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  • FockingNice Bro!

  • this is 2 deadly yo realtalk keep up the goodwork

  • check out the beats i made on my channel!

  • i am crazy jasmine, then pulls the trigger/ fugitive ego gets bigger/ heart beat goes faster as she turns the music louder/ car zig zaggin while blazing william's wonder/ start shootin out at random driver providing seldom thunder/ sees a happy couple driving in Roadster/ stops her wit gun as gesture/ guy says kill me if my wife could have future/ jasmine kills both and runs over/ the bodies and semi truck crashed into her/ life over peace

  • gets out on parol/ first thing was moving to the capital/ bought a pistol/ went over to mom in law house garage lookin for murder tool/ sees old grandma drooling at her jewel/ few bullets drops and blood start to leak/ kicks the cold body once/ cut her finger wit razer blade/ leaving multiple cuts on the side/ engraves her name on the forhead for bonus, leaves the body in driveway/ gets in the car and hop on the freeway/ pulled over going 90/ Po sees bloods and shaky hands on crazy lady/

  • judge tells her to get used to windoex and windows/ gets dressed in orange uniforms/ found guilty in 1st degree burns her left eye, right thigh shivering regrettin going on murder spree/ wish she used glove lik oj simson to set free/ juss more daydreams about tree/ can i get some X n shrooms before i use brooms during break times out of small rooms/ cant think straight lyk her brain chewing throns/

    couldnt take the sentence soe became a psyco clamin she sees cisco on unicorns/

  • smith dead in lake, with dirty draid by wife who had business in stake, 20yrs marrige got fucked over by washington and benjamin/ now she bein questioned in pentagon since media questions wat happens to killer jasmin/ tries to tear it to find the way out but way to deep in the middle/ tries to faint and wobble/ coworker kicks in as a snitch killin her last bubble/ seals the deal, she butta get popped in the ass by lesbos in the jaill cells that looks like manly debos/ who loves married widows

  • nic moc

  • anyway 4*

  • your drums need to be louder but the violins kinda nice

  • also the claps, dont they?

    i think so..it sounds nice but the piano an the strings not always sound nice together

    but nice job aswell xD

  • sweet flow. Good job.

  • hahah very nice job man i like it. check out my beats to:P

  • Thats pretty cool i liked the texture of the synths in the background. But i think to make it a little more emotional or dramatic you should have played with sudden volume changes concerning the percussion just throw in some wicked snares...then again i might not be knowing wtf im sayin either way its freakin dope, check out my tracks?

  • very nice :) check mine out too pls ^^

  • dude this is good come check me out man and comment

  • Dude pretty sick! very entertaining!

  • i liked it alot. I think you should check out what i did with fl studio 8 vocals

  • Nice! I like the melody on it!

    If you ever find time for listenin & commenting my beats, I'd appreciate it much!

  • ok thx

  • nice song man i wish that one day i'll be like you :)

  • nothing is impossible ;-)

    but don't copy anybody, just find your own style, then you really can be proud and succesful. :-)

  • jetz fehlt eig nur noch ne richtige hook und das wär aus meiner sincht einer der besten beats von dir ;)

    gefällt mir =)

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  • hmm irgendwie wurd des net so wie ichs wollte, aufjedenfall GUTE ARBEIT! ;)

  • xD

    dankeschön ;-)

  • nice

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