That is exactly how I feel. I don't want my dad to love me if I am in a better career or if I made more money. My Dad forgets that he was not there for and he tries to pawn his pity off on me.
@jazminita1 when I read this poem and saw your comment, I too knew then that THERE IS SOMETHING WRONG WITH FATHERS! Well not all fathers. My father doesnt know how to show affection. All he does is hunt! I HATE hunting!
our dad abused our mum never came to see us im brandon im 7 tomorrow my sister chloe is 4 we got hurt by our dad so much our dad blames our mum never his self why we visit all he does is play xbox xbox not us he say he love us if so y dont he care n play footy with us
This poem is so good. (: It reminds me exactly of me and my dad, but at the same time it puts me at ease because i know i wasn't the only person going through a thing like this.
im really sorry about that. i know exactly how you feel. i was abandond at the age of 12. me and my baby siblings have been separated for almost 4 years now. my parents just dislike me, but ive learnded to put that in the past. it use to really effect my grades in school, but ive learnd to controll that. now im doing better than ive ever done before. but once again, im truely sorry about your parents.
My dad did the same exact thing to me! I just wish the men these days would learn to grow up and take care of thier children insted of leaving them behind!
My dad is horrible, I hate him. He cheated on my mom and spent their 6th anniversary with his girlfriend. 8 years after I was born, my step-mom had a baby. Now I don't exist and he can get away with anything he wants. My dad call about 4-5 times a year. i have to spent 2 weeks every summer with him, it sucks!
If you are old enough to type that up, then I a guessing you are old enough now that you mother could petition the court on your behalf to have the judge state that visitation is now your choice, so if you don't want to go you dont' have to. My friend has the order like that, and her kids get to make their own choice. They are 14 and 12 years old.
wow i dont hav any father or mother.they r divorced & they left me when i was born!!!i m now 22yrs old i hav only seen their pics! when i came 2 know about this & approached them they totally rejected me!!! i hate them both
this poem isnt a sillouette but ill tell you it got me thinking about my dad and how he abandond us when we were 7 and it seems he doesnt feel the need to be a part of our lifes, im now 17 and he still does not contact. its like u stole the words from my mouth
This poem was very hard to listen to. My father died when I was very young I cant even remember him. I have some pictures but it doesnt make it any easyer.
my parents are divorced and my mom always yells and screams curse words. she always finds something to yell at me for. she doesnt hit me , but her words still hurt. i want to live with my father who really does care and love me.
I never met my Dad. He abused my Mom and Brother, I heard. He wanted a family, but not children. He drank too much, and looks so much like Zac Efron it's un canny. Though I only have 2 pictures of him. I met him once when I was 4 at a car place where he was working, we went outside and my Mom told me that was my Father, I wanted to go back, buy my Mom said next time. There was never a next time. And I don't know where he is now..Good poem. <3
this poem hits me hard because my husband and i are divorcing and my two year old and my 5 month old are the ones that are being punished their daddy wants nothing todo with them he hasn't seen his 5 month old son since he was 4 weeks old.. and it hurt me because my daughter asks for him and i don't know where he is...
that is so great an it so true it the same probblem with me an my dad he never there for me he never call me but when he need a shoulder to cry on at age 13 i love him with all my heart but it like he dose not care.
you know this reminds me of my dad because he is just like that i know he loves me but he doesn't seen to want to be with me and he says that i am the one who is wrong i am actually ignoreing him until he says sorry so this poem really makes me feel better! wish me luck i won't give up with out a fight!
Wow that is great for you about being published, and that you are ok now. I am glad you will get to share your stories, emotions, and everything with more people. As for me don't worry. I talked with him not that long after I wrote this and even though I don't agree with how he acted as a parent, I know that he is human and we all make mistakes some bigger than others. He is the only dad I'll ever have and I love him dearly. =)
As usual your work is potently powerful... and a clear example of why poetry [and other forms of art] NEED to be out there... so that we can all feel, express, share, and sometimes recover. Bravo.
Well, thank you. Yes, it is a bit long, it is one of my longer poems. There are somethings about it that I don't like as much, but I have stopped editing my older poetry. This is how it was at that time in my life. I am glad you liked it! =)
Thanks. My poetry is where I can say anything I want.. it is my total freedom to express my feelings. It is where I let it all out. In the end I just hope that others like it as well. I don't think I could ever stop writing... =)
The intro of this reminded me of a story I had published once.... I should read it to you. This poem speaks to me in soooo many ways.... even if our situations differ.
It is awesome that my poem can speak to people.. I am never sure, as the one who wrote it and all.. I would love to hear your story, please do read it! =)
That is exactly how I feel. I don't want my dad to love me if I am in a better career or if I made more money. My Dad forgets that he was not there for and he tries to pawn his pity off on me.
duvexy 1 year ago
@jazminita1 when I read this poem and saw your comment, I too knew then that THERE IS SOMETHING WRONG WITH FATHERS! Well not all fathers. My father doesnt know how to show affection. All he does is hunt! I HATE hunting!
calmwillowbreeze 1 year ago
our dad abused our mum never came to see us im brandon im 7 tomorrow my sister chloe is 4 we got hurt by our dad so much our dad blames our mum never his self why we visit all he does is play xbox xbox not us he say he love us if so y dont he care n play footy with us
teripreston36 1 year ago
This poem is so good. (: It reminds me exactly of me and my dad, but at the same time it puts me at ease because i know i wasn't the only person going through a thing like this.
jazminita1 1 year ago
boo hoo! Both of my parents abandoned me.
LadyLeonoraa 2 years ago
im really sorry about that. i know exactly how you feel. i was abandond at the age of 12. me and my baby siblings have been separated for almost 4 years now. my parents just dislike me, but ive learnded to put that in the past. it use to really effect my grades in school, but ive learnd to controll that. now im doing better than ive ever done before. but once again, im truely sorry about your parents.
DaneshaAynne 2 years ago
I'm 15 and going through the same thing. this poem gave me the chills and even made me cry. this is an amazing peom
ALeyeCIA 2 years ago
i am truning 15 soon, this lovely poem has the same effect on me, no matter how many times i listen to it.
DaneshaAynne 2 years ago
please, can u send me a copy of this poem. i know somebody who really has gone through a rough time like this, im not mentioning anyone...=(
DaneshaAynne 2 years ago
i feel so sorry 4 every one that had or is going through a problem with their dad
ppeufh 2 years ago
My dad did the same exact thing to me! I just wish the men these days would learn to grow up and take care of thier children insted of leaving them behind!
Dustinsgirl1314 2 years ago
My dad is horrible, I hate him. He cheated on my mom and spent their 6th anniversary with his girlfriend. 8 years after I was born, my step-mom had a baby. Now I don't exist and he can get away with anything he wants. My dad call about 4-5 times a year. i have to spent 2 weeks every summer with him, it sucks!
a775522 2 years ago
If you are old enough to type that up, then I a guessing you are old enough now that you mother could petition the court on your behalf to have the judge state that visitation is now your choice, so if you don't want to go you dont' have to. My friend has the order like that, and her kids get to make their own choice. They are 14 and 12 years old.
AlluringShrew 2 years ago
God, you act like everything is just sooo awful for you!
omgwtfnewb 3 years ago
wow i dont hav any father or mother.they r divorced & they left me when i was born!!!i m now 22yrs old i hav only seen their pics! when i came 2 know about this & approached them they totally rejected me!!! i hate them both
ceegkhan 3 years ago
Its very weird how dad's leave on one day and think they can come back 16 years later right?
the same happened to me today, he approached my brother
after 15 years of not showing himself
he has hurt my mom my brother and me to much
with things what i cant even get out of my mouth.
Niloofar1 3 years ago
wow im crying ive never had anyone have the same problem as me.
emokindagurl4ever 3 years ago
this is my poem to my dad!
lovinhim3 3 years ago
this poem isnt a sillouette but ill tell you it got me thinking about my dad and how he abandond us when we were 7 and it seems he doesnt feel the need to be a part of our lifes, im now 17 and he still does not contact. its like u stole the words from my mouth
aaronwilde 3 years ago
This poem was very hard to listen to. My father died when I was very young I cant even remember him. I have some pictures but it doesnt make it any easyer.
bean016 3 years ago
my parents are divorced and my mom always yells and screams curse words. she always finds something to yell at me for. she doesnt hit me , but her words still hurt. i want to live with my father who really does care and love me.
tAk3mE2pARAd1s3 3 years ago
I never met my Dad. He abused my Mom and Brother, I heard. He wanted a family, but not children. He drank too much, and looks so much like Zac Efron it's un canny. Though I only have 2 pictures of him. I met him once when I was 4 at a car place where he was working, we went outside and my Mom told me that was my Father, I wanted to go back, buy my Mom said next time. There was never a next time. And I don't know where he is now..Good poem. <3
ThatKidWithTheFace 4 years ago
my dad left me when i was seven havent seen him since i really miss him
heartbroken877 4 years ago
this poem hits me hard because my husband and i are divorcing and my two year old and my 5 month old are the ones that are being punished their daddy wants nothing todo with them he hasn't seen his 5 month old son since he was 4 weeks old.. and it hurt me because my daughter asks for him and i don't know where he is...
angelmommy1982 4 years ago 2
this poem hits me hard in the heart because my dad left my mom and this makes alot of sense to me
liltuffy790 4 years ago
Wow, very nice job.
5dolphingirl 4 years ago
Beautiful, but very sad
Aloverssunset 4 years ago
that is so great an it so true it the same probblem with me an my dad he never there for me he never call me but when he need a shoulder to cry on at age 13 i love him with all my heart but it like he dose not care.
gaaraandlee34 4 years ago
WOW, Very Powerful !!! Awesome!!
wvchicwv 4 years ago
I know what it's like. I feel for you and totally understand. Beautiful poem. You WILL get published with this.
Hugs from Texas =]
Franzapooch 4 years ago
you know this reminds me of my dad because he is just like that i know he loves me but he doesn't seen to want to be with me and he says that i am the one who is wrong i am actually ignoreing him until he says sorry so this poem really makes me feel better! wish me luck i won't give up with out a fight!
bakaodango 5 years ago
we have stick together to make it are heart hearted girls.
gaaraandlee34 4 years ago
cool.. are you from northern ireland?
kittycollartight 5 years ago
Im not lying to you either..174 poems.They are expected to be published next year. Let go of the pain from the past darling, you will be ok,as i am.
mastud 5 years ago
Wow that is great for you about being published, and that you are ok now. I am glad you will get to share your stories, emotions, and everything with more people. As for me don't worry. I talked with him not that long after I wrote this and even though I don't agree with how he acted as a parent, I know that he is human and we all make mistakes some bigger than others. He is the only dad I'll ever have and I love him dearly. =)
fourtwenty420 5 years ago
I have written 174 poems just like this. Starting from the age of 13 and ending at the age of 19. I grew up with alcoholism.
mastud 5 years ago
Wow this is great
butiloveyou 5 years ago
Thank you, I am glad you liked it! =)
fourtwenty420 5 years ago
Solid!!!
vvo0ster 5 years ago
Thanks! =)
fourtwenty420 5 years ago
As usual your work is potently powerful... and a clear example of why poetry [and other forms of art] NEED to be out there... so that we can all feel, express, share, and sometimes recover. Bravo.
-- Eric ZORK Alan [ National Slam Poet ]
iamnotapoet 5 years ago
Thank you so very much! That means a lot coming from you. I truely appreciate your comments. =)
fourtwenty420 5 years ago
I can relate to what you are saying in this poem. It's very open and honest.
I do like your other three more though. This one seems a trifle too long for my taste. It's more like a very well written journal entry.
I still liked it though, I just preferred your other ones.
AericWinter 5 years ago
Well, thank you. Yes, it is a bit long, it is one of my longer poems. There are somethings about it that I don't like as much, but I have stopped editing my older poetry. This is how it was at that time in my life. I am glad you liked it! =)
fourtwenty420 5 years ago
Damn. I really really love this. Excellent piece of art!
joeyranaway 5 years ago
Wow, a piece of art.. thank you so very much! *blush* I am so glad that you loved it. Thanks again for your kind words.. =)
fourtwenty420 5 years ago
you are really good at expressing your feelings, i used to write a lot of poems but then i just stopped. don't YOU ever stop!
cheeseandbread 5 years ago
Thanks. My poetry is where I can say anything I want.. it is my total freedom to express my feelings. It is where I let it all out. In the end I just hope that others like it as well. I don't think I could ever stop writing... =)
fourtwenty420 5 years ago
The intro of this reminded me of a story I had published once.... I should read it to you. This poem speaks to me in soooo many ways.... even if our situations differ.
lisasimpson 5 years ago
It is awesome that my poem can speak to people.. I am never sure, as the one who wrote it and all.. I would love to hear your story, please do read it! =)
fourtwenty420 5 years ago
yay for bullitining!
VictortheCrab 5 years ago