i am crazy jasmine, then pulls the trigger/ fugitive ego gets bigger/ heart beat goes faster as she turns the music louder/ car zig zaggin while blazing william's wonder/ start shootin out at random driver providing seldom thunder/ sees a happy couple driving in Roadster/ stops her wit gun as gesture/ guy says kill me if my wife could have future/ jasmine kills both and runs over/ the bodies and semi truck crashed into her/ life over peace
gets out on parol/ first thing was moving to the capital/ bought a pistol/ went over to mom in law house garage lookin for murder tool/ sees old grandma drooling at her jewel/ few bullets drops and blood start to leak/ kicks the cold body once/ cut her finger wit razer blade/ leaving multiple cuts on the side/ engraves her name on the forhead for bonus, leaves the body in driveway/ gets in the car and hop on the freeway/ pulled over going 90/ Po sees bloods and shaky hands on crazy lady/
judge tells her to get used to windoex and windows/ gets dressed in orange uniforms/ found guilty in 1st degree burns her left eye, right thigh shivering regrettin going on murder spree/ wish she used glove lik oj simson to set free/ juss more daydreams about tree/ can i get some X n shrooms before i use brooms during break times out of small rooms/ cant think straight lyk her brain chewing throns/
couldnt take the sentence soe became a psyco clamin she sees cisco on unicorns/
smith dead in lake, with dirty draid by wife who had business in stake, 20yrs marrige got fucked over by washington and benjamin/ now she bein questioned in pentagon since media questions wat happens to killer jasmin/ tries to tear it to find the way out but way to deep in the middle/ tries to faint and wobble/ coworker kicks in as a snitch killin her last bubble/ seals the deal, she butta get popped in the ass by lesbos in the jaill cells that looks like manly debos/ who loves married widows
Thats pretty cool i liked the texture of the synths in the background. But i think to make it a little more emotional or dramatic you should have played with sudden volume changes concerning the percussion just throw in some wicked snares...then again i might not be knowing wtf im sayin either way its freakin dope, check out my tracks?
FockingNice Bro!
Dennnyerr 5 months ago
this is 2 deadly yo realtalk keep up the goodwork
tubefuk08 1 year ago
check out the beats i made on my channel!
vfloydmusik 1 year ago
i am crazy jasmine, then pulls the trigger/ fugitive ego gets bigger/ heart beat goes faster as she turns the music louder/ car zig zaggin while blazing william's wonder/ start shootin out at random driver providing seldom thunder/ sees a happy couple driving in Roadster/ stops her wit gun as gesture/ guy says kill me if my wife could have future/ jasmine kills both and runs over/ the bodies and semi truck crashed into her/ life over peace
crystalized1234 2 years ago
gets out on parol/ first thing was moving to the capital/ bought a pistol/ went over to mom in law house garage lookin for murder tool/ sees old grandma drooling at her jewel/ few bullets drops and blood start to leak/ kicks the cold body once/ cut her finger wit razer blade/ leaving multiple cuts on the side/ engraves her name on the forhead for bonus, leaves the body in driveway/ gets in the car and hop on the freeway/ pulled over going 90/ Po sees bloods and shaky hands on crazy lady/
crystalized1234 2 years ago
judge tells her to get used to windoex and windows/ gets dressed in orange uniforms/ found guilty in 1st degree burns her left eye, right thigh shivering regrettin going on murder spree/ wish she used glove lik oj simson to set free/ juss more daydreams about tree/ can i get some X n shrooms before i use brooms during break times out of small rooms/ cant think straight lyk her brain chewing throns/
couldnt take the sentence soe became a psyco clamin she sees cisco on unicorns/
crystalized1234 2 years ago
smith dead in lake, with dirty draid by wife who had business in stake, 20yrs marrige got fucked over by washington and benjamin/ now she bein questioned in pentagon since media questions wat happens to killer jasmin/ tries to tear it to find the way out but way to deep in the middle/ tries to faint and wobble/ coworker kicks in as a snitch killin her last bubble/ seals the deal, she butta get popped in the ass by lesbos in the jaill cells that looks like manly debos/ who loves married widows
crystalized1234 2 years ago
nic moc
lubosbartoss 2 years ago
anyway 4*
immageeflyin 2 years ago
your drums need to be louder but the violins kinda nice
EllJayOfficial 2 years ago
also the claps, dont they?
i think so..it sounds nice but the piano an the strings not always sound nice together
but nice job aswell xD
immageeflyin 2 years ago
sweet flow. Good job.
thadawerk 3 years ago 2
hahah very nice job man i like it. check out my beats to:P
achme 3 years ago
Thats pretty cool i liked the texture of the synths in the background. But i think to make it a little more emotional or dramatic you should have played with sudden volume changes concerning the percussion just throw in some wicked snares...then again i might not be knowing wtf im sayin either way its freakin dope, check out my tracks?
JessONEofQU 3 years ago
very nice :) check mine out too pls ^^
streetxtreem 3 years ago
dude this is good come check me out man and comment
mcknight9127 3 years ago
Dude pretty sick! very entertaining!
893097011 3 years ago
i liked it alot. I think you should check out what i did with fl studio 8 vocals
TheHeathenz 3 years ago
Nice! I like the melody on it!
If you ever find time for listenin & commenting my beats, I'd appreciate it much!
VRMuzik 3 years ago
ok thx
Zyco95 3 years ago
nice song man i wish that one day i'll be like you :)
Zyco95 3 years ago
nothing is impossible ;-)
but don't copy anybody, just find your own style, then you really can be proud and succesful. :-)
00LaVidaLoca00 3 years ago
jetz fehlt eig nur noch ne richtige hook und das wär aus meiner sincht einer der besten beats von dir ;)
gefällt mir =)
socke195 3 years ago
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JizzoQ 3 years ago
hmm irgendwie wurd des net so wie ichs wollte, aufjedenfall GUTE ARBEIT! ;)
JizzoQ 3 years ago
xD
dankeschön ;-)
00LaVidaLoca00 3 years ago
nice
gabbeat 3 years ago