i discovered you earlier tonight while looking up LoZ fan stuffs, listened to Save You From the Dark, and have been listening to your music for the last hour or two. I wish that i could have all of it on my MP3 player. I love all of your music and pray for prosperity for you in the future. I would love to listen to you at a live show in the U.S. some day. good luck =)
wow your amazing I hope you get recognized and get paid to make music....your lyrics are great and with your guitar skills its all sounds wonderful 6/5
I don't usually comment on videos but.... The lyrics to this song are amazing. The song is well played and sung but the words are deep. I also love the fact that a profound song was birthed out of fumbling with GPS.
You Are Simply Amazing. I Cannot Get Enough of Your Voice ... Can I Make A Request? "More Than Words" by: Extreme. I Think You'd Make My Heart Skip A Beat With That One. Much Love.
Hi JC, I really love the whole idea of finding your way home in this song. For me, the chorus is the best part..there's a dreamy quality there that makes this a splendid piece.
Rob
ps..I am dedicating tonight to catching up on your music..;)
just stop it Rob XD you're 2 kind to me, man. just a lot of inspiration these past few months. Been writing songs quicker than usual..it's nice when you don't have time to write...
finding a place in anothers heart.....simply finding love..and unity......searching for the togetherness we seek....that is part of our being.... bonding us together
See, this is what music is supposed to do-tell an intriguing story. JC, you have done that many times over, I'm proud to say. If ever you need a drummer, just ask, & I'll be more than happy to hook you up.
Where? Ebay? Damn! I should check Ebay more often. Because with voice like that, instead of typing comment, I would have been singing and challenging John Mayer!
What movie did you watch when you got home? I read the backround info and I dunno what movie it was. I was thinking LotR but that doesnt seem to make sense.
that is just brilliant, absolute genius....for soem reason reminded me of David Gray or even The Boss.....brilliant vocals and great lyrics, excellent song!
jc havent chatted with you for a while. this song rocks! glad youre still at it bro. voice is great and i think i like your music bc you play a lot of the same chord progressions i do when i play acoustic. all the best homie!
I agree with those who think you should lower your voice an octave or so.You have some very nice tones down there,when you strain to go a bit higher. it's lost. Lyrics & melody are very good.You have some real talent,keep em coming!
I love all your songs. The only critizism (omg i suck at spelling) I have is that your pronounciation makes it hard to hear the song. It really takes away from how beautiful the lyrics are. If you could practice your pronounciation while singing, you'd be amazing IMO.
After listening to this a second time, I recommend lowering the key a whole step, a whole step and 1/2, or 2 whole steps. Your high notes sound strained and possibly screamed out a tad bit. Pick a lower key that still sounds full but your voice needs to sound sweet for this song, and straining out your high notes won't help. Sorry for being so critical. Don't take it personally, my teachers were much worse with me :P.
Why was I rated down then? I'm giving him a bloody chance to be heard on a station with a consistent listener base. What's wrong with my proposition? He sent out a blanket message including me and I've decided: "What the hell, he wants some attention, I'll give him his money's worth."
Probably because the people who listen to that station are the other half who aren't tone deaf. Buddy, chill. I understand he's not great now. But if you kill his or anyone's hopes before they are able to reach their climax they'll never get the chance they wanted. So just chill.
Hello again, if you dont remember me ill try and relog your mind. We had a discussion about Bob Dylan and you was a very calm and kind person, there fore i will suscribe :).
Well, off the top of my head, Whitney Houston, Celine Dion, Jennifer Hudson, Fantasia, Andrea Bocelli -- hell, even many of those Boy Band singers from years ago.
Having a passion for music is fine. However, having that passion and proclaiming to be a singer -- with no talent to back it up -- is simply ridiculous.
Well, weather he has "talent" or not, he wrote the music and lyircs unlike any of those people you list. He loves to play any song he knows by heart and just films himself doing it, and many other than you love what he does.
If you can sing and write songs better, then go on and upload it and i might change my mind.
Oh great, now I've got an english teacher on my hands
Listen faggot, I don't care if I hit the wrong key and spell anything wrong or don't keep things straight. All I'm trying to say is MUSIC DOESN"T REQUIRE TALENT Say if some random singer had someone come up to him/her and say "you should give up music!" Would that person stop doing what they love to do? No.They sing music because they love what they love
I'll rest my case now since you are being a bitch trying to plan dull comebacks on me
I think he just needs to practice some more and get a way to better listen to himself singing. If anything you're the one that's tone-deaf and you probably think you can sing better, which you most likely can't.
If someone me they had a four octave range -- a professional range, mind you -- and they could reach into the bass was well as counter tenor register, I would almost guess this person had some vocal training.
To wit: let's just say, vocally, this kid has nothing on me. :D
Fine lol, you sing better. Still, saying you have vocal training means not that much. I mean, I'm sure you've seen American Idol at some since you love doing Simon Cowell impersonations. There are many auditions that go on with people saying they've been extensively trained and they sound like sh*t.
you guys created quite a discussion here=) with your talent, you should start uploading and sharing your gift with the world....and btw...I'm not a singer..far from it.
jc , everybody need time to perform , take time is a good think , you do not have to worry because your are gifted , once you take off some emotion your voice will change and there you will be a mystery , always keep faith , in a couple of years you can be the next ed ved , keep working , good luck to you because you really deserve , i listen many song from you and always make me feel good , be a mystery ,
this artist is doing a lot more then dreaming! look at his success here on YT. It is far more then his voice...look at his lyrics ,listen to his music, there is passion & meaning. plus who can resist that cute Kaiser. ;-)
Agreed. Let's hope he takes lessons. MANY musicians/singers remain unnoticed even with training. It's all a matter of where, how, and how well he presents himself.
I don't like being critical but that's the main purpose of commenting. You started off the song a bit pitchy and throughout the song there were some pitchy moments, especially in your high range. Try to sing your lyrics clearer. I understand that it's your style of singing and it's a great style as you have a lovely voice but the message of your song is lost if the lyrics can't be heard. The only other thing is for the guitar to have been louder to better accompany your voice. Great song.
ahha some girl came to my school and she was like 15, but she an album and stuff, but she had professionals write her songs for her... your way better;p
This is such a beautiful song. the lyrics are so meaningful, i see them as explaing life through the loves and losses you face but when you find the one person you can truly lean one they will help to finally find your way home. A place where you are at peace and happy. I hope that is what you were going for. Another amazing song.
Im not sure what movie it is, or what my interpretation of it is, but I do know that you are a brilliant and wikkid dude jc van luyn!!!!!!!! =D I love it, its favourited!
m8 remember to leave your details
sum1 may want to sign you =)
your epic this inspired my last song, but its no where near as good
CrazyDrummerProduct 1 year ago
crule crule crule good =)
NLTVification 1 year ago
gr8 voice and gr8 song...nice
halliwells3 1 year ago
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Judges Save! OMG just saw it at lastnightstvshows (.) com
luckyjournal211 1 year ago
very pretty
TheeSinabunz 1 year ago
i discovered you earlier tonight while looking up LoZ fan stuffs, listened to Save You From the Dark, and have been listening to your music for the last hour or two. I wish that i could have all of it on my MP3 player. I love all of your music and pray for prosperity for you in the future. I would love to listen to you at a live show in the U.S. some day. good luck =)
xXbronco24Xx 1 year ago
wow your amazing I hope you get recognized and get paid to make music....your lyrics are great and with your guitar skills its all sounds wonderful 6/5
exzyle3 1 year ago
wow, this is great!
TheMegaLiza 2 years ago
I don't usually comment on videos but.... The lyrics to this song are amazing. The song is well played and sung but the words are deep. I also love the fact that a profound song was birthed out of fumbling with GPS.
keithaszilagyi 2 years ago
song happens=) and thank you for giving me a listen...=)
jcvanluyn 2 years ago
Great song
wmarvin1 2 years ago
i must cry wehn i hear this song
you´re a great singer
Lillyputundhoppel 2 years ago
You Are Simply Amazing. I Cannot Get Enough of Your Voice ... Can I Make A Request? "More Than Words" by: Extreme. I Think You'd Make My Heart Skip A Beat With That One. Much Love.
EmmyJane83 2 years ago
You are really good man, just with a guitar & your voice with no synths or nothing!!
68generation 2 years ago
=)..
jcvanluyn 2 years ago
Beautiful !! Talented songwriter too !!! Gina
ladiesrock83 2 years ago
thank you Gina=)
jcvanluyn 2 years ago
lots of passion, dude.
brandonisthebomb23 2 years ago
Hi JC, I really love the whole idea of finding your way home in this song. For me, the chorus is the best part..there's a dreamy quality there that makes this a splendid piece.
Rob
ps..I am dedicating tonight to catching up on your music..;)
robby63 2 years ago
just stop it Rob XD you're 2 kind to me, man. just a lot of inspiration these past few months. Been writing songs quicker than usual..it's nice when you don't have time to write...
jcvanluyn 2 years ago
you my friend need a record label
blindeagle93 2 years ago
Beautiful Composition. Your indeed a man of talent.
Terixofevermore 2 years ago
I love the sound of acoustic X3 (both unaltered vocal and acoustic guitar)
VashTheWaterbender 2 years ago
You get really my style, but you can faking nice play guitar. Nice babe. Greetz geilepeer1 (i can't good speak englis) ;-)
geilepeer1 2 years ago
If you ask me music requires alot of talent and love. Makes me want to play guitar again. DARN LITTLE BROTHERS BREAKING THINGS!
Vincent883 2 years ago
Nice!
PivotDoodler 2 years ago
ur good. nice song.
BoroBall40 2 years ago
my little boy has grown up, im so proud of you
12spongie 2 years ago
Mesmerizing and Beautiful...I especially love your original songs.
ellecar69 2 years ago
Love the songs! Great work!
remacno 2 years ago
wow! i love it!
hannahbananasrox 2 years ago
sweet!!
ljcjdb123 2 years ago
are u looking to make ur home in someone's life and move in same direction............really do like these lyrics
best wishes
mary
terigower 2 years ago
Are you talking about two different cultures there? "terigower"
justheretoreply 2 years ago
no ..not at all......just joining together....
finding a place in anothers heart.....simply finding love..and unity......searching for the togetherness we seek....that is part of our being.... bonding us together
terigower 2 years ago
hope this answers your question justheretoreply
are you talking about two different culturesthere?
terigower 2 years ago
hey!
I really like this song:D
good job. keep writing
mptbsrock 2 years ago 2
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Don't stop reading this just because u just now realized this is a forward :)
1.put your hand in your mouth
2. Make a wish
3.Close your hand (fist)
4. Hold your hand at heart for 5 seconds
5. Send this to 3 more videos
6. Tommorrow will be the best day ever
it actually worked
Money- you will find a wad of $200 in cash
Love- Your crush or lover will kiss you or ask you out
TopClubMixesToday 2 years ago
riiichtig schöne stimme =)
barfuss93 2 years ago
Hey, very moving!! :) Great!! :)
atens 2 years ago
MISS YOU JC~!!
lighter2010 2 years ago
I'm thinking "Lord of the Rings". Please enlighten us.
No offense intended, but I find this song a bit boring... you do a good job though!
In my opinion it needs more variety and interest. I'm sure the same can be said about my performances so far though. I'm still gonna give it 5 stars.
Fretfeeler 2 years ago
Looking at the title reminded me of 'Golden Slumbers' from the Beatles :) I used to have it for a lullaby.
samdude14 2 years ago
where do you live?
if you do shows, i would kill to see you live! That song was original and beautiful!
you desever every compliment you get, and you should get more!
keep writing your original stuff ~ i like it better than your covers. you put more soul into it.
xjellexbx422 2 years ago 4
... love you ...
niatarshe 2 years ago
good song, but, erm, at times, u tend to go a lil off pitch, hehehhe, though i do not know the song.........
XfaCTor94 2 years ago
See, this is what music is supposed to do-tell an intriguing story. JC, you have done that many times over, I'm proud to say. If ever you need a drummer, just ask, & I'll be more than happy to hook you up.
Keep writing, friend.
-metalnut1120
metalnut1120 2 years ago
Not your best, but still really good! That's a great sign!!
nakoah1995 2 years ago
My critique rate....... 5/5 STARS!!!!
daveyray10 2 years ago
very good job my cute little person.I love to hear you sing.Have a blessed day.I love your hat.
love and hugs,
Mary
mamy101 2 years ago
always a pleasure of you stopping by with your kind and generous words, Mary=) tc, JC
jcvanluyn 2 years ago
nice songs, but what's up with the hat?
touchs 2 years ago
amazing song. love it
downer67 2 years ago
^__^
Killu610 2 years ago
Did you just throw a Christian song at us.
numanuma20 2 years ago
I think he just did.
Artsy7890 2 years ago
superb
keithatangel 2 years ago
Great signing and song man.
J1Goro 2 years ago
gn yeah reverse
J1Goro 2 years ago
Great song, JC , is it on iTunes?
hax0rboi 2 years ago
super mach weiter so!!
gibts das lied auch irgendwo zum kaufen oder laden?
RhyminSimon1989 2 years ago
I like this song, well done !
8TheArsenal8 2 years ago
Dude, Your awesome with that guitar.
GAJJ815 2 years ago
wonderful!!, that was a definate tear jerker!! keep up the amazing pieces!!
;)
DarkAngelNear 2 years ago
Wow *.* This must be the best Song i´ve heard in ages! Awesome!
Magnacore88 2 years ago 2
nice man keep up the good work
thigthunk 2 years ago
Beautiful job. ( : <3
BrookeAmandaxo 2 years ago
goooooooooooooooooooooooooood
STARLINKI 2 years ago
dude i love your singing
its awesome
oh and nice guitar XP
but where did you get your voice from?
blackatron666 2 years ago
he bought it. I saw it on sale.
PhantomKode 2 years ago 3
lol
BrookeAmandaxo 2 years ago
I actually won it on ebay :)
jcvanluyn 2 years ago
Where? Ebay? Damn! I should check Ebay more often. Because with voice like that, instead of typing comment, I would have been singing and challenging John Mayer!
rienpoet 2 years ago
lol
PhantomKode 2 years ago
Love ur voice. <3 ♥
PinkBabY6 2 years ago
What movie did you watch when you got home? I read the backround info and I dunno what movie it was. I was thinking LotR but that doesnt seem to make sense.
hiblinist916 2 years ago
nope..not LOTR XD
jcvanluyn 2 years ago
I'm guessing by the magic wand hint it was....Harry Potter? What was it?
hiblinist916 2 years ago
XD..definitely not HP..
jcvanluyn 2 years ago
Gladiator...?
hiblinist916 2 years ago
keep up the good work man
pearllover45 2 years ago
Have I told you that I like your voice? Nice lyric too. Ever thought of having a band to accompany you singing?
rienpoet 2 years ago
*wishes*
jcvanluyn 2 years ago
EPIC
crazyzach5 2 years ago
Dude JC! Awesometastic!!! Love the originals man. Wish I can write songs too. =D
xcreativexsoulx 2 years ago
*waves his magic wand*...
jcvanluyn 2 years ago
Nice Dude... I Think it would sound great with a ukelele...
iorul 2 years ago
You`re brillant, man!
Kinda remind me of Dave Mathews on this one.
Keep it up!
Chatman666 2 years ago
Very NICE!
it should be put to a Video and aired on TV! :)
AWOLFNAMEMARTI 2 years ago
Youve truly been blessed by our Lord. Use it for good works brother.
spiralnapkin 2 years ago 3
You are very talented, my friend.
-Andy
CrumbyPics 2 years ago 2
this is very good! keep up the good work man! =)
purpledinosaurus 2 years ago 3
i think the song has promise, are you gonna send it to any record companies?
thatlonelygirl19 2 years ago 3
you have a wonderful voice! i love your videos! c:
twb213 2 years ago
digging that you were able to give me your time=)
jcvanluyn 2 years ago
I listened to you r Zelda song and then your john mayer cover and i think your voice is very unique! more people should sing like you do
oboeramen 2 years ago
hehe..thanks! don't know if I want to hear others sing like me..cause I'm nowhere near of being a singer XD
jcvanluyn 2 years ago
that is just brilliant, absolute genius....for soem reason reminded me of David Gray or even The Boss.....brilliant vocals and great lyrics, excellent song!
Nice work!
LeprachaunXL 2 years ago
*hi5s*
jcvanluyn 2 years ago
Glad to see you!
allmusic85 2 years ago
Really nice song!
Foxfiend 2 years ago
jc havent chatted with you for a while. this song rocks! glad youre still at it bro. voice is great and i think i like your music bc you play a lot of the same chord progressions i do when i play acoustic. all the best homie!
Zeeshan73 2 years ago
thanks my friend=)
jcvanluyn 2 years ago
relly good ^^
aluriyasha 2 years ago
Enjoyed Da Video.Great Lyrics.Love it.Keep on keepin' on.
lps45s8tracks 2 years ago
so glad you had the time=)
jcvanluyn 2 years ago
You should try out for American Idol dude!
Bearsmell 2 years ago
it's a beautiful song
i love it =D
good job ;-)
stev021 2 years ago
thank you stev021=)
jcvanluyn 2 years ago
Nice job.
kalesy12 2 years ago
I have a half an octave range. Pretty good, I know.
wallmunky503 2 years ago
Nice job!!
lhiryo 2 years ago
You'll go far, man!
m4r10p 2 years ago
I could see this song being very popular. Good work JC.
kennyfan77 2 years ago
Lacks so much polish.
Your voice really needs training and if you're going to record this, I recommend playing the guitar first, then singing.
Ptrrrrrrrr 2 years ago
I agree with those who think you should lower your voice an octave or so.You have some very nice tones down there,when you strain to go a bit higher. it's lost. Lyrics & melody are very good.You have some real talent,keep em coming!
riyadhnurse 2 years ago
I love all your songs. The only critizism (omg i suck at spelling) I have is that your pronounciation makes it hard to hear the song. It really takes away from how beautiful the lyrics are. If you could practice your pronounciation while singing, you'd be amazing IMO.
dheejhaay 2 years ago
After listening to this a second time, I recommend lowering the key a whole step, a whole step and 1/2, or 2 whole steps. Your high notes sound strained and possibly screamed out a tad bit. Pick a lower key that still sounds full but your voice needs to sound sweet for this song, and straining out your high notes won't help. Sorry for being so critical. Don't take it personally, my teachers were much worse with me :P.
Vwoott 2 years ago
Whichever key is more comfortable for you to sing in but you NEED to lower it either way.
Vwoott 2 years ago 2
I'm going to put this on an internet radio station to be rated and we'll see what people really think. If you're good or not.
Makron5 2 years ago
If you know America like I do, about half of em are tone deaf. JC Van Luyn has pitchy spots but he'll get better. You just need to have patience.
Vwoott 2 years ago 2
Why was I rated down then? I'm giving him a bloody chance to be heard on a station with a consistent listener base. What's wrong with my proposition? He sent out a blanket message including me and I've decided: "What the hell, he wants some attention, I'll give him his money's worth."
Makron5 2 years ago
Probably because the people who listen to that station are the other half who aren't tone deaf. Buddy, chill. I understand he's not great now. But if you kill his or anyone's hopes before they are able to reach their climax they'll never get the chance they wanted. So just chill.
Vwoott 2 years ago
Hello again, if you dont remember me ill try and relog your mind. We had a discussion about Bob Dylan and you was a very calm and kind person, there fore i will suscribe :).
Very nice voice too.
AwwYouFucker 2 years ago 2
Very nice.
jamesgaspard 2 years ago
Sense of direction :) beautiful path and a most beautiful voice...thank you
ccinri 2 years ago
Sounds like it needs tuning.
Makron5 2 years ago
I agree, but still a nice voice. Not even prodigies start off completely pitch-perfect.
Vwoott 2 years ago
yeah!!!
thats good man..=)
zainul1992 2 years ago
His Voice Is Pretty cool =)
He has his own Style! =)
okei94 2 years ago
Ohhhhh...that's what you call it.
Tuxster3 2 years ago
If I may do my best Simon Cowell impersonation: you are TONE DEAF! you can't sing! You have NO talent! You need to give up music!!
Personally, I think you're in love with the IDEA of being a singer-songwriter. Leave the singing to singers and maybe you can still write song lyrics.
Tuxster3 2 years ago
who sings better then?
and jonas brothers dont count...
everyonepoops23 2 years ago
Well, off the top of my head, Whitney Houston, Celine Dion, Jennifer Hudson, Fantasia, Andrea Bocelli -- hell, even many of those Boy Band singers from years ago.
Having a passion for music is fine. However, having that passion and proclaiming to be a singer -- with no talent to back it up -- is simply ridiculous.
Yes, I know. The truth truly does hurt sometimes.
Tuxster3 2 years ago
Well, weather he has "talent" or not, he wrote the music and lyircs unlike any of those people you list. He loves to play any song he knows by heart and just films himself doing it, and many other than you love what he does.
If you can sing and write songs better, then go on and upload it and i might change my mind.
everyonepoops23 2 years ago
First, the word is "whether" -- not "weather".
Second, you asked me who SINGS better -- SINGS -- not who writes better music or lyrics. You need to learn to keep your arguments straight.
The burden is not on me to prove to you that I'm talented. As a fan of this particular guy, the burden is on YOU to prove he's any good.
I say, you haven't meant this burden.
You loose your case. :P
Tuxster3 2 years ago
Oh great, now I've got an english teacher on my hands
Listen faggot, I don't care if I hit the wrong key and spell anything wrong or don't keep things straight. All I'm trying to say is MUSIC DOESN"T REQUIRE TALENT Say if some random singer had someone come up to him/her and say "you should give up music!" Would that person stop doing what they love to do? No.They sing music because they love what they love
I'll rest my case now since you are being a bitch trying to plan dull comebacks on me
everyonepoops23 2 years ago
That's MISS FAGGOT to you! >:P
Hmmm...music doesn't require talent. Wow!
You're certainly the mental giant!
NOT!
Tuxster3 2 years ago
I think he just needs to practice some more and get a way to better listen to himself singing. If anything you're the one that's tone-deaf and you probably think you can sing better, which you most likely can't.
Vwoott 2 years ago
Actually, I have a four octave range.
I can cover everything from a rich bass to a nice, full countertenor.
Tuxster3 2 years ago
i'm sure you do. That doesn't mean you can sing better, or rather, more in-tune than him.
Vwoott 2 years ago
Hmmm. I see you lack common sense.
If someone me they had a four octave range -- a professional range, mind you -- and they could reach into the bass was well as counter tenor register, I would almost guess this person had some vocal training.
To wit: let's just say, vocally, this kid has nothing on me. :D
Tuxster3 2 years ago
Fine lol, you sing better. Still, saying you have vocal training means not that much. I mean, I'm sure you've seen American Idol at some since you love doing Simon Cowell impersonations. There are many auditions that go on with people saying they've been extensively trained and they sound like sh*t.
Vwoott 2 years ago
Now you're changing the topic, dear heart.
Give it up. You're not going to win this one. :P
Tuxster3 2 years ago
you guys created quite a discussion here=) with your talent, you should start uploading and sharing your gift with the world....and btw...I'm not a singer..far from it.
jcvanluyn 2 years ago
Thanks!
I enjoy creating these kinds of discussions. =)
Tuxster3 2 years ago
jc , everybody need time to perform , take time is a good think , you do not have to worry because your are gifted , once you take off some emotion your voice will change and there you will be a mystery , always keep faith , in a couple of years you can be the next ed ved , keep working , good luck to you because you really deserve , i listen many song from you and always make me feel good , be a mystery ,
tonyskunky 2 years ago
Dear heart? Really? lol
Fine. But I still think you should give the kid some time to grow before you condemn his young voice.
Vwoott 2 years ago
If by "young voice" you mean inexperienced and untrained, it's going to take more than TIME to get his voice growing. It's going to take lessons!
And, even this is no guarantee of success for him. But he can dream, can't he?
Tuxster3 2 years ago
this artist is doing a lot more then dreaming! look at his success here on YT. It is far more then his voice...look at his lyrics ,listen to his music, there is passion & meaning. plus who can resist that cute Kaiser. ;-)
caramelturtles 2 years ago
Kaiser is the best :P
welshchick1993 2 years ago
You're counting YouTube as a sign of "success"?!
SCARY!
Tuxster3 2 years ago
Agreed. Let's hope he takes lessons. MANY musicians/singers remain unnoticed even with training. It's all a matter of where, how, and how well he presents himself.
Vwoott 2 years ago
Awesome.
scottklaw 2 years ago
vvv - A tad bit harsh =)
Well my main purpose of commenting is to say that i love your song lol =D.
And the guitars the rite loudness lol coz we dont want it to loud coz then we wont be able to here you singin =)
=D
angelstarfish 2 years ago
Critique is main purpose of commenting. lol.
The guitar should only be a bit louder, not so much as to cover your voice but just so each chord can be heard clearly and fully.
Vwoott 2 years ago
I don't like being critical but that's the main purpose of commenting. You started off the song a bit pitchy and throughout the song there were some pitchy moments, especially in your high range. Try to sing your lyrics clearer. I understand that it's your style of singing and it's a great style as you have a lovely voice but the message of your song is lost if the lyrics can't be heard. The only other thing is for the guitar to have been louder to better accompany your voice. Great song.
Vwoott 2 years ago
great, i love it! and i love the story of how you wrote it. inspiration comes in weird packages! love it xox
ShuffleBass 2 years ago 2
Keep being beautiful! That's awesome!
feoinfunroe 2 years ago
ahha some girl came to my school and she was like 15, but she an album and stuff, but she had professionals write her songs for her... your way better;p
boomer1212145 2 years ago
This is such a beautiful song. the lyrics are so meaningful, i see them as explaing life through the loves and losses you face but when you find the one person you can truly lean one they will help to finally find your way home. A place where you are at peace and happy. I hope that is what you were going for. Another amazing song.
Zarwa242 2 years ago
If you guys had a CD out I would buy it just to support your career. Thanks for your music.
sergeantRC 2 years ago
Keep doing this great job.
The word needs artistis like you.
Listen my original song Gonna Reach.
Bye.
SUPERMEGADUARTE 2 years ago
Great voice
Qrocknrollfreak13 2 years ago
wow your really good. i wish i could right songs like you
xXAngelofTheSkyXx 2 years ago
your a great song writer! we love you
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xobiffahxo 2 years ago
this is just fantastic. 100* thanx uk paul for sharing. love kelly
kellydoll14 2 years ago
ahhh JC another GREAT one! as will all your work.... excellent meaningful lyrics~
caramelturtles 2 years ago
I LOVE THIS! IS IT ON ITUNES? I'd buy
roxygallikey 2 years ago
nice one
cheers
cedibus 2 years ago
really nice
porkypiney 2 years ago
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Maailinn 2 years ago
inspirational man!
watchdog2007 2 years ago
one of your best originals, i think :) except for you make my world stop, which is just amazing.
inmylalaworld 2 years ago
beautiful job! you are an amazing song writer! no joke!
browniesdog02 2 years ago
I love it <3
asiiseyma 2 years ago
Great, JC! As usual!
StaroChichanin 2 years ago 2
thank you for writing this song its so inspiring especially the verse grow in faith and live by grace
beautifulmizpah 2 years ago
jst awesome
thegreatherox 2 years ago
Beautiful JC!
dangledog 2 years ago
you're always amazing.
incredible song, JC
<3
orangerulz 2 years ago
and that Bible verse at the end of the song, it's my favourite.
Your a wonderful man jc!
SubwayVandal 2 years ago
great job jc!
Im not sure what movie it is, or what my interpretation of it is, but I do know that you are a brilliant and wikkid dude jc van luyn!!!!!!!! =D I love it, its favourited!
SubwayVandal 2 years ago