You Can Have My Heart (In Case Yours Ever Breaks) (original)

[makinmesmile96]

u look like Spencer from Pretty Little Liars lol which is a good thing she's pretty

[KevDogg1993]

why do people like justin bieber get to be famous millionairs by putting songs on youtube and you don't?

[lilamy476]

om i loe it 

[shakeitbrishakeit]

Girl, I just happened to come across your page, today and started going through some of your songs. A couple years I started listening to you for a while after hearing "Incapable." I love your music!

[cassena1]

awesom song go gurlie u r good keep at it great title n voice

[BlueTreble]

I read the title of your song and had to check out your video. Awesome title. Best wishes to you.

CJ

[JessiiMayyy]

i wish i could write songs and sing like this. I loved it. (: xoxox

[deculiacanalasierra]

great song im like

[BloodOrchidMoon]

good song. great voice. once you get it perfected it'll be a great song. shane

[holesa]

I love it, heaps cute too when you do the ops... haha

[Iris737]

What a sweet song...its a beautiful love song.. :)

[brenzieandkenziebffs]

perfect that bridge and you have one amazing song right there.:)

[9raycheng]

good beat.. it flows really nice... but only one thing the chorus part... when you sing "let you down..... , i think it sounds scary, sorry it's just my opinion, you may try another improve...and for the sloppy part, i think you don't need it, but it's up to you... ok that's what i could tell about your song.. but overall is a nice song.. i like it... good job

[eblp4life]

Haha, I love that you mouthed the word "Wow." after the bridge. Love it.

Dig.

[oilpride]

Great work again Katelyn!

[Subby3344]

This song is awesome, keep up the good work. Love your voice

[nosepuede133]

me gusta la cancion cantas muy bien

[iternally]

love d guitar playin bt d singin was totali of key.....

[tjayJBfan]

how would you know....? she wrote the damn song....

[freeing61]

love this song, it's great!

[sparrowclip]

Green grass for Katelyn wherever she is strolling about on Easter Day.

[DiseasedGandalf1]

i can hear this on the radio, not bad

[frozen1black1rain]

I was like yay! she can play but then she started to sing and i was like.....what?

[ARiceFan17]

excellent song. I love the lyrics. The title is amazing. that is so creative and so love songish. anyway, no suggestions for the bridge, but you will figure it out. You are talented enough, to do anything. Thanks and god bless.

[buentrip]

I personally believe this is not a bad a song at all.....the problem that might have surfaced and the reason maybe some people might feel this wasnt as good is mainly because of the poor recording....the guitar is too loud, hence your voice tries to be even louder......i really would enjoy this song but only if you re record it and adjust the volume to your instruments and voice so it can come out desirable in the rest of the computers in the world.....

[AffairWthGravity]

ouch

[HerbertFroehler]

Cool Song!

Regards

Herbert

[CKBBontabeachbum]

---nice---

[ezza0ezza]

you really do have an incredible amount of talent. I can't wait till you have an album out and I can buy it. =)

[Vreci]

Great!

Thanks for sharing,

wolfgang

[ResearchX]

Great song. I love it. You are going places.

[alexlovesyou11]

that was awesome!

[edb3002710]

You have a lot of talent and potential....5 Stars

[ElGoodo]

Nothing wrong with cheesy love songs! Or as the master says it "Some people wanna fill the world with silly love songs, what's wrong with that, I'd like to know."

Anyways haha great job! I love the title! Title's are really important in the digital age, it's what made me wanna hear the song! The melody is nice and the voice is great!

Check out my cheesy love song "I Want To Be The One" if you have some time :)

[LykeWhatsUp]

All I have to say is. <3

[Gezster]

its gonna be good.. its gonna be good..its gonna be good..

[francofong]

love ur voice

[jasonleblanc]

love this song good work

[dwej]

this song is amazing your such a good writer and a awesome singer

[moristar1101]

It's hard for me to say, that this song is something extraordinal, but I like so much you guitar here. This rhythm drives me :) I want to dance! :)

[MirageFayt]

Girl I LOVE THIS SONG!!! It is awesome!!!!

[Shadowslight07]

Everything you sing makes me give u 5 stars.. you're amazing. You should have adeal already!

[xocrystalox99]

this song... is amazing.

[elmarciano18]

,\m/  ieaaaa

[springyair]

Yoyo...

[blueketon]

u kick ass

[JSNOW74]

You just keep getting better and better... That is a really good song.

[mirakanaan]

haha i didnt notice the "waste" at first, but yeah, i imagined it after i realized... =S

love the chorus!

[lilmccleaner]

Awesome song. You need a record deal. I'm surprised nobody has offered you a label!!!!!!!

[LisaNova]

Great job, lady!

-Lisa

[musicallsoull]

omg this is soo good. 

i love it :)

[musicon1110]

K -- I meant what I said, you are such an inspiration.

You're made of awesome.

All my love to you!

[nolongerconfuzed]

4. Bridge would be easier if you let the music drive to it - let it build up to the point where you can really express what the bridge is trying to say, and if the music is driving harder at that point, it will be easier to get away with the lack of word flow...

BTW, your voice is as beautiful as ever. :-)

[nolongerconfuzed]

Hey girl, great to see you writing more songs! I know this is a very raw cut - so with that in mind I think this song has great potential.

1. The chorus is great.

2. Right arnd the 2nd verse it was obvious you were getting comfortable with the sng, as it started to flow better.

3. The 1st verse was a little timid...maybe a longer intro is needed to "feel" the song ... maybe even rearranging some of the words or amount of consonants..

[KaroSylvarwick]

"You wrap your arms around my waste

And hold on tight"

I'm sure what you really mean is "waist" but when I read that line it made me laugh really hard from what I imagined hahahaha. xD

Either way, I love the lyrics. =] Thanks for sharing!

[bernie1111]

HAHA i saw that too! never let go of my waste...

[Nigelcf]

Great song 5 stars :=>

[sabafa8Pd8]

BRIDGE Every time you meet my eyes My heart leaps with joy Blood rushes my face When I hear your voice And I know why... i'm gonna love you till the end of time BRIDGE4U2PONDERover410 Every time you meet my eyes They cause my heart to leap with joy Blood rushes to my face and to other areas I'll deny Then your voice trips my emotions straight to oh boy And that is why I'm gonna love you till the end of time

[ryan0714]

sooooo when is our wedding date set for? :D

[miguelerz]

yay nice song:))

[sixstringseraph]

very rough one, i want to hear the more polished final version (which i hope you do post soon) :D

suggestions:

i think a few transitions will help a lot with the song, specially the bridge.

a change in strumming for the chorus? more continuous maybe?

and maybe a C# B for the last bridge line so it goes naturally to the A of the chorus. :D

[MooseOfReason]

Noticed you smile and chuckle at parts. Nice to see you're having as good a time as we are.

[realmclennyd]

you have a beautiful voice and you sing like an angel . I think your video is wonderful and I thank you for singing it . You can have my heart ( in case yours ever break) is a beautiful song and your wonderful voice and beautiful music complements the song beautifully .

[tonjesml]

yum. Put out a CD already!

<3

[iiltoxic]

i dig it katelyn