The only kind of constructive criticism I have is possibly work on the anatomy structure of your heads.(i.e. heads much larger or bulk out past the shoulder lines[example at 22 seconds]) If that was intentional..then just ignore me. And also your hand structure may need slight work. Please don't take offensive to this. I am a manga drawer as well and I appreciate when people give me criticism so my apologies if you do not appreciate it.
I know what you mean, you are right! What do you know about the way to sit on the chair.. (sorry, my bad english..) But I sit wrong. When I sit right, the head is optional to the body:) I realizied it to late, now I make it better. I make a new manga story "dreamguardian amande" and I hope you can see that I try to make it better :) I dont like this comic anymore. Thanks for your comment, it helped me :)
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shaoran1993 2 years ago
Most of us here are boys who watch this....I know I am lol
Animelord111 3 years ago
good job^^ 5/5
harvestmooncute6 3 years ago
You should really contuie this one. I really like it.
kuurocks 3 years ago
Awesome!
vampiresroxmysox 3 years ago
wow.....
TarcisioOldMan42 3 years ago
Hey! You did an awesome job here! Keep the good work!
roots4ever 3 years ago
Nice comic. ^_^ 5/5 stars.
Usagi0911 3 years ago
i love your english!!!
its so cute~!
goodbyedaze 3 years ago
Very cute, I like your drawing style. :)
The only kind of constructive criticism I have is possibly work on the anatomy structure of your heads.(i.e. heads much larger or bulk out past the shoulder lines[example at 22 seconds]) If that was intentional..then just ignore me. And also your hand structure may need slight work. Please don't take offensive to this. I am a manga drawer as well and I appreciate when people give me criticism so my apologies if you do not appreciate it.
TheKidYouDontLike 3 years ago
I know what you mean, you are right! What do you know about the way to sit on the chair.. (sorry, my bad english..) But I sit wrong. When I sit right, the head is optional to the body:) I realizied it to late, now I make it better. I make a new manga story "dreamguardian amande" and I hope you can see that I try to make it better :) I dont like this comic anymore. Thanks for your comment, it helped me :)
Paccu666 3 years ago
your a pretty good drawer!
You should post this up somewhere like deviantart or fanart-central!
DeathGrant 4 years ago
I liked the way you did the dialogue, and the story is cute. Kury is smexy, too! XD
loptkitty 4 years ago
wow thank you for your lovely comment :) I am so happy! Really: thank you!! *kiss* ^.^
Paccu666 4 years ago