School days amv Beta twinkle twinkle little star(dead space version) Dedicated to MandySlazer

[SnowdropDreamer]

Niiicee. Totally creepy! I think you did a great job show casing the anime's darkness. However, it was a bit jumpy from time to time and I think you could've edited it to where it was more smooth. Also, I really like the red parts. That was cool. Good job Buddeh!

[MUSTARDMACDADY]

@SnowdropDreamer Oh wow...editing advice? XDD well I guess Ill refer to you as studio buddeh sensei for the duration of this comment XD thanks! :D wont deny that editing this was a bit rough..at the time I useing testing out a bunch of diffrent effects. But you make good points(: Ill keep that in mind for next time. Thanks studio buddeh sensei!(: XD

[SnowdropDreamer]

@MUSTARDMACDADY Just a little advice. D; And I can tell the heart and soul you put into it, and it turned out really good. I liked all the effects you used. :DD And lol. You're welcome? XD

[MUSTARDMACDADY]

@SnowdropDreamer Aww no no dont misunderstand! D: I really am thanking you for your input! Most people that watch my videos only leave comments saying.."awesome" or really good. Not that those comments are bad...I honestly really like geting postive feedback for my videos(: But Iam also trying to improve with my editing as well. So its really nice geting comments that give ideas on how to better so I can keep improveing. So really thanks alote buddeh! :D

[SnowdropDreamer]

@MUSTARDMACDADY Okay good. *phew* I like getting criticized too. It makes me feel like they actually watched the video and want to help me out, you know? I like that much more than just, "amazing" or "awesome" cause they tell you what was "awesome" or "amazing" and you find out what you need to improve on. :D & You're very welcome! :3 I hope it does help you improve. XD

[jdsluffy]

Wow man.. Now I'm scary. ..I will not want to see the continuation because I'm afraid of the bogeyman, gray screens and people.. x'DD

I'm kidding..Its very good.. But seriously. If I were small, if had more "secret" blood and had a vivid imagination, I would be afraid of it...

Ok, I already have a fertile imagination. But you got it.. o.OOO [Scary eye]

Congratulations man.. Your AMV is convincing... o.OO [Scary eye again]

[MUSTARDMACDADY]

@jdsluffy LOL! Another awesome comment from you XDD if this amv scares u even a little..then you better stay away from this anime..cuase its 10 times worse than this amv...XD mostly at the last epsisode though(: anyways thanks alote bro! And I agree with you on you haveing a vivid imagination...XD Your awesome bro(:

[jdsluffy]

@MUSTARDMACDADY

Yeah..I never really liked horror.

I like most anime that has a cute little kitten called Happy and anime that has a cute reindeer named Chopper. There are a lot of anime with this. x'DD

[rena7nana]

super inuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

[vladimir2tod4ever97]

O.O Creepy...It's like a Horror AMV....You should submit this somewhere....

[MUSTARDMACDADY]

@vladimir2tod4ever97 OMG YOU REALLY THINK SO?! o_O to be honest I kinda was unsure how I felt about this amv over all...I mean it was my first try at horror and everything. And its also video thats very well liked so idk. But do you honestly think this would go good somewhere? O: If so where? BTW thanks! :D I will also be responding to ur pm in a bit(:

[vladimir2tod4ever97]

@MUSTARDMACDADY Okay.^^ And into an Horror AMV contest or you could always try at some anime con.=)

[MUSTARDMACDADY]

@vladimir2tod4ever97 XD I doubt seriously this could win something like that..XD but maybe if I find a contest of that sort ill randomly enter it anyway(: have you ever entered a con before?

[vladimir2tod4ever97]

@MUSTARDMACDADY No but I plan to make an AMV for one someday.^^ Maybe my FMA Let it Burn AMV...^^

[MUSTARDMACDADY]

@vladimir2tod4ever97 XP I meant its not very well liked. XD

[MandySlazer]

I cant believe i didnt comment on this but i think i know why! cause every time i try to comment on it youtube changes it to the next video!!!!!!! Anyways you know I loved the video and im glad you still like school days and thank you for putting the dedication to me!

[MUSTARDMACDADY]

@MandySlazer XD no problemo!(: XD I was happy to be able to dedicate this to you(: hopefully whenever someone watchs this video they will see your name and wonder who you are. Afterwards they might serach for your channel and be blown away by how wonderful your amvs are!(:

[2uchiha2]

Awesome! both the song and the clips are really giving a creepy vibe so it's really good considering it's your first time editing with horror!

[MUSTARDMACDADY]

@2uchiha2 OMG! O: how in the world did you find this video? This happens to be one I never sent out to anyone or advertised in the least :O thank very much comment though! Really made my day!(:(: this amvs might be my least popular video so it makes me happy that some ppl like it(: thanks very much!(:

[2uchiha2]

@MUSTARDMACDADY well I was looking through your chanel and I saw it and it was really good so I had to comment on it :D It's a really good one so keep on going like this!

[Nmboy305]

Awesome glad you finally released it! I think you can win this, without even seeing the competition yet! If their is a message to be taken from this vid

it's basically...don't cheat lol!!

[shamsada]

Haha, nice one dude! One note though; I'd put a, or rather, the deaths more at the end. With Makoto's head showing in the 5th second, and Kotonoha suiciding a few seconds later, you've missed your chance to climax at the end. Important, shocking, and other things which can climax should always come later! ;) But, I do love how you didn't follow my guidelines by the lettre. Gave your own spin to it. like to see that from an editor, Creativity!

[MUSTARDMACDADY]

@shamsada XD well thanks(: yeah I orginaly wanted to follow your advice and put something shocking at the end but had no clue what to put there at the time. And The whole Kotonoha suicide thing only happened at that point in the song becuase of how the lyrics sounded. I Seriously had no clue of what else to put there Otherwise I would have gladly placed her suicide death at the end. You make a good points though. Ill be sure to learn from this and improve on the next one. Thanks dude(:

[RyuAmakusa01]

not bad ^^ good luck for ur beta battle :D

[MUSTARDMACDADY]

@RyuAmakusa01 Thanks dude!(: looking forward to seeing how yours turns out to(: