Please, Fellow Muffins, I mean no harm. I just want to share. And please, if you don't want to hear a sad, confusing tale, move on to the next comment :)
My best friend is two years older then me (16). She was raped by her friends, her brother, and a complete stranger.
My mother was raped by my ex-neighbor (went to prison) when she was 8,10, and 14.
My (awesome) gay uncle was molested when he was younger.
'A strengthless hand' hints at an attack on non-physical level, which is firmly the specialty of women.
Try looking at the last 6 verses as the result of actions done by the girl instead.
She's stuck in a dilemma: should she just suffer the the fools and keep their false hopes alive or should she push them head-under-water by being honest. The shame she battles is the one she feels about crushing their dreams.
@nargileh1 Geez man, chill. It's all how you interpret it. I think being touched by a man twice her age is worthy of kicking. But hey, personal opinion.
Please, Fellow Muffins, I mean no harm. I just want to share. And please, if you don't want to hear a sad, confusing tale, move on to the next comment :)
My best friend is two years older then me (16). She was raped by her friends, her brother, and a complete stranger.
My mother was raped by my ex-neighbor (went to prison) when she was 8,10, and 14.
My (awesome) gay uncle was molested when he was younger.
Everyone around me is being raped... It's scary.
I think thats why my mom wanted a boy.
MickyMouse2277 3 months ago
".will my life,be like this forever?
Must I laugh & call them clever?
sadly it probably will... ={
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finallyfinaler 5 months ago
I love how this sounds.
swordclaw42 1 year ago
I'm shivering now, such deep emotion this poem imbues, the eery, somberness it paints over the soul.
MartyredxMaiden 1 year ago 9
You just want to kick that man.
waterwavesandsand 2 years ago 22
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nargileh1 11 months ago
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nargileh1 11 months ago
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@waterwavesandsand
'A strengthless hand' hints at an attack on non-physical level, which is firmly the specialty of women.
So you might wanna try looking at the last 6 verses as the result of actions done by the girl.
She's overcome by shame, can't return his love, rejection leaves him with a broken spirit.
nargileh1 11 months ago
@waterwavesandsand
'A strengthless hand' hints at an attack on non-physical level, which is firmly the specialty of women.
Try looking at the last 6 verses as the result of actions done by the girl instead.
She's stuck in a dilemma: should she just suffer the the fools and keep their false hopes alive or should she push them head-under-water by being honest. The shame she battles is the one she feels about crushing their dreams.
nargileh1 11 months ago
@nargileh1 Geez man, chill. It's all how you interpret it. I think being touched by a man twice her age is worthy of kicking. But hey, personal opinion.
waterwavesandsand 10 months ago
such a sad poem... She's wonderful
EmoOtakuFangrl 2 years ago 7
Absolutely beautiful and heartbreaking.
SouthernDeathAngel 2 years ago 20