Fantastic effort....the solid colors creates a very moody ambience that is reminiscent of Wong Kar Wai films, the abstract narration makes perfect sense in the conclusion....intelligently written, nicely shot and edited. Best of luck in your future projects.
On my youtube channel i've just uploaded Part One of Six short film/ experimental film series from UK we're making.. would love to have some feedback we're new to this and are inspired from videos such as these :D good luck also with other videos you creat keep up the good work!! x
Good short. I'm also in the middle of shooting an experimental film and I just released the trailer, it's on my page. Any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks :)
Hi, really liked your film, i've just started making short films and uploading them myself, so any feedback greatly appreciated, thanks keep up the good work!!!!
This was very nice, but the makeup scene was kind of pointless. I also found the contrast between the random lady's eyes and "our" girl's mouth to be unclear... at first I thought it would cut to her mouth when she'd be spoken to... but I guess that isn't critical.. and I suppose I am late with my criticism...
omg i loved it!!! the ending was so great! the only thing i thought was that maybe when she was spreading around her makeup it could have looked like maybe in anguish instead of just dragging her hands across her face
I loved it... I think it was really good; also I loved the contrast of colours instead of having the ordinary low-key lighting, it created tension along with the low orchestral music (soungtrack)...
I really like this film. Shows well thought ideas into the story and great techniques used in editing. Maybe check out my experimental film on my profile? I live in Luton myself :)
thanks for your comment very much. i was thinking of making this as a love story, because this film give a impression of women's emptyness in there daily life, i mean, maybe everyone has there lonely moment in there life, for a day or two. guys, if you feel lonely after this seeing this short, then I am successed. thanks...Ting Zhang, Jiang Zhou who envlvoed in this film. cheers, sorry about the spelling...ENJOY!
That was a really nice idea, and was done very good. Darren you done a good job with the special effects and will be good to work with you again. keep up the good work mate.
That seems really well thought out i enjoyed watching this. Using the high contrast really makes the whole thing seem a lot more dream like. nice one.
Ill be making my first 5 min film soon for my film class project Xd
TheGanjaga 1 month ago
Wow!! That was awesome! Clear, concise and great use of technology. Do check out my experimental film on my channel pls :)
sChatterG 3 months ago
Fabulous Film, Great Concept and Professional Production. By the way, what Model Camera did you use?.
fuzwa 4 months ago in playlist More videos from guoshuaihuang
Interesting concept. Reminds me of Inception and its predecessor Ground Hogs Day.
Airsoftandmore 5 months ago
nyc wrk man...i wld really want you nd the others to watch my short...an experimental student film....do lemme knw....i wld luv to hear frm u
seduced10 5 months ago
Fantastic effort....the solid colors creates a very moody ambience that is reminiscent of Wong Kar Wai films, the abstract narration makes perfect sense in the conclusion....intelligently written, nicely shot and edited. Best of luck in your future projects.
satya1ray 6 months ago
very beautifull images! I enjoy the film :)
nilagirl 8 months ago
I've never been so confused about a video. In my life.
XxThomamesaFoxxX 8 months ago
what editing software did u use?
McRwJr 10 months ago
What a great film, thanks for posting it, I really enjoyed watching it, I hope you enjoy my video response.
JaeSparta 10 months ago
Watch a 5 mins experimental short film SHOCK :
nafeeAnam 10 months ago
great colours.. nice thing with the doors... that is how i would do it... we think similar...
biljkonen 11 months ago
Lovely! Great colors.
noSMOKINGfilms 1 year ago
On my youtube channel i've just uploaded Part One of Six short film/ experimental film series from UK we're making.. would love to have some feedback we're new to this and are inspired from videos such as these :D good luck also with other videos you creat keep up the good work!! x
LiquidProductions07 1 year ago
Beautiful
ivanriches 1 year ago
I like the part were she gets lost opening doors. LOL. Thats classic!
frijebai 1 year ago
very good!
fajnarubka 1 year ago
Great video.
deathproof82 1 year ago
this was Very good!. i will try to upload my first experimental. let me know what you think! (very soon. internet is funny...)
KYBniles 1 year ago
Good short. I'm also in the middle of shooting an experimental film and I just released the trailer, it's on my page. Any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks :)
DerangedWorks 1 year ago
good job
HiMyNamesLewis 1 year ago
thts really inspiring!!!
and nice lighting too :)
danie1y 1 year ago
wonderful color & synchronized composition.
MrShahadathossain 1 year ago
Did you ACTUALLY cross process film or is that a digital filter/effect?
ParkerChristopher 1 year ago
Hi, really liked your film, i've just started making short films and uploading them myself, so any feedback greatly appreciated, thanks keep up the good work!!!!
josswhite1981 1 year ago
If you are willing to take the time and watch my experimental film, i'm still new at this, so much feedback is needed. Thanks you [=
jesserielee 1 year ago
good one
hsibo2 1 year ago
observen cortos experimentales en mi canal
saludos!!!
POZOWILMER 1 year ago
My brain is excited
shatterthebonds 1 year ago
nice but, why did she put makeup on?
meowjellymoon 1 year ago
This was very nice, but the makeup scene was kind of pointless. I also found the contrast between the random lady's eyes and "our" girl's mouth to be unclear... at first I thought it would cut to her mouth when she'd be spoken to... but I guess that isn't critical.. and I suppose I am late with my criticism...
Ooidal 2 years ago
Interesting. Keep it up Guoshiai
harish583 2 years ago
omg i loved it!!! the ending was so great! the only thing i thought was that maybe when she was spreading around her makeup it could have looked like maybe in anguish instead of just dragging her hands across her face
sunkenspoonstudios 2 years ago
First off, I liked it. just a little tone down on the saturation + contrast.
it would look class
slapdashFPS 2 years ago 2
nice short check out mines
gravymeatballs 2 years ago
I loved it... I think it was really good; also I loved the contrast of colours instead of having the ordinary low-key lighting, it created tension along with the low orchestral music (soungtrack)...
Well done! It was really intresting.
ydotstufz 2 years ago
was really good! loved the unexpected ending :)
elliemajelly99 2 years ago
Fantastic
calishields 2 years ago
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really enjoyed it.
willarcherfilmo 2 years ago
Very cool!
kiazov 2 years ago
Wow! Very Experimental! Well done
KarimKhanFilms 2 years ago
I really like this film. Shows well thought ideas into the story and great techniques used in editing. Maybe check out my experimental film on my profile? I live in Luton myself :)
CradleofValentine666 2 years ago
LOVED IT!!
nevesaj 2 years ago
Clever.
mattjones07 2 years ago
Its really good work.... Keep it up...
0lim0 2 years ago
I like this work.
cantekingungor 2 years ago
very cool and cheesy idea. sexy girl, nice colours.
frankblame 2 years ago
That was not experimental...but still interesting
EnjoiFilmsProduction 2 years ago
how was it not Experimental?
ManamoPrime 2 years ago
Nice. good job man!!
BenDeRaes 2 years ago
nice lighting and colors.
kicoyfaced91 2 years ago
woah, trippy :)
bananian 2 years ago
its really good :) the only thing i would do diferent is the video transitions on some ponts. (1:22 - 1:35)............ but its really interesting :)
sasavugrinec 2 years ago
i love it
mpared 3 years ago
I like the use of colors.
Good job!
spazstonernme 3 years ago
I really like how u guys use colours as a connector in the whole short.
You can low down the door slammin' a little bit. The rest is absolutely great.
luchalmon 3 years ago
very good job on the film
slackerL7 3 years ago
very interesting movie, good work, I'm absolutely impressed!!! 5 stars
AMON240379 3 years ago
Powerful...filled with stress!
Greetings from Barcelona!
jorge1688 3 years ago
very good!! nice idea and i really loved the way u use color....cheers
dans86 3 years ago
Such simple concept yet brilliant done !! Hats Off,Bravo! Very inspiring film,superb effects ....this is what creativity is all about..
viraldoshi1 3 years ago
i absolutely loved this film. Didnt expect the ending although it was soo obvious.
well done
theed24 3 years ago
i'm doing a film just like this for film at school
dfene6 3 years ago 2
How'd u get the Eerie lighting?
DelicateKiller13 3 years ago
creative :]]
kristenROCKET 3 years ago
interesting! i like the way it was edited!
natetron1985 3 years ago
I found it very interesting!. I'm studying graphic design at university and we're doing a tp based on 5 videos, and one of them is yours
eli24000 3 years ago
interesting.. i really enjoyed it. great job
kyleispoop 3 years ago
dfdfdf
edrisne 4 years ago
very lovely!! I love the concept. Nice use of colors, camera views and the music. : )
electricdaisylady 4 years ago
We all really appreciated it.Nice work!
What did you use to edit it?Colors were just great.
SerialExperimentsPro 4 years ago
very creative, thank you for sharing
craiger5 4 years ago
good work.
EGI313 4 years ago
Me gusta!
I like it! :)
Mysterious
miguetelo 4 years ago
thanks for your comment very much. i was thinking of making this as a love story, because this film give a impression of women's emptyness in there daily life, i mean, maybe everyone has there lonely moment in there life, for a day or two. guys, if you feel lonely after this seeing this short, then I am successed. thanks...Ting Zhang, Jiang Zhou who envlvoed in this film. cheers, sorry about the spelling...ENJOY!
guoshuaihuang 4 years ago
great idea
lack of film/narrative language(too much words and talking), I think you could exploit the idea a lot. but it is experimental right?
good job
very cool
dimitriprokofych 4 years ago
that was pretty cool. very impressive.
Sean2046 4 years ago
That was a really nice idea, and was done very good. Darren you done a good job with the special effects and will be good to work with you again. keep up the good work mate.
solidus470 4 years ago
I really liked it, dreamlike and surreal as I love.
excellent cinematography!
pessoIeraserhead 4 years ago
that was brilliant!!
stainboy136 4 years ago
i liked it
blainerd 4 years ago
Very, very good. Am impressed by the entire film!!
Chalga83 4 years ago
nicely done. effects and lighting were awesome.
itsactuallyanupright 4 years ago
That seems really well thought out i enjoyed watching this. Using the high contrast really makes the whole thing seem a lot more dream like. nice one.
Adampang 4 years ago