Wow... What can I say. You need a lot of improvement. The flow is wayyy off and your delivery was half-assed. Not one inflection or pronunciation was correct. I tried to follow what you wrote in the description and it sounded nothing like what you were spitting.
I'm not being an asshole or anything, just my honest opinion. And if it's easier, I would suggest that you rap in spanish. There's nothing wrong with rapping in spanish. You could reel in a larger international crowd.
@LeeroyZombie Hey, thanks for the constructive criticism. Honesty is appreciated.
Eh, I don't really care much for what I post on the YouTube though. At least not these type sort of things where they are not real songs. I do rap in Spanish too, but I wouldn't necessarily say it's easier. Maybe the syllables flow better, because the language by its very nature just lends itself to it, but writing is harder for me. I'll try to work on what you said, man.
Aw! Jose! I love this. You put your heart in to this and it really shows! You know that I'm here for you and I love ya' and I think you are talented!! If you ever need someone to talk to, let me know because ya know, people pay me to listen but you get it for free!
also, is your phone taped to your chair? just curious!
Wow... What can I say. You need a lot of improvement. The flow is wayyy off and your delivery was half-assed. Not one inflection or pronunciation was correct. I tried to follow what you wrote in the description and it sounded nothing like what you were spitting.
I'm not being an asshole or anything, just my honest opinion. And if it's easier, I would suggest that you rap in spanish. There's nothing wrong with rapping in spanish. You could reel in a larger international crowd.
LeeroyZombie 2 months ago
@LeeroyZombie Hey, thanks for the constructive criticism. Honesty is appreciated.
Eh, I don't really care much for what I post on the YouTube though. At least not these type sort of things where they are not real songs. I do rap in Spanish too, but I wouldn't necessarily say it's easier. Maybe the syllables flow better, because the language by its very nature just lends itself to it, but writing is harder for me. I'll try to work on what you said, man.
CapotheMC 2 months ago
Wanst, your room is filthy. Want me to come over and clean it and make you a bacon sammich with no mayo?
patchedupragdoll 2 months ago
@patchedupragdoll Come on over right meow, woman!
CapotheMC 2 months ago
@CapotheMC hahaa. her sammichs are in no comparission to my...well....ya know ;)
adamssoyninja 2 months ago
Aw! Jose! I love this. You put your heart in to this and it really shows! You know that I'm here for you and I love ya' and I think you are talented!! If you ever need someone to talk to, let me know because ya know, people pay me to listen but you get it for free!
also, is your phone taped to your chair? just curious!
haha!
<3
em
adamssoyninja 2 months ago