Sketch

[koektoful]

the smile is waaay too creepy. it's even cheesy

[alexsolis9191]

Rape

[vcihiethea]

the suspense is killing me :P

[emily12jonson]

That isn't funny!!!! What are you trying to do, turn rape into a horror?

[Tactual]

Oh cool! I keep a tiny hammer under my mattress to smack rapists with too :D I haven't had to use it yet, but when the day comes I'm gonna be ready!

[Leisure2you]

why does he like his pencil that much

[Leisure2you]

creepy guy

[SuperOhable]

Yah small and limited brains can't think beyond that.. Stupid Indians

[MegaCandyCaneGurl]

how cum she has a hammer lying on the floor?

[TheSkytress]

i have the same blanket she has

[Wurmo]

0:30 - 0:35 he looks like a sex offender.

[momstir1]

Brush ur teeth man

[lordundead1984]

How many hammers does that girl own?!

[kimberleyseetoes]

scary

[russell711]

I liked it

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[CaptainChexmix]

LMFAO. SHITT.

[olba2020]

plop

[littlerascalslol89]

HIS SMILE LOOKS LIKE HE'S ABOUT TO COME OUT OF THE SCREEN AND RAPE YOU O_O!!!

[tusharghude15]

all those who liked this video r mentally ill

[cvsporn]

this is what i need, those softcore porn werent doing it anymore......I cummed like 5 times

thanx

[Hubbabubbamax44]

nice video, but i can tell that its a beginner video, maybe try getting some more friends to help you

[tyrent3086]

@Hubbabubbamax44 i made this in college 2 years ago with one day of shooting as well as directed and acted in it. feel free to look at my page to see the improvements i've made since making this.

[primospartan]

@Hubbabubbamax44 You should make a tutorial man, that's the answer to all shitty movies and videos: Get more friends!

[NoHeadksa]

coooool

[samira827]

Nice video

You ahevieved your goal

Well I kinda felt bad for her

But than thinking why is she dressed like that while men around

That's where womens abuse begin

They begin from them being uncovered, open to much-like flirting with strangers, and being by themself

May Allah protect those who are modest ameen

P.s. I suggest you write something in the description of what you wanted to recieve or something like

"I had a goal for making this video, how did u feel about the girl? I didn't ma

[kittyscratchesboo]

@samira827 See you on the police blotter

[Peppermill12]

He has one front tooth.

[sparkyuiop]

Ahh, she was begging for it!

[joaovitorbrasil1]

blood and ketchup

[angleyue]

i think that the blood should be red tea or coffee,it does not have the color of the blood

[mrsjcullen13]

for heaven sake clean your teeth

[AMG22]

thats not funny bitch

[tyrent3086]

@AMG22 Wasn't supposed to be idiot

[notorioussw]

This got my dick hard.... she should have went all the way forget hitting her with a hammer...smh

[Miles678Z]

This was pretty decent

[Double8Productions]

Fabulous!! Love the soundtrack!!

[MiChiMouSe21]

1- It Took Her that long to fold 3 things?!

2- Why the fuck is she limping?!

3- After he roars, he still picks upp his drawing pencil!

4- she had more than enough time to take that bondage off her mouth!

Other Than That nice angles ;)

[breytonfan1]

@MiChiMouSe21 also its funny how there r random things everywhere, like y is there a random hammer in her room, and how did the towel get on the floor lol...all in all thought i liked it too

[tyrent3086]

@911hotass lol you're living in a dream world if you believe no one is capable of doing something like that. Thats the emotional response I wanted from people so I'm glad I achieved it. Part 2 is coming out soon.

[ramnair23]

@tyrent3086

leave them be these are probably the people that got caught doing it.

[hotmohilapolice]

bloody loco

[NarutoSaga100]

That was Great

[acadium]

She HAD to leave the hammer...

[migyorjos]

que maamguevos cabrones

[tyrent3086]

tu habla como si los videos tuyo's son mejores.

[maxlogan99]

why are you perpetuating violence against women as a form of entertainment?

[tyrent3086]

it's supposed to make you feel uneasy. If you felt bad for the girl then i achieved what i wanted. I'm more concerned about those who find it funny. I in no way made it out to be funny. It's the shit people anywhere could think about and it's why people need to be careful out there because you never know what sick fucked up crap people are thinking of doing to you. that's what this video is about.

[angbang]

Excellent angles...the blood spattering everywhere really got me.

Excellent job.

[KosephMivyotlh]

Very well done!

[iwuzherematt]

if fuck the shit outta that girl

[furglesmurgle]

I give it a 5/5 for the sort of super natural feel it had and it was so creepy. Well done!

[silentwarrior79]

This is probably the best short film that I sat and watched all the way through. Nod bad.

[darkchocolate190]

his smile is oober creepy 0.o

[twisterpuppy]

Love this!!! I didn't know why the girl take off the gag and yell for help but this is horror right? Fantastic job with the acting and camera angles. Goes to show you, a simple story with the right camera angles can capture the audience!

[veronicaownsyou]

great movie. i liked the camera angles and storyline. could have been a little more fast paced. I really liked the ending though. i like how its not a dream or something like that...but yet it is.

[valkyrieJ]

Great movie! that was super creepy! -val