Scribbles on my Heart // Part 3

[WorldOFJonasx]

I forgot I already read this part!! its awesome anyways!

[Jemiserieswriter]

At 3:20, i feel like i can relate to every single one of the sterotypes. :)

[WorldOFJonasx]

1.Demi's

2. ILOVEDITALL.

3.Your a great writer!

4. I love how its written!

[lovedrunkx33]

happy holidays! xD this was a seriously awesome chapter, I like Demi's POV better :)

[TaylorLautnerfan45]

aaww i love the scribbles!!!

[mickey141480]

i love it

[Maiqu20]

Loved it!!

1. I like both of them

2. Liked all of it

3. Nothing really

4. You're an amazing writer..

[jubba98]

Im confusedd. I tht Demi was the mysterry girrl. Lol, so who's the mystery girl?

[viabelle1928]

woops. i forgot to add Happy Holidays :)

[viabelle1928]

1. I like both P.O.V.'s :)

2. Fave: when joe says "Well damn. Who would've ever thought Nick was a real man?" I laughed really hard xD

Least: Didn't really have one, but i was dissapointed when Demi hadn't written anything back :(

3.Nope everythings great!

4. I <3 it. i love all the descriptive words like when Joe was describing Demi :)

[NazForReal]

Imma comment again even if it already hit the comments you asked for. ;o

1. Both. :D

2. Favorite: When Joseph was humming.

Least: None.

3. Not really. :o

4. I absolutely adore it.

Hope you are having Happy Holidays. :D

[Jemi4thewin]

1. Both!

2. Nick & Joe's talk was my favorite.

3. Nope!

4. Like It? No i hate it. :| Joking! I Loved it!!!

I actually read some of those new words in my english class today! :D not today i mean the day u posted it :) lol

[xobubblesrawrox]

Happy Holidays!

It was ah-maazing!

[music4eva01]

amazing awesum! it was so awesum; i love nick haha

happy holidays!

[trippskeee]

1. I like them both to be honest

2. There wasn't one, I liked it all.

3. Nahhh

4. I really do. I kinda feel like I'm reading an actual book not watching a video on youtube.

Sorry my criticism isn't very constructive. D;

[xabcarolina]

how cute :)

[lostlovetwilight]

where oh where is demi... hah

[kaiTlynxo2]

i liked it, but i missed having both povs

[loverss99]

Amazing <3 can't wait for the next one :d

i like the way you switch to pov.. :D

[iMileySelenaDemi]

i love this!

happy holidays!

[buildabear96]

Your a LIAR :O you said that this episode is not great, well by the looks of it.. it's beyond AMAZING! haha it's worth the wait

can't wait for the next one :)

[mzzjudylee]

LOL. I cannot believe you just called me a liar, alyssa :O haha.

[jixian001]

more!!!i love it!!!how sweet..

[heyitsjennaa]

1. i like both (:

2. i loved all of it but i thought the part where joe pushed nick was pretty funny

3. nope

4. yes. i LOVE your writing it is amazing

[JustLivinLife132]

1. personally i love both of theirs :)

2. i i loved the part where joe was describing what kind of hair and eyes she had. loved al teh details!

3. nope everything is perfect! :)

4. I notcied and it is amazing! i truely love it this way! your great at it :)

[youloveme89]

1. both are fine.

2. the part with nick and miley

3. idts

4. it's really good :)

Happy Holidays

[JonasGomezSwift284]

1. I like demi's the best. But it's nice to see Joe's too.

2. The ending was clever. :)

3. Not that I can think of... So that's a good thing. Haha

4. Yes, I love it. I noticed it when I was reading, so great job! :)

Happy Holidays! :D

[openfieldsXeps]

wow , you have like 100 series I cant keep up..

[mzzjudylee]

only seven, hah xD

[j0eejonassx7]

soooo gooooodddd<3333

this is definitely one of fav series on YT!

[LibbyJonas]

1.Both;;

2.everything?[fave]

3.cant think of anything to put here xD

4.&Yea,i love it ;D

&&HappyHolidays :]]

[nileyfan4life94]

1. i like joess but it would be cool to see demis once in a while

2. the niley "bulge" part :P hilarious

3. noooope

4. its really goood. it makes you really grow and expand as a writer and makes it more entertaining and life-like

[mileycyrusrules5988]

1.Demi

2.loved it all

3.Nope

4.yes

[imperfectAviia]

i LOVED IT!!!!

[DoYouHeartWaffles]

lol i just have to point out Judy... that nick's picture looks like his hailing hitler xD

1. Demi's :)

2. D: i loved it all!

3. hmm maybe stick on like one week? then move on cause you fasten it up xD

4.COURSE :) im in love with anything you do!

[disneylover1312000]

forgot...

happy holidays!! :)

did u decorate your house / put up your tree?! :) XD

[prettyamazing25]

oh and i forgot to mention happy holiday. (:

[prettyamazing25]

1. both (:

2. F:the little niley moment ...L:when it ended

3. nothing at all. (:

4. Love it.! (:

So im pretty sure im obsessed with this series.! i love it (:

[ddlandselgomezfan]

1. i like joes POV

2. 'niley' was my favorite part it was funny :D'

and the last line i didnt understand :/

3. nopee

4. i love it!

[wowskis556]

ooo and i forgot to add Happy Holidays. Like this episode was amazingggg

[ThatJewelGirl]

Heyy. (: I was wondering what program do you use? And how do you make an image you get off google fit the whole video screen? I'm still a 'noobie' so I'm not so sure yet.

[mzzjudylee]

sony vegas

[missthanglee]

1. I like Joe's.

2. I loved the part when Nick saw Miley. Least was when...wait there wasn't one.

3. It's perfect.

&I like it without music and it's perfect elngth.

4. I loveit.

[cantreadme27]

i loved it!!

[puppylove325697]

1 I cant choose i mean girl pov - so well sweet and honest but then guy pov - HILARIOUS!!!

2. "looks like someones happy" oh my god i burst out laughing!!!!!!!!!!!!

3. ehhhhhhhhh i dunno nothin probably!! sorry =( i know that i'm no help!

4. i actually did notice that! i think its awesome i mean seriously if you wanted to have a career in writing maturing it now was definitely a good idea!

(awesome ep by the way XD) no but i really loved it!!!!!!! =]

oh and happy early christmas!!!

[TribeSpirit]

Ahhhh! Amazing! But no Demi? Or Jemi? =( Oh, well. It was definitely worth the wait :D

1. Joe's. Usually it's in a girl's POV but reading from a boy's is a great change. And honestly more entertaining.

2. Favorite: Hmm, I really can't choose xD But I think it's when Joe went to the desk & didn't find a new scribble. Oh & the niley part ;) Least: Nadda.

3. Yeah. I love it! In fact, I'm jealous cause I can't write as good as you ;)

[3megabits03]

1. joe's!!

2. when he pushed nick into miley

3. nope! it's really good as is!!!

4. yes! it really explains things more! you get to see more of the characters!!

and happy holidays!!

=]

[drunkoldmoo]

1. You should switch it around a little.

2. F: Joe Pushing Nick. L:Nick meeting Miley.

3. Hmm, a shirtless Nick would be nice. :)

4. Yeah, it's real good.

Happy Holidays! :D

[tonyygirl]

1.Both

2. Niley part

3Niley

4. i like it

HAppy Holidays :)

[emilwee123]

1. Both or if i had to pick one demi

2.niley part

3.nothing its perfect

4.yeah i like it

happy holidays! : )

[randypandy8896]

1. both

2. niley/whenit ended

3. nope!

4. loved it!!!

[NickJonasGurl99]

1:Demi's :D

2:when he showed his manhood/when it ended :(

3:nopeee (:

4:yeah,it's really shown you have grown into an AMAZING writer (:

[xxxTakeABreathxxx]

1. I like both :)

2. I don't think I had a least favorite part :P My fave part was when Joe saw that there was no scribble on the desk.

3. nope, it was amazing!

4. I loved it! It was very good :D

Amazing episode!!

Happy Holidays!! :D

[ste1729]

awesome! :D

[hexenkind]

1. I like both :)

2. Nick colliding with Miley :D It was hilarious! And I don't think that there was a part in this won't that I didn't like ;)

3. Don't think so! It was awesome!

4. Loved it :) I'm trying it as well at the moment!

Happy Holidays ;)

xx

[wowskis556]

1. Joes

2. Most def. the one w/ nick and miley Least: when nick was makin fun of joe 4 likin demi

3. Add more characters/ Niley!! :]

4. omggg ITS AMAZING

[BTWILUJB]

1: Joe's

2: Joe, Nick & Miley

3: Make It With Clips.. you know video's stuff like that.. or with Pictures and video's

4: yeah.. I like it

[catfall]

1.Maybe you can switch each episode?Idk its really hard to decide

2. When nick bumped into miley

3. Niley :) xD

4. Yes I have,I really like it :)

[teammercury9546]

Aweswome

[aititeal92]

1/i like both of them

2/idk really, can't choose

3/NO, nothing i see at least

4/I like your writting! your new one is great thought

thanks, and happy holidays to you too, i can't wait to be in holidays though

[kuhadiza]

1. both

2. niley part

3. it's perfect!

4. yes, i love it!

[musicxrocks7]

1. I really like both :)

2. FAV. part: when Nick fell down and Miley picked him up

Least fav. part: when there was no scribbles :(

3. add more characters?

4. YES I love your writing!!! Its so descriptive and beautiful!! I love that even the little things like the floor, you describe it with so much description. I mean instead of saying he fell on the floor, you said he fell on the COLD, HARD, Floor.

I also loved the description on the eyes <3

[GenieJonas1]

ah-maz-inggg!!!!!!!!!

[ElisaMelody]

1. Both xD

2. I cant choose :P

3. Nope.

4.Yes Judy its perfect!

next pleaseeeeeeeeee xD

[Theresaaugen]

Yay! :)

[SarahAlwaysKnows10]

1. Joe's

2. the part with joe, nick and miley. was my fav ;)

3. nope. its perfect

4. i mean i liked the old one but this one is better ;D

loved the episode <3

Happy Holidays

[AlwaysANileyFan]

Oh i skipped number 3 :S

3. Add more scriblings ! Like a scribling where Demi would tease Joe! haha.

[AlwaysANileyFan]

1. Umm i cant currently decide xD

2.Favorite; When Nick was blushing like crazy! & when Joe was like "Looks like someone's happy." LOL Joe why would you look there xD Least ; when Joe was saying Demi wasnt rushing through his mind. That's just mean :O Hahaha!

4. Yes i did notice. & I liked it :D

Happy Holidaaays ! :D

[bubblebear321]

and HAPPY HOLDIDAYS!

[bubblebear321]

1. Joes

2. Fav: "Looks like someone is very happy." Lol! Why you looking there Joe xD LEAST: I dont have one!

3. Maybe more characters?

4. I love it!

[ashadaily1996]

that wa awesome..bte HAPPY HOLIDAYS!!!!!!!!

[acirestar]

aww that was really cute!!! <3 i loved it!

1. both perspectives

2. I loved all of it, maybe not too much niley.

3. nothing left to change

4. yes i loved it, makes the story more romantic & beautiful!

please make the next one & if you can post it earlier please. :D

[daniellelauren26]

awesome! i loved it :) wait till he find out is "maiden" is actually Demi :)

1. both i like seeing the different perspectives :)

2.favorite part was when nick bumped into miley :P haha and the least favorite...honestly i didnt have a least favorite part :)

3.you can't change a thing everything was great!

4. the descriptiveness was amazing when joe was descriing demi i was like DAYUUUM this gurl can descript haha it was awesome!

[rmandmj]

1)maybee both? I love when something happens and you have both POV's on the subject!

2)My favorite has to be when Joe said. 'well damn. who would have ever thought that nick was a real man!(:

and my least favorite part was obviously when it ended!

3)nope! it's perfect the way it is. but next time maybe you should add something on the desk(;

4)and not that anything was wrong with your old writing. but this one is great!(:

good job! can't wait for the next post!

thanksagain, rmandmj!

[UntouchableSS27]

This is my guilty pleasure, keep them coming!

[taylorxlautnerr]

demi's pov

[ilubjessemc]

HAHA great

! : )

[0JemiForever0]

1.) Demi's (:

2.) Fave: When Nick asked about Demi, making Joe stop in his tracks! That was cute. Least fave: When Nick blushed all over. LOL! idk why.

3.) No. Everything's fine the way it is :D

4.) I did notice! And I really do like it, actually. LOL

[SecondhandFire]

1)both :)

2when Joe stopped mid-step when nick mentioned Demi :]

3. not having demi in it at all :'( i might just cry!. haha jkjk. i loved it!

4. yes and i love it:)

next one soon! Please?!? :)

[soisthislove]

1. BOTH haha i think it would be interesting to read from both perspectives :)

2. i liked all of it.. :) maybe when there wasn't anything on the desk.. but that's more like sad..

3. I dun think so

4. YES, i liked it.. it's pretty good. good that you're trying new ways.. not that it wasn't good before.. but it's good to experience :D

HAPPY HOLIDAYS

[carlatXD]

happy hlolidays

[nycchickkk]

btw happy holidays i reached the character limit on my previous comment XD

[Catsrockm]

amazinggggg

[nycchickkk]

OMG you dont know how happy i was when i saw this posted up on my home page lol...

1. both just enhances everything about the story cuz you get to hear what both are thinking.

2. nope although nick and him "being a man" was hilarious.

3.hmm..OH I KNOW!!!! i think it would be cool if you showed what one of the convos was like, like as a flashback maybe since joe didn't get any response back on the desk???

4. i love seeing people change things up and improve i admire you taking a new approach:)

[xxxImaginePeacexxx]

1. DEFINATELY JOE's POV is my favorite

2. Favorite: At the end when he entered the classroom (not that i like that he didn't get a note, but just I think it is a good addition to the plot)

Least: Uhm....I don't have a least favorite part. I LOVE it all. I just have particular parts that i LOVE more than others. hehe

3. Absolutely nothing

and yes i have noticed the maturity in your writing now. it is fantastic keep it up. you are amazing. :D

[xxocutie123]

ok one word it has 3 syllables.... ah-maz-ing!!!!!!!!!!!! and HAPPY HOLIDAYS =)

[Scalloz]

1. i like both :)

2. when joe said "mr.macho" hahaha i laughed xD and nick's boner and least...well i don't i guess.

3. nope.

4. so far yeahh :)

[Debbierockz67]

1) hmmmm i'd say demi

2) i liked it all and i had no least fave

3) nope its perfect

4) yeah i do actually <33

[nickjaybaby]

1Both (: makes the story more interesting that we know what the other is thinking but they dont

2. all favorite (:

3. nothing i can think of :D

4. i love it being more descrpitive

happy holidays

[NickJonaslover424x3]

Poooooooor Joe :(

hahahaa Nick, Nick, Nick.

L O V E T H I S !

[nickjaybaby]

amazing, i love it (:

[mizzfionaa]

HAPPY HOLIDAYS :DD !

i believe the title has a typo. o;

[Lilziggy1196]

AHMAZING. :) really descriptive.

1; either. both are amazinggg. :)

2; "Where art thou, my maiden in disguise?"

3; hmmm. nothing i can think of. :D

[NazForReal]

1. Can you make one part Joe, one part Demi?

Or whichever is easier for you.

2. Favorite: When Nick's little friend got excited.

Least: When there was nothing on the desk.

3. Nope. :D

Happy holidays, for you too.

[hugsandkisses2jonas]

First one to comment!Yippy!

anyway I loved this part and I'm really liking your new approach to writing.

Its amazing.

"Happy Hoildays!"