ROCKY-Eye of the Machinima

[Alcycast]

I liked your introduction!!! It was cool that you found the appropriate character and atmosphere to tell your story.

The music is cool and the ending was really funny

[Francis13Films]

I think you built up the story with a nice twist. Some criticize the length. I thought it was becoming too long until I saw your change in story punch and the swing was welcome and funny. I think at this time all sense of length came back into place. everything that was not necessarily funny before, became funny because of being part of the construction of your plot. I am not a fan of Rocky but I am of your Machinema.

[redryder7]

Thought it was a little too long... but the end fight was pretty funny

[astronautjeff]

the dialogue and end fight were hilarious!

[FlapScallion]

I think it had some nice humor, it picked up towards the end. If I were to make a change, it would be to either build a little more story line or speed up the pace of the training clips to keep it flowing.

[650monkeys]

nice boxing movements...I like the resolution and the sound... i think the clip is a little too long... since there is no story line...after the first minute it keeps repeating (movements). letters on the intro need some contrast with the background.

[trhpolo]

I actually think it is a bit long. I had trouble paying attention after the first 2 mins or so. The sound is just kinda flat. I do think that it as well done though. You obviously know how to use the software.

[yeimytorres]

It is very nice, I think is too short.

[kbgogeta]

Really cool. It felt kinda short to me, but it was still really cool. I liked your choice of music.

[onecooldan]

You had so much fun making this video and it shows.

[Phomasta]

Nice! Loved the dance-off at the end.

[titoinaburrito]

i like how he totally misses those speed bags. and mr. t's nipples

[songowl]

while this mostly translates as silliness and mockery, some moments are dramatic - he says "i'm the champ - my time is now". warning to viewers: earworm soundtrack!