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  • Hey! Hey Hey! It's Jezebel...Mae Lynn...whatever the hell you want to call me...good work, B. I like it a lot.

  • @WickedRelic thanks :D

  • Deep

    feelin it fo real

    have no further words man 5 stars

  • thanks man! i'm glad you checked it out! keeping this movement moving baby!

  • Dope poem E. How long did it take you to write this?

  • not long actually.

  • Until it grew beyond it's garden,

    And stole into it's neighbor's soil,

    And took it's place without a pardon

    take out "And stole into it's neighbor's soil"

    and Lord Jamar pretty much has that same bar

  • E....thats a spooky beat, I dont know if I should keep listening or cut it off.....It is close to bedtime....Nah man just playin but nice Im into the darkness style thing Peace!

  • Wow, I'm looking at the poem in your description & I have to say, shit's deep bro.

    Great poem.

  • Nice work E.

  • Eboyd droppin deep poetry..nice

  • Word!!..

  • ohh this is that poem about america and such !! good work !! in fact spoken word fits to you erik more better then rapping

  • if you listen close you will notice i'm sort of doing both. it's a concept i came up with. the style of this track was done in a sort of spoken word/rap hybrid.

  • i see u got skillz 4 poetry, keep then coming!

    Peace my yt friend

  • tight

  • nice work e ,it sounded abit like you were one of those lunatics from the hospital when you started to speak louder

  • Sounds pretty experimental lol

    nice work!

  • the revolution is here!

    good ish, man

  • its got an old scholl KRS fell to it, I like it, great stuff

  • does it? that's good. i always try to give my shit an old school flavor.

  • That's fuckin awesome! The beat is uninteresting i would choose a fast beat but the lyrics R wicked 5 stars..

  • thanks!

  • wow e it came together well with the tune, i love it.

    wicked!!!5****

  • thanks!

  • lol thats cool stuff, i like the darkness of it its dope. you sound kind of like one of those black evangelical preachers. (which isn't a bad thing)

  • :) i responded to you on the site. thanks.

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