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From: poeticstarlet94
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  • Oh my days, I've just listened to your poem, and it moved me so. That it came from such a young mind staggers me beyond words. I feel so proud and honoured to know you, a truly beautiful, powerful, honourable, proud and amazing young black woman.

    @stevearfa

  • @steveb1972 Thank you soooooooo much!!!! I really appreciate all of your support and encouragement...pushes me to keep writing!

  • Omg I lovee this!!! Great Job! I'm competing in a pageant and I wanna recite your poem for my talent. Send me you Info so I can give Credit where Credit is Due!

  • @KeonnaLeshai Oh my goodness! That is so coincidental! I won a pageant in '09 and I used one of my poems for my talent! Of course you may use this one. I will send you a message with my info. Best wishes with the pageant!

  • ooooooooh! wow, the word associations, placement, and overall delivery was nice. Not as much emotional, so the tone was proper. Has a very rooted and spiritual feel. I like how you initiated with inquiries....sorta got the engine running pretty smoothly; lol @ krazy with a k to lace it with a hint of ebonics.

  • @Omega8557 Thank you!

  • marry me please!!

  • @SuckkerFree215 Lolx!!! Thanks...I think?? ;)

  • Simple answer: Your skin contains alot of Melanin :D

  • Very interesting.

    We're all different, yet very similar on the inside.

    Mitochondrial Eve was from Africa (200,000 years ago), safe to say that "she" (more than one female) was probably black if she lived near the equator.

    She's is EVERYONE'S mother, even white racists (who wouldn't acknowledge their lineage) whose ancestors moved farther away from the equator and lost skin pigmentation.

  • 5 Stars!

  • Thank you!

  • thats awesome!

  • DUDE!!!!!!!

  • Lolx...yessss?? Are you talking about how many freakin' views this thing got?!?! I KNOW!!! AHHHMAZING! :D

  • Great job! Your poetry is wonderful. I'll be sharing this with others

  • i randomly clicked on this, a good decision, 5 stars.

  • i'm glad i took the time to watch this/ i really liked this one

  • Thank you! I appreciate it! ;]

  • Very nice, keep up the good work Angel!

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