E....thats a spooky beat, I dont know if I should keep listening or cut it off.....It is close to bedtime....Nah man just playin but nice Im into the darkness style thing Peace!
if you listen close you will notice i'm sort of doing both. it's a concept i came up with. the style of this track was done in a sort of spoken word/rap hybrid.
Hey! Hey Hey! It's Jezebel...Mae Lynn...whatever the hell you want to call me...good work, B. I like it a lot.
WickedRelic 1 year ago
@WickedRelic thanks :D
eboyd32 1 year ago
Deep
feelin it fo real
have no further words man 5 stars
triggerthesoldier1 2 years ago
thanks man! i'm glad you checked it out! keeping this movement moving baby!
eboyd32 2 years ago
Dope poem E. How long did it take you to write this?
Bringbackhiphop 3 years ago
not long actually.
eboyd32 2 years ago
Until it grew beyond it's garden,
And stole into it's neighbor's soil,
And took it's place without a pardon
take out "And stole into it's neighbor's soil"
and Lord Jamar pretty much has that same bar
StrykahTheSoldier 3 years ago
E....thats a spooky beat, I dont know if I should keep listening or cut it off.....It is close to bedtime....Nah man just playin but nice Im into the darkness style thing Peace!
JiggaJ1979 3 years ago
Wow, I'm looking at the poem in your description & I have to say, shit's deep bro.
Great poem.
SnoopG79 3 years ago
Nice work E.
StanleyT123 3 years ago
Eboyd droppin deep poetry..nice
Melhex 3 years ago
Word!!..
AbbottSupreme 3 years ago
ohh this is that poem about america and such !! good work !! in fact spoken word fits to you erik more better then rapping
Menace3434 3 years ago
if you listen close you will notice i'm sort of doing both. it's a concept i came up with. the style of this track was done in a sort of spoken word/rap hybrid.
eboyd32 3 years ago
i see u got skillz 4 poetry, keep then coming!
Peace my yt friend
xreb2008 3 years ago
tight
laPennello 3 years ago
nice work e ,it sounded abit like you were one of those lunatics from the hospital when you started to speak louder
AceKat00o 3 years ago
Sounds pretty experimental lol
nice work!
Kibathakat 3 years ago
the revolution is here!
good ish, man
revolutionarywarfare 3 years ago
its got an old scholl KRS fell to it, I like it, great stuff
Troj27 3 years ago
does it? that's good. i always try to give my shit an old school flavor.
eboyd32 3 years ago
That's fuckin awesome! The beat is uninteresting i would choose a fast beat but the lyrics R wicked 5 stars..
HipHop4alivin 3 years ago
thanks!
eboyd32 3 years ago
wow e it came together well with the tune, i love it.
wicked!!!5****
ladyriddims 3 years ago
thanks!
eboyd32 3 years ago
lol thats cool stuff, i like the darkness of it its dope. you sound kind of like one of those black evangelical preachers. (which isn't a bad thing)
siwooot 3 years ago
:) i responded to you on the site. thanks.
eboyd32 3 years ago