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  • Wow... I saw your comment asking people to check you out, and honestly, I went to your channel expecting some wasted clicks, and my expectations couldn't have been further off. This was pretty amazing stuff, and when you said "bitches" for the first time, it sent shivers down my (a guy who cusses a lot) spine, which really shows the power and intensity in this... Good job. Keep it up.

  • wow! Bro, your poetry brought tears to my eyes. Very deep and meaningful. Aaaand, a VERY powerful message that kids need to hear.

    You've got talent and it blows my mind that your only 19. Your years ahead of your time. Wise beyond your years. Just simply amazing. Don't ever stop.

  • This is pretty amazing !!!

  • dope

  • you are dope as fuck, enough said. subscribing now and posting on my facebook wall.

  • hey man

    I loved this, keep up the high standard!

  • yo both of these is good i'm glad i saw these

  • Daaaaaaaang, keep this up. [:

    I'm sure you're going to be able to get into Def. Poetry Jams.

    Dude, You're hella good. I was just watching them vidss`, and I saw your comment.

    Dopeass! [:

  • you are obviously talented

  • well done. well done.

  • you introduced me to a beautiful art, Mr. Johnson.

  • Man, I just started watching some def poetry jams... this is maybe the 5th or 6th poem, and you've just gotten me hooked, aside from the fact that you just renewed my faith in men.

    thanks man, so much respect :)

  • I watched both your videos and they are great, and I can tell you draw a lot of inspiration from your mom. Lol. Remind me of my stepdad. But in any case, I would like to challenge you to do something more than write about woman and the struggles they face and the inequality of our (men's) treatment of them. I would challenge you to write about other things that you see. Cuz you are talented, there is no doubting that, but I would like to see you're versatility come out

  • Great job brother! Keep it up and stay hungry... From a poet to another. You will do fine (just stay hungry). Peace

  • ur dope kidd. sikk poetry ill be sure to buy your first songs when they hit itunes, keep at what your doin

  • dude this is really good

  • talib on def jam poetry brought me here. Got to say i was surprised I expected this to be something weak. you got some talent keep it up

  • This is pretty good hun, but I have to be honest when I say that you are going to need something a little better if you want to make it in a poetry slam.

    I am not really into the rhymes either.

    Good job though!

  • That was awesome. I think you should watch this back and figure out how to deliver it a little more surely, cause I don't think you had it completely memorized, and there were some distracting pauses, but honestly it didn't bother me much cause this is really good.

  • @thomasman200 Do you even understand the message of this? No, it is not a freestyle. This is a poem. This is what Hip-Hop, Rap, RnB,,, and even music is, at its base. Written verse, meant to speak a message of truth.I don't even know why I'm writing this. Especially if you're ignorant enough to write such a hateful comment, on a video that speaks honesty, and nothing but niceness.

    Brian Roberts, do your thing man. This was crazy good, and a great message AND delivery! Keep on doing your thing

  • This is really good. Fuck these wanna' be's that'll never grow balls enough to express themselves through written word. I thought you sent a powerful message. Props and good luck to you friend.

  • This is beautiful.

  • Your really good(:

  • that was awesome man. some powerful truths to that poem

  • truth b told it was a decent poem but i believe it couldve been better, no i am not a professional or a subject matter expert but jus thought since u asked i would give my OPINION, but keep workin hard bro i kno it will pay off someday

  • This is a pretty solid piece. Keep up the good work!

  • @techno3939 I kno that's how I got here too but he wasn't trying to get on def poetry jam. Granted your entitled to your own opinion but telling him he's not good enough? There's been some real trash people poetry jam he could've gotten on if it was still on the air you know what forget it lol

  • Not to be disrespectful mate but... that isnt nearly good enough to get you on def poetry jam, i know poets who are better than that are there just teenagers, maybe you should work on it a bit more

  • @techno3939 def poetry jams been off the air for 4 years and who are you to assassinate someone else's art let's see some of your talent

  • @LogicThEncrypter Thats where i found this guy, he commented asking to get on the show and wanted views, just giving my opinion, hes brave to upload it and all... but im just being honest he isnt that good, and i be happy to send you some of my "talent"

  • Dope and a good message bro start posting your comment on more intellectual pages unlike Kanye. Post your comment on a Talib video or someone else who gives a message

  • nice poem, respect

  • @ETnumber1FAN yea but i think he just needs some practice its a really good poem

  • Find someone to make your poetry into music, BJR.

  • @ETnumber1FAN i was just bout to say he had his style

  • Nice poem.

  • very gooooooooood

  • keep it up cuz, positivity , respect. power.

  • dude, have you tried RAPPING your really good!! all you need is to take a beat

    then say those lyrics in a flow

    that the beat is in.

    and i garentee that youll be REALLY good

    and not only that but lyrically also!!

  • that was really good.

    rap that with a half decent beat, and you're the next star.

  • that was really good.

    rap that with a half decent beat, and you're the next star.

  • very smooth man, something about you reminds me of immortal technique...

  • HOLY FUCK! WOW! get a good rapper and a good beat and BOOM! Great song!

  • BEAST HERES A VIEW

  • k this is not rap it just riming if u wanna come bigger than lil wayne thanmake a real song

  • @badboy99987 Hey bud...RAP=RHYMING. Just because he doesn't have a $20,000 beat next to his rap doesn't mean he isn't as good as Lil wayne.

  • really nice, keep it up

  • awesome dude!

  • Yeah man no worries just keep practicing as a fellow artist I know its difficult just takes a shit load of practice inspiration friends and mentors practice makes perfect.

  • This is amazing. & You're brilliant.

  • That means nothing to me. Just like a women.

  • @Boobr whats wrong with you...

  • @FreshdanceAboy Why? Cuz i'm not a bitches fan? C'mon. Dave Chappelle said nice thing about that: "Chivalry is dead - and women killed it".

  • @Boobr Go learn respect please.

  • this is the dopest sh' I've seen in a while man this young gentleman is keeping it real thumbs up if you agree

  • Love. It.

    Please make more - you're so inspired.

  • @thomasman200 if you didnt see some meaning inside that then your the retard. i got 3 words for you buddy: dont hate. appreciate.

  • As a woman this means a lot . Keep it up, this is deep stuff man : D

  • this was the most fucking amazing thing i've heard in my entire life... lol i thought you were just gonna be some random rapper trying to spam when i saw your comment on cudi's video, but this is fuckin dope man, big props, i hope to see more in the future. and hey if you dont mind, it'd be awesome if you could check out some of my band's stuff? look up "tropian- night"

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  • I WANT FUCKING MORE!!! You WILL make more poems and post them on youtube. i am your new subscriber

  • really amazing!! loveddd it! subscribedd! add more vids and i will watch!!!! but if you wanna be in the rap business you may wanna change your beats up..but its amazingg! upload more!

  • Nice, I hope that you will accomplish your dreams!

  • hey, im nicole and im a published author and have been published three times for poetry and i have to say we write about alot of the same things i get published through a school program and your amazing keep it up i gotta say your good! keep up the flow and keep keeping it real i guess haha amazing!

  • dopeeee

  • this is pretty good if you put some music in the back ground and if you say it in more style it could get you off of youtube and onto things alot bigger. and some words didnt go but very good keep it up

  • this is pretty good if you put some music in the back ground and if you say it in more style it could get you off of youtube and onto things alot bigger. and some words didnt go but very good keep it up

  • this is pretty good if you put some music in the back ground and if you say it in more style it could get you off of youtube and onto things alot bigger. and some words didnt go but very good keep it up

  • dude add some beat and this shit is goneeeeeeeeeeeee

  • Yeah I agree, this is beautiful. Keep getting better and strive to be unique.

  • Not bad at all, deep man.

    Keep up with this.

  • That's really really good, i mean half of the music videos nowadays don't put in as much work and idea into it. Keep the good job up

  • honestly, thats beautiful.

  • Dope shit man but if you ask me a few of the words didn't really flow.

  • Fuckin' A+

  • Shit was epic dude, deep stuff. Keep it up!

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