A really depressing poem

[ThaEmoPrincessXX]

It's brick by boring brick- paramore

[TheEliShow2009]

@ThaEmoPrincessXX no its not. its from mayday parade

[kinzzerrr]

what song is this??

[Beckyplayful]

Do u think this is a real story?

[KatieTheGreatTegan7]

I wrote one but I didn't name it, please don't judge; i know im not that good. /:

I sit alone in the dark and cold, thinking about how this pain gets old. Will my sorrow ever stop? I crouch even lower as my tears begin to drop.

[superstar1722]

@KatieTheGreatTegan7 That is actually really good :) I love it

[broddog100]

Feel it man

[A2ndhaze567]

the poem is truly remarkable but how come people that write poems in your fashion always over use pain and emphasize on it. It does ruin the extreme horrors of life. In my opinion living life fooled into thinking your accepted and being isolated watching everyone be happy is true sadness. Thumbs up to the equalibrium

[TheEliShow2009]

@A2ndhaze567 thankks =] i wrote it about 4 years ago and found it around last year. i still write poems going to put some more of them up on here. (just my REALLY good ones) once i have some time

[pyroman71121]

This is more a story than a poem, I feel you could write a good novel though

[tjnbnvideos]

I soo love thiss! :)

[NightmareCries]

heres a poem i wrote its called downwards

hurt lost pain alone numb in the heart cold to the bone blind by hatred hurt by love cry scream shout out to the world im blind im stupid lifes not fair whats the point why am i here my voice the whisper inside my head tell me scream at me to end all my pain please turn into a video i love it much real name kanya coffman!!

[TheEliShow2009]

@NightmareCries yes i will turn this into a vid =3. just write me all of that in a message im thinking of putting all of my poems on some literacy website just not sure which ones i can just put there. i dnt want n e one taking credit for em specially since ima turn them into a song

[NightmareCries]

@TheEliShow2009 dont laugh i dont know how to send u a message could u just write it down from here

[NightmareCries]

@NightmareCries btw want to be friends :) i like your stuff its really good:) when you write you dont judge

[khelo33]

LMFAO!!!

This poem is okay.... but.... I cracked up when I saw the beginning at 0:18

"By: Unknowed" XD

It's unknown. Not unknowed.

Spelling fail!

[lakers32x]

omg!!!!...THT WAS LIKE....ALMOST MY LIFE RIGHT THERE...IT WAS A GOOD VIDEO..BUT REALLY DEPRESSING :|

[xxpoetrlamb]

me and the person that wrote are a awfull lot alike so hope noone minds ohh and you can turn my poem into a video if you want its called forever

forever forever in a pit of dispair

forever forever its not fair

forever forever no one cares

forever forever i will be their  end =)

[jimboindahouse]

wow that was like.. covered everything apart from cutting.. i only do it lightly because my prents get mad if they see but.. thanks alot for those words, i have been holding in depression without cutting 4 a long_ass_time now i swear, it did help but man, it stings in the shower and i love swimming D= yea u can imagine hah but i go to gym now and im kinda losing the desire to cut but still this poem read my soul! are you psychic? haha thanks i give 5 stars, incredibly thought out, i love it xxx

[gfanmaster]

@jimboindahouse Same here, about the cutting thing, I did it deep the first time I did it but then my parents saw it and so they now take me to a counselor once a month, I now have to do it lightly

[chelseafarino]

OMFG this is so depressing... i mean i tried to commit suicide by taking drugs and im still trying to kill myself but everytime i do something like this my mum always interrups and gets me to hospital!!!!! SO i guess this person in the peom ad i have something in common!! xx

[HellsGate9999]

@chelseafarino Jesus christ dude if you really wanted to kill yourself do you really think anyone could stop you?? there is a billion quick ways to die and you can't think of one?? what im trying to say here is you don't really want to kill your self cause if you did you would be dead and clearly your not...... you might have thought about it but thinking about it and wanting to do it are 2 differant things. Talk to a shrink or something and stop broadcasting your cowerdice online..

[TheEliShow2009]

@HellsGate9999 um i did not write this poem.

[HellsGate9999]

@TheEliShow2009 sorry dude i was not talking to you i was actually talking to Chelseafarino hence the @Chelseafarino before the message.....  sorry for the misunderstanding though.

[TheEliShow2009]

@HellsGate9999 oh its all good =P

[nanabone1234567]

well that poem wa sgood i am depresed to