What ever happened to the good poets like TS Eliot? And I don't give a crap about this guy's race either. Seriously though, what happened to good poets? I mean, we give letigitmacy to people who can't rhyme, don't seem to use rhythm, appear as though they enjoy dumbing down poetry, and never shut up about the ghetto. Not being insensitive, just saying what I see.
Honestly people, he CLEARLY says that he is half black "that color and they have reserved half of my body to call its own. Like half of me is, like my father was, like my grandfather is".
NOW, can we please shut up about his skin color and enjoy this artwork?
I don't understand why so many people disliked this poem?
"Tell them to load their handguns with rose petals, and aim at your feet so when they shoot enough, you can dance on those blood colored clouds. " He poetry is beautiful.
I like it. Kids got some heart. Hes able to speak his mind without thinking about it to much. seems to be depicting a dream state, that to me is a great place for poetry to be expressed from. All big scientific theory and knowledge came from dreams.
lucid rainbows passing high crazy mountainous buildings...... he said none of this, of course. I'm just providing an example of what ramblings look like in written form. I'm sorry, but I simply don't see the beauty in this.
I respect the passion of artists such as Miles, though.
Can someone explain this poem to me? the only thing I got out of it was when he was talking about kids who have basketball and notebooks as parents (a metaphor); but I don't understand the part when he was talking about african ancestors and other parts, what where his other points in the poem? (ex. the tip toing and shotguns)
@michaelantonio0221 i didn't say anything about the in my comment i said he has black in his genes somewhere and it's hard to see so people probably disliked him without considering at all that he could know what he's talking about. Your not one of those people apperently cause you considered,, researched and returned with a point that atm i dont feel like confirming or checking so im just saying okay. Have an awesome weekend though alright? (:
@phuuyay o.o what the heck? i was just defending that to someone. Saying his race isn't important however i believe he has it in his genes. you should read the whole comment before coming at me sarcastically hun. .-. Have a nice day, chill out though. no need to pick fights. its just youtube.
@Diamond121212 did mean to pick a fight...I did read the whole comment ;) i was just sayin cause i think that race is a problem in society until it stops even crossing people's minds what color he is...so i was just trying to encourage people to ignore his color...sorry if that came off bad...
@kooleri30 Kids lacking real parents for whatever reasons you wish to imagine. Basketball courts becoming home for kids who think professional sports will get them out of the hood. Back pocket journals=Rap or poetry lyrics. Stereotypically it's either rap, professional sports or drugs that get kids out of the hood.
Agh this reminds me of a video I saw once of a guy reading a poem
i remember the poem had the line "I want to put a solid gold 3 karat diamond ring on your mind marryign your every thought" in it but i can't find the video or the poem! Anybody know it?
whats your deal with making fun of aids? for one thing many poeple have it cause the neglect the fact and refuse to tell there partner that they have it. Two what is the point of making jokes to you? guess what its very funny that people are so ignorant when it comes to that.
I can understand if someone is HIV positive in your life. ok sympothize but just because it affects you doesn't mean that its not funny
were not laughing at his/hers expense just the whole problem.
this guy is amazing 5/5 people need to stop hating this guy is good listen to the words very few people still know the meaning of true poetry !.. good job keep writing awesome delivery as well
Whats mad cool about him is that a lot of mixed kids who are that light and can pass for white becuz of the idiots who know nothing about pigment but a lot of times they will hide and not be that brave to embrace the race let alone write a poem this deep and crazy hot. He took it to a whole nother level, amazing poem
in 1829 a man named fredrick was working in his lab and a ghost came by and killed him the next morning fredrick was nowhere to be seen 100 years later 2 boys went to the lab as a dare the boys were never seen again aperently murdered now that u red this comment when u go 2 sleep fredeick and the boys will come and murder u but u can stop this by postiong this on 5 comments before midnight
since when does apparent socioeconomic status determine what a poet can write about? i think the fact that this kid can write so beautifully and passionately about a lifestyle that he hasn't experienced, assuming that he isn't from harlem, speaks to how gifted he is. and the fact that he doesn't look black has absolutely no bearing on whether or not he's experienced the hardships that many blacks experience. i think this kid outrageously talented. and he's a beautifulllll :)
tell em to load their shotguns with slugs made of me, and I'll prove to you that bullets do know what color your skin is when I pierce your chest and tip-toe vicariously around your lungs to light your heart on fire damn!
He does not sound like anis mojgani... he sounds like a teenager from New York city...I agree wit homeboy/girl below me jus let the art be art stop compareing peoples craft and jus let it be wat it be....a dope ass poem!
regardless if he sounds like anis mojgani or not, miles is an extremely talented person. and funny, i thought art was supposed to be an outlet for people of all races, socioeconomic backgrounds, genders.... so yes, he is half white. yes, he is not poor. but he's an artist. i see this kid everyday and he is truthfully intelligent.
A good poem would have been for him to say the confusion and Guilt he feels being Rich and white when seeing such a contrast between his exsistance and Harlems. Not trying to kid us that he really gives a shit or can identify with their struggle. The only good art is truth, the truth weather that makes you appear good or bad. I don't enjoy this type of poetry it seems very fashionable and shallow.
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Not spoken word in general, in this case yes. This seems pretentious to me, he's a fraud. but it's marketed in the right way to the right circles of people and then deemed deep and cool Urban world NYC yeah man cooool.
Ahhhh, yeah, generally skin color is a good indicator of whether someone is black or not, or at least black enough to describe the "struggle" of blacks. Half and half hardly deal with the same adversity.
Those of you who don't get it, just don't get it...also he has an accent..from the new york area..it's an accent..regarding "vulgar" it's art...art is often a reflection of life, sometimes life is a little vulgar..."wannabe"!? seriously, the guy who called him a "wannabe" should get out more, see the world, meet varying people. It's a big, big world folks...I think this poem is amazing.....amazing.
you shouldnt care wheather hes using vulgar language , poetry , or any type of art for that matter , has no limit on language, any word you feel like using to describe somthing , is your choice , now weather or not the listener likes it is there choice.
You guys shouldn't try to explain, you should just listen to it. Awesome thing about poetry, and lyrics in general, is that they are for the most part open for interpretation.
They only possible way to make me like him , is if that guy was mocking the other showoffs ,and one of them said : "Why don;t you go on stage wise ass." Please tell me you did this to diss em out of their own absurdity ?Like Cartman would do ....
The conflict is that he speaks of torture in a celebration ambiance,he words more than he feels , looks to me like a a showoff who wants to demonstrate his intelligence hiding behind a humble way.Ok i get it you can start a phrase with the end of the previous one but if i was foreplaying with a girl while watching this , i would have lost my wood ,i definitely hate the way you stand up, your an insult to poet who filter ideas instead of going in the dictionnary with a shopping cart.
ok explain what his poem means please. someone.... i'm not dissing on him, i actually think it's pretty cool. i'm not a poet kinda person so i have no idea what he's talking about. please help haha.
well hes explaining harlem life and how fleeting it is for little black kids and also how how plays a role in that because hes half black.. how not all white ppl are racist
its way more complex than that... but thats the main point of it
What ever happened to the good poets like TS Eliot? And I don't give a crap about this guy's race either. Seriously though, what happened to good poets? I mean, we give letigitmacy to people who can't rhyme, don't seem to use rhythm, appear as though they enjoy dumbing down poetry, and never shut up about the ghetto. Not being insensitive, just saying what I see.
mrreaderman 1 month ago
@mrreaderman Who said poetry needed rhyme???
DrEaMiNgHuGe 4 weeks ago 2
The poem is nothing special, but his voice is perfect for it. He really knows how to elate the audience; great spoken word in other words.
Pyrrrho 1 month ago
that was amazing
bceagles2015 3 months ago
why are the audience being assholes?
crapolaist 3 months ago
@crapolaist they are not being assholes :) they just feel the poem!
dannylamah 2 months ago
The song is by Bob Marley 'Redemption Song'
philthyflirt 4 months ago
what song is that he's sing at the end?
tonight101 4 months ago
Honestly people, he CLEARLY says that he is half black "that color and they have reserved half of my body to call its own. Like half of me is, like my father was, like my grandfather is".
NOW, can we please shut up about his skin color and enjoy this artwork?
SleighJessi 4 months ago 6
I love your style.
gbellavable 5 months ago
I don't understand why so many people disliked this poem?
"Tell them to load their handguns with rose petals, and aim at your feet so when they shoot enough, you can dance on those blood colored clouds. " He poetry is beautiful.
bohemiansunset117 5 months ago 4
I like it. Kids got some heart. Hes able to speak his mind without thinking about it to much. seems to be depicting a dream state, that to me is a great place for poetry to be expressed from. All big scientific theory and knowledge came from dreams.
dick3124 6 months ago
WHO CARES a\BOUT AN ACCENT WHAT NATIONALITY HE IS A SCRIBE SNAP SNAP SNAP SNAP!
FELICITACINTRON 6 months ago
LAWD THIS YOUNG MAN HAS ME HOOKED , A TRUE SCRIBE!!!
FELICITACINTRON 6 months ago
What accent... I don't hear it
mmsbballmac 6 months ago
lucid rainbows passing high crazy mountainous buildings...... he said none of this, of course. I'm just providing an example of what ramblings look like in written form. I'm sorry, but I simply don't see the beauty in this.
I respect the passion of artists such as Miles, though.
Heatley1514 9 months ago
he looks half black
CSeyoum 9 months ago
@CSeyoum DOH! did you actualy listen to it
annwhitely 8 months ago
@annwhitely I was just confirming. DOH!
CSeyoum 7 months ago
my whole time watching this i was thinking wow.....hes cute!!!!
nellandrhonda 9 months ago
DAMN THIS IS REAL THIS IS WHAT MEDIA DOESN'T NOTICE THE POETRY WORLD OR @ LEAST NOT WHERE I'M @ THIS IS REAL THIS IS WHAT I LOVE TO HEAR
Marquia777 10 months ago
that was amazing....
blessification 10 months ago
You look a shit load of a lot like Arturo Gatti. Your shit is sick.
RaynardAlcampor 11 months ago
I love this poem he is so sexy, love is accent.
ToniThe789 11 months ago
this is beautiful
PPEZZ25 11 months ago
he's so great. very compelling man. nice accent. beautiful poem.
jaymeeharkeen 11 months ago
He ends it dope.
MesiahPoet 1 year ago 2
Still gets me :` ( MARRY ME
diamondbratz9 1 year ago
beautiful
NZBadboy 1 year ago
Can someone explain this poem to me? the only thing I got out of it was when he was talking about kids who have basketball and notebooks as parents (a metaphor); but I don't understand the part when he was talking about african ancestors and other parts, what where his other points in the poem? (ex. the tip toing and shotguns)
101feven101 1 year ago
@101feven101 he's part black...
motownkrazy 1 year ago
i think the 310 people who disliked this probably did it out of ignorance, not seeing the black in him. silly world we're in ain't it? <3
Diamond121212 1 year ago 34
@Diamond121212 miles hodges lives in TEANECK NJ in a BIG ASS HOUSE, he knows shit about harlem
michaelantonio0221 1 year ago
@michaelantonio0221 i didn't say anything about the in my comment i said he has black in his genes somewhere and it's hard to see so people probably disliked him without considering at all that he could know what he's talking about. Your not one of those people apperently cause you considered,, researched and returned with a point that atm i dont feel like confirming or checking so im just saying okay. Have an awesome weekend though alright? (:
Diamond121212 1 year ago
@Diamond121212 does it matter what color he is? his poetry is arguing for egalitarian society...cant anyone do that?....or did i miss something?
phuuyay 11 months ago
@phuuyay o.o what the heck? i was just defending that to someone. Saying his race isn't important however i believe he has it in his genes. you should read the whole comment before coming at me sarcastically hun. .-. Have a nice day, chill out though. no need to pick fights. its just youtube.
Diamond121212 11 months ago
@Diamond121212 did mean to pick a fight...I did read the whole comment ;) i was just sayin cause i think that race is a problem in society until it stops even crossing people's minds what color he is...so i was just trying to encourage people to ignore his color...sorry if that came off bad...
phuuyay 11 months ago
@phuuyay It's all good. we're on the same side. Trust me...sometimes i wish color didnt cross their minds.
Diamond121212 11 months ago
I wrote down this entire poem. I didn't realize how LONG it was.
jaymeeharkeen 1 year ago
@jaymeeharkeen lol why?
Krazyee93 1 year ago
wow just wow great poem.
What was the end song he was singing ?
queenbee119 1 year ago
@queenbee119 redemption song by bob marley
specialk9569 1 year ago
Someone likes Anis Mojgani
ZacIsCasual 1 year ago 13
you with the basket ball hoop and foul line for a father. Back pocket journal for a mother.... FUCK YES!!!!!
DibbsIsHere 1 year ago 4
super duper intense !! awsome
nesharoxbaybee 1 year ago
this is intense
puma8d 1 year ago
"you with basketball hoop and foulline? for a father, back pocket journal for a mother" -- what does that mean?
kooleri30 1 year ago
@kooleri30 Kids lacking real parents for whatever reasons you wish to imagine. Basketball courts becoming home for kids who think professional sports will get them out of the hood. Back pocket journals=Rap or poetry lyrics. Stereotypically it's either rap, professional sports or drugs that get kids out of the hood.
cjep91 1 year ago 6
sometihng about the way he performs reminds a lot of Anis Mojgani.
amazinggood
ReSpekt9845 1 year ago
@ReSpekt9845 thats what i was thinking
muzicbox678 1 year ago
i love him.
erincphillips 1 year ago
check out Kyle Lensch from teaneck as well
shaunikko 1 year ago
I love this poem.
inspiredchica90210 1 year ago
I love this poem.
inspiredchica90210 1 year ago
i love him ^^
en this amazing poem
zemoviemaster 2 years ago
Agh this reminds me of a video I saw once of a guy reading a poem
i remember the poem had the line "I want to put a solid gold 3 karat diamond ring on your mind marryign your every thought" in it but i can't find the video or the poem! Anybody know it?
ThisIsNotMia 2 years ago
its called "penny for your thoughts" and its by Gemineye. def jam poetry. i just listened to it before this video
rschott22 2 years ago
agh! you're the best! thank you, that was bothering me all night haha it's so beautiful
ThisIsNotMia 2 years ago
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DancerSamm 2 years ago
look up def poetry a penny for your thoughts
i tink that's the one you mean. i love that poem
zemoviemaster 2 years ago
opps someone already told u....opps :/ rofl
zemoviemaster 2 years ago
Haha it's all good, thanks anyways!
ThisIsNotMia 2 years ago
I think your talking about Penny For Your Thoughts by Gemineye
lamesmakemesic 2 years ago
yes, thank you
ThisIsNotMia 2 years ago
Its Gemineye-Penny for your Thoughts.
EffAye03 2 years ago
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zm5 2 years ago
so i'm sorry but I think anyone has the right to make fun of anything they want
saphiro008 2 years ago
whats your deal with making fun of aids? for one thing many poeple have it cause the neglect the fact and refuse to tell there partner that they have it. Two what is the point of making jokes to you? guess what its very funny that people are so ignorant when it comes to that.
I can understand if someone is HIV positive in your life. ok sympothize but just because it affects you doesn't mean that its not funny
were not laughing at his/hers expense just the whole problem.
saphiro008 2 years ago
I'm glad you can differentiate between being a complete jerk and just having a horrible sense of humor.
Nice job.
Keaira1019 2 years ago
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he was singing Redemption Song by Bob Marley.
kissxmexagain431 2 years ago
Yeah thx i found it :D
velascocristian9 2 years ago
finally i found it i saw this a while back and fell in love with it this poem is awesome he is awesome
mynameismyname22 2 years ago
What song was he singing at the end?
velascocristian9 2 years ago
Bob Marley's Redemption song
Bjazz 2 years ago
He reminds me of Anis Mojgani by the way he says his poem...
velascocristian9 2 years ago 2
woah ...say noe more!!
lookwotisaid 2 years ago
this guy is amazing 5/5 people need to stop hating this guy is good listen to the words very few people still know the meaning of true poetry !.. good job keep writing awesome delivery as well
mjz64 2 years ago 2
goodness that was good
leilations 2 years ago 2
This dude is going to my school man!
pianoplayerJH 2 years ago
no way he is cuttte and got soul any girl that get him is lucky
sakuradeia2 2 years ago
he is cute :) i like his accent
cheekybambini 2 years ago 41
girl i know he sexi
tyty0994lucy 2 years ago 2
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@cheekybambini Thats all you got from the poem?
DevinBranting 1 year ago
He's mixed (bi-racial) black and white.
goodtimesagoogoo 2 years ago 4
hes cuteee lol
fynechic 2 years ago
yes he is lol
RisseeKee 2 years ago 2
Man, this guy is good
I want to know how he can write stuff like this...
wulord 2 years ago 4
Whats mad cool about him is that a lot of mixed kids who are that light and can pass for white becuz of the idiots who know nothing about pigment but a lot of times they will hide and not be that brave to embrace the race let alone write a poem this deep and crazy hot. He took it to a whole nother level, amazing poem
Liago4 2 years ago 6
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SweetTee0911 2 years ago
this dude is bi racial he is not white.. if you listen to the poetry he tells you that..1:40
Adams910ba 2 years ago 4
the bravery in this is simply breathtaking
christinjames 2 years ago
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in 1829 a man named fredrick was working in his lab and a ghost came by and killed him the next morning fredrick was nowhere to be seen 100 years later 2 boys went to the lab as a dare the boys were never seen again aperently murdered now that u red this comment when u go 2 sleep fredeick and the boys will come and murder u but u can stop this by postiong this on 5 comments before midnight
LaLaLa843 2 years ago
The young man is mixed. I can see Black in him just as I did when Maria Carey first appeared on the Sean.
carrington45 2 years ago
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he would get the shit beat out of him if he was on lennox and he is the white man fuck is he talkin about
andrewjosemendez 2 years ago
He's bi-racial respect him since u can't touch people like he can
librababy94 2 years ago 8
since when does apparent socioeconomic status determine what a poet can write about? i think the fact that this kid can write so beautifully and passionately about a lifestyle that he hasn't experienced, assuming that he isn't from harlem, speaks to how gifted he is. and the fact that he doesn't look black has absolutely no bearing on whether or not he's experienced the hardships that many blacks experience. i think this kid outrageously talented. and he's a beautifulllll :)
blackbirdflyx3 2 years ago 6
he is from harlem
jaaayel 2 years ago
oh okay. i never met the kid so i was just going by what earlier posts said. either way, he's an amazing poet.
blackbirdflyx3 2 years ago
hes from teaneck new jersey he lives 2 blocks from me lol
xBRiiiANx 2 years ago
@jaaayel he from jersey
michaelantonio0221 1 year ago
That was the shit...Bob Marley is also the shit. Very niiiice.
will4fang 2 years ago
damn that was hot hes kinda cute
angelsmellsdeath 2 years ago
ooo he is 2 sexy...wat team is he on nd where can i find him :)
ashag1292 2 years ago
yo, ashag1292.
he's not a piece of meat, damn.
chloebearxx23 2 years ago
he's really good. and hotttt. :) lol.
kkkaaatttiiiee 2 years ago
watch my vid search
can you see me now by R3
teenpoet1 2 years ago
madddd respect. he went over like a minute and still made the team, thats how bad assd he is.. FUCK the time penalty :)
eJAMAICAtor 2 years ago 7
tell em to load their shotguns with slugs made of me, and I'll prove to you that bullets do know what color your skin is when I pierce your chest and tip-toe vicariously around your lungs to light your heart on fire damn!
ChiliBalls 2 years ago 42
yo this is my mans ... ive known this kid my whole life.
xBRiiiANx 2 years ago
This is my favorite out of all of them
ThugginMuggin 2 years ago
Damn. That was so tight!! All these young poets are killing the slam scene right now. Wow...
xElijahYoungx 2 years ago 3
"you with the basketball hoop and foul line for a father and back pocket journal for a mother" that line spoke volumes
poetsfinest 2 years ago 9
He does not sound like anis mojgani... he sounds like a teenager from New York city...I agree wit homeboy/girl below me jus let the art be art stop compareing peoples craft and jus let it be wat it be....a dope ass poem!
bjh06d 2 years ago 4
regardless if he sounds like anis mojgani or not, miles is an extremely talented person. and funny, i thought art was supposed to be an outlet for people of all races, socioeconomic backgrounds, genders.... so yes, he is half white. yes, he is not poor. but he's an artist. i see this kid everyday and he is truthfully intelligent.
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littleXBOHEMIAN 2 years ago 8
love miles! love all them cats---madd gifted
FREEDEJATAYLOR 2 years ago 3
just like anis mojgani
shaunikko 2 years ago
i know...
im not sure if its a good thing..ora bad thing...
theres only one anis mojgani.
Daizy10231023 2 years ago
where do i find the words to this?!
winslow7395 2 years ago
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amarie241 2 years ago
yea thats what i did. I wanted to use it for a poetry recitation...this poem is so well done. thanks anyways.
winslow7395 2 years ago
he also has it typed out on his facebook
DemonWithGoldenWings 2 years ago
can you please send it to me
Masonsfinest101 2 years ago
A good poem would have been for him to say the confusion and Guilt he feels being Rich and white when seeing such a contrast between his exsistance and Harlems. Not trying to kid us that he really gives a shit or can identify with their struggle. The only good art is truth, the truth weather that makes you appear good or bad. I don't enjoy this type of poetry it seems very fashionable and shallow.
richievanaardt 2 years ago
he's actually half black
e198811 2 years ago 3
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Technically yes but he may as well be white. know what i'm saying, smokes let's go.
richievanaardt 2 years ago
i guess so
everybody is entitled to their own
and do you think spoken word is fashionable and shallow or the topic
e198811 2 years ago
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Not spoken word in general, in this case yes. This seems pretentious to me, he's a fraud. but it's marketed in the right way to the right circles of people and then deemed deep and cool Urban world NYC yeah man cooool.
richievanaardt 2 years ago
I understand where you're coming from...
Factzxx 2 years ago
he sounds exactly like anis mojgani...
Daizy10231023 2 years ago
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shaunikko 2 years ago
He sounds like a preacher...
butteryblue 2 years ago
amazing.
love the ending.
RDHILDE18 2 years ago
Alright, who cares if this boy is rich? He can still speak of a struggle. And he's damn good at it!
ohhboyitsleila 2 years ago 5
ive been listening to this poem at the start of work everyday
erichsiao167 2 years ago
such a great poem
italoetkin 2 years ago
HES ON FACE BOOK.
SEXIIER
diamondbratz9 2 years ago
SEXYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
period.point blank
diamondbratz9 2 years ago
i saw the picture of his poem in my mind
kaylaconfuzed 2 years ago
i saw him preform, if yuh guys think this is pwerful, wait till yuh hear him perform in personnn
xoxBaybeeDollxox 2 years ago 2
Ahhhh, yeah, generally skin color is a good indicator of whether someone is black or not, or at least black enough to describe the "struggle" of blacks. Half and half hardly deal with the same adversity.
humunqlus 2 years ago
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chloebearxx23 2 years ago
why u hatin for chloebearxx23 just cause u aint makin no money dont mean u gotta hate on another persons video.
lildeadman21000 2 years ago
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chloebearxx23 2 years ago
humunqlus - that was to you, you moron
JLVALO152 2 years ago
I LOVE HOW HE ENDED W/ REDEMPTION SONG!
th3ch0z3n0ne 2 years ago
incredible. my english teacher showed us this for class. Everyone was speechless. Amazing, absolutely amazing.
youszahacker 3 years ago 2
wow. absolutely amazing
tradatdafilms 3 years ago
...biracial
strangetodancesosoon 3 years ago 5
hes half black
strangetodancesosoon 3 years ago 3
reminds me of anis mojgani!
fairlyone 3 years ago
Amazing.
Gfmaster9998 3 years ago 3
Superb.
kidcardiology19 3 years ago 7
I am envious of his delivery
MediaCritic92 3 years ago 14
Is this video really a joke to you?
jackuhlantern 3 years ago 6
youth doing good in their communities! you should support them! he is amazing.
chopstix09 3 years ago 7
you dont have to be black to be urban his shit is good thats all that matters
tricey22200 3 years ago 10
Yeah Nigga fuck dat. Dis shit da bomb! Chack yo self whitey!
begby69th 3 years ago 5
what the fuck are you talking about
tricey22200 3 years ago 2
you got that right!
Giovani22 3 years ago
Where can we find the Text to these poems?
JoshVanDerWood 3 years ago
lol, he has my last name
KianaRocks95 3 years ago
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not one person here gives a shit you fuck
Zedac9 3 years ago
thx i appreciate the support ,
streetstress 3 years ago
Those of you who don't get it, just don't get it...also he has an accent..from the new york area..it's an accent..regarding "vulgar" it's art...art is often a reflection of life, sometimes life is a little vulgar..."wannabe"!? seriously, the guy who called him a "wannabe" should get out more, see the world, meet varying people. It's a big, big world folks...I think this poem is amazing.....amazing.
Joeintampa 3 years ago 3
you shouldnt care wheather hes using vulgar language , poetry , or any type of art for that matter , has no limit on language, any word you feel like using to describe somthing , is your choice , now weather or not the listener likes it is there choice.
rita416 3 years ago
when does he use vulgar language?
SkillCapeProductions 3 years ago
wspólczuje jego przyjaciołom...
wyobrażam sobie jak mowi, "star ydawaj wyjdziemy na pizze albo do kinA"
:D:D:D:D
kkh001 3 years ago
You guys shouldn't try to explain, you should just listen to it. Awesome thing about poetry, and lyrics in general, is that they are for the most part open for interpretation.
ChuckImania 3 years ago
lemon lemon lemon..lol lol lol
hahahahah
rosheen12 3 years ago
cool
killerrodan 3 years ago
hes talking about a mix of things in my opinion..racism in harlem and the poverty
and aside from that, im not too sure
settlexdown 3 years ago
He's really good, anyone who says otherwise, just doesn't like poetry slam, or is really ignorant, he's being truthful and original.
DarkSnowman36 3 years ago
ya'll fucking buggin..He's nice as hell
PoeticTruStory 3 years ago
They only possible way to make me like him , is if that guy was mocking the other showoffs ,and one of them said : "Why don;t you go on stage wise ass." Please tell me you did this to diss em out of their own absurdity ?Like Cartman would do ....
streetstress 3 years ago 4
The conflict is that he speaks of torture in a celebration ambiance,he words more than he feels , looks to me like a a showoff who wants to demonstrate his intelligence hiding behind a humble way.Ok i get it you can start a phrase with the end of the previous one but if i was foreplaying with a girl while watching this , i would have lost my wood ,i definitely hate the way you stand up, your an insult to poet who filter ideas instead of going in the dictionnary with a shopping cart.
streetstress 3 years ago
is he blind or something?
drollenhoofd 3 years ago 2
You said: "so unless your 100 id shut the fuck up "
Lmfao, apparently you can't read your own shit.
All clear now, dumbshit. l0lz
iKinDesigns 3 years ago
contrived.. ouch..
aspirepixel 3 years ago
ok explain what his poem means please. someone.... i'm not dissing on him, i actually think it's pretty cool. i'm not a poet kinda person so i have no idea what he's talking about. please help haha.
decfreak 3 years ago
well hes explaining harlem life and how fleeting it is for little black kids and also how how plays a role in that because hes half black.. how not all white ppl are racist
its way more complex than that... but thats the main point of it
GiselleBuchanan 3 years ago