Re: Let's Write a Sawng (Step 9: Revise the Chorus Chords)

[TinRoofHug]

Rivers' version of the song is basically finished now and it's rubbish compared to this, not just the chorus chords you came up with, but everything about it. Your recording has way more intensity, drive, and way better instrumentation and singing than what Rivers did. I can't listen to his version without being bored because I remember back to this week and what you guys did with the song. I don't know what he was thinking letting this slip away. You guys deserve a ton of credit. Great job.

[SatelliteTragedy]

you was robbed!

[ManilaSoda13]

pretty damn sexy dude. beautiful voice as well. your friend needs to be in a band. i would buy all his stuff.

[ChipmunksAndChickens]

well, you're in luck! i just finished mixing his cd - it's killer! his band name is Satellite Tragedy. check out his myspace page.

his drummer's pretty good too! (oh wait, that's me. :)

[killola]

this one is the shit for reals.

[evilmegaman]

dude your friend sounds just like pinkerton era rivers. that's awesome :) awesome voice

[WSwan]

Pretty good. I like it. Even the sloppy solo was cool.

[thesaygoodbyes]

Hands down my favorite version of this song to date!

[marbleofdeath]

wow. is your friend in a band? his voice is amazing

[sodarenthepen]

Hey dude.

I love the idea. The first 3 chords of your chorus sounds perfect. I'm not fond of the rest of your chords but still your idea is great.

[sodarenthepen]

Forgot to tell you that this is the best submission so far. Keep up the good work.

[ChipmunksAndChickens]

thanks dood!

[ChipmunksAndChickens]

thanks everyone for the positive responses!

[ats5]

daaamn, this sounds really really good! great job man

[madcow312]

sounds very weezerish... definetly

[AndrewG4d]

this sounds pretty rad. I like how the first part of the chorus seems to go in one direction, but then nicely follows a resounding progression.

very cool.

[somebodysheine]

I'd pick this if I wuz Rivers.

[ZackScott]

I think before the solo there needs to be the "take it all the way" part.

[ChipmunksAndChickens]

agreed. i didn't have time to insert the established bridge into my version. I just wanted my chorus progression idea posted. (plus I like my bridge and outtro and wanted that shown too.) thanks for the post!

[ZackScott]

I like this version. Lots of power. I especially the background falsetto.

[TinRoofHug]

very very good

[SatelliteTragedy]

wow sounds awesome! love the new chorus prog. 5/5

[bleed0range]

I kinda hear some "vertigo" lol... towards the end.

[ChipmunksAndChickens]

really?? me too!! =P

[bleed0range]

No offense dude. You've done a terrific job here. And your voice is so awesome.

[ChipmunksAndChickens]

thanks. i knew you were kidding.

actually, it's my buddy singing. i can play the instruments, but am pretty bashful when it comes to the singing. :)

[bleed0range]

Well still, you're doing great and so is he. I wish I knew people who were as talented as you two. I'd like to start a band but I don't know ANYBODY who can sing like that or play this well.

[bleed0range]

fan tastik

[GHM73]

I kinda like this. Definitely different than what most people have done.