That was great Paul! Great song,love the music,the nice tempo & it's got a sneaky little melody in there. Great stuff! :)) The lyrics are well thought out,nicely done,you hit on that topic very well. I love that opening verse & the rest of the words.This song rocks & it's smooth,the vocal delivery is right on the money,couldn't sing it better my buddy! Sometimes it seems like men are from Mars & women from Venus,which reminds me,time to get in my ship & head for other worlds.You rock my bro! :))
hi paul. the lyrics tell a story that each of us has experienced at least once. i find myself concentrating on the musical background, trying to identify not the keyboard exactly, or maybe it is a keyboard sound card playing the 1,2 3, 4 sticato beat throughout. anyway, that edgy drive does reflect the anxious mood of the song. either a lot of thought or talent went into this one. peace and love, chuck.
Excellent Paul! Your song was terrific, great lyrics and cool music! Well done, I enjoyed your song very much! ... FrAnK
allshookup1977 1 year ago
That was great Paul! Great song,love the music,the nice tempo & it's got a sneaky little melody in there. Great stuff! :)) The lyrics are well thought out,nicely done,you hit on that topic very well. I love that opening verse & the rest of the words.This song rocks & it's smooth,the vocal delivery is right on the money,couldn't sing it better my buddy! Sometimes it seems like men are from Mars & women from Venus,which reminds me,time to get in my ship & head for other worlds.You rock my bro! :))
cbrb40 1 year ago
Dear Paul......this is a wonderful song from you.....all my thumbs up..you are a ecxellent singer/songwriter......
have a wonderful weekend my old friend....Manni
BeatnikManfred 1 year ago
Nice central analogy Paul.
CurtisMateer 1 year ago
hi paul. the lyrics tell a story that each of us has experienced at least once. i find myself concentrating on the musical background, trying to identify not the keyboard exactly, or maybe it is a keyboard sound card playing the 1,2 3, 4 sticato beat throughout. anyway, that edgy drive does reflect the anxious mood of the song. either a lot of thought or talent went into this one. peace and love, chuck.
chuxtrux 1 year ago
Woo dat fine lookin Babe ?
Nice toon Paul !!
ruotze 1 year ago
@ruotze A model the painter Ingres knew I think.
CurtisMateer 1 year ago
Demos from the past are always interesting. This was a good one. -Ron
rhopen 1 year ago
Great Lyrics abnd Song Paul!! ...Nice that ya Kept these...
Carlfgauge 1 year ago
Very nice song!!
teteroom 1 year ago
a really really good song : good lyrics , good melody.
it could be a hit in the chart
masje 1 year ago