@Travag thank you for your comments..while writing, i accepted the fact that the ending was gonna be a hate it or love it type of thing lol..obviously you hated it haha but thank you, your points made sense.
There were parts I liked then they were parts I didn't. I would have liked to see an actual finish to the story, I wish I was there co directing lol, I like pushing people, but overall not bad at all, keep at it, I hope I get to make some flicks soon, I just don't have the proper equipment or support by lazy friends. Also there was lines in the footage, I think you might have rendered it wrong and what camera are you using? 2 of 2
I don't like the the style of footage, it's a bit distracting like filmblaster said. I saw the camera mans shadow on one of the parts. You need more cut scenes again, the motion of the camera doesn't always have to be moving, you can use a tripod, or steady cam on some parts. I give you major props though, on completing a project, it's not easy, getting people to participate and just getting the whole thing and story together. 1 of 2
Wow. really well done film and the story line was excellent. In some parts you might have been better off with a tripod and zooming in on people was somewhat distracting, but I can't talk, because I haven't come up with a story line that good. Great twist. And I congratulate you for working with some pretty hard dialogue. Some of the dialogue was very difficult to say without it sounding cheesy. For the most part I felt your actors or you were able to deliver the dialogue quite well.great music.
ran out of words, but I had to say the guy who played the puppet guy sounded a bit like the joker in batman. I don't know if that was your direction or dialogue or his acting. I liked it. he did a great job. he was cleverly funny.
@filmblaster yes it was! i wanted to sort of pay tribute to him without doing a complete impression..that was my favourite on screen performance i've ever seen so i wanted to pay tribute to Heath Ledger in some way! thank you for your comments! :)
I think my favorite part of this short was the great acting and the excellent editing and work you put into it. Great job again.
CGFilmms 1 year ago
@Travag thank you for your comments..while writing, i accepted the fact that the ending was gonna be a hate it or love it type of thing lol..obviously you hated it haha but thank you, your points made sense.
TimbucktwofilmsRoman 1 year ago
There were parts I liked then they were parts I didn't. I would have liked to see an actual finish to the story, I wish I was there co directing lol, I like pushing people, but overall not bad at all, keep at it, I hope I get to make some flicks soon, I just don't have the proper equipment or support by lazy friends. Also there was lines in the footage, I think you might have rendered it wrong and what camera are you using? 2 of 2
JustCallMeRey 1 year ago
I don't like the the style of footage, it's a bit distracting like filmblaster said. I saw the camera mans shadow on one of the parts. You need more cut scenes again, the motion of the camera doesn't always have to be moving, you can use a tripod, or steady cam on some parts. I give you major props though, on completing a project, it's not easy, getting people to participate and just getting the whole thing and story together. 1 of 2
JustCallMeRey 1 year ago
Wow. really well done film and the story line was excellent. In some parts you might have been better off with a tripod and zooming in on people was somewhat distracting, but I can't talk, because I haven't come up with a story line that good. Great twist. And I congratulate you for working with some pretty hard dialogue. Some of the dialogue was very difficult to say without it sounding cheesy. For the most part I felt your actors or you were able to deliver the dialogue quite well.great music.
filmblaster 1 year ago
ran out of words, but I had to say the guy who played the puppet guy sounded a bit like the joker in batman. I don't know if that was your direction or dialogue or his acting. I liked it. he did a great job. he was cleverly funny.
filmblaster 1 year ago
@filmblaster yes it was! i wanted to sort of pay tribute to him without doing a complete impression..that was my favourite on screen performance i've ever seen so i wanted to pay tribute to Heath Ledger in some way! thank you for your comments! :)
TimbucktwofilmsRoman 1 year ago
You have some really great actors, and the shots are very interesting, great job!
Apocalypsefilmstudio 1 year ago