All your songs are beautiful. It's magic, I swear. Boy, I hope you get wherever you want to go in life, because you certainly have the talent to do it.
Hey man, Great song! i love this soughta music. Its good how you can play the guitar very well and have a great voice too.
Some great rymes in there and i like the fact how you went from pluking the guitar to playing the chords to keep it different and fresh. Well done. Keep this up and you will go far :) :)
dude this is pretty crazy good :] youre on rythm the whole time and in the music industry that rythm comes first....second your on key with your music...lyrics are good and the instrumental sounds good :] keep workin that music
Let me be the first to congratulate you on the completion and release of your first CD. I know it was a whole lotta hard work, but, man, the musical payoff is there! Now if some of your fans will step-up and buy it you will be off to a great start! I'll start spreading the word now!
no critiques... that was wonderful. i am sending some of my youtube friends your vid... have you tried sending it to whatthebuck? i think he would like ya.
dude this song is awesome, i love your song "Soldier" it is the best song i've ever heard, but this one is amazing to. i love the way you write, keep it up
love the lyrics but just as your other song 'princess' i would prefere if you kept the low tone throughout the song instead of singing/yelling half through. and p.s keep the title.
Hey! This song is REAL music. maybe you're tone deaf, or you just have really crappy ears, i dont really care. This song is amazing, and you need to realize that!
LOVE the glissandos at 0:09 and 0:20! With the lazy-days start, I had no clue to the deep place this "story" song was going. I enjoyed the trip, though! The rap you spit at 1:40 is - in a word - BRILLIANT! Amazing phrasing!
For the Verse 2 (at 2:27) I would bring the volume back down to that of the first verse. Then at 2:27 raise the volume up to shout
"-it's the MUSIC!".
The idea of the title "Jack 'N Coke" is cool, but doesn't do justice to this IMPORTANT song. I rename it "Brilliant".
Great job on the lyrics! You sang it really well. I gotta say I liked the slower portion of the song first, the next half seemed kinda rushed. But great nonetheless!
At some point you sound like Jason Maraz " regardless of politics and religion..." I definitely love the guitar playing ,but I found the lyrics too wordy( it is just an opinion). over all, good job!!
i can't handle it see you're are too fucking good. could you possibly give me the chords :*) i love it and it would be cool to spread this music to everyone i know :)
i think i just stopped liking rap
BartholomewGafunkle 7 months ago
Awsome song man!! Please keep it up! GET THIS ON THE RADIO!!!!!
aquatics125 10 months ago
sooooo good
Emillie7 1 year ago
I loved talented people
cubmexubiangirl1 1 year ago
I think I'm in love with you. ;O
JustMollyEllarae12 1 year ago
ASSHOLE! TALENTEDLESS EVIL ASSHOLE!
ThickHead380 1 year ago
Hey,can I get tabs/chords for this?
amazing2kiss 1 year ago
This is my new favorite song. I listen to it probably 10+ times a day... haha
forgetmenot223 2 years ago
All your songs are beautiful. It's magic, I swear. Boy, I hope you get wherever you want to go in life, because you certainly have the talent to do it.
seagoats73 2 years ago
great song
writtenwithwit 2 years ago
Hey man, Great song! i love this soughta music. Its good how you can play the guitar very well and have a great voice too.
Some great rymes in there and i like the fact how you went from pluking the guitar to playing the chords to keep it different and fresh. Well done. Keep this up and you will go far :) :)
monk1699 2 years ago
hey your really talented :D keep up the good work - loving the song :) :) :)
marniejacobsen 2 years ago
This is a great song, the whole tone overall throughout the song makes you feel happy =]
Bmxboylikesktlz 2 years ago
woooo!
ArizonaSkyLight 2 years ago
Great song!
UnsignedMusiciansRS 2 years ago
This is my favorite off the EP!
alexrobbinsnoob 2 years ago
omg, I love the way you play the guitar!!!! I'm so jealous!!! :( I can't play like this!!!
and I can't write songs like this one =(
omg, you make me feel like I don't have talent at all xD
chocolately12 2 years ago
today is a brilliant summer day
blinkoff9 2 years ago
Awesome tune Brett.
drewmusic08 2 years ago
amazin :D
good tune :)
onetreehilldc 2 years ago
I like the slide
jas1234321 2 years ago
dude this is pretty crazy good :] youre on rythm the whole time and in the music industry that rythm comes first....second your on key with your music...lyrics are good and the instrumental sounds good :] keep workin that music
abcdefghijohnly 2 years ago 4
verry good.
good tune!
keep up the good work!!
MrLloydEvz 2 years ago
i love the lyrics
i love songs that i can imagine in my head.
great job.!
itsTAYLOR4 2 years ago
absolutely love this song and the lyrics
anywhere i can download it?
littleh2o7 2 years ago
Nice song! Your sound is good.
E271194 2 years ago
I'm really loving you're rhyme scenes and the vocal choices you make in terms of syncapation. Very matured song writing. Well done =)
McReegs 2 years ago
omg! this is my favorite one!!!! is this on the cd?
SparklyCheeseburger 2 years ago
Yepp it is, SparklyCheeseburger :D
riddler442 2 years ago
I didnt think i'd like it cuz of the title but it was beautiful
Inzanti 2 years ago
cool as, great lyrics
twohandsproduction 2 years ago
Brett,
Let me be the first to congratulate you on the completion and release of your first CD. I know it was a whole lotta hard work, but, man, the musical payoff is there! Now if some of your fans will step-up and buy it you will be off to a great start! I'll start spreading the word now!
Congratulations, Brett!
JRNYman 2 years ago 2
Fuckin right dude im likin this shit man keep it up
TaylorGuitar10 2 years ago
hmm is some1 behind you playing halo? just noticed it on the tv screen. haha
riddler442 2 years ago
love your voice
SamBean0 2 years ago
brett keep it up i got ur mail so u r good
tazkid12345 2 years ago
Great Song
Tabs?
DwightandMarley 2 years ago
Yo i got your email, thought about whether to watch this or not...good use of my time. This was really awsome man :)
Sick lyrics keep up the good work.
Peacee
Dameety 2 years ago
Brett:
You did it again!!
you amazed me with your first songs..
and now the lyrics have too much sense
you are a great musician
my better wishes to you
mangastyledraw 2 years ago
great lyrics! <3
jkbayabo 2 years ago
no critiques... that was wonderful. i am sending some of my youtube friends your vid... have you tried sending it to whatthebuck? i think he would like ya.
LoriBug22 2 years ago
Wonderful message..wish everyone was this way it would be a better world....Nice song...
beehappy0123 3 years ago
could you put up a link to an mp3? this song is awesome. i was hoping i could share it a little bit easier with some of my friends with this on a cd
alabumni 3 years ago
love the lyrics to this song!
LisaMGrant 3 years ago
Wow, very good !!
you have great ideas, the chorus is very very good!!
Go on making music!!
tomorrow1today 3 years ago
dude this song is awesome, i love your song "Soldier" it is the best song i've ever heard, but this one is amazing to. i love the way you write, keep it up
kakashiisdabomb 3 years ago
Keep on going! Great song.....
puika1987 3 years ago
Great song i would listen to this all day long
uncgtrocks 3 years ago
Great Job! the lyrics are awesome!
daylightdonuts 3 years ago
this song is amazing i love it sooo much and your lyrics are fantastic(:
ilaughilove14 3 years ago
wow you were right this song is good!!
keep up the good work!!=]
harold0908 3 years ago
wow
this song is seriously beautiful
barneyscaresmefilms 3 years ago
wow i love your lyrics(:
ilaughilove14 3 years ago
this piece even better than Princess !!it is sooooo good~~
Jessie19920207 3 years ago
honestly nothing to complain about. this is really an AMAZING piece.
really, just get your songs out there, and once you're well known, try and get associated with a record company man. this is gold.
Lyden93 3 years ago
I love this song! Each time I listen to one of your songs, I fall more in love with your music! It's really just wonderful!
potatoes1103 3 years ago
omg wow this song is amazin so is ur voice how do write music lke that??
weirdo4810 3 years ago
wow your incredible, this could be on the radio right now if you wanted lol
00Avalanche00 3 years ago 6
Dude your TOO cool at doing this stuff.I SWEAR.too bad we cant do a duo im too young LOL!
☺ good job ☺
-bugboys98
bugboys98 3 years ago 2
why'd you call it Jack n' Coke? I'm just wondering... nice job
scifi1996 3 years ago
Read the info to the right, he wrote it while sippin on a jack n' coke;)
cooporangelol 3 years ago
This is fucking good!
Willybrundtoyota 3 years ago
oh my god..this is one of the most nicest songs i ever heard in my life, im going to put it on my hyves profile right away!
catharinacath 3 years ago
love the lyrics but just as your other song 'princess' i would prefere if you kept the low tone throughout the song instead of singing/yelling half through. and p.s keep the title.
contentmoron 3 years ago
Nice slides
scifi1996 3 years ago
although its a great song, i do think that the melody could blend together a bit better, but besides that HIGH FIVE!! haha
GabbyX3Livana 3 years ago
my favorite so far! great lyrics!
luckyducky556 3 years ago
this is mad hot
queentoydog 3 years ago
WOOOOOOOOOOT WOOOOOOT WOOOOOT !!!!! i think im comment on too many vids again BUT THEY ARE SO DAM GOOOD
monkydogthingy 3 years ago
I'd call it Summer Day
beardown2489 3 years ago
nice, nice, good guitar, vocals are pretty nice, lyrics are what most sold me over in this song.
All in all it's a winner
Fergieh8er12 3 years ago
This comment has received too many negative votes show
this song is the leading cause of death in people with ears.
biggy4ever 3 years ago
biggy4ever you've got it all wrong. This kinda music is what makes the world shine.
scifi1996 3 years ago
Hey! This song is REAL music. maybe you're tone deaf, or you just have really crappy ears, i dont really care. This song is amazing, and you need to realize that!
potatoes1103 3 years ago
i loove the lil thingy you do about 20 seconds in when ur hand goes doown the neck of the guitar!
gooycookies 3 years ago
lyrics and melody mixed well. you can also create a nice mtv of this song depicting the story behind it... keep composing.
caloy2000 3 years ago
LOVE the glissandos at 0:09 and 0:20! With the lazy-days start, I had no clue to the deep place this "story" song was going. I enjoyed the trip, though! The rap you spit at 1:40 is - in a word - BRILLIANT! Amazing phrasing!
For the Verse 2 (at 2:27) I would bring the volume back down to that of the first verse. Then at 2:27 raise the volume up to shout
"-it's the MUSIC!".
The idea of the title "Jack 'N Coke" is cool, but doesn't do justice to this IMPORTANT song. I rename it "Brilliant".
JRNYman 3 years ago
OOPS! A correction to my typo:
Bring the volume down at 2:27, then shout it out at 2:57.
JRNYman 3 years ago
Totally with drago, another great song and excellent lyrics and music, especially the lyrics.
LaBellaRosa 3 years ago
Very nice sound here, keep it up!
Sturgeball 3 years ago
I LIKE IT A LT!!!!! It really flows, when I write songsI can never the verses and the chorus to flow
BubbleGumBabiiRa 3 years ago
i can be your good person!! lol aww that is a sad story about the little kids, do you make up your songs? if so that is great. good job once again
taratessa 3 years ago
absolutely AMAZING.
amazing song.
amazing voice.
amazing lyrics.
amazing tone.
amazing guitar-skill.
just simply amazing.
EmmaAndBeccaShow 3 years ago
omg, LOVE the lyrics (L)
the guitar seemed a little bit rushed at the 2nd half, but it stills realy cool :D
waa, sorry for my english :'(
hope you can understand :P
usuratonkachii 3 years ago
Again,another great song.
and again,another 10/10 it is a very great song excellent lyrics and you are a great musician,your gonna have a good courier.
drago91500 3 years ago
Awesome!
cripticstone 3 years ago
Yet again, great job !
I never heard something so good, well, I have, but you somewhat remind me of Raul Midon !
Keep on playin ! Kisskiss
BaskGurrl 3 years ago
WOOOOOOOOOOOW UR AMAZING BOY!!!!
PaNdAnAtIcA 3 years ago
I LOVE THE CHORUS!!
you're amazing i love the tab too.
do you have a demo disc or anything that we can get somehow?
prickleypear612 3 years ago
sounds Like Jason Mraz..but I see you've heard that before. nice job!
TheDarksEmpyrean 3 years ago
Great job on the lyrics! You sang it really well. I gotta say I liked the slower portion of the song first, the next half seemed kinda rushed. But great nonetheless!
FabbleDaSmiley 3 years ago
Hi! so, i prefer this! =D
welcome to brazil!!!
juareishk 3 years ago
i love this song..the lyrics are amazing.
yogini92 3 years ago
i'm digging this one a little more than "princess"
lolpanduh 3 years ago
yo, thanks for the message to check you out. your lyrics and voice got my attention. you've got yourself a new sub :)
paperdawl 3 years ago
At some point you sound like Jason Maraz " regardless of politics and religion..." I definitely love the guitar playing ,but I found the lyrics too wordy( it is just an opinion). over all, good job!!
MusicLover2285 3 years ago
awesome brett - thanks for the song. I love it that you took the time to write real music and make it happen. Hope you're having fun in college! =)
SomethingToDoTV 3 years ago
i think this1 is even better than princess. the lyrics are fantastic
aUsTrIaDeLuXe 3 years ago
SOOOO good!!! u DO remind me of Jason Mraz!!!
SparklyCheeseburger 3 years ago
haha. thanks for the message, i really love your music ;D it's so amazing. the lyrics are wow!
cookietray 3 years ago
awesome song man~! keep up the good work!
MeldonJ 3 years ago
great stuff bro
urbittergdbye89 3 years ago
Phenominal lyrics. Kudos.
Fabreeze507 3 years ago
i can't handle it see you're are too fucking good. could you possibly give me the chords :*) i love it and it would be cool to spread this music to everyone i know :)
wickedrocketelvispel 3 years ago
Your choice of lyrics is awesome.
tannerunit 3 years ago
I'm pretty sure I love you!!!
I wish you played on my team...wink.
deeter131 3 years ago
awessome man!
momentousnews 3 years ago
ya kinda sound like Jason Mraz... Cool i'd listen 2 ya on Lazy sunday.. :D
wikks07 3 years ago
Great!
Roxxerd 3 years ago
love it, cheese. the lyrics are fantastic. miss you!
jorda216 3 years ago
your song is very good, i like it!
olcia109 3 years ago
i love ur words.
they are always great.
i really enjoyed this one. :)
lovelyhp 3 years ago
:) awesomeness. i love it
chocolatelover13 3 years ago
i like it :)
keep comin out w/ more songs, i await them in anticipation
xselfexilex 3 years ago
i love ur voice and playing but im IN LOVE with ur lyrics =^__^=
they're ALWAYS amazing =]
but u have to promise when ur discovered not if WHEN your discovered.....you don't start making shallow meaningless songs k? C:
Diamond121212 3 years ago
it was awesome Brett :):):) i really enjoyed it ;)
diekleineDalmi 3 years ago
Man your so good.. listened to this song with amazing attention!! I love the lyrics, your the man brettoit!!!!
zuidematim 3 years ago
Absolutely Awesome!!
*****
littlecherubs 3 years ago
dang, that was awesome! hope to see more
rubinpker 3 years ago
Awesome man, keep it up.
Jack6989 3 years ago
Your so good MAN! when can I here your music in person dog.
ajkap55 3 years ago
sounds great cheese! can't wait for more. You better be mailing a package of CD's to Minnesota.
garr0217 3 years ago
Omg man freaking amazing. Another good 1 haha:D Keep it up man loved it! Btw, reckon it could be possible to upload em as mp3 files?:D
cooporangelol 3 years ago
when are you going to make a CD? this music is very good.
fattymattie360 3 years ago
really good!
but i can't understand the lyrics! it's too fast haeuhaeihaea
however, i liked! :}
keep going man!
gabrielcaracaa 3 years ago
Thanks! Haha, sorry - I will put lyrics up in the side.
BrettRandell 3 years ago
Oh yeah Brett. Oh Yeah.
xabstract 3 years ago
very cool and once again, good writing. =)
& i agree, no matter who we are or what's going on in our lives we should always try to be a good person
& remember what's really important
DawnEscape 3 years ago
FIRST TO COMMENT!! Yesh! I love your music, can't get enough!
Skunkeeh 3 years ago