This is really beautiful and I can relate so much. I was that girl and I'm trying hard to grow and not be her anymore. Although I think she'll always be a very small part of me. Thanks for sharing anyway, I really liked it.
Hi...I'm sorry I just saw this comment now! Yes, the words are on my blog in a post from a long time ago (this isn't a new poem, I just never "performed" it before). The title of the blog post where you can find it is"To the Girl". It's from last year sometime I believe.
amazing :')
theusedbert24 7 months ago
This poem is me how did you stop having those feelings
TomeBoy09 11 months ago
this should be a song
thejahoflife 1 year ago
Very moving.
yowee1234 1 year ago
This is really beautiful and I can relate so much. I was that girl and I'm trying hard to grow and not be her anymore. Although I think she'll always be a very small part of me. Thanks for sharing anyway, I really liked it.
TheWings2fly 1 year ago
This is incredibly moving. Amazing and makes me want to hug you..... thank you so much for sharing this.
HowBadDoiWantThis 2 years ago
thank you
XxAlicexXxJasperxX 2 years ago
This poem made me smile. Its very moving. You have a gift with words...
KaylaJoStar 2 years ago
Thank you.
TIBS2006 2 years ago
you look so beautiful with that dress x x x
WaterDreaminOphelia 2 years ago
Awesome, and so comforting to hear xx
weareneveralone 2 years ago
Wow, Arielle, I love your poem. It's so impressing, moving and true.
Thanks by the way for your friendship invite.
You are a very lovely, beautiful and strong girl with a cute name- I am sooo crazy about The little mermaid ;) .
Big hugs and thanks for sharing this,
Judith
crazymadonna 2 years ago
amazing...:-)
mette1983 2 years ago
I was very moved by your poem. Beautifully written and powerful. Thanks for sharing your message. ~Kimberly
goforyourdream 2 years ago
amazing...
really
thanks
vja24 2 years ago
That is absolutely amazingly beautiful. xoxo
kuki1308 2 years ago
arielle... so much depth, beauty and feeing xoxo
Sia118 2 years ago
i want a copy of this. you brilliant writer you.
w1shin0nstars 2 years ago
this is so powerful.
are the words to this poem on your blogsite somewhere? i want to keep them....
onedayonedayoneday 2 years ago
Hi...I'm sorry I just saw this comment now! Yes, the words are on my blog in a post from a long time ago (this isn't a new poem, I just never "performed" it before). The title of the blog post where you can find it is"To the Girl". It's from last year sometime I believe.
arielleleebair 2 years ago
that was really good it brought tears to my eyes
monkeysinabarral 2 years ago
Thank you so much... all your words started my day off right. It's 7:45 AM right now and I'm glad I checked here. Thanks again... <3
arielleleebair 2 years ago
Arielle you certinaly have a way with words!
lilkel86 2 years ago
omigosh... you've brought tears to my eyes...
this is POWERFUL. you're a brilliant writer, sweetie.
Stephitza 2 years ago
My instinct is to be like "Marry me, Arielle." only...i know at least 4 people who might object to that! so. love. you're radiant. :) xxoxo
rashedly 2 years ago