I love the matter-of-fact attitude of this poem, and the lack of sentimentality in the delivery, or maybe it was the other way around. :-) The postcard/pretty moment metaphor is excellent. You must have worked long and hard on this one to achieve this paradoxically uncontrived feeling, and I am most favourably impressed!! Once again quite glad I decided to sub. Wouldn't have wanted to miss this.
Thank you very much! You ought to -- I am very inspired by the spoken word medium, since it mixes my old love of poetry with my new love of performance. I look forward to your future poetry videos!
Yes, it's very interesting to hear yourself say your poems. At least for me, they sound so much better when said out loud. I said mine for the first time at a Poetry Slam the other day and was surprised at how they sounded.
Agreed! I performed poetry for the first time in December and was so surprised by how it felt. I think I write to speak more often than to read, and I'm loving the new medium!
wow.
this is AMAZING
ninjoy17 5 months ago
i. love. this.
totally subscribed, keep these made of awesome videos coming :)
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darshi48 9 months ago
Very nice. :)
MigdalaVered 9 months ago
Absolutely AMAZING!
DominantDin 10 months ago
Although this one, sort of made me smile :)
thepappytube 1 year ago
Like like like :D
DominicanGirl0818 1 year ago
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I am now a subscriber.
ThatDangHobbit 1 year ago
@ThatDangHobbit Well, thank you! If you like this kinda thing, check out the 'My Poetry' playlist on my channel page.
shessomickey 1 year ago
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MakaylaQhyj 1 year ago
I just listened to this again.
Justtubed 1 year ago
@Justtubed Gee, you're making me blush! I'm glad you like it. If you're coming to 818 we can trade poetry, maybe!
shessomickey 1 year ago
@shessomickey that is the best idea ever.
Justtubed 1 year ago
um I kinda loved this.
Justtubed 1 year ago
@Justtubed Thank you!
shessomickey 1 year ago
Well, that is a beautiful song. Thanks!
shessomickey 2 years ago
THAT was beautiful. <3
TheHeatherEra 2 years ago
Thank you!
shessomickey 2 years ago
I loved it! Even if it definitely wasn't a love poem...Just a moment in time for your rhyme!
JvillePunk 2 years ago
Thanks so much!
shessomickey 2 years ago
wow, this is great! :)
falala285 2 years ago
Thank you!
shessomickey 2 years ago
great delivery, vocabulary, honesty, and very true words about life. keep striking the hearts of others because u have a gift
FairyFag100 2 years ago
Wow, thank you so much!
shessomickey 2 years ago
I love the matter-of-fact attitude of this poem, and the lack of sentimentality in the delivery, or maybe it was the other way around. :-) The postcard/pretty moment metaphor is excellent. You must have worked long and hard on this one to achieve this paradoxically uncontrived feeling, and I am most favourably impressed!! Once again quite glad I decided to sub. Wouldn't have wanted to miss this.
loquaciouskook 2 years ago
Do you mind if I post this on my facebook page? It's so very good, I'd like to share, but don't want to infringe...
loquaciouskook 2 years ago
That's very flattering! Please do, with all due credit, of course ;)
shessomickey 2 years ago
Oh, goody! And yes, of course!
loquaciouskook 2 years ago
Oh wow, thanks so much. Once again your comments prove to be eloquent and detailed! I am quite pleased to have you in my audience (=
shessomickey 2 years ago
Oh, go on. Praise where praise is due and all that stuff. :-)
I mean: You're most welcome. ;-)
loquaciouskook 2 years ago
:D i really liked that, very very cool :)
zazoogah 2 years ago
Thanks so much!
shessomickey 2 years ago
I dig this a ton.
EricsEveryNewDay 2 years ago
Thanks!
shessomickey 2 years ago
Really lovely poem, great idea, and nice background too :)
charlieissocoollike 2 years ago
Thank you!
shessomickey 2 years ago
I love this poem. a genius idea. 'the ode to love that we are composing together'Beautiful. Thanks forsharing this.
charlaine2124 2 years ago
Well, thank you for your kind words!
shessomickey 2 years ago
This is very lovely :)
glasslighthouses 2 years ago
(= Thank youu
shessomickey 2 years ago
that was actually amazing. keep this up =-)
ManiacOfMusic95 2 years ago
Thanks so much! I will!
shessomickey 2 years ago
guh, i have watched this multiple times in the last hour.
its really great.
sweetlovesong 2 years ago
You're so cute! That's so flattering
shessomickey 2 years ago
That was beautiful. Absolutely.
ChateauOfADoubt 2 years ago
Greatly said. that is all
joshsdad57 2 years ago
Wow, thanks!
shessomickey 2 years ago
That was beautifully well written and spoken. Nicely done.
AlleyWater 2 years ago
Thank youuu!
shessomickey 2 years ago
This was amazing. <333
kira902k 2 years ago
Thanks so much!!
shessomickey 2 years ago
Also, favorited :]
ItTakesII 2 years ago
Thank you <33
shessomickey 2 years ago
That was excellent, very well written! i love spoken-word videos of poems :] I have done one, might make some more one of these days.
-Julian
ItTakesII 2 years ago
Thank you very much! You ought to -- I am very inspired by the spoken word medium, since it mixes my old love of poetry with my new love of performance. I look forward to your future poetry videos!
shessomickey 2 years ago
Yes, it's very interesting to hear yourself say your poems. At least for me, they sound so much better when said out loud. I said mine for the first time at a Poetry Slam the other day and was surprised at how they sounded.
-Julian
ItTakesII 2 years ago
Agreed! I performed poetry for the first time in December and was so surprised by how it felt. I think I write to speak more often than to read, and I'm loving the new medium!
shessomickey 2 years ago
Definitely, poetry is meant to be read. :] I am actually going to come out with a poetry book sometime this year ^_^ quite excited!
ItTakesII 2 years ago
wow that was really good.... powerful.
prettypnkduck001 2 years ago
Thanks!
shessomickey 2 years ago
Loved it ! it was awesome :))
EnglebertKiwi 2 years ago
that is great. way to go.
:D
sweetlovesong 2 years ago
Thank youuu! Lovely username!
shessomickey 2 years ago
Thank you!!!
:D
sweetlovesong 2 years ago
WHOA. <3
mrpiggyfans 2 years ago
(= Glad you liked it!
shessomickey 2 years ago
Nice job! I also really love your background. ^_^
tree0faery 2 years ago
Thank you, bb!
shessomickey 2 years ago
This was wonderful. I wish i could write like you <3
JellyBeanQueenX 2 years ago
Anyone can write, but thanks all the same ;)
shessomickey 2 years ago
I like this a lot!
scratchingcat 2 years ago
Well thank you!
shessomickey 2 years ago
That was pretty great, Amanda. Thanks for sharing.
fallofautumndistro 2 years ago
Thanks, Alan <3
shessomickey 2 years ago
This is an awesome not love poem love poem ;) I loved it.
hubertcumberdale2008 2 years ago
Thank you!
shessomickey 2 years ago
You're welcome, Amanda. Hugs, Dome
hubertcumberdale2008 2 years ago