I like the theme!:) some constructive criticism: when writing, i find it to sound much better if you end the phrase... properly, i guess? like in measures 2-3, where the violins have the set of "ending" eighth notes. On beat 1 of the next measure, end the violin's phrase with the D of the D major chord:) and... i can tell you dont play violin, correct?
I like the theme!:) some constructive criticism: when writing, i find it to sound much better if you end the phrase... properly, i guess? like in measures 2-3, where the violins have the set of "ending" eighth notes. On beat 1 of the next measure, end the violin's phrase with the D of the D major chord:) and... i can tell you dont play violin, correct?
SilenceTheQuiet 2 months ago