I agree, Gone Baby Gone is brilliant! I'll get these books, one at a time and allow the stories inside to come out as great screenplays. Thank you for inspiring!
Sharon thank you so much for your advice. I hope you can add more advice soon . I am working on a script and it's a whole world or creativity and fun for me. I think I really have a gem and only after it's finished and gone through ten drafts will I know for sure. hope to see new videos soon joe
I'm sorry but you wasted at least three fucking minutes just blabbing. It's nice you met Ben Affleck but what does this have to do with scriptwriting. And also, don't call a video a recipe for scriptwriting in ten minutes when all you do is read off a bunch of book titlles. Why don't you take the knowledge you've learned from these books and make a more productive video. Damn it I'm not 11 mintues older and I'll never get that back.
You look like an older Celine Dion. Sorry, off topic - but thanks for the tips! I plan to be an Oscar winning screenwriter one day, im a 15 year old ambitionist!
@logmein84 Robert Mackee is a wonderful teacher. I'm just giving writers the most time and quality efficient package. The list of books I suggest in my opinion give any would-be-writer one of the quickest and most firm foundation for creating a great screenplay. If a writer continues to read "every" book available out there...they will never have time to write the great screenplay. If someone wants to read other great books to guide them I would of course suggest STORY by Robert Mackee.
really great video. very motivational and inspirational. i have my first lengthy-ish screenplay due for my writing class in a couple weeks and this definitely helped out with the nerves i've been having. thanks alot!
nice video:D i am just wondering one thing. lets just say someone made something that is great, he goes sends it to some festivals and you win some awards .. then what happends next it feels like nothing unless you are gonna get hunting some " hollywood folks" im talking about short films of 10 mins
Thank you, wonderful video! I enjoy the conversational tone, and your good cheer put me in a wonderfully productive mood! Brain food is such a wonderful weapon against the blank page.
Also, sorry to hear about your dad. My condolences. Keep smiling and laughing, it is an honor to those who've passed.
you've done everything I hope to do, I want to ask you so much, but for now I'll just thank you for giving me some steps to creating a masterpiece. MY masterpiece.
I don't know if I iike the idea that a character always has to transform. That's a Hollywood notion. That's candy-coated. I sometimes like to see a character sink tragically into oblivion with all his flaws exposed. Ironwood, Babenco's movie about homeless alcoholics, starring Jack Nicholson and Meryl Streep. She dies. He visits his family after being gone for many years and just can't readapt and winds up leaving. It's a beautiful movie. Some transformation here and there, not much.
So happy to hear from you. I've been very sporadic posting videos this year because my dad has been ill and just passed. His funeral is Friday. With my attention on his care I've been unable to watch and make many videos. Although I've not had the time to follow your wonderful creative growth...from the very beginning it was obvious that you are headed in the right direction with your talents.
I expect great success from you. You are a great Renaissance man and you have service in your heart.
I am so sorry to read that about your dad. I went through the same recently with my mum.
As absurd as it sounds try to see the positive and it will help you cope. See that you had the opportunity to care for him, that you could tell him you loved him, that he passed away knowing he was loved and so on. Many people don't have those opportunities so there are positives.
Thank you! I am a huge believer in karma and reaping what you sow. If I was a blessing to mum it's because she was a blessing to me. I'm sure you know exactly what I mean!
At 46 I am a complete newbie at screenwriting and am currently reading number two on your list, Hero with a thousand faces(Thanks to you!)
My sincerest thanks to you as I find it wonderful that industry experts devote so much time to us newbies.
I am on my 4th screenplay and I know my scripts are great but where do I start? Like getting an agent? Do I send a query? Do they really read those? Is there a book you can recommend on getting your script to the right person that will read it? I just keep writing but my stuff is ready for the next level.
Thanks,
Sherilyn
p.s. What about women in film? would joining that group help?
Thanks Sharon! I love this. I have all those books and have tried the 21 day thing but haven't completed it. Yet.
But I am doing some writing but what about TV pilots? Those are the hardest thing ever, and I am doing my best and studying the pilots of some shows but ... argh.
I left you a message on Friday, I think. Hope to see you soon!
Thanks Tamie. My dad just got out of the hospital so I'm in overwhelm taking care of him and mom (She had a stroke as in a wheelchair. I've been her 24/7 caretaker for 4 years)...so the best place to reach me is either by phone.
Since I don't type...(it's painful and doctors have asked me to stop typing...but I cheat and peck here and there)...phone is best communication tool.
I don't deal with TV pilots so I can't answer too many questions on that one. Love to see you when I can breath again.
sorry another thing i meant to ask was how long should a treatment be for a film. I know its going to be shorter than the script because its an outline but wasn't sure what i should realistically be looking at.
Although some people say that they should be no longer than 20 pages double spaced...rules are meant to be broken and often are...just use common sense.
I know many writers that do very short treatments and others who have gone far beyond the normal 20 pages.
When Academy Award winning writer, Stirling Silliphant, pitched my production company 12 different projects his treatments ranged from 3 pages to15 pages.
I only liked one of his projects...but we were looking for finished scripts.
Thanks very much for this. I've just finished my second year of university studying film production and now I'm adapting a book into a screenplay. How many pages should a feature be, should I stick with 1 page per minute rule?
One page per minute is the norm however sometimes 1 page of action might take a lot longer to film or if your 1 page is heavily filled with dialogue.
An average screenplay is 120 pages but just look at the films over the years that have won the best picture Oscar and you will find that many of them have as many as 180 pages.
Some stories have to be told in a longer form but economy is encouraged. Sadly today people's attention spans have shortened to the point that they are almost nonexistant.
Comparing "Slumdog Millionaire", The English Patient or Joe Wright's films Pride And Prejudice and Atonement to the original books might give you a crash course in adaptation.
Joe Wright is in the UK. I've bumped into him 4 times in the last 3 years here in Marin and he's always quite pleasant and happy to share advice. Perhaps you can write him and find a mentor close to home.
Hi Sharon Very useful recommendations thanks. I am UK based and BAFTA member. I am lucky enough to have first screenplay being considered by good producer here ..but he has recommended that I get an agent. I think that the in current investment climate and for the scale of projects i am writing a LA based agent would be best. I have several historical based ideas 'in progress'. How do I go about finding the right agent without wasting a lot of peoples time? would the WGA be a start? thanks SC.
I'd rather encourage writers to get their screenplay into the hands of a director who might resonate with the material or an A-list actor who would be passionate about your project. Also, since you're in the U.K. perhaps you might want to package the project yourself and start with taking a meeting with Channel 4 to see if they might be able to put up a percentage of the financing to start or contact someone like Kevin Spacey over at the Old Vict to see if he might mentor you and your project.
Just wanted to add regarding "Memoirs of a Geisha"...in the early 80's I had an interesting opportunity to bring my dance act to Japan.
I fell in love with Japan, it's people and it's culture. I had so many amazing opportunities thrown at me. Offers to do films, music albums etc...it was surreal. The most unusual opportunity was an invitation to enter the world of the Geisha.
I thought the movie was OK. but felt the Geisha's debut was anti-climactic. The dance should have been much better.
Hi Sharon, I have 20 appts. at the screenwriteers expo. Companies like Dreamworks, WB, Simon West, Walden, Village Roadshow and many others. Do you have any suggestions on how to present your script well in 5 minutes? Any suggestions you might have would be greatly appreciated. I want to make the most of this opprotunity. Thanks again, your the best. Rick
Sharon, I don't know if you remember me, but I have chatted with you a few times via this site. Your advice has been invaluable. My script is entered in the filmmakers 8th annual screenwriters awards and has made it to the quarterfinals. Over 1300 entries and I am one of 31 still left in the main catagory. I am also entered in the screenwriters expo contest as well and plan to go next month. Is there any chance you will be going to the expo as well? I would love to meet you. You are the best.
You are just darling. Sharon, I just adore your eyes. It was nice to watch this and I agree, "Gone Baby Gone" was not only a great story, but for Ben's first movie as a Director, he scored big. I hope to see him in the Director's chair more often as I feel that is where he belongs. - I'm currently working on a number of scripts and love every minute of it.
I noticed, you aren't wearing a wedding ring; I'd feed you strawberries.
And yes I hope we see some more films from director, Ben Affleck.
And no I am not married. I've never been married but I have been engaged to someone whose face is quite familiar to many people throughout our country and some parts of the world.
And who knows maybe Affleck will direct one of your scripts someday.
I have no college or university education in writing screenplays and I think it's what has kept me back from pursuing it as a career. I just got back my feedback from a well known script doctor and got a great response to it and I'm thrilled because I LOVE WRITING. Anybody who is intimidated by the process because they think their not good enough... Just get to it and do what makes you happy. I'm entering my screenplay Waverly Hills into several competitions and hope it does well.
This woman is so smart, and I agree with her opinion of Gone Baby Gone. Everyone around me keeps saying that its precisely about "who you know." I'm so glad Sharon flipped this rumour on its head and reminded me how important Story is, and how it should not be put secondary. Mingling might work for some people, but I'm more interested in writing a screenplay worthy of remembering. Thanks for the inspiration Sharon; You don't know how important these kinds of videos are to screenwriters.
Sharon has some good info and some good energy, keep up the good work.
I've read a number of screenplays from people who are early on in their writing career, and yes some are much better than others, but one tip I would strongly suggest is to do a read-through a couple of times with some actors--it might help iron out some parts that don't quite work that one might not "hear" or "see" otherwise.
I recently wrote my first screenplay called the WEB, with a fellow co author which can be viewed on scriptbuddy but I felt that screenplay for dummies helped me. A very simple book that took me from the beginning and helped me through all the challenges. The books she recomended are very good and besides the ones she's mentioned I will throw in The screenwriters bible by: David Trottier.
My advice to all up and coming screenwriters is to write in your own vision, and don't succumb to the market industry that is Hollywood.Lately, almost everything coming out of Hollywood has been subliminal propaganda promoting war and "patriotism". So I suggest for all of you to gather up some money and produce your vision yourself.
I couldn't have said it better...electricturf...excellent advice.
Good luck with your writing...I hope you end up being one of those writers that brings fine stories to the screen....if that is your passion and desire.
Great stories nourish the soul.
Thank you so much for your comments and contributions.
Well there is a lot of nonsense out there about writing screenplays for people wanting to begin, and I can say without doubt - that this is one of the most useful videos I have found on youtube about the subject. Thank you very much.
i have one almost done and planning out characters, plot, dilemma, for another. and i'm psyched about both but have no confidence in selling them, i have no clue where to start
my advice to you, im a screenwriter too, is being phsyched isnt enough, you need confiendence in all aspects - if you believe your script is commercial and like no other, you will no - get the script finished, be persistent and find yourself a ligitimate agent - he/she will sell it for you ;D
i suggest you go to the writers guild of america site and take a look through all the recommended literary agencies then, check out which one you like a right a query letter - if they request your screenplay, most likely by email, and they like it - they'll take you on board and get the script out there for you.
I wish I had your movie experience! I really love your energy and charisma. I would love to hire you as a 'sounding board' for the business side of movie making and perhaps we can address this in the future. Your video was inspiring because it's evident that you're a business person who thrives on creativity. Bless you, thank you. :)
Thank you...having movie experience is not as important as talent, perseverance, positive thinking, faith and the ability to take creative action toward your goal.
I know many seasoned directors and writers who no longer have faith and it keeps them from their goal.
I actually purchased some of the books that you mentioned and I am excited about the opportunity to read them and learn. I have already made it through about 25% of the Goldman book, and I have to say that it has been very fun and informative so far. I thank you for your recommendations. I look forward to hearing from you in the future, as I will be dropping by from time-to-time with questions and comments. Thank you so much.
Intelligent AND sexy. You have all the right credentials. As I burst into song... "If I knew you were coming I'd have baked a cake." Back to my script 'Memoirs of Dirty Max'...new entry..."If a ladder appears in your tights...I'd climb it". [inspired by your blog]
As for the sensational and provoking script of Good Will Hunting, I'm sure it was re-written and worked over behind the scenes by many other people extensively.
Being that Ben or Matt have not written anything even remotely as nuanced since.
Gone Baby Gone was based on a book by Dennis Lehane so it is hard to fault the movie for being responsible for being formulaic.
Where it was no formulaic was in the casting. Amy Ryan deserved the Oscar for her stunning performance and Affleck integrated in many local non performers.
The original Good Will Hunting script went through massive rewrites taking out the stuff about Matt's character being recruited by the FBI for spy work.
Nothing new...most scripts go through massive rewrites.
The books I mention can give you guidance in this area. If you are a creative writer...I suggest be creative in your approach to the agencies if that is the path you have chosen for your first step to get your script produced.
I always advocate that writers educate themselves about producing so that they are in the driver's seat when it comes to the direction their script takes.
Research the business so that you know how to navigate the waters and protect your creation.
I need some help. In my story, a group of sub-militaristic officers have to battle their way through hordes of monsters to escape from a lab. what kind of character arc could be used for that kind of story?
Thank you. I know it is Goldman...One of my best friends is a man named William Golden...So if I made a slip at anytime...it's all my friend, William's fault.
What I mean when I say there is no such thing as a perfect screenplay is...
A script is a blueprint, there are many other elements that bring it to life on the screen.
A script can on the surface appear perfect yet it may lack the living spark that brings it alive. It is my theory that it is the writer's spark that ignites the the script into a living breathing entity. That spark is only present when the writer has achieved his/her own personal transformation.
Anyhow, I have a question. Do you have any advise about how to approach an adaptation? I really want to adapt a story I've read and seen for the past two years. No one has adapted this material yet and I know it would be pretty impossible for me to obtain the copyrights but I still think that its an Oscar Worthy story. So any advise???
Hi, I found your video while conducting a search on you tube. Thanks for offering such insightful advice to fellow aspiring writers. I'm a screenwriting student. I try to read, write, and research a lot to improve my skills. I try to read as many screenplays I can online so I can see the various writing styles. I own several screen writing books that I have stored away at home for reference. I even surprised my professor with all the books I had one day.
I must say this is EXACTLY, and I mean EXACTLY what I needed to see and gather courage to write my story (thank you!!!!!). I feel I have a wonderful story that will be amazing to witness - but I always feel that it is a little too personal to write it down. I just cant gather the courage to see my personal experience mold into characters and events - but I think this time, I will take that chance. I have just one small request - once I finish my story would you be kind enough to read my script?
I really want to wish you well. If you read the books I've
mentioned in the order I've recommended ... the books will provide great mentorship and coaching for your idea.
I am unable to look at your script...but you do not need me to tell you you are doing a great job. If your story is meant to be manifested into a feature film or Movie of the Week you will have an exciting and enlightening journey forging your own path.
Hi Sharon, I recieved my critique and I have made the necessary changes needed, mainly formatting issues I had. I was wondering what you thought about an idea I had to try to get it in the right hands. I was thing of doing a video synopsis and putting it on YouTube. I have registered the screenplay with the WGA but I dont have it copywritten. Would this be too risky of a move you think? Someone could steal the idea, but it might also open some doors. You look great in your latest video Thanks!!!
The best way to insure it gets into the right person's hands is to first make sure the script is so awesome that not one reader could ever interrupt themselves to put it down.
Then get quiet ...very still and listen to your inner guidance. No one can ever tell you how to do something because everyone carries their own private navigation system inside.
Just listen to the quiet voice inside and have the courage to follow it.
Hi Sharon - Could you help me with something? I recently wrote a script, it's my first script, and I want to sell it and, if possible direct it. If it gets in production of coarse. But I'm very young and unexperienced. And I don't really know what to do. But I think I can really create a piece of art from this script - coming from a girl that has low self-esteem. Should I get into an agency? Which one? At what age do they usually take you in? Could I direct it? I have like so many questions.
Hello, can you recommend the best way to find a good agent? My screenplay is registered and I want to send it out. You can hear a ten minute reading by clicking on my youtube account.
Hope to hear back.
By the way, i have read them all. Syd and Campbell are the masters.
Thank you again for any advice you may have Sharon. I watch your video 2-3 times a week for inspiration. I would love to hear your thoughts on the length of a scirpt and how long is too long to get noticed. Thanks again, Rick
I was informed by the agency that is doing my critique that it will be very difficult to get anyone to consider my script unless it is less than 120 pages in length. I was able to shorten it from 195 pages down to 150. I don't feel I can effectively tell this story cutting it another 30 pages. Do you believe this is true? Will I have a hard time getting someone to consider my screenplay if it is not less than 120 pages in length? Do you have any suggestions on how to shorten the length?
Best picture Oscars went to many films that were around 180 pages.
Some directors like Kevin Costner say that length doesn't matter as long as it's a great script.
Most people in the industry won't touch a screenplay over 120 so you are taking a risk...however if the screenplay is outstanding it just may be the perfect project they are looking for...and you might get lucky.
I just finished the format. I got it to 135 pages and I think it's better for it. I hope the critiquer likes it half as much as I do. They said 135 pages is good enough. Thansk again for your help. Keeping my fingers crossed.
Thanks Sharon, I have a literary agent now and I am currently getting my first critique done. I'll be sure to let ya know if anything happens. I appreciate your advice.
BravO! I'm very excited for you. I hope you will look at the process of getting your project into production as an enlightening and rewarding adventure.
Thanks for the recipe Sharon and for those encouraging words. I have been stuck for awhile on 70 page. I am so close, but so far away. thanks again and I will let my finger do the walking and my imagnation run wild.
Good luck. I wish you well. One of the most important elements most writers seem to overlook is the stage Joseph Campbell refers to as "The Atonement With The Father". (which he elaborates on in the book I mention in the recipe). I highly recommend digesting that information over and over again. It is the major ingredient that helps the cake to rise...and the one ingredient that most writers seem to leave out.
Great video, I just loved it. I have just finished my screenplay and It took bit longer than 21 days, 45 to be exact. You video gave me hope. I don't know anybody in "The Biz" however I feel I have a blockbuster on my hands. I just hope I can find someone with a broken down car now that knows somebody that knows somebody. Trying to send out those positive vibs :) GREAT VIDEO SHARON! BTW any advice on getting your script into the right hands?
That's where William Goldman's book, "Adventures Of The Screen Trade" comes in (one of the books I mention in the recipe). As he is often quoted, "Nobody in Hollywood knows anything". So it's up to you to become like Lewis and Clark, be a pioneer of your own path. Grant yourself permission to be creative and embark on a journey that no man has gone. The greatest reward is personal transformation.
Sharon the Fox, You truely are the most fox! Our training for the Earth Mission was watching cartoons and Black and White movies. One of the controlers manipulated the writers strike. It was determined that the writers "Sucked". The plan is they will all either stay; fired, died of old age, retire, or get jobs at McD's. Frio, First Sceince Officer.
Hi, I truly thank you for your help, I am in the process of making a screenplay...and am just wondering Do you think its worth it? I mean its professionaly done and a great story but will it get discovered by someone in Hollywood?
finally got "how to write a movie in 21 days" in the mail today! Still havn't gotten the others. I know u said it had to be read in a specific order, but does it really?:P I'm so anxious and wanna get started. Can't I read "how to write a movie in 21 days" first?
Yes I do recommend reading them in order....because the books I suggest you read first provide you with the foundational building blocks to structure and build your story properly.
"How To Write A Movie In 21 Days" ...is your personal coach (top chef) to help keep you on track writing your screenplay once the other books have provided you with the main ingredients.
If English isn't your first language you might want to track down John Truby's screenwriting audio tapes.
John Flynn, a film director I used to live with always listened to John Truby's tapes when ever he had a script to write or direct. Truby really knows his stuff. He doesn't inject a lot of personality into his audios so some people have fallen asleep listening to them. I love the tapes and find them very helpful. You can Google Truby and easily find his website. Good Luck!
thank you so much for this video. I have been looking for some advice. Thankfully its charismas soon so maybe my dad will buy me some or all the books you recommended. I have always wanted to be an actor but after some bad experiences two years ago with a drama school I decided I should take a break from acting. So for the last year I have been looking into directing and screenwriting. I am currently working on a 10-minute play for a theatre here in London so wish me luck with that :)
Last week I saw "Atonement" ten days before its U.S. release.
Joe Wright and the star, James McAvoy were present for a Q&A and a reception after the film.
Joe Wright is from London and started as an actor...today after directing "Pride and Prejudice" and "Atonement" (both with Keira Knightley)...it is obvious he is one of the finest storytellers alive today.
With such great role models, hopefully you will write your own path to success.
Of course there are a many other wonderful screenwriting teachers out there like Richard Walters, Bob McKee and others. This is a list I recommend because these books cover most of the bases and should give you all the principals one would need to learn the craft...then it is up to the writer to practice the craft. Good Luck!
If you have a great take on the story and your script is well executed with the potential to attract big stars and a good director...keep on going. There are many actors who would love to do a western. And if your story (like "Unforgiven") involves transformation and redemption...you may be the one to deliver an Oscar worthy script. Good Luck and keep on persevering. See you on the red carpet!
I don't usually comment on videos, but I like this woman everybody. I never heard anybody in the business say, they got there money ready to see the next movie from a up and comer, that was really great, and very supportive, I hope she is one of the people I see when I start shopping my scripts, she sounds like a really good person, and she didn't come off as a no it all. Thanks for the advice, I was picking my brain trying to finish one of my scripts. I seen you and listened.
James, your videos are wonderful. You have the intellect and the humor to create a wonderful screenplay. I would love to see you put some time aside in your busy schedule to start gathering the ingredients together to bake a great screenplay.
Start baking! And thanks for the wonderful enthusiastic support you always give me especially when I run off for months on my political activity missions with the Tibetans, Democrats or whatever. You are always there and I truly appreciate that.
My word a year ago I became a partner and since then have done loads of stuff. At the moment on a personal effectiveness course and not had a chance to write anything but have you seen The Little Panda show on CDMAGZ or CLOWNSINC thats my little baby at the moment.
Oh and finally reached the threshold on my google adsense, first cheque next month.
Yes i am always there and never forget my true friends.
One last point remember Matt Damon and Ben Afflek were actors first. Both were in school days and other movies before good will hunting so they already had connections.
True they started to make contacts while working in Hollywood...however the"Goodwill Hunting" draft that Matt Damon and Ben Affleck first started pitching hardly resembles the shooting script that they ended up with. No amount of contacts would have helped them get their original script produced. Both the script and their own life experience needed to be transformed before they could attract the appropriate elements that would turn the switch for a green light.
Goodness your energy is magnetic.... you are so beautiful..... i must say.
DavidCentsofHumor 1 month ago
I agree, Gone Baby Gone is brilliant! I'll get these books, one at a time and allow the stories inside to come out as great screenplays. Thank you for inspiring!
thomaifilm 2 months ago
I agree, Gone Baby Gone was brilliant! Thank you for inspiring.
thomaifilm 2 months ago
Sharon thank you so much for your advice. I hope you can add more advice soon . I am working on a script and it's a whole world or creativity and fun for me. I think I really have a gem and only after it's finished and gone through ten drafts will I know for sure. hope to see new videos soon joe
flyingjoey 6 months ago
I'm sorry but you wasted at least three fucking minutes just blabbing. It's nice you met Ben Affleck but what does this have to do with scriptwriting. And also, don't call a video a recipe for scriptwriting in ten minutes when all you do is read off a bunch of book titlles. Why don't you take the knowledge you've learned from these books and make a more productive video. Damn it I'm not 11 mintues older and I'll never get that back.
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chahill79 8 months ago
Great information. I am always smart enough to listen.
Filmaker25 9 months ago
You look like an older Celine Dion. Sorry, off topic - but thanks for the tips! I plan to be an Oscar winning screenwriter one day, im a 15 year old ambitionist!
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logmein84 1 year ago 2
@logmein84 Robert Mackee is a wonderful teacher. I'm just giving writers the most time and quality efficient package. The list of books I suggest in my opinion give any would-be-writer one of the quickest and most firm foundation for creating a great screenplay. If a writer continues to read "every" book available out there...they will never have time to write the great screenplay. If someone wants to read other great books to guide them I would of course suggest STORY by Robert Mackee.
sharonafox1 7 months ago
Sharon, thanks so much for the reading list. Really great suggestions!
EternalKyr 1 year ago
really great video. very motivational and inspirational. i have my first lengthy-ish screenplay due for my writing class in a couple weeks and this definitely helped out with the nerves i've been having. thanks alot!
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MKukula 1 year ago
What a wonderful video and a wonderful reading list. Read "The Hero's Journey" first!
dougsasse 1 year ago
Thank you, you're very inspiring.
bartedson 1 year ago
Wow. Fantastic video. You are truly an inspiration. :)
mistimtnblue 1 year ago
nice video:D i am just wondering one thing. lets just say someone made something that is great, he goes sends it to some festivals and you win some awards .. then what happends next it feels like nothing unless you are gonna get hunting some " hollywood folks" im talking about short films of 10 mins
leviterande 2 years ago
Thank you, wonderful video! I enjoy the conversational tone, and your good cheer put me in a wonderfully productive mood! Brain food is such a wonderful weapon against the blank page.
Also, sorry to hear about your dad. My condolences. Keep smiling and laughing, it is an honor to those who've passed.
Beauxdeauxfinglok 2 years ago
you've done everything I hope to do, I want to ask you so much, but for now I'll just thank you for giving me some steps to creating a masterpiece. MY masterpiece.
the5chronicles 2 years ago
waha. so good. true, true. best advice i've heard about the entire process. koods.
pikiwiki 2 years ago
Thank you for your wonderful insight. I especially liked your quote:
"We all need great stories to inspire us"
You could also name this vid "How to poop out a golden egg" Lol
Ironman7100 2 years ago 2
I don't know if I iike the idea that a character always has to transform. That's a Hollywood notion. That's candy-coated. I sometimes like to see a character sink tragically into oblivion with all his flaws exposed. Ironwood, Babenco's movie about homeless alcoholics, starring Jack Nicholson and Meryl Streep. She dies. He visits his family after being gone for many years and just can't readapt and winds up leaving. It's a beautiful movie. Some transformation here and there, not much.
vmtz2001 2 years ago
Good stuff. I'm listening to you and Mr. McKee
whatthedoe 2 years ago
So happy to hear from you. I've been very sporadic posting videos this year because my dad has been ill and just passed. His funeral is Friday. With my attention on his care I've been unable to watch and make many videos. Although I've not had the time to follow your wonderful creative growth...from the very beginning it was obvious that you are headed in the right direction with your talents.
I expect great success from you. You are a great Renaissance man and you have service in your heart.
sharonafox1 2 years ago
Hi Sharon,
I am so sorry to read that about your dad. I went through the same recently with my mum.
As absurd as it sounds try to see the positive and it will help you cope. See that you had the opportunity to care for him, that you could tell him you loved him, that he passed away knowing he was loved and so on. Many people don't have those opportunities so there are positives.
Once again I am so sorry and am thinking of you.
Bruce
StinkyKnobcheese 2 years ago
Thank you so much for your kind words...God Bless You.
sharonafox1 2 years ago
Also want to add...what a blessing you were to your mom. I'm sure her spirit is watching over you.
Best of luck to you.
sharonafox1 2 years ago
Hi again Sharon :)
Thank you! I am a huge believer in karma and reaping what you sow. If I was a blessing to mum it's because she was a blessing to me. I'm sure you know exactly what I mean!
At 46 I am a complete newbie at screenwriting and am currently reading number two on your list, Hero with a thousand faces(Thanks to you!)
My sincerest thanks to you as I find it wonderful that industry experts devote so much time to us newbies.
Enough of my rambling.
If you ever need to talk :)
StinkyKnobcheese 2 years ago
Thanks!
81superstar 2 years ago
I am on my 4th screenplay and I know my scripts are great but where do I start? Like getting an agent? Do I send a query? Do they really read those? Is there a book you can recommend on getting your script to the right person that will read it? I just keep writing but my stuff is ready for the next level.
Thanks,
Sherilyn
p.s. What about women in film? would joining that group help?
hanasher1000 2 years ago
sry but can u help me pleezz, wats the diffrence between a script & a screenplay r they the same thing??
jmanwwefan 2 years ago
I believe a script can be a short, a television script, a number of different projects but a screenplay is for the big screen.
hanasher1000 2 years ago
oh thank u
jmanwwefan 2 years ago
Hey Sharon I like the cut of your gib
sovietbloc1940 2 years ago
Thanks Sharon! I love this. I have all those books and have tried the 21 day thing but haven't completed it. Yet.
But I am doing some writing but what about TV pilots? Those are the hardest thing ever, and I am doing my best and studying the pilots of some shows but ... argh.
I left you a message on Friday, I think. Hope to see you soon!
love Tammie
tammiejp 2 years ago
Thanks Tamie. My dad just got out of the hospital so I'm in overwhelm taking care of him and mom (She had a stroke as in a wheelchair. I've been her 24/7 caretaker for 4 years)...so the best place to reach me is either by phone.
Since I don't type...(it's painful and doctors have asked me to stop typing...but I cheat and peck here and there)...phone is best communication tool.
I don't deal with TV pilots so I can't answer too many questions on that one. Love to see you when I can breath again.
sharonafox1 2 years ago
sorry another thing i meant to ask was how long should a treatment be for a film. I know its going to be shorter than the script because its an outline but wasn't sure what i should realistically be looking at.
westwoodl 2 years ago
Although some people say that they should be no longer than 20 pages double spaced...rules are meant to be broken and often are...just use common sense.
I know many writers that do very short treatments and others who have gone far beyond the normal 20 pages.
When Academy Award winning writer, Stirling Silliphant, pitched my production company 12 different projects his treatments ranged from 3 pages to15 pages.
I only liked one of his projects...but we were looking for finished scripts.
sharonafox 2 years ago
Thanks very much for this. I've just finished my second year of university studying film production and now I'm adapting a book into a screenplay. How many pages should a feature be, should I stick with 1 page per minute rule?
westwoodl 2 years ago
One page per minute is the norm however sometimes 1 page of action might take a lot longer to film or if your 1 page is heavily filled with dialogue.
An average screenplay is 120 pages but just look at the films over the years that have won the best picture Oscar and you will find that many of them have as many as 180 pages.
Some stories have to be told in a longer form but economy is encouraged. Sadly today people's attention spans have shortened to the point that they are almost nonexistant.
sharonafox1 2 years ago
Thanks I'll let you know how i get on :)
westwoodl 2 years ago
You might want to see how others have done it.
Comparing "Slumdog Millionaire", The English Patient or Joe Wright's films Pride And Prejudice and Atonement to the original books might give you a crash course in adaptation.
Joe Wright is in the UK. I've bumped into him 4 times in the last 3 years here in Marin and he's always quite pleasant and happy to share advice. Perhaps you can write him and find a mentor close to home.
sharonafox1 2 years ago
Thanks again.
westwoodl 2 years ago
Hi Sharon Very useful recommendations thanks. I am UK based and BAFTA member. I am lucky enough to have first screenplay being considered by good producer here ..but he has recommended that I get an agent. I think that the in current investment climate and for the scale of projects i am writing a LA based agent would be best. I have several historical based ideas 'in progress'. How do I go about finding the right agent without wasting a lot of peoples time? would the WGA be a start? thanks SC.
westofbermuda 2 years ago
I'd rather encourage writers to get their screenplay into the hands of a director who might resonate with the material or an A-list actor who would be passionate about your project. Also, since you're in the U.K. perhaps you might want to package the project yourself and start with taking a meeting with Channel 4 to see if they might be able to put up a percentage of the financing to start or contact someone like Kevin Spacey over at the Old Vict to see if he might mentor you and your project.
sharonafox1 2 years ago
どもありがとう
dannysuru 2 years ago
Hunto!
sharonafox1 2 years ago
THANX for the tips very helpful
yellowposted 2 years ago
You are welcome...good luck with your writing.
sharonafox1 2 years ago
Great vid:]
My dream is to be a movie director:]
My fav book is memoirs of a geisha and the movie is just so amazing;]....
MySimWorld15 3 years ago
Happy New Year and good luck on your directing dream.
The more you know about the tools for good screenplay writing the better director you will be.
Hope to see you at the Oscars someday.
Go For It?
sharonafox1 3 years ago
Just wanted to add regarding "Memoirs of a Geisha"...in the early 80's I had an interesting opportunity to bring my dance act to Japan.
I fell in love with Japan, it's people and it's culture. I had so many amazing opportunities thrown at me. Offers to do films, music albums etc...it was surreal. The most unusual opportunity was an invitation to enter the world of the Geisha.
I thought the movie was OK. but felt the Geisha's debut was anti-climactic. The dance should have been much better.
sharonafox1 3 years ago
Hello there,
What do you think of Lajos Egri's book "The art of dramatic writing" and it's use in writing a screenplay?
Cheers,
Derek.
DangRockets 3 years ago
I shall think of you as a benefactorist..During my time of trail...I hope to meet YOU someday
Lauren
GreySparkles 3 years ago
'Screenplay' by Sid Field is a good one.... I can second that! Thanks for the vid!
greenvalet 3 years ago
How does it feel to talk to the camera and smile?
Gunther81818 3 years ago
Hi Sharon, I have 20 appts. at the screenwriteers expo. Companies like Dreamworks, WB, Simon West, Walden, Village Roadshow and many others. Do you have any suggestions on how to present your script well in 5 minutes? Any suggestions you might have would be greatly appreciated. I want to make the most of this opprotunity. Thanks again, your the best. Rick
richatfield 3 years ago
Sharon, I don't know if you remember me, but I have chatted with you a few times via this site. Your advice has been invaluable. My script is entered in the filmmakers 8th annual screenwriters awards and has made it to the quarterfinals. Over 1300 entries and I am one of 31 still left in the main catagory. I am also entered in the screenwriters expo contest as well and plan to go next month. Is there any chance you will be going to the expo as well? I would love to meet you. You are the best.
richatfield 3 years ago
No I won't be going but I hope you have a great time.
Congratulations with your writing!
That is such good news.
And I'm overjoyed anything that you take away from this site can help you in achieving your dreams.
Just keep following your bliss.
All The Best.
sharonafox1 3 years ago
You are just darling. Sharon, I just adore your eyes. It was nice to watch this and I agree, "Gone Baby Gone" was not only a great story, but for Ben's first movie as a Director, he scored big. I hope to see him in the Director's chair more often as I feel that is where he belongs. - I'm currently working on a number of scripts and love every minute of it.
I noticed, you aren't wearing a wedding ring; I'd feed you strawberries.
clonespeck 3 years ago
What a sweet comment.
And yes I hope we see some more films from director, Ben Affleck.
And no I am not married. I've never been married but I have been engaged to someone whose face is quite familiar to many people throughout our country and some parts of the world.
And who knows maybe Affleck will direct one of your scripts someday.
Good luck with your writing.
sharonafox1 3 years ago
I hope your not talking to me lover boy! LOL
supersexy300 3 years ago
Would you like to go on a date with me? Granted, im only 19, but im sure we would have a good time!
Ballinstud19 3 years ago
Are you talking to me (notsosupersexy) or supersexy300?
sharonafox1 3 years ago
I am talking to you. And I'm 20 now :)
Ballinstud19 3 years ago
I felt that the Screenwriters bible was one of the best books by David Trottier. What do you think of him and his writing?
supersexy300 3 years ago
I'm glad you have found a book that you are getting a lot out of.
I can't comment on the book because I have not read it but I have heard good things about it.
Thank you for sharing your experience and good luck with your writing.
sharonafox1 3 years ago
I have no college or university education in writing screenplays and I think it's what has kept me back from pursuing it as a career. I just got back my feedback from a well known script doctor and got a great response to it and I'm thrilled because I LOVE WRITING. Anybody who is intimidated by the process because they think their not good enough... Just get to it and do what makes you happy. I'm entering my screenplay Waverly Hills into several competitions and hope it does well.
supersexy300 3 years ago
Excellent...getting beyond your fears is one of the first big steps toward success in writing or life.
Good Luck!
SarahPalinChannel 3 years ago
It is an exciting journey writing a screenplay...it has been exciting for me over the past year!
ppmusic06 3 years ago
You have the right spirit and attitude ... writing is a journey...a very exciting journey.
Good luck with your writing. Keep following your bliss.
sharonafox1 3 years ago
Great advice... excellent video. My souffle is rising... : )
CoffeeRingProduction 3 years ago
I'm glad to hear that...wishing you all the best...keep following your bliss.
sharonafox1 3 years ago
wow! Thanks for posting this!
clayLavl 3 years ago
Your welcome clay and good luck with all your amazing videos and music.
sharonafox1 3 years ago
This woman is so smart, and I agree with her opinion of Gone Baby Gone. Everyone around me keeps saying that its precisely about "who you know." I'm so glad Sharon flipped this rumour on its head and reminded me how important Story is, and how it should not be put secondary. Mingling might work for some people, but I'm more interested in writing a screenplay worthy of remembering. Thanks for the inspiration Sharon; You don't know how important these kinds of videos are to screenwriters.
Handmedownanupper 3 years ago 2
Sharon has some good info and some good energy, keep up the good work.
I've read a number of screenplays from people who are early on in their writing career, and yes some are much better than others, but one tip I would strongly suggest is to do a read-through a couple of times with some actors--it might help iron out some parts that don't quite work that one might not "hear" or "see" otherwise.
Rewrites don't always mean total rewrites.
oneforsafety 3 years ago
I recently wrote my first screenplay called the WEB, with a fellow co author which can be viewed on scriptbuddy but I felt that screenplay for dummies helped me. A very simple book that took me from the beginning and helped me through all the challenges. The books she recomended are very good and besides the ones she's mentioned I will throw in The screenwriters bible by: David Trottier.
supersexy300 3 years ago
My advice to all up and coming screenwriters is to write in your own vision, and don't succumb to the market industry that is Hollywood.Lately, almost everything coming out of Hollywood has been subliminal propaganda promoting war and "patriotism". So I suggest for all of you to gather up some money and produce your vision yourself.
electricturf 3 years ago
I couldn't have said it better...electricturf...excellent advice.
Good luck with your writing...I hope you end up being one of those writers that brings fine stories to the screen....if that is your passion and desire.
Great stories nourish the soul.
Thank you so much for your comments and contributions.
sharonafox1 3 years ago
ha. you are so pretty :)
adam90803 3 years ago
gracias
yourdairyman 3 years ago
You are welcome. Good luck with your writing.
sharonafox1 3 years ago
you babble on a lot, there is a difference between waffle and story telling
matherman 3 years ago
That's right and if you use some of the tools I suggested perhaps you will discover how to use words to uplift the human race instead of cut it down.
sharonafox1 3 years ago
well put ;)
RIPFILMS 3 years ago 2
Well there is a lot of nonsense out there about writing screenplays for people wanting to begin, and I can say without doubt - that this is one of the most useful videos I have found on youtube about the subject. Thank you very much.
android90beats 3 years ago
i have one almost done and planning out characters, plot, dilemma, for another. and i'm psyched about both but have no confidence in selling them, i have no clue where to start
Any advice for a beginner writer?
silent0saint 3 years ago
Read the books I suggested ...especially William Goldman's book, "Adventures in the Screen Trade"... then let your spirit be your guide.
Good luck...I wish you all the best.
sharonafox1 3 years ago
my advice to you, im a screenwriter too, is being phsyched isnt enough, you need confiendence in all aspects - if you believe your script is commercial and like no other, you will no - get the script finished, be persistent and find yourself a ligitimate agent - he/she will sell it for you ;D
renarde 3 years ago
Thanks alot
...but I have no clue where to begin looking for an agent
silent0saint 3 years ago
i suggest you go to the writers guild of america site and take a look through all the recommended literary agencies then, check out which one you like a right a query letter - if they request your screenplay, most likely by email, and they like it - they'll take you on board and get the script out there for you.
renarde 3 years ago
I wish I had your movie experience! I really love your energy and charisma. I would love to hire you as a 'sounding board' for the business side of movie making and perhaps we can address this in the future. Your video was inspiring because it's evident that you're a business person who thrives on creativity. Bless you, thank you. :)
illusivemcsorley 3 years ago
Thank you...having movie experience is not as important as talent, perseverance, positive thinking, faith and the ability to take creative action toward your goal.
I know many seasoned directors and writers who no longer have faith and it keeps them from their goal.
You got ta have FAITH.
sharonafox1 3 years ago
Thank you Sharon. What a delight it is to come back to this movie and hear you talk.
illusivemcsorley 3 years ago
very inspiring!
kirrabeachbum 3 years ago
you're fun to watch Sharon
stillonparolee 3 years ago
I thought Gone Baby Gone was terrible. It was boring and the acting was middle school-ish.
stillonparolee 3 years ago
Hi Ms. Fox,
I actually purchased some of the books that you mentioned and I am excited about the opportunity to read them and learn. I have already made it through about 25% of the Goldman book, and I have to say that it has been very fun and informative so far. I thank you for your recommendations. I look forward to hearing from you in the future, as I will be dropping by from time-to-time with questions and comments. Thank you so much.
thaansa3 3 years ago
Full of enthusiasm-I like that,pretty too!-From England.
notatnik150 3 years ago
whats the best way for an actor to convice a production company to let him "pull a stallone" and star in his own movie.
bigray0021 3 years ago
First of all make sure your script is awesome!
Make sure your script is brilliantly written and a story that would engage a mass audience.
Make sure that you are physically right for the part.
Make sure that you can show them that you have the acting chops for the role.
Make sure that you are willing to walk away from a deal if they say, "No".
Or find a much in demand director who believes in your script and your ability to pull off the major role.
Or you can always produce it yourself.
sharonafox1 3 years ago
Jesus...
thecritic2000 3 years ago
Intelligent AND sexy. You have all the right credentials. As I burst into song... "If I knew you were coming I'd have baked a cake." Back to my script 'Memoirs of Dirty Max'...new entry..."If a ladder appears in your tights...I'd climb it". [inspired by your blog]
CurioiusBystander 3 years ago
Gone Baby Gone is a lame and formulaic picture.
As for the sensational and provoking script of Good Will Hunting, I'm sure it was re-written and worked over behind the scenes by many other people extensively.
Being that Ben or Matt have not written anything even remotely as nuanced since.
Sorry.
utubesucks2003 3 years ago
Gone Baby Gone was based on a book by Dennis Lehane so it is hard to fault the movie for being responsible for being formulaic.
Where it was no formulaic was in the casting. Amy Ryan deserved the Oscar for her stunning performance and Affleck integrated in many local non performers.
The original Good Will Hunting script went through massive rewrites taking out the stuff about Matt's character being recruited by the FBI for spy work.
Nothing new...most scripts go through massive rewrites.
sharonafox1 3 years ago
DEAR SHARON: I have got my screenplay ready. It's a sport Genre, but HOW do I get a "referral" which seems required by every Agency??
solskjore 3 years ago
The books I mention can give you guidance in this area. If you are a creative writer...I suggest be creative in your approach to the agencies if that is the path you have chosen for your first step to get your script produced.
I always advocate that writers educate themselves about producing so that they are in the driver's seat when it comes to the direction their script takes.
Research the business so that you know how to navigate the waters and protect your creation.
sharonafox1 3 years ago
I need some help. In my story, a group of sub-militaristic officers have to battle their way through hordes of monsters to escape from a lab. what kind of character arc could be used for that kind of story?
Selsiuss2 3 years ago
If you read the books I've mentioned you will find ample guidance to supply tools for you to help you in exploring a credible arc for your story.
Just remember arc=represents the path a character takes from (A) to (B)
(A) Character has an error in the way he perceives the world or himself.
The film story reflects the journey the character takes to replace erroneous thinking with the truth.
(B) the character is transformed when he replaces his erroneous thinking with the truth.
sharonafox1 3 years ago
What do you mean exactly : There is no such thing as the perfect screenplay ?
Bill Goldman was right, but the man is also an acclaimed novelist, rather than screenwriter. Like Gore Vidal.
IntellectualJunior 3 years ago
By the way, Its William GOLDMAN, not William Golden. Screenwriter of Butch Cassidy and the Sundance kid, Marathon Man and Misery.
IntellectualJunior 3 years ago
Thank you. I know it is Goldman...One of my best friends is a man named William Golden...So if I made a slip at anytime...it's all my friend, William's fault.
sharonafox1 3 years ago
What I mean when I say there is no such thing as a perfect screenplay is...
A script is a blueprint, there are many other elements that bring it to life on the screen.
A script can on the surface appear perfect yet it may lack the living spark that brings it alive. It is my theory that it is the writer's spark that ignites the the script into a living breathing entity. That spark is only present when the writer has achieved his/her own personal transformation.
Every script needs a re-write.
sharonafox1 3 years ago
Anyhow, I have a question. Do you have any advise about how to approach an adaptation? I really want to adapt a story I've read and seen for the past two years. No one has adapted this material yet and I know it would be pretty impossible for me to obtain the copyrights but I still think that its an Oscar Worthy story. So any advise???
kag19 3 years ago
Write a treatment and don't tell anyone until you get representation. And don't think about winning oscars ever.
torin006 3 years ago
Hi, I found your video while conducting a search on you tube. Thanks for offering such insightful advice to fellow aspiring writers. I'm a screenwriting student. I try to read, write, and research a lot to improve my skills. I try to read as many screenplays I can online so I can see the various writing styles. I own several screen writing books that I have stored away at home for reference. I even surprised my professor with all the books I had one day.
kag19 3 years ago
I must say this is EXACTLY, and I mean EXACTLY what I needed to see and gather courage to write my story (thank you!!!!!). I feel I have a wonderful story that will be amazing to witness - but I always feel that it is a little too personal to write it down. I just cant gather the courage to see my personal experience mold into characters and events - but I think this time, I will take that chance. I have just one small request - once I finish my story would you be kind enough to read my script?
IndianOpinion 3 years ago
I really want to wish you well. If you read the books I've
mentioned in the order I've recommended ... the books will provide great mentorship and coaching for your idea.
I am unable to look at your script...but you do not need me to tell you you are doing a great job. If your story is meant to be manifested into a feature film or Movie of the Week you will have an exciting and enlightening journey forging your own path.
sharonafox1 3 years ago
Hi Sharon, I recieved my critique and I have made the necessary changes needed, mainly formatting issues I had. I was wondering what you thought about an idea I had to try to get it in the right hands. I was thing of doing a video synopsis and putting it on YouTube. I have registered the screenplay with the WGA but I dont have it copywritten. Would this be too risky of a move you think? Someone could steal the idea, but it might also open some doors. You look great in your latest video Thanks!!!
richatfield 3 years ago
I would have it copyrighted.
The best way to insure it gets into the right person's hands is to first make sure the script is so awesome that not one reader could ever interrupt themselves to put it down.
Then get quiet ...very still and listen to your inner guidance. No one can ever tell you how to do something because everyone carries their own private navigation system inside.
Just listen to the quiet voice inside and have the courage to follow it.
sharonafox1 3 years ago
You are very waise, Obi-Wan. May the force be with you :) Ric
richatfield 3 years ago
A script can be boring as hell but still make for a good movie. Reading "bang" on paper is far different from seeing it with sound and motion.
stevespielberg 3 years ago
THANK YOU SHARON, we need more great TEACHERS like yourself in our world, THANK YOU for passing on the torch.
TheOstar88 3 years ago
Sharon i love you!!!!!
miramartomcat999 3 years ago
Hi Sharon - Could you help me with something? I recently wrote a script, it's my first script, and I want to sell it and, if possible direct it. If it gets in production of coarse. But I'm very young and unexperienced. And I don't really know what to do. But I think I can really create a piece of art from this script - coming from a girl that has low self-esteem. Should I get into an agency? Which one? At what age do they usually take you in? Could I direct it? I have like so many questions.
skinhugging 4 years ago
Hello, can you recommend the best way to find a good agent? My screenplay is registered and I want to send it out. You can hear a ten minute reading by clicking on my youtube account.
Hope to hear back.
By the way, i have read them all. Syd and Campbell are the masters.
johnmonk66 4 years ago
Thank you again for any advice you may have Sharon. I watch your video 2-3 times a week for inspiration. I would love to hear your thoughts on the length of a scirpt and how long is too long to get noticed. Thanks again, Rick
richatfield 4 years ago
I was informed by the agency that is doing my critique that it will be very difficult to get anyone to consider my script unless it is less than 120 pages in length. I was able to shorten it from 195 pages down to 150. I don't feel I can effectively tell this story cutting it another 30 pages. Do you believe this is true? Will I have a hard time getting someone to consider my screenplay if it is not less than 120 pages in length? Do you have any suggestions on how to shorten the length?
richatfield 4 years ago
Best picture Oscars went to many films that were around 180 pages.
Some directors like Kevin Costner say that length doesn't matter as long as it's a great script.
Most people in the industry won't touch a screenplay over 120 so you are taking a risk...however if the screenplay is outstanding it just may be the perfect project they are looking for...and you might get lucky.
I would advise you to edit as much as possible.
sharonafox1 4 years ago
Your the coolest, Thank you. Rick
richatfield 4 years ago
Can't wait to stand in line for your movie!
sharonafox1 4 years ago
you don't need to stand in line for my movie Sharon. You get a red carpet ticket :)
richatfield 4 years ago
Awesome!
sharonafox1 4 years ago
I just finished the format. I got it to 135 pages and I think it's better for it. I hope the critiquer likes it half as much as I do. They said 135 pages is good enough. Thansk again for your help. Keeping my fingers crossed.
richatfield 4 years ago
My fingers are crossed too. May The Force Be With You!
sharonafox1 4 years ago
Thanks Sharon, I have a literary agent now and I am currently getting my first critique done. I'll be sure to let ya know if anything happens. I appreciate your advice.
richatfield 4 years ago
BravO! I'm very excited for you. I hope you will look at the process of getting your project into production as an enlightening and rewarding adventure.
sharonafox1 4 years ago
Thanks for the recipe Sharon and for those encouraging words. I have been stuck for awhile on 70 page. I am so close, but so far away. thanks again and I will let my finger do the walking and my imagnation run wild.
GregoryMcIver 4 years ago
Good luck. I wish you well. One of the most important elements most writers seem to overlook is the stage Joseph Campbell refers to as "The Atonement With The Father". (which he elaborates on in the book I mention in the recipe). I highly recommend digesting that information over and over again. It is the major ingredient that helps the cake to rise...and the one ingredient that most writers seem to leave out.
sharonafox1 4 years ago
Great video, I just loved it. I have just finished my screenplay and It took bit longer than 21 days, 45 to be exact. You video gave me hope. I don't know anybody in "The Biz" however I feel I have a blockbuster on my hands. I just hope I can find someone with a broken down car now that knows somebody that knows somebody. Trying to send out those positive vibs :) GREAT VIDEO SHARON! BTW any advice on getting your script into the right hands?
richatfield 4 years ago
That's where William Goldman's book, "Adventures Of The Screen Trade" comes in (one of the books I mention in the recipe). As he is often quoted, "Nobody in Hollywood knows anything". So it's up to you to become like Lewis and Clark, be a pioneer of your own path. Grant yourself permission to be creative and embark on a journey that no man has gone. The greatest reward is personal transformation.
sharonafox1 4 years ago
Sharon the Fox, You truely are the most fox! Our training for the Earth Mission was watching cartoons and Black and White movies. One of the controlers manipulated the writers strike. It was determined that the writers "Sucked". The plan is they will all either stay; fired, died of old age, retire, or get jobs at McD's. Frio, First Sceince Officer.
frio109 4 years ago
thank you!!!!!!
jalil124 4 years ago
anytime...hope you have fun learning this fun and transformational craft!
sharonafox1 4 years ago
I had trouble hearing all of the books name.
leeman1525 4 years ago
Hi, I truly thank you for your help, I am in the process of making a screenplay...and am just wondering Do you think its worth it? I mean its professionaly done and a great story but will it get discovered by someone in Hollywood?
ANDMATTUSAID 4 years ago
finally got "how to write a movie in 21 days" in the mail today! Still havn't gotten the others. I know u said it had to be read in a specific order, but does it really?:P I'm so anxious and wanna get started. Can't I read "how to write a movie in 21 days" first?
jokkepus 4 years ago
Great question!
Yes I do recommend reading them in order....because the books I suggest you read first provide you with the foundational building blocks to structure and build your story properly.
"How To Write A Movie In 21 Days" ...is your personal coach (top chef) to help keep you on track writing your screenplay once the other books have provided you with the main ingredients.
sharonafox1 4 years ago
Hot.
rickhamlet 4 years ago
4 of these books on the top of my christmas list now! Hope they'll help and inspire me as much as you have:)
I got an idea for a script which I in my mind think is brilliant.. though sellin it with me as a part of the package will prolly be hard.
Hope the books will help me some on that part aswell.
Merry Christmas from Norway!
jokkepus 4 years ago
If English isn't your first language you might want to track down John Truby's screenwriting audio tapes.
John Flynn, a film director I used to live with always listened to John Truby's tapes when ever he had a script to write or direct. Truby really knows his stuff. He doesn't inject a lot of personality into his audios so some people have fallen asleep listening to them. I love the tapes and find them very helpful. You can Google Truby and easily find his website. Good Luck!
sharonafox1 4 years ago
thank you so much for this video. I have been looking for some advice. Thankfully its charismas soon so maybe my dad will buy me some or all the books you recommended. I have always wanted to be an actor but after some bad experiences two years ago with a drama school I decided I should take a break from acting. So for the last year I have been looking into directing and screenwriting. I am currently working on a 10-minute play for a theatre here in London so wish me luck with that :)
babsxfanxlondon 4 years ago
I absolutely wish you luck.
Last week I saw "Atonement" ten days before its U.S. release.
Joe Wright and the star, James McAvoy were present for a Q&A and a reception after the film.
Joe Wright is from London and started as an actor...today after directing "Pride and Prejudice" and "Atonement" (both with Keira Knightley)...it is obvious he is one of the finest storytellers alive today.
With such great role models, hopefully you will write your own path to success.
sharonafox1 4 years ago
Wonderful video. Beautiful eyes. Thanks for the suggestions.
alejandro15187 4 years ago
Thank you.
Of course there are a many other wonderful screenwriting teachers out there like Richard Walters, Bob McKee and others. This is a list I recommend because these books cover most of the bases and should give you all the principals one would need to learn the craft...then it is up to the writer to practice the craft. Good Luck!
sharonafox1 4 years ago
I darling i jest love your video and your smaile and i want to know if you can wirte a script for me ?
am8tam 4 years ago
you're such a nice person :)
JooHunRules 4 years ago
If you have a great take on the story and your script is well executed with the potential to attract big stars and a good director...keep on going. There are many actors who would love to do a western. And if your story (like "Unforgiven") involves transformation and redemption...you may be the one to deliver an Oscar worthy script. Good Luck and keep on persevering. See you on the red carpet!
sharonafox1 4 years ago
I don't usually comment on videos, but I like this woman everybody. I never heard anybody in the business say, they got there money ready to see the next movie from a up and comer, that was really great, and very supportive, I hope she is one of the people I see when I start shopping my scripts, she sounds like a really good person, and she didn't come off as a no it all. Thanks for the advice, I was picking my brain trying to finish one of my scripts. I seen you and listened.
darrellleonard07 4 years ago
Poop out a golden egg!
danigirl00 4 years ago
That's right...danigirl00...Like the goose that laid the golden eggs...
We need more writers who can deliver great screenplays...
I have a feeling you have a lot of golden eggs in your future.
You Go Girl!
sharonafox1 4 years ago
Screenplay cooking and I have been on off-terms. It's good that you can analyze them though, with background no less.
whatthedoe 4 years ago
I love your humor which coupled with your brains is unparalled. You are brilliant, simply brilliant.
heltrim12 4 years ago 3
Hey girl...look who's talkin. You are one of the most brilliant people I know.
Love ya!
sharonafox1 2 years ago
No still drive me wild without the makeout etc. I love films and dvds with good extras, comedies.
I want to write a screenplay some day or at least a few comedy sketches. James
bedoboy 4 years ago 2
James, your videos are wonderful. You have the intellect and the humor to create a wonderful screenplay. I would love to see you put some time aside in your busy schedule to start gathering the ingredients together to bake a great screenplay.
Start baking! And thanks for the wonderful enthusiastic support you always give me especially when I run off for months on my political activity missions with the Tibetans, Democrats or whatever. You are always there and I truly appreciate that.
Love ya
sharonafox1 2 years ago
My word a year ago I became a partner and since then have done loads of stuff. At the moment on a personal effectiveness course and not had a chance to write anything but have you seen The Little Panda show on CDMAGZ or CLOWNSINC thats my little baby at the moment.
Oh and finally reached the threshold on my google adsense, first cheque next month.
Yes i am always there and never forget my true friends.
James
bedoboy 2 years ago
No Robert McKee?
thejobloshow 4 years ago 2
A writer could get a great deal out of Robert Mckee's work, Richard Walter's work, Linda Seiger's work etc...however I don't want to be redundant.
I believe a writer's tool box does not need two hammers to hit the nail on the head.
It's also my belief that William Goldman's hammer misses the nail on several occasions..but he still manages to build a stunning home.
sharonafox1 4 years ago
One last point remember Matt Damon and Ben Afflek were actors first. Both were in school days and other movies before good will hunting so they already had connections.
mkline718 4 years ago
True they started to make contacts while working in Hollywood...however the"Goodwill Hunting" draft that Matt Damon and Ben Affleck first started pitching hardly resembles the shooting script that they ended up with. No amount of contacts would have helped them get their original script produced. Both the script and their own life experience needed to be transformed before they could attract the appropriate elements that would turn the switch for a green light.
sharonafox1 4 years ago