I can hear all of your words ... I like this very much! It seems to me some users of YouTube may expect quality beyond the nature of the forum. By this I mean beyond demo or into the realm of broadcast TV. I guess that's one way to approach viewing but YouTube is so much more than that. What you have here demonstrates good songwriting and performance I think. And I also think it's good to put material "out there" as fast as it is written. I can see you doing this live to an audience.
english prz? how can a riff be a ripoff if if it's different chords. a lot of songs have the same rhythm, there's only so many rhythmic timings in music.
some parts of the songs sounded strange, others pretty nice in tone. The thing you need is more guitar, well, meaning a lot louder and in parts where you sing more passionatly, play faster and louder to create the sound which is needed to compliment your singing.
I think you have talent both as performer and writer--but I confess I did not understand what you were singing about.Either enunciate more emphatically or add subtitles--a great innovation! This is not meant to be critical. YOu are good!
I added the lyric to the descriptions. I hope that might help, although I confess you are right and I need to do this one over again. Thanks, and enjoy!
I thought I commented on this a while ago..der.
Well, I love it and love your voice so much with or with out music.
pieceworkstudios 3 years ago
Okay, this one is also a great original.
raw420x 3 years ago
I can hear all of your words ... I like this very much! It seems to me some users of YouTube may expect quality beyond the nature of the forum. By this I mean beyond demo or into the realm of broadcast TV. I guess that's one way to approach viewing but YouTube is so much more than that. What you have here demonstrates good songwriting and performance I think. And I also think it's good to put material "out there" as fast as it is written. I can see you doing this live to an audience.
whinersmusic 3 years ago
I really appreciate your words. I have since posted some live music videos.
hiflynblues 3 years ago
...very cool!!
melbookermusic 4 years ago
well-written. This song is uniquely yours, no one else would be able to carry it like you.
rio197 4 years ago
Well done! Keep it up! Best wishes, Kien
kienlim 5 years ago
Nice voice - keep posting
reginaldbosinquette 5 years ago
the guitar part was a melody ripoff off of the song called Stonesour Bother, it had the same rythem just different coords.
gambla153 5 years ago
Honestly never heard it. So no ripoff, just a poor similarity. My guitar stuff sucks, so I kind of feel bad for the comparison.
hiflynblues 5 years ago
english prz? how can a riff be a ripoff if if it's different chords. a lot of songs have the same rhythm, there's only so many rhythmic timings in music.
Epicus 4 years ago
some parts of the songs sounded strange, others pretty nice in tone. The thing you need is more guitar, well, meaning a lot louder and in parts where you sing more passionatly, play faster and louder to create the sound which is needed to compliment your singing.
great job and keep at it.
xanderex2 5 years ago
I think you have talent both as performer and writer--but I confess I did not understand what you were singing about.Either enunciate more emphatically or add subtitles--a great innovation! This is not meant to be critical. YOu are good!
taumm 5 years ago
I crave constructive criticism. Thank you. I will try to record again with better camera, and audio.
hiflynblues 5 years ago
I added the lyric to the descriptions. I hope that might help, although I confess you are right and I need to do this one over again. Thanks, and enjoy!
hiflynblues 5 years ago
Again, thanks for your input!
hiflynblues 3 years ago
I wish i had as much guts as you and the other girls recording your songs on here... i love singing just dont have the guts to show it off..
SxcEyes69 5 years ago
omg
daup 5 years ago
u are awesome girl, u really are! keep doing it!
MaddyAni 5 years ago
great voice!
MusicM4chine 5 years ago
Yes silly!Its about what I am going through right now
hiflynblues 5 years ago
Can't get enough. Did you write this one?
Huffnhustle 5 years ago
This is really crappy, looking and sounding, but I want to get the new song out there.
hiflynblues 5 years ago