Wow... I saw your comment asking people to check you out, and honestly, I went to your channel expecting some wasted clicks, and my expectations couldn't have been further off. This was pretty amazing stuff, and when you said "bitches" for the first time, it sent shivers down my (a guy who cusses a lot) spine, which really shows the power and intensity in this... Good job. Keep it up.
Man, I just started watching some def poetry jams... this is maybe the 5th or 6th poem, and you've just gotten me hooked, aside from the fact that you just renewed my faith in men.
I watched both your videos and they are great, and I can tell you draw a lot of inspiration from your mom. Lol. Remind me of my stepdad. But in any case, I would like to challenge you to do something more than write about woman and the struggles they face and the inequality of our (men's) treatment of them. I would challenge you to write about other things that you see. Cuz you are talented, there is no doubting that, but I would like to see you're versatility come out
This is pretty good hun, but I have to be honest when I say that you are going to need something a little better if you want to make it in a poetry slam.
That was awesome. I think you should watch this back and figure out how to deliver it a little more surely, cause I don't think you had it completely memorized, and there were some distracting pauses, but honestly it didn't bother me much cause this is really good.
@thomasman200 Do you even understand the message of this? No, it is not a freestyle. This is a poem. This is what Hip-Hop, Rap, RnB,,, and even music is, at its base. Written verse, meant to speak a message of truth.I don't even know why I'm writing this. Especially if you're ignorant enough to write such a hateful comment, on a video that speaks honesty, and nothing but niceness.
Brian Roberts, do your thing man. This was crazy good, and a great message AND delivery! Keep on doing your thing
This is really good. Fuck these wanna' be's that'll never grow balls enough to express themselves through written word. I thought you sent a powerful message. Props and good luck to you friend.
truth b told it was a decent poem but i believe it couldve been better, no i am not a professional or a subject matter expert but jus thought since u asked i would give my OPINION, but keep workin hard bro i kno it will pay off someday
@techno3939 I kno that's how I got here too but he wasn't trying to get on def poetry jam. Granted your entitled to your own opinion but telling him he's not good enough? There's been some real trash people poetry jam he could've gotten on if it was still on the air you know what forget it lol
Not to be disrespectful mate but... that isnt nearly good enough to get you on def poetry jam, i know poets who are better than that are there just teenagers, maybe you should work on it a bit more
@LogicThEncrypter Thats where i found this guy, he commented asking to get on the show and wanted views, just giving my opinion, hes brave to upload it and all... but im just being honest he isnt that good, and i be happy to send you some of my "talent"
Dope and a good message bro start posting your comment on more intellectual pages unlike Kanye. Post your comment on a Talib video or someone else who gives a message
Yeah man no worries just keep practicing as a fellow artist I know its difficult just takes a shit load of practice inspiration friends and mentors practice makes perfect.
this was the most fucking amazing thing i've heard in my entire life... lol i thought you were just gonna be some random rapper trying to spam when i saw your comment on cudi's video, but this is fuckin dope man, big props, i hope to see more in the future. and hey if you dont mind, it'd be awesome if you could check out some of my band's stuff? look up "tropian- night"
really amazing!! loveddd it! subscribedd! add more vids and i will watch!!!! but if you wanna be in the rap business you may wanna change your beats up..but its amazingg! upload more!
hey, im nicole and im a published author and have been published three times for poetry and i have to say we write about alot of the same things i get published through a school program and your amazing keep it up i gotta say your good! keep up the flow and keep keeping it real i guess haha amazing!
this is pretty good if you put some music in the back ground and if you say it in more style it could get you off of youtube and onto things alot bigger. and some words didnt go but very good keep it up
this is pretty good if you put some music in the back ground and if you say it in more style it could get you off of youtube and onto things alot bigger. and some words didnt go but very good keep it up
this is pretty good if you put some music in the back ground and if you say it in more style it could get you off of youtube and onto things alot bigger. and some words didnt go but very good keep it up
this is pretty good if you put some music in the back ground and if you say it in more style it could get you off of youtube and onto things alot bigger. and some words didnt go but very good keep it up
Wow... I saw your comment asking people to check you out, and honestly, I went to your channel expecting some wasted clicks, and my expectations couldn't have been further off. This was pretty amazing stuff, and when you said "bitches" for the first time, it sent shivers down my (a guy who cusses a lot) spine, which really shows the power and intensity in this... Good job. Keep it up.
haircutbob2 8 months ago
wow! Bro, your poetry brought tears to my eyes. Very deep and meaningful. Aaaand, a VERY powerful message that kids need to hear.
You've got talent and it blows my mind that your only 19. Your years ahead of your time. Wise beyond your years. Just simply amazing. Don't ever stop.
tkal17 1 year ago
This is pretty amazing !!!
kingagu65 1 year ago
dope
R0WMaC 1 year ago
you are dope as fuck, enough said. subscribing now and posting on my facebook wall.
shsfootball54 1 year ago 3
hey man
I loved this, keep up the high standard!
LoreHungryGuy 1 year ago
yo both of these is good i'm glad i saw these
Devilsprinter20 1 year ago
Daaaaaaaang, keep this up. [:
I'm sure you're going to be able to get into Def. Poetry Jams.
Dude, You're hella good. I was just watching them vidss`, and I saw your comment.
Dopeass! [:
BFFgeneration 1 year ago
you are obviously talented
soccergerrard1 1 year ago
well done. well done.
whitedude11 1 year ago
you introduced me to a beautiful art, Mr. Johnson.
mark95427 1 year ago
Man, I just started watching some def poetry jams... this is maybe the 5th or 6th poem, and you've just gotten me hooked, aside from the fact that you just renewed my faith in men.
thanks man, so much respect :)
cecisota12 1 year ago
I watched both your videos and they are great, and I can tell you draw a lot of inspiration from your mom. Lol. Remind me of my stepdad. But in any case, I would like to challenge you to do something more than write about woman and the struggles they face and the inequality of our (men's) treatment of them. I would challenge you to write about other things that you see. Cuz you are talented, there is no doubting that, but I would like to see you're versatility come out
FootballnSoccer 1 year ago
Great job brother! Keep it up and stay hungry... From a poet to another. You will do fine (just stay hungry). Peace
Darknightmuk44 1 year ago
ur dope kidd. sikk poetry ill be sure to buy your first songs when they hit itunes, keep at what your doin
SeCrETxCrEaMpIeZ 1 year ago
dude this is really good
chacnemcdonald56 1 year ago 2
talib on def jam poetry brought me here. Got to say i was surprised I expected this to be something weak. you got some talent keep it up
XOrpheus11X 1 year ago
This is pretty good hun, but I have to be honest when I say that you are going to need something a little better if you want to make it in a poetry slam.
I am not really into the rhymes either.
Good job though!
Sarbearxoxo333 1 year ago
That was awesome. I think you should watch this back and figure out how to deliver it a little more surely, cause I don't think you had it completely memorized, and there were some distracting pauses, but honestly it didn't bother me much cause this is really good.
williusethis 1 year ago
@thomasman200 Do you even understand the message of this? No, it is not a freestyle. This is a poem. This is what Hip-Hop, Rap, RnB,,, and even music is, at its base. Written verse, meant to speak a message of truth.I don't even know why I'm writing this. Especially if you're ignorant enough to write such a hateful comment, on a video that speaks honesty, and nothing but niceness.
Brian Roberts, do your thing man. This was crazy good, and a great message AND delivery! Keep on doing your thing
draw333 1 year ago
This is really good. Fuck these wanna' be's that'll never grow balls enough to express themselves through written word. I thought you sent a powerful message. Props and good luck to you friend.
akilife 1 year ago
This is beautiful.
musicxveins19 1 year ago
Your really good(:
koakrew23 1 year ago
that was awesome man. some powerful truths to that poem
Jack0204 1 year ago
truth b told it was a decent poem but i believe it couldve been better, no i am not a professional or a subject matter expert but jus thought since u asked i would give my OPINION, but keep workin hard bro i kno it will pay off someday
flawdaboi1985 1 year ago
This is a pretty solid piece. Keep up the good work!
thebasketcat 1 year ago
@techno3939 I kno that's how I got here too but he wasn't trying to get on def poetry jam. Granted your entitled to your own opinion but telling him he's not good enough? There's been some real trash people poetry jam he could've gotten on if it was still on the air you know what forget it lol
LogicThEncrypter 1 year ago
Not to be disrespectful mate but... that isnt nearly good enough to get you on def poetry jam, i know poets who are better than that are there just teenagers, maybe you should work on it a bit more
techno3939 1 year ago
@techno3939 def poetry jams been off the air for 4 years and who are you to assassinate someone else's art let's see some of your talent
LogicThEncrypter 1 year ago 8
@LogicThEncrypter Thats where i found this guy, he commented asking to get on the show and wanted views, just giving my opinion, hes brave to upload it and all... but im just being honest he isnt that good, and i be happy to send you some of my "talent"
techno3939 1 year ago
Dope and a good message bro start posting your comment on more intellectual pages unlike Kanye. Post your comment on a Talib video or someone else who gives a message
Ronaldo9Zizou10 1 year ago
nice poem, respect
uchihao 1 year ago
@ETnumber1FAN yea but i think he just needs some practice its a really good poem
BoricuaBoxing 1 year ago
Find someone to make your poetry into music, BJR.
YanjaaFilms 1 year ago
@ETnumber1FAN i was just bout to say he had his style
BoricuaBoxing 1 year ago
Nice poem.
pshaw951 1 year ago
very gooooooooood
pkmelody3 1 year ago
keep it up cuz, positivity , respect. power.
Cloud9ineTV 1 year ago
dude, have you tried RAPPING your really good!! all you need is to take a beat
then say those lyrics in a flow
that the beat is in.
and i garentee that youll be REALLY good
and not only that but lyrically also!!
OSMAN14DZEKO11 1 year ago
that was really good.
rap that with a half decent beat, and you're the next star.
americaneuros 1 year ago
that was really good.
rap that with a half decent beat, and you're the next star.
americaneuros 1 year ago
very smooth man, something about you reminds me of immortal technique...
marniefry 1 year ago
HOLY FUCK! WOW! get a good rapper and a good beat and BOOM! Great song!
freerealmsvids1 1 year ago
BEAST HERES A VIEW
gocartz97 1 year ago
k this is not rap it just riming if u wanna come bigger than lil wayne thanmake a real song
badboy99987 1 year ago
@badboy99987 Hey bud...RAP=RHYMING. Just because he doesn't have a $20,000 beat next to his rap doesn't mean he isn't as good as Lil wayne.
ProtoxFTW 1 year ago
really nice, keep it up
jumpyourbone 1 year ago
awesome dude!
peemills1 1 year ago
Yeah man no worries just keep practicing as a fellow artist I know its difficult just takes a shit load of practice inspiration friends and mentors practice makes perfect.
FreshdanceAboy 1 year ago
This is amazing. & You're brilliant.
cleartrueblue66 1 year ago
That means nothing to me. Just like a women.
Boobr 1 year ago
@Boobr whats wrong with you...
FreshdanceAboy 1 year ago
@FreshdanceAboy Why? Cuz i'm not a bitches fan? C'mon. Dave Chappelle said nice thing about that: "Chivalry is dead - and women killed it".
Boobr 1 year ago
@Boobr Go learn respect please.
FreshdanceAboy 1 year ago
this is the dopest sh' I've seen in a while man this young gentleman is keeping it real thumbs up if you agree
tiente1190 1 year ago
Love. It.
Please make more - you're so inspired.
MaddiMcMurray 1 year ago
@thomasman200 if you didnt see some meaning inside that then your the retard. i got 3 words for you buddy: dont hate. appreciate.
lemepos 1 year ago
As a woman this means a lot . Keep it up, this is deep stuff man : D
Str8jacketInsanity 1 year ago
this was the most fucking amazing thing i've heard in my entire life... lol i thought you were just gonna be some random rapper trying to spam when i saw your comment on cudi's video, but this is fuckin dope man, big props, i hope to see more in the future. and hey if you dont mind, it'd be awesome if you could check out some of my band's stuff? look up "tropian- night"
MisterMacky 1 year ago
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brookecdanley 1 year ago
I WANT FUCKING MORE!!! You WILL make more poems and post them on youtube. i am your new subscriber
tmacdabest2 1 year ago
really amazing!! loveddd it! subscribedd! add more vids and i will watch!!!! but if you wanna be in the rap business you may wanna change your beats up..but its amazingg! upload more!
31shelby13 1 year ago
Nice, I hope that you will accomplish your dreams!
ellora7 1 year ago
hey, im nicole and im a published author and have been published three times for poetry and i have to say we write about alot of the same things i get published through a school program and your amazing keep it up i gotta say your good! keep up the flow and keep keeping it real i guess haha amazing!
number1girlnicole 1 year ago
dopeeee
fuckfarmanimals 1 year ago
This has been flagged as spam show
this is pretty good if you put some music in the back ground and if you say it in more style it could get you off of youtube and onto things alot bigger. and some words didnt go but very good keep it up
bamrat54321 1 year ago
this is pretty good if you put some music in the back ground and if you say it in more style it could get you off of youtube and onto things alot bigger. and some words didnt go but very good keep it up
bamrat54321 1 year ago
this is pretty good if you put some music in the back ground and if you say it in more style it could get you off of youtube and onto things alot bigger. and some words didnt go but very good keep it up
bamrat54321 1 year ago
this is pretty good if you put some music in the back ground and if you say it in more style it could get you off of youtube and onto things alot bigger. and some words didnt go but very good keep it up
bamrat54321 1 year ago
dude add some beat and this shit is goneeeeeeeeeeeee
Harunoakia 1 year ago
Yeah I agree, this is beautiful. Keep getting better and strive to be unique.
TheCollinShow 1 year ago
Not bad at all, deep man.
Keep up with this.
Kamikaz3Cak3 1 year ago
That's really really good, i mean half of the music videos nowadays don't put in as much work and idea into it. Keep the good job up
XTVC 1 year ago
honestly, thats beautiful.
just4laughs76 1 year ago
This has been flagged as spam show
I can't take you seriously in that shirt.
mtml0h392 1 year ago
Dope shit man but if you ask me a few of the words didn't really flow.
FreshdanceAboy 1 year ago
Fuckin' A+
soccersweetheart13 1 year ago
Shit was epic dude, deep stuff. Keep it up!
XOptimusGrimeX 1 year ago