The camera work and fading to black weren't done in a way that fit. The acting's also shoddy.The dirty cut at 1:49 confuses me, and not in a good way. And there was no resolution.
This fits uncomfortably between realism and surrealism. If you're going to walk the line you need to spend a lot of time assessing exactly how to do that. Until then, I appreciate your effort. Good luck on your next one.
The camera work and fading to black weren't done in a way that fit. The acting's also shoddy.The dirty cut at 1:49 confuses me, and not in a good way. And there was no resolution.
This fits uncomfortably between realism and surrealism. If you're going to walk the line you need to spend a lot of time assessing exactly how to do that. Until then, I appreciate your effort. Good luck on your next one.
handicappedhero 2 years ago
its murtagh there is no 'i'
Darius66 3 years ago
I'd say they're all sound in real life though
Kuabla 3 years ago
Ha I love it!!! it's all about being hungry
Daxon 3 years ago