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  • Enjoyed it! Love hearing ppl creatively telling their stories :)

  • Beautiful!!! Don't curse! You lose people and it fights with your spiritual talk! Just a suggestion. Please keep them coming! You have a great gift!

  • Hearing this poem everyday will make my day A-okay <3

  • despite the cursing :/ ....hmmmm :)

  • I LOVE IT MINUS ALL THE CURSING..OVER ALL GOOD THO

  • lyrically provoking!

  • My applause for you is deafening. You are amazing!:). Much love King.

  • omgggggg

    *clapping* !!! you are truely blessed

    keep doing what you do. cause you are AMAZING.

  • this is a beautiful poem! i love what you did with the lighting :D

  • do u SHINE or do u try to DULL everyone else?

  • I like ur poem(except for the cussing, it thru me off & I had to stop it into the kids got out of the room) other than that it was pretty good ;)

  • @Sugabear1976 i'm sorry, lol

    my next one is REALLY GROWN UP but the one after that i'll tone it down just for my sensitive eared peoples(^;

    thanx for COMMENTING!

  • @wordsharris sweet guy u r ;D

  • great poem..extremely encouraging..

  • On a scale from 1 to 10, I'd give you a 25. Great job, and thanks for the invite. Peace.

  • INCREDIBLE MAN..5 STARS ALL THE WAY,IM GONNA SUB U OK?

  • Fuck Yea!!!

    

  • All right now...Tell it, brother! i loved it! Thank you for sharing!

  • Awakening Movement Lets Get!!!!!!!! Conscious Kings and Queens!!!! Hotep!!

  • u r 1 wise brotha.

    i luv it

  • BEAUTIFUL!  Thank you...

  • full of wisdom

  • "I know I can change minds 'cause muthafucka I changed mine."

    I think that sums it all up perfectly. Way too many ill lines, but that one caught my ear above and beyond the rest. Good content and wordplay, amazing rhyme schemes, and excellent delivery. Keep it up.

  • SAY BRO I HAVENT WROTE A POEM IN A LONG TIME....BUT YOU MAKE ME WANT TO GET ON IT AGAIN.

  • @countrychristianboi glad i could have that effect on u, now go out and write something that makes me wanna get my pen and pad moving again(^; i wanna HEAR IT and FEEL IT!

  • Hope you allow video responses im coming n very lyrical

  • @jj7akaJamal make sure u bring that HEAT and i'll add u to my FAVORITES(^;

  • @wordsharris LOL I LOVE FRIENDLY COMPETITION MY MISSION

    LOL DO IT WELL ARTICULATE DIAMONDS IN THE FORM OF VERBS VERBAL DESCRIPTION

    I'M FROM TRINIDAD LIKE NICKI MINAJ BUT SLIGHTLY MORE CLEVER LYRICS

    BIOLOGY MAKES MY GIRL GET CHEMISTRY BUT IM BACK TO BASICS,, STAY FOCUSED ON PHYSICS.......................­..................... SNEEK peak lol stay tuned bro !!!!!

  • I love this vid. but i have something for you to consider. Is life about finding yourself. or creating yourself?

  • @zaiope95 we make the mistake of going thru life searching for who we ARE TO BE, when actually, we should be DISCOVERING who we ALREADY ARE... thanx for remindin me of that...

  • @wordsharris you sir.. are a wise man

  • This is nice. I would say not-so-rough draft.

  • Very cool.... ☠

  • omg...love your wordplay!!..keep it up...awesome..soo dope

  • Wish you have good cretivity for humanity please

    Hari Om Tat Sat

  • thumps UP if u follow @wordsharris ON TWITTER!

  • Fucking awesome man!!!

  • Very nicely rhymed, very well said. your words express a danger and a light; thanks for the poem. It was a good one.

    P

  • powerful presentation, unique and uninhibited... well done young man

  • *BLUNT*TRUTHFUL* N REALLY HEART FELT* GREAT WORK* HUGGS*KISSES*BEST WISHES *!* BEAUTIFUL ART *!* SHINE!SHINE!SHINE! LOL ON THE END*BUT I FEEL IT *!*

  • Some of the realist sh** I eva heard

  • You had me at "Motherfucker". Liked.

  • I really love it! Always love the beat, man!

  • Shine SHine Shine... what beautiful words.

    What a great channel!

    I will subscribe and watch you shine.

    please take the time, to come to mine.

  • Really good. Thanks.

  • EXCELLENT!!!

  • No cussing with such a bright light that shines within.:) Just saying not hating.

  • i forgot..MAY ALL HATERS GO BLIND!

    this was too good for words

  • good workz mayn i like wat you do

  • ooooh.....dude u nailed it. man this is like the first vid of urs i'm seeing......damn man. loved it. loved the rhymes, the passion, the intensity. beautiful bro....jus beautiful. thanks for friending me btw. really appreciate it

  • @jeetallica really REALLY appreciate the love... comments like urs give me fuel to KEEP GOING(^:

  • keep shining man. let the truth shine..

  • lol may all haters go blind nice cya 

  • it sounds great so far if it is a rough draft keep real this poem is Amazing!!!! 

  • I am so HONORED to be your new friend.

    Do you, God, do you!

  • Sweet. =)

  • WOWWWWWWWWWWWW thumbs up if u agree

  • you should know potential is offensive, you got it or you dont' U DO if you starting out.record discs of this straight up words.- music is where Black Ice lost his dignity - that's worth more than a wrinkled up moss green dirty dollar bill and the biz is like any biz, they don't care what you say or about art, they wanna sell, F them, a bic is stronger than any weapon, A harcore artist is a dangerous man-canibus said

  • wow, this is amazing:) u made my day !

  • wooow you shine man

    really good

  • Wow! your good, thumbs up! :-)

  • definitely subscribe

  • Shine! Shine Shine

    I hear what you speak off,

    I feel the world is mine chico

    And you telling me I have to share it?

    Well I tell you, galdly !,

    I'll be a fool not to spread it

    For I shall not shine alone

    in a whole worlds full of souls

    with their lights on

    getting jiggy with it.

  • and i want dem shiny words so i can shine til i blind too ...

    very good stuff!

  • attitude and POETRY riddled with scripture!

    NICE!

  • Awesome Poem man! I can see your shine!

    -J Insane

  • great peom thanks

  • i am great... as of urself;

  • nicely done...keep shining..:)

    

  • definitely inspirational.. great vid, great poem..

  • Excellent, but I didn't like the swearing or the middle finger. Your work is on another level, that pulls it down. Only in my opinion of course. Listening to you reciting one of your poems and then hearing the swearing seems analogous to admiring a beautiful painting and then being punched in the eye.

  • @Abu7929 sorry about the swearing but the target demographic of all my video poems are young men between 12 and 25 who have no one to speak for them... if u ever talked to men in this group u'll see that they are often detached from authority making it hard to connect without speaking to them at least moderately on their level. thanx for viewing and i REALLY value ur opinion, it helps me grow(^;

  • @wordsharris I ALMOST clicked away request (too busy ;-) Then a whisper from my 'Brother/Partner for over 12 yrs. that left this earth (age45) Jan.27, 2007; He happens to be one of my guides WHO happen to come into this earth experience; in the physical. Not too many do this. I am on a journey; end of this mth. for 12 days where a few beings have been pulled together. I was a sheeple for over 60 yrs. Your Poem is powerful; I wept as I listened. Fear can stop you from experiencing. Thank You

  • @wordsharris Great job. Keep the inspiration coming. ☺♥☺

  • strong words 

  • I loved this!!!! You better speak that truth to all of us!! Much love, SK

  • very good, part of this poem could fit in the coach carter film, easily. what do you think of my council estate vision poem ?

  • @1985322 life thru your window... i like that... can't wait to see what u right when u WALKIN OUT THE DOOR! keep it up, i'll be keepin my eye out for you(^;

  • Yes that's hot. Work it. Love the ending yes tag them hataz

  • Hotep God,

    Now that's wzup!!!

    

  • I can change minds, cuz mutha f*cka I changed mines!!! That's what's up! May all haters go blind...lol! I see you shinin' brotha. Loved it! Thanks for sharing. :-)

  • i love this...and really needed to hear this. you are just awesome.

  • I can change minds .,,,, mother Fucker I changed mines..... Hot real hot. !!!!!!!!!

  • this is beautiful. you're delivery is strong and the message is wonderful. :)

  • Amazing!

  • Enjoyed this!

    (◕‿◕) Kokofemme

  • I'm inspired.

    By the way...

    You remind me of my friend when he does a poem like this :)

  • @shereew1

    i didnt think nobody finished watchin that part, lol

  • Omg oli so love this I can kiss u right now lol! I gotta postvthis to Facebook!!

  • Very good start mate. This is gonna be great.

  • YOU ARE SHINING!!! LOVED IT!!I hope you don't mind but I gotta share this!!

  • Nycely Cre8id

  • Wow!! I love it..

  • I likes, I likes!!! "May all haters go blind" Classic!!!!

  • Love it!

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