My Cinderella:A Patrick Story [Chapter One]

[spectacularboo21]

Damn Pat and his bros. are so freaking mean like DAMN

[alexus1390]

omg!! wow!! pat n hes bros r mean as heck[[not carnell tho]] i woodve been punched him in da face 2 teach him a lesson lol!! jk jk lol!! but wow!! pat bry n kelly r bullies.. i remember i had dat exact same problem dat u had on here n i fed up wit fightin n arguin dat i jus let it slide n move on wit my life wiser choic huh?? yeaa i kno haha!! but ne ways great ass story i wanna kno more plzz

[ILOVEHF901]

Wow Keep

Going

=]

♥

[notyouraverage18]

yo im in lov wit the last song

i listen to that song all the time wooot woot lolz

[CillaGirl94]

tht was hella good

5 stars

[myzippy2]

ppl always stop these at the good parts

[Ulukau808]

wats the second song called...after the intro?

[Kulkat98]

Be With Me-J.Holiday

[Ulukau808]

thank you:D

[Ulukau808]

omg Patrick is such a meanie to me lol..ugh i can't believe they bet if they can hit my head with a rock buh i was rollin on that part lol..how dare he fling a rubberband at my butt lol..ooh Edgar sounds cute lol...i can't wait for the next one. I loved it.:D

[Kulkat98]

trust me he is cuz da guy im decrbin der is my crush

[Ulukau808]

Ooo lol

[RoshonFeganGal15]

wat i zda song @ da beginnin???

[Kulkat98]

So Pretty By B5

[bryanlover4life0786]

b5 so pretty

[hiuty1]

omg i absoloutely loved it

[cRaZiGiRl2012]

girl that was good

[neabooB5]

grrr..i was really gettin into that;]

hahaha im a mean girl:]yippie

5*

[jasmy13]

MAn I was so absorbed in the story i didnt relize it was about 2 be over 'til it said 2 be continued hmmp U better hurry up with the next part (if u dont mind)

[quietchick36]

luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuvvvvvvvvvv­eeeeeeeed it lol

[ThAK1dDiN3rdB1z]

THAT WAS SO GOOD I CANT WAIT TILL PART2

[angelluv8]

wow this is amazing cant wait for tha next part