the voice to instrument loudness ratio is too large at the beginning.
audio echo too heavy. use digital echo canceller.
or u can get help from anti-reverberation tools
few frame of video at the beginning having lagging effect. song presenting but the video stop for few miliseconds. it might cause by the video composing tools. or the limitation processing power of the pc.
for the audio part. you need better arrangement. Its presenting noise. use a analysis filter to identify the noise frequency response of your room or studio before recording. that will make your able to filter the noise after recording.
furthermore, if you using sonar, cakewalk or any song arranging applications.
that time we are rushing it to use inside our presentation, so we had not much time to done it more perfectly, and also we are lacked of pro skills ...
coz' i transpose from C major to Eb major in Chorus in original, then in this version i transpose to Bb major coz' my vocal can't sing C major ^.^ interested in doing a cover for this song?
but because of ur singing is covering too much of the music...make me feel tat the whole song is weird...t
abt the video...
story background is good, but i think not suitable wit the song n its lyrics...
another thing, u may add some effect into the video...example: when the girl is thinking of their past,im suggest u put the black n white effect, to show it is the history...
hey....i think dats nice..the MV, stil hv room 2 improve but overall, good!agree, care ur pitch, wil be better 1..gambateh ya!! btw, the song is nice too!:)
yeap, this indeed was one of my favourite song from your collection! i simply love the MV, it's really very nice, rather touching too... but but but, cameraman doing too much zooming in and out, looks a bit not so professional. another thing is that perhaps adding the lyrics in to the MV would be good too? so that people could actually sing along if they want to... that's just my point of view... but it's really a job well done! gambatte ne! ;)
好好听哦!!!!!^^
pinkstarflower 1 year ago
Xcuse me..? U called this a Music Video? =.=
Refer and study more MVs next time....
2745moonsault 2 years ago
huh?
if not called Music Video, what should we call it?
mahweigiap 2 years ago
O..O
leonghoeWorkshop 2 years ago
Is more like a recording video between frens..those video clip recorded n keep at home for fun purpose =.=
not to spoil your mood, just the story, shooting and editin of this music video, makes it looks like not a music video..
You should refer more MV and learn the proper way to shoots MV, since u're song composer and singer..
Gd luck..
2745moonsault 2 years ago
oic...^.^
You actually look from commercial perspective..lol...
what we do is really for fun>.^ XD
any ideas for improvement?
mahweigiap 2 years ago
@2745moonsault
with limited resource... that the good things cn come out edi.
keivch84 7 months ago
O..O
leonghoeWorkshop 2 years ago
^.^
mahweigiap 2 years ago
O..O
nahnaruto 2 years ago
^.^ hihi Thx
mahweigiap 2 years ago
this mv is nice...although i didnt really understand the song...but nice thou...
yogy 2 years ago
THX XD GLAD YOU LIKE IT HIHI
mahweigiap 2 years ago
tis song is nice...
i am kampar utarian oso..
caryn89 2 years ago
Thanks for watching this MV and love this song XD
mahweigiap 2 years ago
argh, forgot to ask.
sorry i cant remember.
you are ?
how do we get know each other?
I got ur link from friendster which i have not logged in for 3 months!
jarodwalker 3 years ago
I am Mah Wei Giap,
err. i donno how we get to know each other....
hmm.....people people help forward this link ? i think
mahweigiap 3 years ago
u are in my friendster friend list :| ?
i get this link from ur friendster msg.
jarodwalker 3 years ago
anyway,
haha, nice to meet you :)
mahweigiap 3 years ago
the voice to instrument loudness ratio is too large at the beginning.
audio echo too heavy. use digital echo canceller.
or u can get help from anti-reverberation tools
few frame of video at the beginning having lagging effect. song presenting but the video stop for few miliseconds. it might cause by the video composing tools. or the limitation processing power of the pc.
but overall. its a really very good try.
looking forward for ur future works.
cheer!
jarodwalker 3 years ago
ops sorry, i am not professional.
just my personal advice :)
dun take it serious.
i am just an R&D engineer and programmer.
good luck!
jarodwalker 3 years ago
XD
I'm just a student ...lol
mahweigiap 3 years ago
so sorry, our skills are not up to standard
mahweigiap 3 years ago
for the audio part. you need better arrangement. Its presenting noise. use a analysis filter to identify the noise frequency response of your room or studio before recording. that will make your able to filter the noise after recording.
furthermore, if you using sonar, cakewalk or any song arranging applications.
Try to make voice track more than 1.
that will bring effect of enriching ur voice.
jarodwalker 3 years ago
my mic has very high self noise,this one haven't learn yet how to filter the noise.
mahweigiap 3 years ago
Hi, sorry I am late for the video. Jarod' here.
Your first try ? not bad.
here goes the comments for improvement ?
use more video development and editing tools:
sony vegas, adobe after effect. and etc.
it will be great if your camera are running stable. shaking camera effect needs a very high capture capability camera to make it good.
jarodwalker 3 years ago
thanks :)
that time we are rushing it to use inside our presentation, so we had not much time to done it more perfectly, and also we are lacked of pro skills ...
mahweigiap 3 years ago
很好听。。
wing111 3 years ago
非常谢谢您的聆听及观看:) ^.^
mahweigiap 3 years ago
i hav to learn from u a lot...
hehe...
by the way, i caught the chord alread..
but it is difficult for a guitar to play..
piano still ok...
haha...
maydayjay 3 years ago
lol..^.^
mahweigiap 3 years ago
ok... nvm.. i catched the chord alread.. quite difficult for guitar to play it..
maydayjay 3 years ago
coz' i transpose from C major to Eb major in Chorus in original, then in this version i transpose to Bb major coz' my vocal can't sing C major ^.^ interested in doing a cover for this song?
mahweigiap 3 years ago
yup.. think so...
i caught Bb also.. shift to C#..
rite??
will u mind of it??
maydayjay 3 years ago
or chords for tis song??
maydayjay 3 years ago
yeap also ^.^
mahweigiap 3 years ago
is there any instrumental version of tis song??
maydayjay 3 years ago
yeap ^.^
mahweigiap 3 years ago
gd job, wei ye...
but i wan to say something...
the music is nice,
but because of ur singing is covering too much of the music...make me feel tat the whole song is weird...t
abt the video...
story background is good, but i think not suitable wit the song n its lyrics...
another thing, u may add some effect into the video...example: when the girl is thinking of their past,im suggest u put the black n white effect, to show it is the history...
however, gd job
~sE@Ng~
cys6790 3 years ago
Thanks a lot for dropping by a comment ^.^
Yeah, this is the very very first raw work, still have tons of things to improve.
mahweigiap 3 years ago
forgot to give comment last time.
well done....Just that the resolution is not sharp enough....macam oldies MV.....1950~~..haha
gaiusyeong 3 years ago
lol, W******* M***** video is like that, not sharp enough, convert to flash format lagi teruk...the original resolution is very fine one
mahweigiap 3 years ago
Nice song, keep up the good effort!
hardwhizkid 3 years ago
thanks ^.^
mahweigiap 3 years ago
is ur cam problems.
hueibin9016 3 years ago
haha....maybe...u can try
hueibin9016 3 years ago
im not good in singing.
bt help u in wad sense.
hueibin9016 3 years ago
in listening sense, ear QC, if can pass your ears, sure can pass other audience ears ^^hihi
mahweigiap 3 years ago
well, the song and lyric is good.
its juz techinical problem
hueibin9016 3 years ago
I will kambateh de
mahweigiap 3 years ago
lower your key to sing.
wad i heard is suffocation.
like gonna died like tat.
im worry thru the whole song when u re gonna blow.
audience comes 1st.
do rmb
hueibin9016 3 years ago
XD great comment
mahweigiap 3 years ago
and ur vocal abit over pitch .
abit wrong rythem.
hueibin9016 3 years ago
its rhythm..XD
yeah, still have a lot to improve, maybe you can help me ^.^
mahweigiap 3 years ago
u should find me for directing your mv=]
hueibin9016 3 years ago
you din say how i know wor? hihi
mahweigiap 3 years ago
the song was ok.
i quite like the mv. the way it was filmed and edited.
samanthatanannyen 3 years ago
thanks for viewing..
Please help us promote ^.^
mahweigiap 3 years ago
hey....i think dats nice..the MV, stil hv room 2 improve but overall, good!agree, care ur pitch, wil be better 1..gambateh ya!! btw, the song is nice too!:)
jureen1213 3 years ago
haha....have to work hard to learn vocal XD
Thanks a lot
mahweigiap 3 years ago
the song is very nice ..
keep it up...
but, technique of singing, should improve a bit ...
nennengirl 3 years ago
haha, thx a lot.
mahweigiap 3 years ago
hey my friend, this is girl's key, why you need to torture your voice like that?
qiaozi89 3 years ago
cannot say tortune, just training it...lol... still too amateur to sing high key
mahweigiap 3 years ago
wah, your sound not bad oh..
can sing..
happy7078 3 years ago 4
wow thx thx ^^ I will kambateh de~~
mahweigiap 3 years ago
great..perhaps pitch prob~
kawaiibubu 3 years ago
no pro enough yet...lol..thanks
mahweigiap 3 years ago
nice song, but you should ask ppl to sing, your pitch are not in pitch, train your pitch, dude.
davecheok 3 years ago
lol...very pitchy...
mahweigiap 3 years ago
yeap, this indeed was one of my favourite song from your collection! i simply love the MV, it's really very nice, rather touching too... but but but, cameraman doing too much zooming in and out, looks a bit not so professional. another thing is that perhaps adding the lyrics in to the MV would be good too? so that people could actually sing along if they want to... that's just my point of view... but it's really a job well done! gambatte ne! ;)
fangzy 3 years ago
cameraman is first time on duty... XD
Thanks for the suggestion ^.^
mahweigiap 3 years ago
It's good...perfect sound^^
jayent1990 3 years ago
Thx Thx Thx ^^
mahweigiap 3 years ago
all d BEST ya^^
mingfeea 3 years ago
Thanks^.^
mahweigiap 3 years ago
nice..lolx
langlang0105 3 years ago
lolx....XD...Thx ^^
mahweigiap 3 years ago
help to hit the views to 300 xD
jfhkl 3 years ago
kakakakakakaka!!!!!!
MrTianWei 3 years ago
wawakaka........lol
mahweigiap 3 years ago
hmm... not bad ar~
kennytyy 3 years ago
really? Thanks ^.^ hihi
mahweigiap 3 years ago
pretty good for a very 1st video..nice view though. keep up the great job!
swIImfan 3 years ago 2
thank you very much, hope you enjoy it ^.^
mahweigiap 3 years ago
utar production, must support !!!
keivch84 3 years ago 4
utar student production, not utar...lol
mahweigiap 3 years ago
still can be improved =D
4SA4 3 years ago 2
Thx a lot ^.^ We will continue to do our best ~~
mahweigiap 3 years ago
haha..let us flood here xD
jfhkl 3 years ago 2
need to add more "water" to flood XD
mahweigiap 3 years ago
not bad...
but still can be improved xD
jfhkl 3 years ago
haha, sure! with your help ^.^
mahweigiap 3 years ago