im just tryna geta second from her, maybe we could spend a second summer, together sept this one would be better. i know its hard now, but its all on the table i layed those cards down, so comeon ma letcha gaurd down lemme show you taht im trustworthy, i just want it back to when you was nuts for me, boo i know you got that rush for me
know i lost my way but i swear i never had teh wrong intentions, mindless actions wit sum real ass consequences, lost my sense you were the first to see, ida never did you like that purposely. smoking purple tree as strong as hercules until it hurts to breathe, liquor flowing like my verses be causing pain to my girl like she birthing me, but shes my lover not my mother, but still i learned a lesson from her, and it was heavy like these rainclouds i be steppin under
im always told to follow all my hopes and dreams, but mine are shattered somewhere lying broken in the streets, im only 16 but im scared as hell, all i think about is college and if i will do well, i wish i took my studies serious when i was a youth, but now all i have are regrets and the thoughts of fools, i always dream that i will make it big, not as a rapper but something else i dont know what it is, people say that ill do just fine, but i want to do great and break through the bonds
Rappers hide behind a LIE,scared to tell the TRUTH/While convincing young kids to grab a gun and Shoot/It's a crime to kill somebody,there's a Price To Pay/Before a jury as the Judge takes your Life Away/But why behind bars people find their Righteous Way?/I wish you heard the sermon the preacher had recite Today/If I can't be myself,I'll be Lost Soul/Freedom of speech,I refuse to keep my Mouth Closed/They'll merk you if your Real,better Chill Bruh/Real recognize real & your looking Unfamiliar.
I can't believe your gone after all these years, it's too hard to hold back these painful tears, I wish I could've told you how i felt just one more time, I'm just tryin to get this off my chest and hope it rhyme, I pray every day just to see your face, I'm livin hell down here and you in a betta place, You taught me everyday how to be a man, But I'm only 16 livin witout a plan, You said I can't become a man in just one night, I'm goin thru hell just to find a light...
my persona is locked, up in a real strong box, to prevent any loss, of, what ive not yet lost, whats a job, whats a boss, im amazed by the sunlight bright on a morning frost, still ashamed of my mindframe, when thoughts get crossed,
this fire in my stomach, a spark in my brain, the pulse from my heart sends the love through my veins, the hate in this world got my soul wanting change and i know that im different but their calling me strange, so.. lets take it back how its supposed to be, tell me.. when did rap lose its poetry?, if you're living life just to please yourself, you're probably leaving love up there on a dusty shelf, uh... am i fake or real?, let me look you in the eyes and tell you how i feel. there is more..
do i need these eyes to see or maybe you see through me, in truth im trapped underneath, deep at the bottom of the blue sea, and i love you, but the term gets used loosely, and i dont sleep usually, just roll up another loose leaf, im afraid that you might lose me, and im scared wont be there, but im blowin on my weed like i dont even care, gone with the wind like the air thats flowin through her hair, trapped in the future, lookin back like i wasnt there.
i wish i could speak my mind/but its hard when all you do is melt down,and ur thoughts sneak out behind/its a crazy world ,then mine is cold/ i use to speak words,SO BOLD/but now im shadowin my disbeliefs/im narrow down to the most negative griefs/"eli its ok we understand pain"if you did i wouldnt be blind standin,waitin in the rain/if i had words of wisdom best believe ill tell you/cause my heart is made of gold,but it melts to/worship while you can,as i steadly come to/i promise il be there4u
do i need these eyes to see or can you see right through me, in truth im trapped underneath deep at the bottom of the blue sea, i love you but the term gets used loosely and usually i dont sleep, just roll up another loose leaf, im afraid that you might lose me, im scared that you wont be there, but im blowin on the weed and i dont even care, gone with the wind like air thats flowin through her hair,
I LUV my pretty thang with foregin features/ Wide eyes, sleek curves....... I brought her a set shoes that cost more than 40 pairs of shell toe adidas.
We both Libras, according to her paper she way younger than me....I push her buttons she never gets heated/....after that I gas her up, I know how fast ladies should be treated
I look into my own eyes in the mirror/everytime I do it seems as if my demons are becoming clearer/Guess the devils trying to falter me/ Im trying so hard to become what I want to be/I lost my best friend just the other day/They still alive but we yelled thats all I have to say/I guess this is the price I pay/Today I started to wonder/If I became famous would it stop me from taking a plunder/into the dark depths of my problems/Will I start to blossom/Or will I lie dead in the road like a possum?
I wish i can say everything i wrote/ but theres a certain feelin itll be taken as a joke/And some days i feel suicidal knowin that im broke/you said always invision M.Phelps all the records he broke/Rhymin for this worthless check yet i still hav hope/But then quickly passes when they say "listen up 'Los"/you can rap bout money,sex,cars,or hoes/But mention God and your shit will never be playedon the radio
IF U GET ON THIS SONG U BETTER NOT FUCKIN RUIN THE BEAT! Forreal u fake non-talented bored rappers better stay the fuck away from this beat. Dont do it if u can put ur soul into ur music.
I plan to make it big at my gigs, that's no joke. But I'm busy at school, followin' rules, keepin' notes. Hope and dope is what everyone looks for. Pain comes with rain, includin' more. Shocks cause of glocks, some one got blasted Too young and strung, now in a casket. Damn, I dont understand what makes a man? Superstar with cars, and his coo' own land? Questions teach lessons, if you listen close. answer for cancer is somethin' we need most. D.W.B. What ya think?
1 reason I love this instrumental...people always post meaningful lyrics. Keep at it, chase toward your dreams, and never give up. Don't ever let someone tell you that you can't do something because they're wrong. Anything is possible if you have the determination and the will to strive forth. Believe in yourself, believe in your religion, or believe in your logic, it doesn't matter, just believe you can.
Can you PLEASE re-up???
Andrewrx85 6 days ago
@Andrewrx85 Done.
TheSlendah 6 days ago
@TheSlendah Thanks broham, will give credit where it's due, but most likely i'll just make my own personal mix for myself lol.
Andrewrx85 5 days ago
lol wouldnt all fit
SmackinLames 1 week ago
im just tryna geta second from her, maybe we could spend a second summer, together sept this one would be better. i know its hard now, but its all on the table i layed those cards down, so comeon ma letcha gaurd down lemme show you taht im trustworthy, i just want it back to when you was nuts for me, boo i know you got that rush for me
SmackinLames 1 week ago
know i lost my way but i swear i never had teh wrong intentions, mindless actions wit sum real ass consequences, lost my sense you were the first to see, ida never did you like that purposely. smoking purple tree as strong as hercules until it hurts to breathe, liquor flowing like my verses be causing pain to my girl like she birthing me, but shes my lover not my mother, but still i learned a lesson from her, and it was heavy like these rainclouds i be steppin under
SmackinLames 1 week ago
AY I DOUBT ANYBODY WILL READ DIS. BUT PLZ CHECK OUT MY VERSION OF THE VENT!!!!
jamel0901 1 month ago
Check out my remix on my channel if you can find the time thank you!
WitnessMusic1 1 month ago
I PROMISE THAT MAN LIVE HE THE NEXT TU PAC !!!!!!!!!!!!
BIGANTTWO100 1 month ago
I swear i'll never let my visions shatter...i study hard they say that knowing shit is half the battle.
Them people say i'm changing on em that don't even matter...i leave a lot but shit i want the world to see Seattle.
I've seen my family hurting even lost a couple friends..I guess what means a lot to you don't mean it does for them.
They see me sacrifice for music and they wonder why, but all the problems disappearing the day i get signed..
check my channel or search me. Shelton Harris.
sheltonraps 1 month ago
im always told to follow all my hopes and dreams, but mine are shattered somewhere lying broken in the streets, im only 16 but im scared as hell, all i think about is college and if i will do well, i wish i took my studies serious when i was a youth, but now all i have are regrets and the thoughts of fools, i always dream that i will make it big, not as a rapper but something else i dont know what it is, people say that ill do just fine, but i want to do great and break through the bonds
gmanabg 1 month ago
PLEASE READ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Im An Upcomming Rapper, && I Feel Like Im Pretty Good At The Things I Do.
I Would Really Appreciate If You Could Please Listen To My Remix Of This Song
Its On My Channel Its Called "Doin All The Wrong Things"
I Appreciate All The Help.
Everyone Please Thumbs Up So Others Can See This. Thank You
trizzytraemusik 2 months ago
Rappers hide behind a LIE,scared to tell the TRUTH/While convincing young kids to grab a gun and Shoot/It's a crime to kill somebody,there's a Price To Pay/Before a jury as the Judge takes your Life Away/But why behind bars people find their Righteous Way?/I wish you heard the sermon the preacher had recite Today/If I can't be myself,I'll be Lost Soul/Freedom of speech,I refuse to keep my Mouth Closed/They'll merk you if your Real,better Chill Bruh/Real recognize real & your looking Unfamiliar.
CrisisTheFuture 2 months ago
ima do a song 2 this. some real shit about 2 b spoken...
IBeEvolution 3 months ago
I can't believe your gone after all these years, it's too hard to hold back these painful tears, I wish I could've told you how i felt just one more time, I'm just tryin to get this off my chest and hope it rhyme, I pray every day just to see your face, I'm livin hell down here and you in a betta place, You taught me everyday how to be a man, But I'm only 16 livin witout a plan, You said I can't become a man in just one night, I'm goin thru hell just to find a light...
32RyNo 3 months ago
HEY! CHECK OUT MY DREAMIN' INSTRUMENTAL! I FINALLY DID IT!
TheSlendah 3 months ago
my persona is locked, up in a real strong box, to prevent any loss, of, what ive not yet lost, whats a job, whats a boss, im amazed by the sunlight bright on a morning frost, still ashamed of my mindframe, when thoughts get crossed,
88thetruth88 3 months ago
this fire in my stomach, a spark in my brain, the pulse from my heart sends the love through my veins, the hate in this world got my soul wanting change and i know that im different but their calling me strange, so.. lets take it back how its supposed to be, tell me.. when did rap lose its poetry?, if you're living life just to please yourself, you're probably leaving love up there on a dusty shelf, uh... am i fake or real?, let me look you in the eyes and tell you how i feel. there is more..
EoNImane 3 months ago 6
@EoNImane That was poetry at its best
ASE137 3 months ago
@ASE137 Thankyou man!
EoNImane 3 months ago
@EoNImane You are very welcome bro keep it up!
ASE137 3 months ago
@ASE137 people like you are the ones that keep giving me more confidence, much respect man <3
EoNImane 3 months ago
@EoNImane no problem my dude!
ASE137 3 months ago
do i need these eyes to see or maybe you see through me, in truth im trapped underneath, deep at the bottom of the blue sea, and i love you, but the term gets used loosely, and i dont sleep usually, just roll up another loose leaf, im afraid that you might lose me, and im scared wont be there, but im blowin on my weed like i dont even care, gone with the wind like the air thats flowin through her hair, trapped in the future, lookin back like i wasnt there.
88thetruth88 3 months ago
i wish i could speak my mind/but its hard when all you do is melt down,and ur thoughts sneak out behind/its a crazy world ,then mine is cold/ i use to speak words,SO BOLD/but now im shadowin my disbeliefs/im narrow down to the most negative griefs/"eli its ok we understand pain"if you did i wouldnt be blind standin,waitin in the rain/if i had words of wisdom best believe ill tell you/cause my heart is made of gold,but it melts to/worship while you can,as i steadly come to/i promise il be there4u
109eli1 3 months ago
trapped in the future lookin back like i wasnt there, maybe cos i never was, cant blame me i forgot
88thetruth88 3 months ago
do i need these eyes to see or can you see right through me, in truth im trapped underneath deep at the bottom of the blue sea, i love you but the term gets used loosely and usually i dont sleep, just roll up another loose leaf, im afraid that you might lose me, im scared that you wont be there, but im blowin on the weed and i dont even care, gone with the wind like air thats flowin through her hair,
88thetruth88 3 months ago
@TheSlendah aye yo im usin this beat
WeAreNewEra1 4 months ago
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I LUV my pretty thang with foregin features/ Wide eyes, sleek curves....... I brought her a set shoes that cost more than 40 pairs of shell toe adidas.
We both Libras, according to her paper she way younger than me....I push her buttons she never gets heated/....after that I gas her up, I know how fast ladies should be treated
SEE BUL EVE THINKING2015
thinking2015 4 months ago 19
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thinking2015 4 months ago
im guna use this and its guna be the illest shit, fuck wuteveryone else does wit it ima do it justice u just gotta believe me!
jakebrad1515 4 months ago
When I finish writing I'll give you the track. Could you inbox your e-mail?
BaseS1X 4 months ago
aye check out my video response and tell me wat u think
ktpk2009 4 months ago in playlist Instrumentals
please check out a snippet of my rap to this song! its currently on this youtube page! :)
CCarloTv 5 months ago
Y'all need to stop posting liriks abd start selling em
prodogy07 5 months ago
does anyone notice this sounds like a drake beat??
aimhighgetlow 5 months ago
@aimhighgetlow it dose sound like drake beat
dboy566 4 months ago
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bobbyrae10 5 months ago
could you do another naive individual glorifying greed & encouraging racism???
TheBarneytrouble 5 months ago
im about to use this beat
Bizmarky808 5 months ago
Im afraid of the things that bring me peace..
We win battles after we have seen defeat..
Im new to the world's cruelty obviously i aint get a meet n greet..
I wish i could make me blind so i wont see me weak..
.. Im suffering, im staggering, times tough again, cant manage em..my good and bad thought are scattered in my head, i cant seem to channel them..
Everytime i fall i wonder if ill ever stand again..
admiredasound 5 months ago 2
I look into my own eyes in the mirror/everytime I do it seems as if my demons are becoming clearer/Guess the devils trying to falter me/ Im trying so hard to become what I want to be/I lost my best friend just the other day/They still alive but we yelled thats all I have to say/I guess this is the price I pay/Today I started to wonder/If I became famous would it stop me from taking a plunder/into the dark depths of my problems/Will I start to blossom/Or will I lie dead in the road like a possum?
xxDetroitx95 5 months ago
I did this beat once but this is round two...
please shed a minute off your time to read my rhyme through...
I promise this will never turn to mainstream...
where it seems the rappers speak about the same things...
Idol Gods... and things of no concern...
I despise their ways of life cause that's what kids learn...
And I'm not a parent, but I can still teach...
Mission Accomplished if there's only one child I reach...
Love & Respect as always.
-Rob
Robisoldskool 5 months ago
the beat goez so haaard !!!
DjMoulaMike 5 months ago
I finished my Hometown Hero remake! Go check it out!
TheSlendah 5 months ago 3
I Need An Instrumental.
Big K.R.I.T. "Hometown Hero"
Can You Do That One Bro, I'd Really Appreciate It.
DifferentBreed210 5 months ago 2
@DifferentBreed210 I'm working on it, bro!
TheSlendah 5 months ago
@DifferentBreed210 I finished it, go check it out!
TheSlendah 5 months ago
I wish i can say everything i wrote/ but theres a certain feelin itll be taken as a joke/And some days i feel suicidal knowin that im broke/you said always invision M.Phelps all the records he broke/Rhymin for this worthless check yet i still hav hope/But then quickly passes when they say "listen up 'Los"/you can rap bout money,sex,cars,or hoes/But mention God and your shit will never be playedon the radio
1996clos 5 months ago 16
Ive wrote so many rhymes in my notepad,
just tryna vent how i feel on the inside,
i wana get this of my chest for a piece of mind,
cause deep down i feel lifes not really fine,
i just lost my girl and my grandas dying,
each day i can see his health decline,
i have to hug my mother cause i see her crying,
i hope she knows ill be there when it is her time.
Peter McCormick - 15 years old
pmccormick2k10 5 months ago
IF U GET ON THIS SONG U BETTER NOT FUCKIN RUIN THE BEAT! Forreal u fake non-talented bored rappers better stay the fuck away from this beat. Dont do it if u can put ur soul into ur music.
TheM4Ze 5 months ago
dirtyKwhiteTboy 5 months ago
You should make the Dreaming instrumental! That'd be tight!
chaddrick 6 months ago
@chaddrick You know what? I'll try working on that right now!
TheSlendah 6 months ago
@TheSlendah iight thaz whatz up!
chaddrick 5 months ago
I'm searchin' through the darkness tryin' to find a light...
Despite the shattered bulbs that piece together life...
I put my Faith in God and try to keep it strong...
Lord Forgive my sins even though the list is long...
I'ma human being, wrong is just my way of life...
But I strive to be a better man and do what's right...
Lord if you could only show me where to walk...
I'll get on the path quick without a second thought...
Feel me...
-Rob
Robisoldskool 6 months ago 4
@Robisoldskool that's a prayer in lyrics brudda !
MusicsBrotherCam 6 months ago
@MusicsBrotherCam Thanks. Hope you enjoyed it.
Robisoldskool 6 months ago
thank youuuuu, appreciate it
DJKoopa1 6 months ago
@DJKoopa1 No problem!
TheSlendah 6 months ago
1 reason I love this instrumental...people always post meaningful lyrics. Keep at it, chase toward your dreams, and never give up. Don't ever let someone tell you that you can't do something because they're wrong. Anything is possible if you have the determination and the will to strive forth. Believe in yourself, believe in your religion, or believe in your logic, it doesn't matter, just believe you can.
TheSlendah 6 months ago 18
@TheSlendah thanks
enough to inspire me to make a reply 2 big krit through my lyrics
JmansFragments 6 months ago
im lost wonderin y did God take her/
cuz in my heart I knw nobody cant replace her/
Granny Rose i miss u and luv u dearly/
still teachn me cuz since u bn gone i c shit clearly/
my momma lost u she cried so many tears of pain/
its bn 3 weeks nd i can tell she aint gon never b tha same/
u taught me how to give more and never less/
cuz if ya dont giv ya all ya didnt giv ya best/
dats wut i gotta giv right is how i gotta liv/
nd im sorry 4 evrythang wrong i said or did/
TalkIsCheap414 6 months ago 3