Deer Park - Short Film

[thevixeffect]

:) the built cud have been more interesting! but any way interesting plot.

do check out my wrk too..

cheers

[favoritedeadpeople]

Brillant!

[fullhdism]

ingenious

[wjwalsh]

@fullhdism cheers!

[dermotheaney]

i wish you the best in the future. I have a bit of back ground in film and still cant see what your talking about in relation to style supporting content. anyway i dont want to stiffle your creativity buzz but keep this film in storage and look at it in 5 or ten years time and you will see what i mean.

[DaithiDublin]

This is just too stupid to even bother completing this comme

[dermotheaney]

ive seen better student movies, ah ye probably are with 70 ratings from your friends. shots are blurred and framing is sloppy. its a sketch you would see but not a film.

[wjwalsh]

don't think even 5 of my mates have youtube accounts, framing and blur are what one would call stylistic decisions to support the content rather than sloppy shooting but hey, chacun a son gout! :D

[SmogFish]

Man your music is awesome

[TayTay1383]

Wow all my life of living in deer park that's never happened to me

[wjwalsh]

count yourself lucky ; )

[ProjectmeTV]

Outstanding :) 10/10

Good camera angles, Suspense, its really good for someething so short,

[leprachaun53]

just an average day in deer park :)

[Anushree19]

my god

jus one word AMAZING

since wen did u start makin such films???

[madlondonkiwimix]

nice billy ,[ theres promise in this young bill......he may go far if he can drag himself away from pub quizzes on a sunday] or does he do more than one ....the suspence is killing me .......

slowly

[tride2122]

This is nice

[filmlvr25]

Liked it... so the assailant found her # in her phone while keeping up with her, gave her her phone back, texted her before killing her. I know it's a short but it doesn't seem possible.

[hughie55]

good

[BarEnFaroth]

Hmm. It was ok.

[PorschesProductions]

just amazing ;)

[deadshape1]

omg yes legend lol mint ending

[ohiostatefan9294hut]

lol loved ending only kiding

[link2thebond]

vey nice ...yheeh

[Slipbak101]

Lol fuuunyyyy

[directoress88]

The ending was amazing... Love it!!

[candyfloss030]

aha, up to the last bit i was like "what an anticlimax" but then the last second was genius. (:

[wong302006]

Mise-en-scene plays an important role in many medias.:) just a few drop of blood connote death rather than a sequence of actions :) Clever

[AmayasSukai]

Hahaha, the ending is pure genius!! I love it!!!

[ThyRavenAscend]

Definely got me with the twist. I thought I knew the ending up until that last second haha.

[joaquinvelasco]

the best thing was the ending

[TayloRLSmithY]

haha! jokes

[watsthatsmell]

GREAT ending, it made the film

[sha08]

goood

[soonagroup]

wonderful control

Keep it up

[steveeor]

Haha, nice twist at the end, like it. x

[number2youknow]

nice

[YllenNoslen]

im gonna go out on a limb and say you put in a glow effect on this?

[BILLYpy]

GOOD stuff and the sound score is okey until the end then it is fantastic  scary shit yeaaaaaeeyyy

[REKStudios]

Nice little flick. I too enjoy making these short films.

[StinkyBurger]

Woah, very nice. Plays on the expectations TWICE. Really interesting. I wish the quality was a bit better so the scene could be a more visually striking, but it was very well shot. Great job.

If you're interested, I have a short film up on my page called Ultimate Couples Therapy. Let me know what you think.

[eightpenceshort]

wow wasn't really expecting that... good film

[kelb89]

sick ending

[mattman2900]

Well, that's got to suck... for the woman.

the ending caught me off guard. Good film.

[tony714]

whoaa lol

[joeyluxton]

Perfect Ending XD

[brotherrabbit2]

very good

[wjwalsh]

hey, thanks for the big ups everyone!

[practicalparadox]

yeah good little story but i would improve on the shots - neat twist - caught me by surprise

[carolan76]

that was cool. very few people come up with a good twist.

coming up with a twist upon the twist, well, mate, nicely done

[wheatkings13]

ha ha nice, who cares if he made it or not. i give him the credit for given er the old upload for the rest of the world to watch. Nice job man!

[PaulSuedeTwin]

ahhahahhahaahhaahahahhahahahha­haha brilliant good mix between bad taste of humour bad taste or horror

well done mate

[raujon]

Hey, I liked it. A lot. good twist, both times.

[wjwalsh]

that is, see below :)

[isthatgood]

I'm afraid this idea was plageurised from the BBC drama directing course. I don't think you should be credited with 'writing' this!

[tomdublin07]

It's nice when accusations are supported with evidence. Correct spelling is always a plus too though...

[isthatgood]

oops, silly me Teacher Tom!! I meant nicked, robbed, stroked, lifted, swiped, copied, stolen, appropriated, borrowed, pirated, infringed, cogged and indeed, plagiarized.

the name of the title of the BBC film on the drama directing course is 'Park Bench'!

[wjwalsh]

I've never seen any of the BBC course's work. The idea is mine and not deliberately derivative of anything-I would have no interest in recycling s/o else's idea. The device is obviously common to many horror & comedy sequences and I am not surprised that a similar idea has been done before and I won't be pointing fingers when it's done again.

I think it ill-considered to cry plagiarism w/o proof, at best it leads to the sarcastic bickering (see above) that ruins many internet discussions.peace,W

[aniBOOM]

ive seen the same idea in a music video for smashmouth

[jodycalerz]

Surly Oscar nomination worthy for that performance...

[MelindaAugustina]

two twists in less than 10 seconds. good job.

[shamannbob]

this is seriously brutal and brutally funny

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[cosmoschild]

Hey Billy if you need a indian as an extra I

am quite happy to offer my services.

Aalek

[morcheeba09]

bravo billy! très bien!!!

[wjwalsh]

Thanks for the support everyone!

[mynameisnotacceptabl]

I like.....far less snot than blair witch....always a good thing.

[jokerclancy]

love it...

[ciara1120]

pretty gud, i liked the twisted twist!!

[jammy101]

very good short, but the focus was way to soft!!!

[shazbucket69]

Did not, NOT expect that ending!

[daryllibertine2]

very nicely done

[sp161]

Your new name is Billy McFreaky!

[radish456]

je l'aime bien. Good work billy.

Gros bisous,

Rebecca

[xtab83]

Tres cool!!!

[unap]

Well done dude

[hubbasplash]

I got a mail from a Canadian telling me to check this out- spread the word Billy! Nice work, Susan

[tomdublin07]

Aw. Didn't use the tacky gel back lit scene that we shot last. That's alright - blood splatter was brilliant...

Well done bud.

[cianmurphy]

nice one billo

[butterflyhm]

Like it Billy. Good job :D

[kranog]

Whooa...that's just cold!