Love At First Sight [Def Poetry Spoken Word]

[sftemp07]

u have such a beautiful voice! so jealous! :)

[Mellow9Productions]

checkout word8 all about spoken word

keep it mellow9

[MsImprezz]

nice

[TheBrecha89]

Beautiful flow.  You think your pretty ehh?

[leighash15]

you are so pretty. i like this poem.

[Rob3Music]

your pretty and your voice is soothing, calm. :)

[sugarcanedavis]

word, this is nice.

[FpJackelyn]

My respects girl <3 Beautiful. Truly enjoyed every second of it.

[carinamonteiro]

You are amazing!

[fareleeforLove]

Your voice is so smooth and beautiful. I absolutely adore listening to you. <3

[detroitdetroit009]

Hair blonde to the World. How many of us have been that...

[TheDominiqueBallou]

Where can i find the lyrics??

[NakitaK1]

wow I'm loving ur poems n I am blown away go head girl...ur so inspiring :-)

[LittleLulubee]

This was magical and touching. You are truly gifted. :)

[FACTORYmonster]

Wow! That was tight! Youre blessed...u gave me butterflies lol keeo em coming xx

[XBluRayne]

I love this piece. I am putting this on S.W.A.U. on Facebook.....bravo....

[p8anut]

@XBluRayne

Hey hey hey! Thank U so much girl friend! I surely appreciate it!

[that1kidRjG]

this was beautiful in every way

[p8anut]

@that1kidRjG

Thank U sooooo much! ;o]

[DomstarRecordz]

Beautiful, how freely it flows through you, that's magnetic Love . Respect!

[p8anut]

@DomstarRecordz

Thank U so much! I really do appreciate the love!!!!!

[franchisesaysso]

What makes this good is much more than just the poetry itself. Your delivery, soothing voice and ,as you already know, beauty complements the words to a 'T'. Hope to be as good as you one day.

[p8anut]

@franchisesaysso

Awww, thank U soooo much! I really do appreciate it! ;o]

[79madybell]

My favorite poem! I stop by time after time to listen to this Girl, it’s so GOOD! =)

[p8anut]

@79madybell

Awww, thank U so much friend girl! ;o]

[wandajo911]

THIS IS REALLY GOOD

[p8anut]

@wandajo911

IDK if I responded to UR comment, but I am sooo sorry it took me so long to! Thank U sooo much for the love!

[iiMuffinzii]

I Love It, It's So Beautiful! <3

[p8anut]

@iiMuffinzii

THank U soooo much friend girl, i really do appreciate it!

[twizzle650]

keep that shit gooiinnn im bout to be back on ma floetry soon too sooo inspiring damn it

[p8anut]

@twizzle650

Definitely! Thank U soooo much! I so appreciated it!

[Dancei333]

Beautiful voice. this is beautiful

[79madybell]

How I love this poem! Gives me faith to love again! Thank u for sharing :)

[p8anut]

@79madybell

Thank U oh so much! I'm glad U were insired by this! Love is definitely out there for U, it'll come when its time! ;o]

[alexxx52]

Amazing...

[p8anut]

@alexxx52

Thank U Alex!

[BlueyedFolk]

Aww, damn girl i almost cried

[sarahsalmay]

word! ur tyt



[p8anut]

@ilove3dna

Hey girl, sorry I took forever to respond! Thank U sooooo much girl! Glad U felt it! ;o]

[Tarheelbabay]

Beauty in every sense of the word..

[p8anut]

@Electra298

Thank U, so much!

[twood8686]

good job, i usually dont comment but you deserve props for this one.

[p8anut]

@twood8686

Aw, thank U, then that means a lot! I sure so appreciate it!

[p8anut]

@LasetteLucena

Thanks so much girl! I really do appreciate it! I just checked out UR channel too, is that U singing???? U sound good girl!

[79madybell]

OMG!!!! I LOVE IT <3

[p8anut]

@79madybell

Thank U, sooo much!

[ianmackenziedavis]

Nice poetry....beautiful!

[p8anut]

@ianmackenziedavis

Hey hey hey there! Thank U so much for that!

[bebobby100]

love your freckles !! nd this was tuff hun ; :) hmu !

[p8anut]

@bebobby100

Awwww, LOL, thank U so much! I use to hate them growing up too, LOL.

[bebobby100]

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[lightskin0801]

I Love this.. i feel like this about my girl... i love it.. sum of theses things run thru my mind all dha time... I love your poems...

[p8anut]

@lightskin0801

Aw, thank U, sooooo much! I'm so glad that U were able to feel this!

[dlover84]

Love the poem. Check out my page and subscribe please. Things are a little out of wack now. Im going to leave a video response as well to this poem Dinner with Someone Special. Please give feedback.

[daniellaB29]

Loved That! <3

[p8anut]

@daniellaB29

Thank U so much, Girl! ;o]

[4McPhan]

I think thats dope... I love to see fellow poets do their thing. You have a gift!

[p8anut]

@4McPhan

I sooo appreciate that!

[mexiboi1]

You have alot of heart im glad to see how your expressions and im glad to hear how your words come striaght from your heart.Keep it up i wanna hear more

[mexiboi1]

You have alot of heart and im glad to see and hear that there are still more people in this world with a heart that has compassion

[tiinaMacc]

nice!! come check out mine....ijus started the whole public reciting ...so give ya girl sum feedback ;] thx.

[p8anut]

@tiinaMacc

Thank you sooo much girl! I for sure will check you out, no worries!!!!

[jac5562]

wow you seem so beautiful in and out

[p8anut]

@jac5562

Awwwww! Thank you so much, Sweetie!

[10InTheClip]

Im still falling and this shit doesn't seem to end

[10InTheClip]

Your eyes your eyes your eyes they're like the breasts of your face you inspired me to make my pen move,

So pardon me if I stare at them too long cuz that's what men do,

Your eyes I mean..they're like pools full of jewels,Seas of gems,

The first day of spring when this season ends,

Love at first sight?,well I can see how he did,

With your sexy piercing and your pouty lips,

I fell too,really hard Like the towers did..

Like a suicidal monkey with a fucking codeine binge,

I'm still falling this sh

[goodozog]

wow! you get 4000 views for one poem.that's amazing .

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[p8anut]

@goodozog

Wow, OMG, I didn't know that until you told me! WOW! Thank you so much for pointing that out!

[goodozog]

@p8anut I like your attitude ;)

[frenchie510]

luuuuvvvvv it!!!

[p8anut]

@frenchie510

Thank you!!!!

[jamar1209]

keep doin yah thing sis. dope.feels like u took me down memory lane.n i wasnt even dere wen da memories were made. much luv and light.brightened up my evening.Me-ta-phors b wit u. keep writing.

[p8anut]

@jamar1209

"& you weren't even there when the memories were made" LOL, loved that. But most definitely! I just come real & raw, so ppl like you can feel me, you know. But man, thank you soooooo much! I really do appreciate the feedback, I really do!

[jamar1209]

@p8anut wit owt a dowt

[MizzDreampoet]

i luvee this piece (:!

[p8anut]

@MizzDreampoet

& I love you too! Thank U so much, Girl!

[1bloodsweatandtears]

BRAVO!!! :)

[p8anut]

@1bloodsweatandtears

Thank you so much!

[gigglezz16]

I loved this..wow i can relate ..Great Job Hun ! :)

[p8anut]

@gigglezz16

Aw, thank you soooo much, Girlfriend! I'm glad you were able to feel this! I appreciate the feedback a lot! ;o]

[tyshapenny]

Loved It!! It sounds like real love.

[p8anut]

@tyshapenny

So I thought it was, BUT no..... it wasn't, LOL. But thank you for the feedback! I sooo appreciate it!

[oharmon]

YOU KILLED IT!!!! From one writer to another. Kudos....

[iWrite4Me]

this is beautiful, I hope what you have lasts.

[msredruby5star]

beautiful poem can relate to it fully..the words really touched me thank you for your spoken word

[p8anut]

@msredruby5star

Thank you, Girl! I really do appreciate the love! I'm so glad you were able to really feel it! You're so welcomed! Thank you! ;o]

[vain2k6]

so beautiful, especially the way in which you presented it. x

[p8anut]

@vain2k6

Aw, thank you so much! I'm glad you were able to see & feel me & the words! Means a lot!

[p8anut]

@Mehbz

Awww, thank you so much for that! I really do appreciate it! I do! ;o]

[Mehbz]

@p8anut My comment got deleted?

[thickpashas]

that was deep....i try to write sometimes , but i cant seem to find the right words at times...that was really really good..

[p8anut]

@thickpashas

You know what, as much as I write I too get like that, & i hate that! U just have to really not think & just write. Sometimes when U think too much & doesn't come out as good or what U're tryin' to say. But thank you so much for the love, I appreciate it!

[YellowBellow11]

Yes you did do your job. I love to write love poems even if it does not have to do with the person Im with. Love such a strong word, but also a hurtful pain. But your welcome with what I said about your poem.

[p8anut]

@YellowBellow11

You write too, well thats even better! I love to write love poems as well, but unfortunately it has to be about someone. Its hard for me to write about something if I don't feel it, you know. & yes, most definitely is it a hurtful pain. This poem actually ended up being a sad love poem, LOL. Yes, he broke my heart. But I am all healed now. ;o]

[YellowBellow11]

@p8anut Yes I do, but when I don't write about the one I love I write about what I want to feel or wish I could have. Sometimes those poems came out better then the other ones. But I'm sad to hear that, the way you spoke made it seem like it was going to last forever. But also your words could be so powerful at times.

[p8anut]

@YellowBellow11

Trust me, I thought too it would last forever. But hey, things happen, you know. But yea, those poems at times can sound a lot better than an actual love poem. ;o]

[YellowBellow11]

This made me tear up! You hit me to the heart and this made me think about my love.

[p8anut]

@YellowBellow11

Awww, are you serious! Well then I think I did my job! I'm so glad that this was able to touch you like how I was touched to write it! Thank you so much!

[TheLami123]

ITS GREAT!!!

[p8anut]

@TheLami123

Thank you, girl!

[mrspinknails14]

girl this is great. no advice. its just great. you have inspired me to write more. and for that i wanna thank you

[p8anut]

@mrspinknails14

Aw, thank you girl! I really do appreciate it! I do! It was straight from my heart! Most definitely you should write girl, you never know what you'll come up with! ;o]

[mrspinknails14]

@p8anut

yea i mean i do write but im trying to figure out how to get real deep into my poems more. a friend of mine told me to try harder but i honestly dnt know how to

[p8anut]

@mrspinknails14

You just have to write without thinking. Don't think about what you're feeling, just write whatever comes to mind. The more you think about wrting the more you start second guessing & the less you open up. Just write as if its a diary, like a secret. Thats what I do. ;o]

[mrspinknails14]

@p8anut

thank you...again. thank you

[p8anut]

@mrspinknails14

Girl, you are hella' welcomed! But thank you! ;o]

[vanofran]

see, you can feel the passion in ones voice. before you started, and the way you flow in your poem are two differing personalities. so man, i jsut say good job, i loved it.

[p8anut]

@vanofran

Im so glad you're able to notice & feel! Thank you oh so veeeery much!

[TR3NDiiL0V3STYRAB]

Absolutely Amazing!!!!! Just brilliant!! *snaps*

[p8anut]

@TR3NDiiL0V3STYRAB

THANK YOU GIRL! Thank you sooooooooooo much!

[iRaiwkz]

very cute and sweet!

[afaronaccentgordon]

wooww well done feelin it

[p8anut]

@afaronaccentgordon

Thank you sooooooo much!

[musicsocialstar]

i love long poems

that was deep

you take my mind and run with it

you move me

[p8anut]

@musicsocialstar

Sorry for the late response. But wow, I loved your feedback! Thank you soooo much! I swear, I appreciate the love!

[AlijahJade]

Amazing! :)

[p8anut]

@AlijahJade

Wow, thanks so much for that! ;o]

[p8anut]

@UrbanCityWarZone

Hey, hey! WassuP! Thanks so much for the love! I so appreciate it man! :op