Too Many Arrows (Original)

[deathlyhallows890]

@devilishlypure Is it ok with you if I use this song as a base of a story? Because I think it would be a cool story.

[cloebaby97]

Reasons why I love you have increased. Why? Why you ask? Because you have an Across The Universe poster. :D

I love this song ^__^

[Nalaqueen4566]

This song reminds me of the book "it's kind of a funny story" because the kid in it calls his problems his 'tentacles' and when you said 'he's one of my arrows' it just reminded me of it. I liked the song immensly.

[theaveragedream]

Same here!

[Nalaqueen4566]

crazzzzzyyyyyyyy

[13Potter42]

That's a really good book. When I first heard this song it made me think of that as well.

[Videoboy45]

Awesome. I don't care about all the other people criticizing. Awesome.

[AntipastaP]

You have seriously good lyrics. I mean, seriously. I really like listening to your songs!

[Theemptywordbook24]

you're awesome!! High five for the awesome!

[CallidoraLBlack]

I am buying your CD right now with money I got for my birthday Sunday! I've been waiting for this moment for a long time. I love this song, thank you for posting it :o)

[iamaseagull]

I understand

[Angieanything]

Very cool...

You + Hat = Adorable.

[MrDage]

Okay, I would expect this be a polished version of an early song. I'm totally okay with the cryptic lyrics because they provide some cerebral interest. I feel smarter just listening to you! However, The wheels fell off during the last verse and you really skidded across that last line. I like the fact you take risks and put yourself out there. The least your viewers can do is be honest--you're too talented for rubbish!

[devilishlypure]

Alright, I'll take it. But I've never been one to post completely perfect runthroughs of songs. It's not realistic and I play live often enough for the people who come out to see me to know that my charm is not in my ability to duplicate the recordings exactly but to screw up in the middle and laugh at myself. I may be talented, but I'm also human.

[MrDage]

It's mainly the last line: "I'm okay with that"

I'm not convinced that you're really okay with that!

You're a tremendously good sport about it all. That's part of your charm that makes you interesting. I know you're just playing around and your fans appreciate it.

[devilishlypure]

If you're wondering, I wasn't okay with it. The event that inspired this song was followed by eight months of heartbreak. So it's probably good that you weren't convinced because I didn't want you to be.

[Navs1231]

:) i likes this (:

[summerfae]

yey love it :)

[acciolove]

This is awesome Lauren!

[lilyenc]

oooh I love your v for vendetta and across the universe posters!

[thisrandomkid]

love it :)

[LindseySubtlyInked]

Maybe I'm missing something, but I don't really understand what the arrows and dots are supposed to mean... I'm confuzzled!

[devilishlypure]

It's a metaphor and it's personal.

[DessaBoBessa]

i love it :) and you too of course!

[imnotuniqueimmonique]

This makes me happy. This is really good for one of your first songs, like someone said before me I fail at writting music.

[prophetbrown]

:D YAY!

[GramsandPapi]

Well done! Thanks, Grams

[KavithaisPadfoot]

This is really good for a first song. I fail at writing songs, lol.

[Ziggystarla]

i totally wish i had your courage to record my songs and put them out there like this. but im too scared =[

[sweetguitars15]

why are you so awesome?

[ProfessorSpork]

=] yay I love you.

[VicMorrowsGhost]

Awesome.

[SciFiGirl1023]

i love my devil's snare cd... honestly... it makes me so happy.

-mk

[JordiekinsxxReal]

you should cover "blue painter's tape"

[exohkira]

god, this is still one of my favorite songs of yours, even with the epic new ones :]

[hokkeepokkee]

I love when you play the acoustic guitar. it inspires me to work harder at the electric, and makes me want to buy an acoustic because you sound so darn good =D

[badzombieproductions]

your music is amazing and you're so cute

[XxDawlishxX]

i love this song =D

[dgs72]

Yay!

[daniartist]

Still love the song to pieces.

Still makes the dot fiasco worthwhile.

me -> you

[devilishlypure]

Aww. I am so glad I got to see you this summer, Dani. me-> you too. :)

[JordiekinsxxReal]

you kinda look like lena in the screenshot thing for this video.

[bellasnow68]

I love the song. You have a lot of talent ^^

I like the Across the Universe poster in the background. :)

[S0cialGhost]

I see alot of yourself in myself thats why i like watching your videos. how're you today?- Matt.

[drautch]

aww ::claps excitedly like a dork:: im glad we get a new/old song to listen to

[CoconuttyScent]

I love your music and you vlogs

[RonandHermioneLOVER]

love it

[xloranx]

Awesome. I love that song. I like the meaning of the lyrics.

[mrpiggyfans]

lol this was stuck in my head today :D nice choice!

[bratzoid1]

I love it when you sing. Lauren, you rock!!

[bridgetotheotherside]

I love this song! :) The lyrics are intriguing; on one hand you get the general idea of what the song is about, on the other you want to know the full story behind it...

I've actually been listening to the recorded version of this quite a lot lately, and it's one of my (many) favorites of yours. I haven't gotten your CD yet, but I'll be buying it as soon as I can!

[victoriaarene]

yaaaay pretty song! (:

my only critique would be to say that i think the guitar is a little loud; it kinda overpowers your voice.

[Punk2021]

*Claps* Bravo! *Whistles* Encore!

Now everyone go buy her CD so she has reasons to make another and another and another :D

[owlssayhooot]

I love this song and your hat and your face.

[cheezewheel]

aww i love it <3

the title reminded me of ddr because i'm a big dork but the song was great XD

[Zbarker15]

I love ur voice it is so amazing!! I love ur songs to. I can't wait to hear more of ur songs!!

[unoriginallywitty]

I can never get tired of your voice. =)

[e99mgr]

This is one of your best songs I really like the lyrics cant wait to see you do your other songs live

[ElvendorkGirl]

I wish I could sing like you, you're awesome!

[Fensterplaetzchen]

I listen to this song all the time on my way to university in the morning.

you sure are one talented composer. :D

greetz from Austria

[BellaLovesVoldie]

Gah, I'm so tired that I can't work the chords out.

I'd be really happy if you could write them here? As a birhtday present? (:

<3

[Milllie91]

Do you mean bellatrix or bella in twilight?

[BellaLovesVoldie]

bellatrix, but i do love twilight, too.

[devilishlypure]

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[BellaLovesVoldie]

Thank you!

:D

[Orangehatten]

I love this one. When I here this song I always think about The Sisterhood of Traveling Pants since I listened to your songs on repeat when I read the fourth and third book :D

[kojothepirate]

I just listened to the original on my ipod a few days ago. :]

[LAshlieH]

I love this song so much! You rock, I hope you plan to put up mmore videos like this one : )

[parrotchai]

What is this song about?

[devilishlypure]

Something that happened to me.

[CordBB]

so mysterious :]

[devilishlypure]

Read the lyrics. The lyrics tell you what it's about. I'm not being mysterious... I'm expressing myself.

[Serramist]

I like the song. You did a good job

[debbielikescereall]

I really wish I had your talent.

[scionofslytherin]

I've always loved this song, and this was a really good performance of it

[ash12567]

THAT IS AWESOME I LOVED IT HAHA CAPS

[JellyBeanQueenX]

aww. i love this ^_^

i keep listening to it :D

[PMiddy001]

Very Pro! 5 stars

[dnl783]

I wish I could hear your voice more clearly, but this is pretty awesome. =D

[devilishlypure]

You can hear it more clearly on the CD if you're interested.

[LaPrimeraa]

You're fabulous beyond words:)

[wannabeinhogwarts]

*loves this*

All those songs from your MySpace are awesome, so this is really cool.

[HPbooklvr7]

I love this song!

Your whole album is amazing!

[wolfied16]

I LOVE YOU!!! AMAZING

[kendylgirlscout]

love it :)

[ElaynesFavorites]

You're beyond cute, Lauren.

[nodarp]

I really like this one.

And I still wish I had your walls haha.<3

[air1cat]

This is an aaammmaazing song. :D

[hayleyghoover]

You're one of my arrows, Lauren. :)

[BellaLovesVoldie]

Wow. Thanks! :D

<33

Now I'll have to write down the chords. (:

[alexjamesss]

I'm so glad that you're slowly doing all these. This is definitely one of my favorites from your CD, after "Please".

<333

[beckitt92]

I love this song, im going to try and figure out bass and drums for it :D lauren is AMAZING!! xxxx