1. keep the word bubbles, they are much easier to read
2. take a more natural transition approach. For example, instead of saying directly "Gohan tells Chi Chi about the Assassins," you can have gohan say "Well..", fade out and fade in, then have Chi Chi say "So there's a group of Assassins on earth?" and Gohan say "Yes."--That's the typical anime approach to imply it.
3. Keep up the good work, this is way better than GT's story or fight choreography :P
i like the vids, but just for entertainment perpusous could you add another character and then name him gogetio. (some people get mixed up wit gogeta and gogetio but its gogetio) please and he could be a goku gt kid please??!! he could have needed help from your charachters to be an adult and destroy bad guys are something, by the way keep the vids up love them!
Did you kinda mixed this episode with dbz bt3, Buu's Fury, Leagcy of Goku 2, Heros United 2 (Heros United 2 is from byond.com)? But awesome job making this video episode. =)
this was so asome but me computer was lagging like shit so i ocudnt watch it so good i coud watch it better with me laptop darn me brother took it but still realy asome cominbination of legacy and tnekaichi or you even gonna do a combination with raging blast?
Dude 0.0 New style is good! I think all the speech cutscenes should be done with LoG, u can use tenkaichi for the fights. o.o Allows for more people in one shot instead of switching back and forth between who's talking.
i really like the legacy of goku sences and then you put the tenkaichi fights really good but how did you do that with the legacy of goku sences please tell me
All in all, I rate it 3 out of 5 stars. A sterling effort on your part, and in my honest opinion, the GBA sprites could be quite useful when properly applied, such as indoor scenes, or scenes that require more than two people in a single shot. Good to see you back in the saddle. I eagerly await more.
i have an idea for your seires like lets say gohan an trunks are about to fight 17 mabye instead of using the switch thing you can use them both at the same time by using dragon ball tenkichi tag team 2 aganist 1
This ep was good for a comeback, but I think it was still a little dissapointing...I like the whole new fanfic editing idea, but I think you could of used it more better! idk how, but it just seemed a little boring...The fight seen was very short and I hope I they get longer..lol, but you just got back so I'm goin to say that you did a pretty good job! Hope to see more from you in the future!
@dragonballfanD: Yea honestly it lost the cinematic feel it used to have. What I was thinking is to only use those Legacy of Goku sprites for places that I can't access in Tenkaichi, like Gohans house, Trunks house maybe other planets but overall I want to try and use Tenkaichi more than Legacy of Goku.
It's fine with me only thing I might of had is when they travel you could use T3 althought I'm not sure if that would work but I would like to see how it matched up with the new style. All in all I like it for me it's a green light to continue.
And the plot thickens, Well i have this feeling Ryu going to pull a switchie and that Gohan may get his arse handed to him for awhile. The LOG thing worked awesome (still waiting for the pokeball to start teh battle XDD) a little thing i noticed you seem to go (as loose as possible) but by the book dbz, i mean the first saga It seemed the saiyans were important foes, then frieza, and now the assassin force which has Androids in it, not saying that isnt good, but its just somethin i notice
@spheal80: Yea, I kinda did use the DBZ plot as a layout for my own. See what most people don't understand is Dragonball A.S is basically a what if story and that what if is what would of happened if Goku didn't get sent to Earth.
@Blscc4 ah i see, i get it now i didnt think about the what if part i just thought it was just a fanfic now i know XD is the teenage goten thing going to happen after this saga/arc or wil that be later?
@spheal80: I haven't decided but I wanna get Gohan out of the picture somehow before Goten takes over. I've got a good idea for that too. One that doesn't involve killing him off.
@Blscc4 ah i see (damn wanted that fool to die before mystic XD) but quick question, if you get goten to be a main, what character model do you use, goku early and just not have him gain ssj, or how does that play out o.o?
I love the new cutscene style. i lol'd at the chi-chi parts XD. You should totally keep it and i didn't mind all the talking. cnt wait for episode 31!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is Awesome!! I liked it!! but also you could learn how to make sprite animations thats a pretty good way to make ur own series to with diff backrounds and sprites and other things. It may take a little longer tho
Not bad. As far as a cinema feel, it might not cut it. However it is refreshing, original, and interesting. I enjoyed it, and i'm looking forward to seeing how it will look with more fight scenes. Very nice style for telling a story. I was entertained =D
Don't take this the wrong way but i was kinda dissappointed with this episode You had a good idea but it was poorly presented the fight scenes were't really much of hit and hit back but i kinda like the name Xavier for a bad guy
LOL ''I wasn't asking you you fat piece of pink shit.''
GoldFist090 1 month ago
uhh isn't this majin buu's revenge or so called legacy of goku 3?
poptropicadude3 2 months ago in playlist More videos from Blscc4
@poptropicadude3 Buu's Fury.
GoldFist090 1 month ago
no
TheRobertPorter 3 months ago
uh oh i know whats happening the 8th bad guy i think is ... ERICKA (PAN)
poptropicadude3 3 months ago
Suggestions if you're still making these:
1. keep the word bubbles, they are much easier to read
2. take a more natural transition approach. For example, instead of saying directly "Gohan tells Chi Chi about the Assassins," you can have gohan say "Well..", fade out and fade in, then have Chi Chi say "So there's a group of Assassins on earth?" and Gohan say "Yes."--That's the typical anime approach to imply it.
3. Keep up the good work, this is way better than GT's story or fight choreography :P
Dmanbradley 3 months ago in playlist More videos from Blscc4
You know what I noticed about Piccolo he seemed more like like you couldnt keep him still and loud. Now hes as wise as Nail was.
Dbzisawesomme 4 months ago
i like more dragon ball z bt3
amairannie1 5 months ago
so many type errors in this
MrDBZMan1 5 months ago
i like the other way better if they are all like this then i give up i will not watch any more
happy241999 6 months ago
do not kepp this steal dumass!!!!!
angelshadow65 6 months ago
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friezavsbardock1 6 months ago
chi chi looks like a man lol well in japenese here name does mean father
earthygoku 7 months ago
Wtf is this... Keep the old one with the Openning and the epicness... This is kind of crap...
EpicZetaGundam 7 months ago
i like u to do bt3 better so no more this style plz ty
01230Gamerzone 7 months ago 2
7:31 (yup thats vegeta)
vegeta: please dont insult me the only reason im here is to destroy you for my own amusment nothing more
(thats a great line)
TheSuperbigben10 8 months ago
I like the old style
falongrey4 10 months ago
old style=WAY better
DFFfanalltheway 10 months ago
i like your old style better
BurnEarthEagle 11 months ago
to be honest your new syle is much better
BurnEarthEagle 11 months ago
this ones boring
iloveshadow1000 11 months ago
No:Ericka Yes:pan
VegetaAndGoku1 11 months ago
HER NAME IS PAN NOT ERICKA STUPID
MrDBZMan1 11 months ago
@MrDBZMan1 and @vegetaandgoku
SHUT THE HELL UP BITCHES IT"S A DAMN FANFIC HE CAN MAKE UP NAMES IF HE WANTS!!!!!!
dbzfan953 10 months ago
How do u get everyone in Legacy of Goku like Pan,Teen gohan and all of them if they are not in the game and then place them anywhere?
PowerFlasher21 11 months ago
I say change it.
67Dragonball 1 year ago
whats the theme @ 7:25
kevinisruler 1 year ago
this show kicks ass
DBZFAN88100 1 year ago
TAKE OUT THE CUSSING But leave atleast 1 in there
sonikthehero 1 year ago
I like this style of video, if you didn't stick with it, you definitely should!!!
greenboy07 1 year ago
i like this new way tenkiechi battles and buus fury style for normal days sweet
goku4365 1 year ago
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goku4365 1 year ago
i like the vids, but just for entertainment perpusous could you add another character and then name him gogetio. (some people get mixed up wit gogeta and gogetio but its gogetio) please and he could be a goku gt kid please??!! he could have needed help from your charachters to be an adult and destroy bad guys are something, by the way keep the vids up love them!
kent7122 1 year ago
thats so gay change it back
321Stephen321 1 year ago
If your looking for a dragonball online account let me know as soon as possible
chamillionairekid 1 year ago
can i say somethin i thought they didnt know it was called the assassin force
ColtonRoberts3 1 year ago
lol at 1:08 mitch says : "we came here to caputure ericka!" WTF BTW
haloelite33 1 year ago
A mix up video from different games.
AznShad0w3r 1 year ago
Did you kinda mixed this episode with dbz bt3, Buu's Fury, Leagcy of Goku 2, Heros United 2 (Heros United 2 is from byond.com)? But awesome job making this video episode. =)
AznShad0w3r 1 year ago
Sprite Vegeta is so CUTE!!! XD
Brolytheultimate8 1 year ago
when does goten become a super sayian
LethalPlayers 1 year ago
dude ths fckin rocks could u make one outta rGINGBLAST
BarerKingMark 1 year ago
i hvae the same game awsome
x22NIGHTWOLF22x 1 year ago
Did Kakarot and Chichi settle down at last?
Zakkkkuu 1 year ago
One word, EEEEEEEEEPPPPPPPPIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICCCCCCCCCCCCCCC
Bromaster30 1 year ago
dude what did you use on this episode what game is this?
MrBardock123 1 year ago
THANK THANK THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR POSTING THIS OMG!!! your the best cause this fanfic is awesome!!!
Bebolife12345 1 year ago
wait is ericka nr 2 ?
preduttt 1 year ago
yes ur back
parit1211 1 year ago
"so shaddap" lmao classic
owenboy60 1 year ago
YES episode 30!
sithkilla217 1 year ago
uh i dont want any prombles but i like how it use 2 b
SuperJester15 1 year ago
@SuperJester15 but it also gud cuz u see cgi nd bulma soo since ur an exprience person at makin fanfic u already noe wen 2 place them but good job
SuperJester15 1 year ago
if u have to u should use a mixture of all dbz games like when ur inside trunks house use goku legacy then swich 2 another game
psnfail 1 year ago
go back to the style in the first eps but with out the charictor boxes
TheReviewer58 1 year ago
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1m7mod 1 year ago
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1m7mod 1 year ago
yo must be kiding me ....=(
MrKotaro100 1 year ago
this was so asome but me computer was lagging like shit so i ocudnt watch it so good i coud watch it better with me laptop darn me brother took it but still realy asome cominbination of legacy and tnekaichi or you even gonna do a combination with raging blast?
Djumaro 1 year ago
@Djumaro: Possibly when I get used to the controls.
Blscc4 1 year ago
so, wheres the opening? XD cool video i like the combination of legacy of goku and bt3, but you need to use more bt3
vegettoSSJ3ROCKSS 1 year ago
Dude 0.0 New style is good! I think all the speech cutscenes should be done with LoG, u can use tenkaichi for the fights. o.o Allows for more people in one shot instead of switching back and forth between who's talking.
Dhazard1989 1 year ago
nice to see your back ive missed dragonball AS
you modded buus fury didnt you if so it looks pretty good
warriorofdark 1 year ago
change it back no ovinsess
zhayun286 1 year ago
I think it's more interesting like this w/ the Legacy of Goku Scenes but I think you should use more of Tenkaichi too.
gangsteruchiha 1 year ago
i thought with tenkaichi the speaking wasnt that intresting so nice job
jaedawg11 1 year ago
whens the next episode i love this fanfic
DarkSayian91 1 year ago
nah, keep ur old style :)
j2daworld 1 year ago
I really enjoyed dez episode i lyke da new vibe its givin off im just glad 2 c u back
StunninJak 1 year ago
lol Awesome ep! Em, I think I like the Tenkaichi better, but this is okay, just as long as you keep Tenkaichi for the fights, it's all good.
muphasa72 1 year ago
very nice but how do u have all those characters to control even chi-chi she useless lol
DDawg61 1 year ago
say man im glad ur bak man n diz is pretty gud no bull shit
Zuraku1 1 year ago
I've been waiting for this for a while because your videos are great.
fesdes95 1 year ago
you should keep the dbz log stuff
andybots50 1 year ago
2:12 haha bottom right corner vegeta dancing lol. funny.. good episode xD i like the new style
lilsolja93 1 year ago
hell yea ur bak i missed this
inukazega 1 year ago
hhmm what did u use to get the characters at the locations? and im guessing u were using advance text or somthing for the ppl talking
UBRPWNer55 1 year ago
looks like sumone steped their game up, it's good to see dat ur passion 4 dis has reawaken brotha
godbroly100 1 year ago
Hell yeah you should keep it this way.
TheShiningGundam 1 year ago
Nice, I would keep on with this, a lot more privileges you have with this style.
dmzhall27 1 year ago
i really like the legacy of goku sences and then you put the tenkaichi fights really good but how did you do that with the legacy of goku sences please tell me
KingOfSagesHamse 1 year ago
New look is pretty cool. The transition from sprite to tenkaichi was smooth. Nice ep [o_O]
courtjestersc46 1 year ago
Great return, and nice use of the legacy of Goku engine, i look forward to seeing how you pull it off in different ways,
Anyway nice return and i ill resub you,
hope to see more great eps like this
-Sylar
SSjSylar 1 year ago
hi good return ehh are you using ragingblast at all
EAGLEHAWKS2010 1 year ago
i dislike this...naww joking its good but the sprites arent good to use this much
MonkeyLord27 1 year ago
All in all, I rate it 3 out of 5 stars. A sterling effort on your part, and in my honest opinion, the GBA sprites could be quite useful when properly applied, such as indoor scenes, or scenes that require more than two people in a single shot. Good to see you back in the saddle. I eagerly await more.
Hakumei1 1 year ago
YAY!!
NEW EPISODE
beybladeheyhey 1 year ago
i have an idea for your seires like lets say gohan an trunks are about to fight 17 mabye instead of using the switch thing you can use them both at the same time by using dragon ball tenkichi tag team 2 aganist 1
nermin369 1 year ago
yea you should use the legacy of goku but how did you add all those characters i wish i could
nermin369 1 year ago
diz wuz gud i guezz i lik da otha way but diz 1 makes sense i thought dey were gnna fite lik dat but itz kool
234djl 1 year ago
whats the name of the song at the intro of this episode
kisamelake 1 year ago
it waz gud i liked it
darienreaper 1 year ago
This ep was good for a comeback, but I think it was still a little dissapointing...I like the whole new fanfic editing idea, but I think you could of used it more better! idk how, but it just seemed a little boring...The fight seen was very short and I hope I they get longer..lol, but you just got back so I'm goin to say that you did a pretty good job! Hope to see more from you in the future!
UltimiteSaiyan 1 year ago
It was a good episode, but not the way I intened you to use the LoG sprites. Not quite the right blend
newkdawg3000 1 year ago
Really good episode, it's nice that you're back.
Your new style is a good one, I would just suggest using a more neutral balance between the new and the tenkaichi game.
TRUEZFAN 1 year ago
totally awesome sum spell mistakes but awesome
porgielewis124 1 year ago
keep it this way
kidwonder96 1 year ago
Great return body,nice episode ,it needs more use of tenkaichi, like the scene where goku and goten are talking,it will make it more interesting.
dragonballfanD 1 year ago
@dragonballfanD: Yea honestly it lost the cinematic feel it used to have. What I was thinking is to only use those Legacy of Goku sprites for places that I can't access in Tenkaichi, like Gohans house, Trunks house maybe other planets but overall I want to try and use Tenkaichi more than Legacy of Goku.
Blscc4 1 year ago 6
@Blscc4 and you can use for characters that you can't use in tenkaichi (like chi-chi or bulma lol)
good idea of using legacy of goku but don't over do it
can't wait for next episode
I wanna see your progress.
dragonballfanD 1 year ago
good to see more eps
jakester877 1 year ago
Ill admit with the sprites it got more good! and also watchu used to make dem sprites like d abackround how u make dem move n stuff.xDD
drippa6 1 year ago
awesome
dbzfanic 1 year ago
hmm...there were supposed to be 8 assassins, but there are only 7. And they're looking for Ericka. Coincidence? I think not!!
TheTsugnawmi2010 1 year ago
There was alot of typos.
and i dont think chi chi would call goku, kakorot.
Thats really it, besides that its awesome.
ladiezman221 1 year ago
@ladiezman221: Lol. I think its really bad that you don't pay attention to my storyline.
Blscc4 1 year ago
@ladiezman221 There is no "Goku" in the series. He never had that name
newkdawg3000 1 year ago
@newkdawg3000 Thank..you...Sorry I just had a hard time remembering things from the series..because this ep came out late.
ladiezman221 1 year ago
You have no idea how glad I am that your back, I love this stuff.
BloodwolfAssassin 1 year ago
Ya!!!!!
lilmoe1228 1 year ago
I like it, but I liked it better when you were filming everything with BT3. But If this is easier for you I feel good about it too.
gunjackSmoker23 1 year ago
It's fine with me only thing I might of had is when they travel you could use T3 althought I'm not sure if that would work but I would like to see how it matched up with the new style. All in all I like it for me it's a green light to continue.
RuuckaRuckaAliFan 1 year ago
Great job the new layout is working great
ReldXCrow 1 year ago
i think the new style was exelent and i belive you should use it more brings a new dimension to fan fiction
ZegetaX1 1 year ago
and olso please let goten save the day
taraflan99 1 year ago
u know u r doing great with this i don't know anyone who can make their own thing in dbz legacy of goku u rock im ur number 1 fan
taraflan99 1 year ago
brillliant
TheSuperbigben10 1 year ago
no dont keep the new style
alun2lee 1 year ago
will we see some of the animations from the raging blast game?
But over all, it's been a long wait and I'm looking forward to what the story brings.
gogeta408 1 year ago
FINALLY YOU´re BACK!!!!^^
Amazing episode!^^
Giovanni123456789101 1 year ago
something new, but i think i can get used too. kepp it up!
Yardizel 1 year ago
I ccant wait fo Raging Blast fights!
They have like 5-8 different super attacks for ALL the characters.
LordTarranium 1 year ago
I like this new style it makes me nostalgic of when I played Buu's Furry.
arshiaey 1 year ago
I'am not sure, it does not fill the same I guess it was ok.
SUPERRAGO1 1 year ago
And the plot thickens, Well i have this feeling Ryu going to pull a switchie and that Gohan may get his arse handed to him for awhile. The LOG thing worked awesome (still waiting for the pokeball to start teh battle XDD) a little thing i noticed you seem to go (as loose as possible) but by the book dbz, i mean the first saga It seemed the saiyans were important foes, then frieza, and now the assassin force which has Androids in it, not saying that isnt good, but its just somethin i notice
spheal80 1 year ago
@spheal80: Yea, I kinda did use the DBZ plot as a layout for my own. See what most people don't understand is Dragonball A.S is basically a what if story and that what if is what would of happened if Goku didn't get sent to Earth.
Blscc4 1 year ago
@Blscc4 it like playing Buu Fury u should keep it
Toontown302able 1 year ago
@Blscc4 pause at 8:05,vegeta said he'll teach him to mock him,shouldn't it be he'll teach him to not mock him
alun2lee 1 year ago
@Blscc4 ah i see, i get it now i didnt think about the what if part i just thought it was just a fanfic now i know XD is the teenage goten thing going to happen after this saga/arc or wil that be later?
spheal80 1 year ago
@spheal80: I haven't decided but I wanna get Gohan out of the picture somehow before Goten takes over. I've got a good idea for that too. One that doesn't involve killing him off.
Blscc4 1 year ago
@Blscc4 hmm.. i would think kakorot would take over... wait... your not gonna kill HIM off???
newkdawg3000 1 year ago
@Blscc4 ah i see (damn wanted that fool to die before mystic XD) but quick question, if you get goten to be a main, what character model do you use, goku early and just not have him gain ssj, or how does that play out o.o?
spheal80 1 year ago
@Blscc4 why do you gotta make your characters cus? Shame on you. Only some people cus very rarely in dbz. Even the saiyans don't cus that much.
abridgedking521 1 year ago
I love the new cutscene style. i lol'd at the chi-chi parts XD. You should totally keep it and i didn't mind all the talking. cnt wait for episode 31!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mike71619 1 year ago
It was cool and with this you can make even the non-fighting characters show in the series like Chi-Chi xD nice work dude
ghostdude45 1 year ago
This is Awesome!! I liked it!! but also you could learn how to make sprite animations thats a pretty good way to make ur own series to with diff backrounds and sprites and other things. It may take a little longer tho
DBZFan81895 1 year ago
Yes it finally came, nice job!!
fgt73 1 year ago
Haha wow i just got done watching the previous episode
hajimenoippopower2 1 year ago
yea, i guess its easier to keep the story together like this, i like it, keep it :)
diehard726 1 year ago
how did u make the legacy of goku scenes
Link3423 1 year ago
great i like it
adarius5 1 year ago
i mean how you make that gameboy part the conversations and character in the gameboy version
RASENGAN1081 1 year ago
@RASENGAN1081 Learn to make sprite movies
theultrachicken 1 year ago
@theultrachicken thanks
RASENGAN1081 1 year ago
Not bad. As far as a cinema feel, it might not cut it. However it is refreshing, original, and interesting. I enjoyed it, and i'm looking forward to seeing how it will look with more fight scenes. Very nice style for telling a story. I was entertained =D
Zurctc 1 year ago
@Zurctc: Yea, it all depends on the reactions I get. I may drop this style altogether if people don't like it.
Blscc4 1 year ago
Don't take this the wrong way but i was kinda dissappointed with this episode You had a good idea but it was poorly presented the fight scenes were't really much of hit and hit back but i kinda like the name Xavier for a bad guy
NeoHaseo579 1 year ago
whens ep 31 :D
DustinItachiUchiha 1 year ago
this episode was great i love the new cutscenes
omar067100 1 year ago
how do u do this cause wanted to do this as well
RASENGAN1081 1 year ago
@RASENGAN1081:
Step 1: I record the footage.
Step2: Edit it
Step3: Save it
Step4: Upload it
=D
Blscc4 1 year ago
@Blscc4 how do you make the conversation part the characters of the game boy version
RASENGAN1081 1 year ago
a new fanfic style awesome :D
ThePrinceTrunks 1 year ago
Uh what's with the vegeta hair or what ever that is in the lower right corner while goten and kakarot are talking?
supersonic2394161 1 year ago
@supersonic2394161: Thats what I was wondering.
Blscc4 1 year ago
It's why I asked.
supersonic2394161 1 year ago
:D-hugs you- YAY ITS OUT
DustinItachiUchiha 1 year ago
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14ssjgoku 1 year ago
sweet love ur series u inspired me to make one
samouri3 1 year ago