"I know I can change minds 'cause muthafucka I changed mine."
I think that sums it all up perfectly. Way too many ill lines, but that one caught my ear above and beyond the rest. Good content and wordplay, amazing rhyme schemes, and excellent delivery. Keep it up.
@countrychristianboi glad i could have that effect on u, now go out and write something that makes me wanna get my pen and pad moving again(^; i wanna HEAR IT and FEEL IT!
@wordsharris LOL I LOVE FRIENDLY COMPETITION MY MISSION
LOL DO IT WELL ARTICULATE DIAMONDS IN THE FORM OF VERBS VERBAL DESCRIPTION
I'M FROM TRINIDAD LIKE NICKI MINAJ BUT SLIGHTLY MORE CLEVER LYRICS
BIOLOGY MAKES MY GIRL GET CHEMISTRY BUT IM BACK TO BASICS,, STAY FOCUSED ON PHYSICS............................................ SNEEK peak lol stay tuned bro !!!!!
@zaiope95 we make the mistake of going thru life searching for who we ARE TO BE, when actually, we should be DISCOVERING who we ALREADY ARE... thanx for remindin me of that...
ooooh.....dude u nailed it. man this is like the first vid of urs i'm seeing......damn man. loved it. loved the rhymes, the passion, the intensity. beautiful bro....jus beautiful. thanks for friending me btw. really appreciate it
you should know potential is offensive, you got it or you dont' U DO if you starting out.record discs of this straight up words.- music is where Black Ice lost his dignity - that's worth more than a wrinkled up moss green dirty dollar bill and the biz is like any biz, they don't care what you say or about art, they wanna sell, F them, a bic is stronger than any weapon, A harcore artist is a dangerous man-canibus said
Shine! Shine Shine I hear what you speak off, I feel the world is mine chico And you telling me I have to share it? Well I tell you, galdly !, I would be a fool not to spread it For I shall not shine alone in a whole worlds full of souls with their lights on getting jiggy with it.
Excellent, but I didn't like the swearing or the middle finger. Your work is on another level, that pulls it down. Only in my opinion of course. Listening to you reciting one of your poems and then hearing the swearing seems analogous to admiring a beautiful painting and then being punched in the eye.
@Abu7929 sorry about the swearing but the target demographic of all my video poems are young men between 12 and 25 who have no one to speak for them... if u ever talked to men in this group u'll see that they are often detached from authority making it hard to connect without speaking to them at least moderately on their level. thanx for viewing and i REALLY value ur opinion, it helps me grow(^;
@wordsharris I ALMOST clicked away request (too busy ;-) Then a whisper from my 'Brother/Partner for over 12 yrs. that left this earth (age45) Jan.27, 2007; He happens to be one of my guides WHO happen to come into this earth experience; in the physical. Not too many do this. I am on a journey; end of this mth. for 12 days where a few beings have been pulled together. I was a sheeple for over 60 yrs. Your Poem is powerful; I wept as I listened. Fear can stop you from experiencing. Thank You
@1985322 life thru your window... i like that... can't wait to see what u right when u WALKIN OUT THE DOOR! keep it up, i'll be keepin my eye out for you(^;
I can change minds, cuz mutha f*cka I changed mines!!! That's what's up! May all haters go blind...lol! I see you shinin' brotha. Loved it! Thanks for sharing. :-)
Enjoyed it! Love hearing ppl creatively telling their stories :)
ATLShavonneJ 1 week ago
Beautiful!!! Don't curse! You lose people and it fights with your spiritual talk! Just a suggestion. Please keep them coming! You have a great gift!
rhofloetic 6 months ago
Hearing this poem everyday will make my day A-okay <3
Queenj92 7 months ago
despite the cursing :/ ....hmmmm :)
marylynmuzik 8 months ago
I LOVE IT MINUS ALL THE CURSING..OVER ALL GOOD THO
tfrang07 10 months ago
lyrically provoking!
kidblackfoot 10 months ago
My applause for you is deafening. You are amazing!:). Much love King.
Sharone326 10 months ago
omgggggg
*clapping* !!! you are truely blessed
keep doing what you do. cause you are AMAZING.
KiyaSoSweet 10 months ago
this is a beautiful poem! i love what you did with the lighting :D
TheSharpenedPencil 10 months ago
do u SHINE or do u try to DULL everyone else?
wordsharris 10 months ago
I like ur poem(except for the cussing, it thru me off & I had to stop it into the kids got out of the room) other than that it was pretty good ;)
Sugabear1976 11 months ago 2
@Sugabear1976 i'm sorry, lol
my next one is REALLY GROWN UP but the one after that i'll tone it down just for my sensitive eared peoples(^;
thanx for COMMENTING!
wordsharris 11 months ago 2
@wordsharris sweet guy u r ;D
Sugabear1976 10 months ago
great poem..extremely encouraging..
keziathepoet 11 months ago
On a scale from 1 to 10, I'd give you a 25. Great job, and thanks for the invite. Peace.
poignant4insights 11 months ago
INCREDIBLE MAN..5 STARS ALL THE WAY,IM GONNA SUB U OK?
JUANO510 11 months ago
Fuck Yea!!!
harktheharbinger 11 months ago
All right now...Tell it, brother! i loved it! Thank you for sharing!
WiseLady7 11 months ago
Awakening Movement Lets Get!!!!!!!! Conscious Kings and Queens!!!! Hotep!!
caramelskintype09 11 months ago
u r 1 wise brotha.
i luv it
VeronicasPlace 11 months ago
BEAUTIFUL! Thank you...
richardcurrier 11 months ago
full of wisdom
CopyKat22 11 months ago
"I know I can change minds 'cause muthafucka I changed mine."
I think that sums it all up perfectly. Way too many ill lines, but that one caught my ear above and beyond the rest. Good content and wordplay, amazing rhyme schemes, and excellent delivery. Keep it up.
htpdemoneyeskyo 11 months ago
SAY BRO I HAVENT WROTE A POEM IN A LONG TIME....BUT YOU MAKE ME WANT TO GET ON IT AGAIN.
countrychristianboi 1 year ago
@countrychristianboi glad i could have that effect on u, now go out and write something that makes me wanna get my pen and pad moving again(^; i wanna HEAR IT and FEEL IT!
wordsharris 1 year ago
Hope you allow video responses im coming n very lyrical
jj7akaJamal 1 year ago
@jj7akaJamal make sure u bring that HEAT and i'll add u to my FAVORITES(^;
wordsharris 1 year ago
@wordsharris LOL I LOVE FRIENDLY COMPETITION MY MISSION
LOL DO IT WELL ARTICULATE DIAMONDS IN THE FORM OF VERBS VERBAL DESCRIPTION
I'M FROM TRINIDAD LIKE NICKI MINAJ BUT SLIGHTLY MORE CLEVER LYRICS
BIOLOGY MAKES MY GIRL GET CHEMISTRY BUT IM BACK TO BASICS,, STAY FOCUSED ON PHYSICS............................................ SNEEK peak lol stay tuned bro !!!!!
jj7akaJamal 1 year ago
I love this vid. but i have something for you to consider. Is life about finding yourself. or creating yourself?
zaiope95 1 year ago
@zaiope95 we make the mistake of going thru life searching for who we ARE TO BE, when actually, we should be DISCOVERING who we ALREADY ARE... thanx for remindin me of that...
wordsharris 1 year ago
@wordsharris you sir.. are a wise man
zaiope95 11 months ago
This is nice. I would say not-so-rough draft.
Jimmyjumpnjive 1 year ago
Very cool.... ☠
CatspitProductions 1 year ago
omg...love your wordplay!!..keep it up...awesome..soo dope
loveiseverything25 1 year ago
Wish you have good cretivity for humanity please
Hari Om Tat Sat
JITSHUKLA 1 year ago
thumps UP if u follow @wordsharris ON TWITTER!
wordsharris 1 year ago 3
Fucking awesome man!!!
phemohilia 1 year ago
Very nicely rhymed, very well said. your words express a danger and a light; thanks for the poem. It was a good one.
P
rp7o333 1 year ago
powerful presentation, unique and uninhibited... well done young man
megansspark 1 year ago
*BLUNT*TRUTHFUL* N REALLY HEART FELT* GREAT WORK* HUGGS*KISSES*BEST WISHES *!* BEAUTIFUL ART *!* SHINE!SHINE!SHINE! LOL ON THE END*BUT I FEEL IT *!*
amandadouglas100 1 year ago
Some of the realist sh** I eva heard
DATRUTH12345678able 1 year ago
You had me at "Motherfucker". Liked.
rovingrepairbot 1 year ago
I really love it! Always love the beat, man!
cookmoore 1 year ago
Shine SHine Shine... what beautiful words.
What a great channel!
I will subscribe and watch you shine.
please take the time, to come to mine.
bugsycline 1 year ago
Really good. Thanks.
langstonify 1 year ago
EXCELLENT!!!
Biofishable 1 year ago
No cussing with such a bright light that shines within.:) Just saying not hating.
linaeable 1 year ago
i forgot..MAY ALL HATERS GO BLIND!
this was too good for words
KiyaSoSweet 1 year ago
good workz mayn i like wat you do
streetsofbrum1 1 year ago
ooooh.....dude u nailed it. man this is like the first vid of urs i'm seeing......damn man. loved it. loved the rhymes, the passion, the intensity. beautiful bro....jus beautiful. thanks for friending me btw. really appreciate it
jeetallica 1 year ago
@jeetallica really REALLY appreciate the love... comments like urs give me fuel to KEEP GOING(^:
wordsharris 1 year ago
keep shining man. let the truth shine..
s3eds 1 year ago
lol may all haters go blind nice cya
UltraEnigmaRaps67 1 year ago
it sounds great so far if it is a rough draft keep real this poem is Amazing!!!!
UltraEnigmaRaps67 1 year ago
I am so HONORED to be your new friend.
Do you, God, do you!
ObaNarayanShivaji999 1 year ago
Sweet. =)
L00NGB00W 1 year ago
WOWWWWWWWWWWWW thumbs up if u agree
TheDeejayjp 1 year ago 3
you should know potential is offensive, you got it or you dont' U DO if you starting out.record discs of this straight up words.- music is where Black Ice lost his dignity - that's worth more than a wrinkled up moss green dirty dollar bill and the biz is like any biz, they don't care what you say or about art, they wanna sell, F them, a bic is stronger than any weapon, A harcore artist is a dangerous man-canibus said
bobethe 1 year ago
wow, this is amazing:) u made my day !
denizdrogba 1 year ago
wooow you shine man
really good
7lizet 1 year ago
Wow! your good, thumbs up! :-)
luv6pup 1 year ago
definitely subscribe
TainoSun 1 year ago
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TainoSun 1 year ago
Shine! Shine Shine
I hear what you speak off,
I feel the world is mine chico
And you telling me I have to share it?
Well I tell you, galdly !,
I'll be a fool not to spread it
For I shall not shine alone
in a whole worlds full of souls
with their lights on
getting jiggy with it.
TainoSun 1 year ago 8
and i want dem shiny words so i can shine til i blind too ...
very good stuff!
ChannelThePoetry 1 year ago
attitude and POETRY riddled with scripture!
NICE!
ChannelThePoetry 1 year ago
Awesome Poem man! I can see your shine!
-J Insane
jinsanemaine 1 year ago
great peom thanks
holyfirebreath 1 year ago
i am great... as of urself;
MistahKayotic420 1 year ago
nicely done...keep shining..:)
NurturedSoul 1 year ago
definitely inspirational.. great vid, great poem..
InfamousK82 1 year ago
Excellent, but I didn't like the swearing or the middle finger. Your work is on another level, that pulls it down. Only in my opinion of course. Listening to you reciting one of your poems and then hearing the swearing seems analogous to admiring a beautiful painting and then being punched in the eye.
Abu7929 1 year ago 2
@Abu7929 sorry about the swearing but the target demographic of all my video poems are young men between 12 and 25 who have no one to speak for them... if u ever talked to men in this group u'll see that they are often detached from authority making it hard to connect without speaking to them at least moderately on their level. thanx for viewing and i REALLY value ur opinion, it helps me grow(^;
wordsharris 1 year ago 2
@wordsharris I ALMOST clicked away request (too busy ;-) Then a whisper from my 'Brother/Partner for over 12 yrs. that left this earth (age45) Jan.27, 2007; He happens to be one of my guides WHO happen to come into this earth experience; in the physical. Not too many do this. I am on a journey; end of this mth. for 12 days where a few beings have been pulled together. I was a sheeple for over 60 yrs. Your Poem is powerful; I wept as I listened. Fear can stop you from experiencing. Thank You
nancyl2 1 year ago
@wordsharris Great job. Keep the inspiration coming. ☺♥☺
Anyu7378 1 year ago
strong words
304SOULJUH 1 year ago
I loved this!!!! You better speak that truth to all of us!! Much love, SK
skhawkin 1 year ago
very good, part of this poem could fit in the coach carter film, easily. what do you think of my council estate vision poem ?
1985322 1 year ago
@1985322 life thru your window... i like that... can't wait to see what u right when u WALKIN OUT THE DOOR! keep it up, i'll be keepin my eye out for you(^;
wordsharris 1 year ago
Yes that's hot. Work it. Love the ending yes tag them hataz
bradleysubershow 1 year ago
Hotep God,
Now that's wzup!!!
BiggyWayne777 1 year ago
I can change minds, cuz mutha f*cka I changed mines!!! That's what's up! May all haters go blind...lol! I see you shinin' brotha. Loved it! Thanks for sharing. :-)
estari4life 1 year ago
i love this...and really needed to hear this. you are just awesome.
chocolatechild72 1 year ago
I can change minds .,,,, mother Fucker I changed mines..... Hot real hot. !!!!!!!!!
HIMAY10NENCE 1 year ago
this is beautiful. you're delivery is strong and the message is wonderful. :)
nvdischulita 1 year ago
Amazing!
dat80sbabi 1 year ago
Enjoyed this!
(◕‿◕) Kokofemme
kokofemme 1 year ago
I'm inspired.
By the way...
You remind me of my friend when he does a poem like this :)
babylana70 1 year ago
@shereew1
i didnt think nobody finished watchin that part, lol
wordsharris 1 year ago
Omg oli so love this I can kiss u right now lol! I gotta postvthis to Facebook!!
MadameBeautiful 1 year ago
Very good start mate. This is gonna be great.
TheAlexZub 1 year ago
YOU ARE SHINING!!! LOVED IT!!I hope you don't mind but I gotta share this!!
athomas1124 1 year ago
Nycely Cre8id
Napisha09 1 year ago
Wow!! I love it..
victoria0402 1 year ago
I likes, I likes!!! "May all haters go blind" Classic!!!!
ShereeW1 1 year ago
Love it!
itsjustni 1 year ago