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  • Why are we all trying to rap? it is not very good compared to eminem:D

  • ya all you see i lost my mom and dad when i was 2 my bro looked after me i got into a gan takng all my anger out in school one day i found my brother diead in my living room ever since this day ill be hunting you i was though so much my step mo and dad where always on the move mommy moved daddy had a job to keep to but food on the table for you and him self eveynight i cry my self alseep i dream of my life as my deam i take a i pill ya bet i will i rap about i like that beat kkkk keep it real!

  • 2 People don't know how where the 'like' button is

  • So why do straight people dislike gay people so much.?

  • attention everbody writing lyrics-Your lyrics are pretty good, but you still can't outrap eminem!(thumbs up if you agree, and eminem is the best rapper ever)

  • BREAK THAT BIRDYS NECK

  • when we younger we use to teach, not, preach i lost 3 ppl i would give my life for wakeing up every morening wondering would this be my last did alot of things in the past but i just look foward live life like there was not tommrow my moms my world i would never ask for nothing less shes the best oh yes. im proud to say ill kill anyone that ever touches her freedom of speach is what i speack i almost made a song dissing one of my freinds but that would of made us ememys:Thats all i have

  • life is perfection but i cannot change my past

    i wake up every morning thinking could dis be my last

    within four months i'm about to be daddy to my little girl (Layla Aaliyah Hearn)

    imma be a better father i will do anything for my little baby girl

    make sure she will be alright cuz layla you are my world

    when i felt you kickin' inside of ya moms belly i knew that i would be proud

    when the day u enter the world i will be so proud

    life is a blessin' to have you people say i might b to yung

  • Eminem Wait you in Albania !!!

  • baby i know you miss mommy and daddy and you miss uncle stanly and manny but u gotta understand life was at steak he probaly looking down at u eating ur birthday cake you do understand why there burned down ur house and all we found in the house was mommies blouse he didnt mean to run over ur bike and destory ur princess kite he wasnt always greddy and mean it because u always make a scene baby i wished i was there when stan died but i would probaly run away and hide
  • :'( <3 so fcking beautiful.

  • i wanna rap , For my Lady, But i cant rap, PF,,,, i dont want to lose my girlfriend i love her and, i just dont wat to lose her! i dont know What i am Suppose to do now!!!

  • @921semih Let her know how much you love her bro. If she don't understand than she aint worth your time.

  • @921semih tell her you stopped buying cigarettes and spent your money on viagra to show that you actually care.

  • i just was Crying about this INstrumental i have Made trough very hard Times!!!!! And NOW IM LISTIN TO THIS! my heart Want to go out!

  • this is the wrong political shpere

    this aint no good angle of reflection

    this just aint my section

  • i have so much doubt i never am proud of myself i feel like a book on the shelf always closed and quiet my mother screamin at me while writing this but sometimes i have to accept things the way it is and sometimes all i can hear is a noisy whiz in my head i am sad enough said! bout that be a soldier better hold ya head up you gotta back up yourself you gotta break up with your faer but thats my fault, i reappear in the same way year after year i need to steer in the right direction
  • this to my mom and dad.. hear me out.. first came love then came hate why did things change what happen to faith swear things haven't been the same ever since Ive enter the game cant explain all my pain wen it rains I still remain the same I dont wanna change i tried check out this game and never hop on this train ever again, wat i did was wrong cant take it back only rap on this track hoping yall could take me back"

  • What an amazing instrumental.5 *****

  • sometimes i shake my head in disrepect at what i said they aint impressed, subliminally distressed wonderin why i even botherd to get dressed fat kid is what i used to be adressed til one day i had enough and changed my way started taking drugs day after day momma im sorry the tears and im sorry for the pain, that i caused sorry for the time i got locked up in a cell its like hell, but i know that now that im sober ill prevail never go to jail, no longer i inhale
  • @rstehko

    and im sorry all the arguments that went on

    months on end where i ignored you mom

    but the blame shouldent be down to me

    it was down to one another

    and sorry for all the times i hurt my little brother

    i regret the things i did, but i regret some things i diddnt

    i just hope you get sent to heaven in a paradise haven

  • Hey some of you guys have some pretty good lyrics.

    so y not spite em on line you know what i am talking about?

    go home get em recorded and put em on youtube.

  • everytime i see your face there is a love case i like everypart of you the top to the base So Cmon Girl Come Back and chill at my place cause your a beautiful that only the main god make so do it for my sake let me explore you top to base and lets begin the best love case And I Really Want You To See i'll be the padlock and you can be the key, i'll be the branches and you can be the tree, i'll be all the rivers and you can be the sea
  • I LOVE EMINEM BUT I WANT TO BE THE ONLY PERSON TO DISLIKE SO TAKE THIS 1 DISLIKE AND IT WAS ME :)

  • @robyndude101 go drown urself

  • THIS IS NO DOUBT THE BEST CHILL BEAT

  • if i told you i'm alive and not to worry i never died

    when you told me last night "good-bye", i'd be lying

    while i'm cryin' in this grave cuz you gave me the next day

    a reason to be leavin earth beatin' and bleedin' to death

    it hurt' so bad that i decided to commit suicide with a knife

    becuz life is not worth fightin' for i'm writin for a few more

    line's then i'm sayin my goodbye's to all the lie's,all the time's i tried to

    find the right kind's of rhyme's to write while rightin' wrongs

  • Im walkn , walkn down a road , No end and im feelin cold Need a coat might catch a cold Oh wait no body cares Pain so deep penetrates my soul , No love and they wonder why im cold I been told , Keep yo head high. Like Tupac said Real eyes realize real lies Im gonna climb to the top , even though im feelin dead inside. Even though i shed tears im alright Its me against the world Gettin hard to breath , Like the world is on my Should-ers
  • @YunG22DiZZY we shud do a rap 2gether

  • Memories cant let go , Storing them like a folder I gotta File and get my act straight Aint no body to look up to so i look up to fate How can i find peace when all i seen is hate Never seen my pops and the thought makes me shake You can judge and hate, BUt i do me and aint no shame in my game I stay game and i stay true , What to do when aint no body true Skippin school actin a foo Smoke weed not to be coo , But to ease my mind I aint done , but fo now imma cease my rhyme...
  • eminem is very good

    PEASE

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  • i remember back year when daddy had no money an momy rapped the christmas presents and stuck'em under the gum tree and said some of'em weren't from me cause daddy couldn't buy'em cause daddy felt like a bum but see daddy had a job but the job was the keep the food on the table for you an mum... (in the respect of Marshall Mathers --- best lyricist to live today! P.S If i got any lyrics wrongs sorrry)

  • @Figz05 nice man that was cool

  • 64 likes and 0 dislike good thing no one here is heartless

  • alucinante :)

    (Y)

  • I remember I used to have a friend We used to talk to the end Of the Day But one night His parents got into a fight He kept telling himself it's alright But he might Just leave But he needs his mom and dad But his dad was mad But his mom was glad He was left
  • :'( ugh

  • ight guys. if yall are serious bout rappin, ask me a few questions. been rappin since i was 4, got no videos up yet, needed a new page. hit me up. i got a small sample for this song if you dont think im for real.

  • i love this beat...badass...EMINEM is the greatest.

  • I REMEMBER BACK IN THE DAY, DAILY BEATINGS FROM MY PARENTS AS I WAS GETTIN RAISED, ME AND MY BROTHERS WOULD ROAM THE STREETS HUNGRY LIKE STRAYS, TIL ONE DAY SOCIAL SERVICES CAME AND TOOK US AWAY, TO A BETTER PLACE, I LIVED A BETTER LIFE, STILL CARRIED A KNIFE, AND THATS MY LIFE DRUGS PAIN POVERTY AN STRIFE, STILL I GOTTA STAY TIGHT, STRONG HEADED WHEN I TOUCH MICS, I'M DOIN WHAT I'M DOIN DO WAT YOU LIKE, JUST DO IT LIKE NIKE, MY PLAINES ON THE RUNWAY SOON TO BE TAKIN FLIGHT, GOOD NIGHT

  • @MrJHeede dude i just sang what you wrote and its amazing congrats on that its really good

  • @MrJHeede dis hard u came up wit dis?

  • I've been smokin for a hella long time and i mean a lot of it, But i soon question the intellagience. Of this shit i call my life, Is everything i do even worth a try. So many questions so little time, But not enough answers to put in my mind. My life is like a door, I see people and sometimes no more, Especially the ones i adore, They the ones gone, They the ones im reppin smokin drinkin and rappin fo
  • <3<3<3 I LOVE THIS MELODY <3<3<3

  • yo my life is diffrent i live far away in this place filled with pane insane people on my block . crazy dad who never gave me or my mom a chance he just gave up on usand hurt me real bad i use to never evan talk to my dad . but then he gets drunk and decides its okay to abuse me and my mom but its not its wrong

  • Grew up in this little town/ Nothing much to do about/ Never lived an average life/ Thats in fact almost despite/

    Being raised by average Joes/ Love you Ma and Dad you know/ But sometimes I wanted to grow/ And you just wouldnt let me go/

    So I spent many years/ In parking lots and parks with peers/ Selling drugs and bombing walls/ Bought a ticket out of here/

    At least I thought I did/ Until I saw these kids/

    Battling with nothing more than mics/ And suddenly I caught a drift

  • f*** mockingbird as i sit bak in my kitchen- reminising- noing people are dissing- youths going missing- my girl freind beside me kissing- my cheek- loving evry second watching her sleep- evry minet i open my eyes for a peak, just cuz i no that 1 day i will be in that grave- R.I.P on it, in memery of a yung and brave soul- fighting his way from hell- to be with the 1s he loves- Demonic-D in this keeping his head high like 10 flying white doves peace
  • @demonicd1000 this sick props

  • this isntrumental is soo fking good man

  • you gave me a mockingbird its already the 3rd you heard me it hurts wen you try to thirst me and the worst of all that ma gun burst standing tall and believe me the popo falls 1 day from monday till sunday we gone prey we need food selling yey ma hood is going down others say the roots is base ma lood is race its good to face it

  • The days i wonder/ the days i suffer

    the days i fly/ the days i hover/

    cant help me to escape,escape all the pain/ in my heart,in my soul,in my veins/ what did i do?/ why is it my fault/ im innocent but yet feel so dark/ i wish i can go back and fix our heart/instead of looking back and not being part/ are you there?/ please reply/ are you alive?/ did you die?/ hope not/ cuz i love you/ from you i need a kiss/ one with love/ one with faith/ and dont listen to the haters when they they diss.

  • i love playing this on piano <3

  • a great song

  • theres times dat i feel down n my life is feeling blue i dnt know how 2 take it i jus dnt know wut 2 do i dnt kno if 2 cry or maybe i should take it diz pain hurts me real bad i dnt if i can make it sumtimes i wanna shout i cant find my way out i guess im lost im jus gonna hav 2 take another route its da pain dat we all hav its wut life is all about

  • mix this song with my block by 2pac

  • EMIN3M IS THE BEST RAPPER

  • HELL YEAH :P

  • @scheckchef Bizzy Bone is the Best Rapper Ever!!! 2nd Immortal Technique!!!

  • @514bone Nop ;D Eminem :P

  • @scheckchef nah Eminem cant do what Bizzy or Bone thug do loool and well he selled his soul so whatever KILLUMINATI!

  • @514bone why is everything a competition??? they have their respective styles you may like one better than the other but it doesnt truly mean they are

  • need the beat sorry mama from eminem

  • "Cleaning Out My Closet" ;)

  • der beat is geil

  • Yeah, ein Deutscher!

    Ja, man, der Beat bumst alle Karrieren ^^

  • im bout get in sniper position/cant miss gotta hit wit precision/make my bullet and your head one collision/assasanation was just my vision, but now its more/leave no evidence,no body will wash up ashore/only presidents will die and fall on the floor/im walkin in and wont get pushed/startin wit washington all the way to bush/thats why i write these rhymes/to tell u what its like at the scene of the crime/thats why,i write these mean lines/but i promise its the truth/dont belive my gun is proof

  • im useing the beat for my demo

  • this beat is hard

  • its a lullaby

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