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  • Can you PLEASE re-up???

  • @Andrewrx85 Done.

  • @TheSlendah Thanks broham, will give credit where it's due, but most likely i'll just make my own personal mix for myself lol.

  • lol wouldnt all fit

    

  • im just tryna geta second from her, maybe we could spend a second summer, together sept this one would be better. i know its hard now, but its all on the table i layed those cards down, so comeon ma letcha gaurd down lemme show you taht im trustworthy, i just want it back to when you was nuts for me, boo i know you got that rush for me

  • know i lost my way but i swear i never had teh wrong intentions, mindless actions wit sum real ass consequences, lost my sense you were the first to see, ida never did you like that purposely. smoking purple tree as strong as hercules until it hurts to breathe, liquor flowing like my verses be causing pain to my girl like she birthing me, but shes my lover not my mother, but still i learned a lesson from her, and it was heavy like these rainclouds i be steppin under

  • AY I DOUBT ANYBODY WILL READ DIS. BUT PLZ CHECK OUT MY VERSION OF THE VENT!!!!

  • Check out my remix on my channel if you can find the time thank you!

  • I PROMISE THAT MAN LIVE HE THE NEXT TU PAC !!!!!!!!!!!!

  • I swear i'll never let my visions shatter...i study hard they say that knowing shit is half the battle.

    Them people say i'm changing on em that don't even matter...i leave a lot but shit i want the world to see Seattle.

    I've seen my family hurting even lost a couple friends..I guess what means a lot to you don't mean it does for them.

    They see me sacrifice for music and they wonder why, but all the problems disappearing the day i get signed..

    check my channel or search me. Shelton Harris.

  • im always told to follow all my hopes and dreams, but mine are shattered somewhere lying broken in the streets, im only 16 but im scared as hell, all i think about is college and if i will do well, i wish i took my studies serious when i was a youth, but now all i have are regrets and the thoughts of fools, i always dream that i will make it big, not as a rapper but something else i dont know what it is, people say that ill do just fine, but i want to do great and break through the bonds

  • PLEASE READ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Im An Upcomming Rapper, && I Feel Like Im Pretty Good At The Things I Do.

    I Would Really Appreciate If You Could Please Listen To My Remix Of This Song

    Its On My Channel Its Called "Doin All The Wrong Things"

    I Appreciate All The Help.

    Everyone Please Thumbs Up So Others Can See This. Thank You

  • Rappers hide behind a LIE,scared to tell the TRUTH/While convincing young kids to grab a gun and Shoot/It's a crime to kill somebody,there's a Price To Pay/Before a jury as the Judge takes your Life Away/But why behind bars people find their Righteous Way?/I wish you heard the sermon the preacher had recite Today/If I can't be myself,I'll be Lost Soul/Freedom of speech,I refuse to keep my Mouth Closed/They'll merk you if your Real,better Chill Bruh/Real recognize real & your looking Unfamiliar.

  • ima do a song 2 this. some real shit about 2 b spoken...

  • I can't believe your gone after all these years, it's too hard to hold back these painful tears, I wish I could've told you how i felt just one more time, I'm just tryin to get this off my chest and hope it rhyme, I pray every day just to see your face, I'm livin hell down here and you in a betta place, You taught me everyday how to be a man, But I'm only 16 livin witout a plan, You said I can't become a man in just one night, I'm goin thru hell just to find a light...

  • HEY! CHECK OUT MY DREAMIN' INSTRUMENTAL! I FINALLY DID IT!

  • my persona is locked, up in a real strong box, to prevent any loss, of, what ive not yet lost, whats a job, whats a boss, im amazed by the sunlight bright on a morning frost, still ashamed of my mindframe, when thoughts get crossed, 

  • this fire in my stomach, a spark in my brain, the pulse from my heart sends the love through my veins, the hate in this world got my soul wanting change and i know that im different but their calling me strange, so.. lets take it back how its supposed to be, tell me.. when did rap lose its poetry?, if you're living life just to please yourself, you're probably leaving love up there on a dusty shelf, uh... am i fake or real?, let me look you in the eyes and tell you how i feel. there is more..

  • @EoNImane That was poetry at its best

  • @ASE137 Thankyou man!

  • @EoNImane You are very welcome bro keep it up!

  • @ASE137 people like you are the ones that keep giving me more confidence, much respect man <3

  • @EoNImane no problem my dude!

  • do i need these eyes to see or maybe you see through me, in truth im trapped underneath, deep at the bottom of the blue sea, and i love you, but the term gets used loosely, and i dont sleep usually, just roll up another loose leaf, im afraid that you might lose me, and im scared wont be there, but im blowin on my weed like i dont even care, gone with the wind like the air thats flowin through her hair, trapped in the future, lookin back like i wasnt there.

  • i wish i could speak my mind/but its hard when all you do is melt down,and ur thoughts sneak out behind/its a crazy world ,then mine is cold/ i use to speak words,SO BOLD/but now im shadowin my disbeliefs/im narrow down to the most negative griefs/"eli its ok we understand pain"if you did i wouldnt be blind standin,waitin in the rain/if i had words of wisdom best believe ill tell you/cause my heart is made of gold,but it melts to/worship while you can,as i steadly come to/i promise il be there4u

  • trapped in the future lookin back like i wasnt there, maybe cos i never was, cant blame me i forgot

  • do i need these eyes to see or can you see right through me, in truth im trapped underneath deep at the bottom of the blue sea, i love you but the term gets used loosely and usually i dont sleep, just roll up another loose leaf, im afraid that you might lose me, im scared that you wont be there, but im blowin on the weed and i dont even care, gone with the wind like air thats flowin through her hair, 

  • @TheSlendah aye yo im usin this beat 

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  • im guna use this and its guna be the illest shit, fuck wuteveryone else does wit it ima do it justice u just gotta believe me!

  • When I finish writing I'll give you the track. Could you inbox your e-mail?

  • aye check out my video response and tell me wat u think

  • please check out a snippet of my rap to this song! its currently on this youtube page! :)

  • Y'all need to stop posting liriks abd start selling em

  • does anyone notice this sounds like a drake beat??

  • @aimhighgetlow it dose sound like drake beat

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  • could you do another naive individual glorifying greed & encouraging racism???

  • im about to use this beat

  • Im afraid of the things that bring me peace..

    We win battles after we have seen defeat..

    Im new to the world's cruelty obviously i aint get a meet n greet..

    I wish i could make me blind so i wont see me weak..

    .. Im suffering, im staggering, times tough again, cant manage em..my good and bad thought are scattered in my head, i cant seem to channel them..

    Everytime i fall i wonder if ill ever stand again..

  • I look into my own eyes in the mirror/everytime I do it seems as if my demons are becoming clearer/Guess the devils trying to falter me/ Im trying so hard to become what I want to be/I lost my best friend just the other day/They still alive but we yelled thats all I have to say/I guess this is the price I pay/Today I started to wonder/If I became famous would it stop me from taking a plunder/into the dark depths of my problems/Will I start to blossom/Or will I lie dead in the road like a possum?

  • I did this beat once but this is round two...

    please shed a minute off your time to read my rhyme through...

    I promise this will never turn to mainstream...

    where it seems the rappers speak about the same things...

    Idol Gods... and things of no concern...

    I despise their ways of life cause that's what kids learn...

    And I'm not a parent, but I can still teach...

    Mission Accomplished if there's only one child I reach...

    Love & Respect as always.

    -Rob

  • the beat goez so haaard !!!

  • I finished my Hometown Hero remake! Go check it out!

  • I Need An Instrumental.

    Big K.R.I.T. "Hometown Hero"

    Can You Do That One Bro, I'd Really Appreciate It.

  • @DifferentBreed210 I'm working on it, bro!

  • @DifferentBreed210 I finished it, go check it out!

  • I wish i can say everything i wrote/ but theres a certain feelin itll be taken as a joke/And some days i feel suicidal knowin that im broke/you said always invision M.Phelps all the records he broke/Rhymin for this worthless check yet i still hav hope/But then quickly passes when they say "listen up 'Los"/you can rap bout money,sex,cars,or hoes/But mention God and your shit will never be playedon the radio

  • Ive wrote so many rhymes in my notepad,

    just tryna vent how i feel on the inside,

    i wana get this of my chest for a piece of mind,

    cause deep down i feel lifes not really fine,

    i just lost my girl and my grandas dying,

    each day i can see his health decline,

    i have to hug my mother cause i see her crying,

    i hope she knows ill be there when it is her time.

    Peter McCormick - 15 years old

  • IF U GET ON THIS SONG U BETTER NOT FUCKIN RUIN THE BEAT! Forreal u fake non-talented bored rappers better stay the fuck away from this beat. Dont do it if u can put ur soul into ur music.

  • I plan to make it big at my gigs, that's no joke. But I'm busy at school, followin' rules, keepin' notes. Hope and dope is what everyone looks for. Pain comes with rain, includin' more. Shocks cause of glocks, some one got blasted Too young and strung, now in a casket. Damn, I dont understand what makes a man? Superstar with cars, and his coo' own land? Questions teach lessons, if you listen close. answer for cancer is somethin' we need most. D.W.B. What ya think?
  • You should make the Dreaming instrumental! That'd be tight!

  • @chaddrick You know what? I'll try working on that right now!

  • @TheSlendah iight thaz whatz up!

    

  • I'm searchin' through the darkness tryin' to find a light...

    Despite the shattered bulbs that piece together life...

    I put my Faith in God and try to keep it strong...

    Lord Forgive my sins even though the list is long...

    I'ma human being, wrong is just my way of life...

    But I strive to be a better man and do what's right...

    Lord if you could only show me where to walk...

    I'll get on the path quick without a second thought...

    Feel me...

    -Rob

  • @Robisoldskool that's a prayer in lyrics brudda !

  • @MusicsBrotherCam Thanks. Hope you enjoyed it.

  • thank youuuuu, appreciate it

  • @DJKoopa1 No problem!

  • 1 reason I love this instrumental...people always post meaningful lyrics. Keep at it, chase toward your dreams, and never give up. Don't ever let someone tell you that you can't do something because they're wrong. Anything is possible if you have the determination and the will to strive forth. Believe in yourself, believe in your religion, or believe in your logic, it doesn't matter, just believe you can.

  • @TheSlendah thanks

    enough to inspire me to make a reply  2 big krit through my lyrics

  • im lost wonderin y did God take her/

    cuz in my heart I knw nobody cant replace her/

    Granny Rose i miss u and luv u dearly/

    still teachn me cuz since u bn gone i c shit clearly/

    my momma lost u she cried so many tears of pain/

    its bn 3 weeks nd i can tell she aint gon never b tha same/

    u taught me how to give more and never less/

    cuz if ya dont giv ya all ya didnt giv ya best/

    dats wut i gotta giv right is how i gotta liv/

    nd im sorry 4 evrythang wrong i said or did/

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