Music GCSE Composition One - Ternary Piece ( Se lever - rise )

[Roserade336]

it's pretty good 2 me

i just started GCSEs and this was a really good insparation.

keep trying harder!

[iibrett]

@Roserade336 no problem :) if you ever need any help contact me on this channel now

[riddlesticks123]

Mine is better.

[iibrett]

good for you

[riddlesticks123]

yeah it is good for me, cos i got a higher mark

[iibrett]

i couldnt care less :) i've passed and got an A

[riddlesticks123]

Eugh you only got an A? Better luck next time, ohwait...

[iibrett]

lol@you im a dumb ass - B Grade student, well at GCSE

[riddlesticks123]

lol well done anyway, you did better than some of the people i know. So you cant be that bad :D

[iibrett]

ahaha i love how you say all that and then your just like

WELL DONE :) thanks, and i do know this is pretty bad, i couldnt use sibelius for shit or compose anything so its not THAT bad if youtake that into account

[riddlesticks123]

eughh yeah i was pretty shit at sibelius (still got an A* :P) last year but im doing it for A level this year and i've suddenly got a lot better... i guess practice makes perfect.

[iibrett]

aha im doing Music Tech now :) its pretty good, i wanted to take music too, but my mum was like, people arent going to want 2 a levels in music blah blah

[whyaremyfingerscold]

better than tbh =]

[psychodudebrett]

Better than tbh? lol

[whyaremyfingerscold]

better than mine* haha

[psychodudebrett]

ooo lol

[Shaftsus]

Try make the accompaniment a little more complicated - gave it more rhythm and you'll get extra marks for that.

[robgreig]

The composition is very good. A few points of constructive criticism...

The melody and chords at the end of the A section seem to clash. This may be intentional but it didn't quite fit with the rest of the piece.

You may want to revisit the ending, although I know it is annoying and difficult to make a good ending without sounding clichéd.

Your teacher's feedback will probably be more useful than mine though. Still overall very good, better than most GCSE compositions (at least in my school)

[psychodudebrett]

thanks for your critisism but this composition was sent off a long time ago, so i couldnt do anything to it now. and for the ending, pfft i know its aweful ahah.

thanks =D