness...

    I'm going to send you a vid response soon.

    I haven't been able to make a song but I have some old facebook notes I find valuable...aha

  • i wanna send u a poem i wrote lol!

  • oh my God im gonna send u a poem of mine lol!

  • oh my God im gonna send u a poem of mine lol!

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