There's nothing wrong with that, trust me. Your lyrics are great, but I think what kalacs is saying that it would have been much more meaningful it had a bit of the original idea in it~
@warriorjanAG You DO need great vowels to make it big. You can't just have a pretty voice and sing with EEEEEEE's & sound like like an otter going OR OR OR!!!
oh, I was just working on my own english lyrics to this song-- I guess you beat me to it. Your lyrics are beautiful. I love this song even more :) Thank you
Ooooh....You conrol your voice really well, I really ish you had better quality recording or some editing to make the volume fit :). You're really good!
well , in fact only American dubs translates the original lyrics =] , usually all over the world they create brand new lyrics with brand new meaning .
There not supposed to be, she wrote the lyrics so they fit the music of the song. If she were to sing the straight translation from the japanese lyrics, it wouldn't fit the music and be all messed up and bad.
Great job with this! I really really like it! 5/5!! ^^
fwa...I was just answering someone's comment!!!Why does people think I did that to make people hate me? I think CinnamonPunch has a lovely beautiful voice!
wow i can't get away from this song you sing really good... at first rikachuu was my fave in singing dubs but i like your voice better. you should do the second opening of higurashi
I never get tired listening to this, I especially love the final lyrics of the song~ I could probably think of a million requests, but I've forgotten them all! @_@
After eventually noticing the lyrics arn't the originally translated ones, xD! You did a great job. I love how even the new lyrics are beautiful and fit perfectly with the song~ Your voice is wonderful!
Still, the lyrics, even if words fit pretty much in the music and everything, they are not really very similiar to original ones O__o" not that I want to criticize You or something, the song You sang is very pretty itself, but just doesn't have much in common with original one XD sorry for the babble, keep up the good work!
I know the lyrics aren't the same but coming up with your own lyrics is much more exciting, since everyone pretty much made their lyrics match up to the real ones. I had no means on making the lyrics similar at all, cause then what's the point on making your OWN lyrics. I try not to look at the original lyrics, cause then what's the fun? I'm sorry that my lyrics aren't what you've planned, but I want to be different from everyone else ^^. Thank you for commenting though!
Oh I see! O__O I'm sorry, I had no idea that You are writing lyrics in this way! What I'm trying to do is transcribe original lyrics to Polish and then sing it(what is pretty hard XD I have one video like that on my account), because I find it a big challenge :0 I never actually thought of Your way of writing lyrics... it might be also fun! Maybe I'll try it one day! I'll be sure to give You some credit when it happens!
wow ur voice is heavenly good job! this is the first trans of this song i heard and actually liked! (no offense to others) I ESPECIALLY LIKED WHEN SOMEONE ELSE WAS SINGING TOO WITH U AT SOME PARTS. THAT MADE IT REALLY GOOD AT THE PERFECT TIMINGS (srry cap lock accident)
You do have some raw talent, but I would suggest singing from your diaphragm, so that it will give you more power. By habit, everyone sings too much with the voice up near the nose, but if you open up like your yawning, that helps you sound more full. Don't try to copy any of the Japanese pop artists because they all seem to enjoy this small, cutesy sound, which has no power. I think you have a lot of potential and become extremely talented. Just keep working hard ^.^
Okay! Thanks for your request! And if your are the person who requested that in my other fandub I meant to reply but accidently deleted it! Sorry! And if your not, lol.
i love it how her voice reminds me of shion's a little
shysweetiepie27 6 months ago
that is the best fandub i've EVER herd!
67yroldhobo 11 months ago
Soo pretty your voice...
fireheart877 1 year ago
♥ UR VOICE!
mikicharacharm1 1 year ago
very beautiful i must say
thekojoesgirl2 1 year ago
I really love the lyrics you wrote, they are very creative!
Hinoki511 1 year ago
These lyrics a beautiful~ And I love your voice!
BBchanx3 1 year ago
reminds me of someone i miss </3
amziepamzie1996 1 year ago
this needs a full version since i like this version better than the other one, but both are great
Hayatehiroyuki25 1 year ago
*bows to you* I am not worthy!!! you are the goddess of amazing singing!!!
starstreamergirl 1 year ago
Thanks to you, that I'm crying right now ;< Normally I hate fandubs, but this was absolutely gorgeous. AND YES, you should make a full version <3
MangonnChan 1 year ago 2
WOW!! that is all i can say:3
HanyuuLuvR67 1 year ago
Absolutely beautiful...
xXDarkShivaXx 1 year ago
This is amazing!! you were on key and your voice is really nice, although....... I can't help but notice that you were slightly flat at the begining.
.......Now i'm just going to wait for the thumbs downs and comments telling me to keep my opinions to myself.
MissTreason 1 year ago
awsome
kenseisato1989 1 year ago
AWESOME!!
Urzu7Angel 1 year ago
I sang along to your lyrics whilst listening the song. I CRIED!! Rating: 10 out of 5.-Takejiro24
Takejiro24 1 year ago
Can I use the lyrics? :) You're fandub is beautiful!
Soraheart08xx 2 years ago
I made a crossover Inuyasha x Shion!!! sounds good right
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It's such a pity the lyrics don't have anything to do with the original translation though.
kalacs32 2 years ago
What's wrong with that though? I wrote them from the heart. Does that still make it a pity? :/
CinnamonPunch 2 years ago
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Well, I like your fandub, really, but I like the original lyrics better, and I don't like the lyrics to be changed anyway, you know.
kalacs32 2 years ago
There's nothing wrong with that, trust me. Your lyrics are great, but I think what kalacs is saying that it would have been much more meaningful it had a bit of the original idea in it~
TheRandomNeko 1 year ago
@CinnamonPunch
Beautiful lyrics. But you REALLY need to work on your vowels:
"You're not standing by mEEE" "EEE"
"Maybe yOR..." "OR" xp
"From the distance I can sEEE" >>There's that awful "E" again...
"FinallEE" "E"
... I'm not trying to pick on you or anything, but your vowels suck... try making the "E" sound softer like sort of an "eh" sound.
And the "yOR" try making it sound like the, "Maybe your somewhere near"
Vowels WILL make you sing much better as a musician.
Dat1chickL0L 1 year ago 4
@Dat1chickL0L proffesional judgement :D
warriorjanAG 1 year ago
@warriorjanAG You DO need great vowels to make it big. You can't just have a pretty voice and sing with EEEEEEE's & sound like like an otter going OR OR OR!!!
Haha
Dat1chickL0L 1 year ago
You're voice is a bit too high at the begining. I don't know, maybe I'm just being picky but it was really good. better than most.
bloodynightroses 2 years ago 3
I LOVE THE SINGING
NaviStarfire 2 years ago 3
this is soo powerful and pretty!
GREAT JOB!
robosamarai24 2 years ago
nice voice c;
Angiieeable 2 years ago
oh, I was just working on my own english lyrics to this song-- I guess you beat me to it. Your lyrics are beautiful. I love this song even more :) Thank you
firemage449 2 years ago
can i use these lyrics to sing it in english?
i'll credit u and everything.
1YuukiChan 2 years ago
Ooooh....You conrol your voice really well, I really ish you had better quality recording or some editing to make the volume fit :). You're really good!
kalacs32 2 years ago
*back to listen again.. ^^*
NinjaAshStar 2 years ago
ooh this is so beautiful
NaruSakuShipudenlove 2 years ago
nice voice ^ - ^
rosabell003 2 years ago 3
hoo hoo. ur very talented. C: who is the song by originally? O.o
FinalFantasyFr3ak 2 years ago
Im so impressed! Loved it~! Do you mind if i borrow the lyrics>?
kagome65436 2 years ago
oh goodness!! i wish to have your voice!!
lets switch our voice ok? nippah! XD
TadasexAmu55 2 years ago
You have a really really nice tone to your voice, but you go flat on a few notes.
13NERD 2 years ago
so good D:
Kawaiiotakunerd 2 years ago
you have a wonderful voice and the text is great to^^ i really want to make a reply, if it's ok^^
Zamirachan 2 years ago
wow nice voice ^^,
lycorisknight 2 years ago
YouR VoiCe iS GORGEOUS aND i LoVe iT!!! BuT i HaVe To aGRee WiTH EmuhleeMurderr THoSe aReNT THe RiGHT LyRiCS :D
AkwardMomentsXD37 2 years ago 2
well , in fact only American dubs translates the original lyrics =] , usually all over the world they create brand new lyrics with brand new meaning .
mody1710 2 years ago 3
Um great dub but those arent the lyrics that goto the song no offence but you have a beautyful voice
EmuhleeMurderr 2 years ago
There not supposed to be, she wrote the lyrics so they fit the music of the song. If she were to sing the straight translation from the japanese lyrics, it wouldn't fit the music and be all messed up and bad.
Great job with this! I really really like it! 5/5!! ^^
MayganLeeAnn 2 years ago
Actually i like the original
EmuhleeMurderr 2 years ago 2
you have an amazing voice keep it up :)
Neko13Chan 2 years ago
5/5 It is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!! Loved it.
My suggestion: lower the voice you have recorded in so it kind of merges with the music rather than standing out too much :)
freedom820211 2 years ago
wow nice job and great voice it really worked well!!!^_^
PainControledLife 2 years ago
Pretty cute dood. :)
ShaowNecroX101 2 years ago
Very nice ^^
hahahagirlha 2 years ago
I like It! Your voice is so pretty. :)
animegirl73197 2 years ago
You have one of the best dubs I've ever heard!
Great job!
And keep it up
AutumsTears 2 years ago
Can't stop listening to it.. x-x" It's just.. gorgeous.. D: Wow. GOOD JOB!
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Bekeenicole 2 years ago
Girl you've outdone yourself again! Great job!
pennamesweretaken 2 years ago
your voice is amazing! You're amazing! 5/5
SPDirector 2 years ago
You have such a nice voice(:
i wish i knew how to sing, but i can't -.-
Karatepotato13 2 years ago
this was anawsome work i loved it it was done beautiflly
darkhyper4 2 years ago
Hmm...these lyrics don't seem to relate at all the the original translation, but it's a good dub.
Elerie3 2 years ago
nice
HigurashiLover95 2 years ago
you are a very talented person. keep up the good work
awezy23 2 years ago
your voice is so preatty in this song, this is fantastic~!
sharkygirl56 2 years ago
Wow...the lyrics are really touching somehow TwT Like it >w°b
5 Stars! *hands you 5 Starfishes and runs away*
MagicaLamia 2 years ago
Have you ever considered singing for a living? Please do :)
1VIA1Alido 2 years ago
I adore your voice. <3333
You sound especially amazing in this song. It's so beautiful~ ;___;
seahorsegurl 2 years ago
That was just soo pretty. I wish I can sing like you ;^;
You're truly talented :D
LemonLFlavoredLTea 2 years ago
nice
HigurashiLover95 3 years ago 3
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er...thats not the lyrics...on the ending, the subbs say some thing totally different,...
bindieevee 3 years ago
They are lyrics she made herself.
<33
SouljaGirl1475 2 years ago 20
good job
chuchine1 3 years ago
I reckon that the lyrics reflect Shion's search for Satoshi.
FunnyGirl4682 3 years ago 29
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Dat1chickL0L 1 year ago
I used your lyrics for a fandub.. i hope you dont mind.
I'll attach it as a video response
xxBANGitsaly 3 years ago
This is good!!
PinkIzDaNewBlack 3 years ago
AWESOME
Sasukequeen3 3 years ago
wow that was awsome
momiji103 3 years ago
iloved iy! u did a wonderful job.
Uchi11 3 years ago
Which verse is this? Doesn't sound familiar at all to me.
Nekedo 3 years ago
I agree. I don't believe this is the verse used in the actual opening. It opens with reference to a burial, no?
Kataze 3 years ago
Yeah. The singing isn't bad, it just would have been more enjoyable if the lyrics were closer to the translation, in my opinion.
Nekedo 3 years ago 2
<3 Very lovely. :3
If I may, I'm gonna use the lyrics. o: Of course give you credit!
Kanamekururugi 3 years ago
I sent you a request for Futari no Birthday :D
Porquia 3 years ago
i was thinking the same think when i was listining to her singing dear you feel
animafan78 3 years ago
x3
Well, I wrote some lyrics, and I would be delighted if she sung them.
Porquia 3 years ago
very beautiful ;3
just one thing in the begining (i aint good at typign english) u were off for a few secs like off tone
srry to say
im a singer too
i want to dub it but i cant
stupid computer doesnt let meh upload stuff
Kitty2two 3 years ago
nice voice CinnamonPunch!
...
i...kinda have a wierd recuest...can u like sing the "Lucky Star" song i know it's funny but i think no one ever trayed to sing it!
am i right? XD
BLUEEYESBLACKCAT 3 years ago
Honest to god. This is the best version i've heard fanmade.
There were tears in my eyes by the end.
Beautiful. <3
FabledSoulofkh 3 years ago
i LOVE IT! muah! your going on my subcribtions!
maromi12d3 3 years ago
People like you inspire me to do fandubs...But I'm too shy to do so...
Aeraknight 3 years ago 2
I am like that too... Ah, it's kinda natural.
TheAnimeGeek 3 years ago
I sound really good...But...I really can't record.
Aeraknight 3 years ago
fwa...I was just answering someone's comment!!!Why does people think I did that to make people hate me? I think CinnamonPunch has a lovely beautiful voice!
Aeraknight 3 years ago 3
One word: Wonderful!
Charuid 3 years ago
Sweet! You got the full version!
TheAnimeGeek 3 years ago 2
wow i can't get away from this song you sing really good... at first rikachuu was my fave in singing dubs but i like your voice better. you should do the second opening of higurashi
NormalWinterFox 3 years ago 3
Try to remain consistent.
KingGoofy1 3 years ago
AWSOME VOICE!!1!! Do the full version please!
TheAnimeGeek 3 years ago 2
this is awesome! you should do the full version with those lyrics.
Sharinganfan08 3 years ago 3
your a good singer ^_^
mewmiki 3 years ago 3
did u ever think of doing the second opening. if soo tell me i beat it'd be great
animafan78 3 years ago
OMG when they make higurashi no naku koro ni kai english u should sing the ending^^ U r a great singer^^
Azuratem 3 years ago
you sing good
narutorock644 3 years ago
You absolutely have pretty voice! <3
Thanks for this ^-^
AnimeKichigai 3 years ago
I never get tired listening to this, I especially love the final lyrics of the song~ I could probably think of a million requests, but I've forgotten them all! @_@
(write them down, then..) Haha!
SoClosex 3 years ago
After eventually noticing the lyrics arn't the originally translated ones, xD! You did a great job. I love how even the new lyrics are beautiful and fit perfectly with the song~ Your voice is wonderful!
SoClosex 3 years ago
YOU HAVE A GREAT VOICE. I just wish you had a better quality mic! Seriously, you rock!
Ashestoashesjc 3 years ago
i want to ninja loot you lyrices they so perfect!!!
hatlover101 3 years ago
you have a nice voice i like the video and i faved it
hatlover101 3 years ago
I would -love- to hear you sing the full opening or ending of Chrno Crusade...^-^
stardustmemoir 3 years ago 2
You have a very cute singing voice *is so in love.* Very, very cute!
Alchemisthun 3 years ago 3
You have very pretty voice! <3
Still, the lyrics, even if words fit pretty much in the music and everything, they are not really very similiar to original ones O__o" not that I want to criticize You or something, the song You sang is very pretty itself, but just doesn't have much in common with original one XD sorry for the babble, keep up the good work!
alexistheangel 3 years ago 2
I know the lyrics aren't the same but coming up with your own lyrics is much more exciting, since everyone pretty much made their lyrics match up to the real ones. I had no means on making the lyrics similar at all, cause then what's the point on making your OWN lyrics. I try not to look at the original lyrics, cause then what's the fun? I'm sorry that my lyrics aren't what you've planned, but I want to be different from everyone else ^^. Thank you for commenting though!
CinnamonPunch 3 years ago
Oh I see! O__O I'm sorry, I had no idea that You are writing lyrics in this way! What I'm trying to do is transcribe original lyrics to Polish and then sing it(what is pretty hard XD I have one video like that on my account), because I find it a big challenge :0 I never actually thought of Your way of writing lyrics... it might be also fun! Maybe I'll try it one day! I'll be sure to give You some credit when it happens!
alexistheangel 3 years ago
Isn't it?
btw... Where did you get the karaoke?? PLZ TELL ME ^_^
good job by the way!!
yamiko193 3 years ago
wow ur voice is heavenly good job! this is the first trans of this song i heard and actually liked! (no offense to others) I ESPECIALLY LIKED WHEN SOMEONE ELSE WAS SINGING TOO WITH U AT SOME PARTS. THAT MADE IT REALLY GOOD AT THE PERFECT TIMINGS (srry cap lock accident)
Miharuchan1 3 years ago
Good one, I loved it. Keep it up, I wanna hear more!
SuperDizzy12 3 years ago
Good.
fastfighter 3 years ago
You do have some raw talent, but I would suggest singing from your diaphragm, so that it will give you more power. By habit, everyone sings too much with the voice up near the nose, but if you open up like your yawning, that helps you sound more full. Don't try to copy any of the Japanese pop artists because they all seem to enjoy this small, cutesy sound, which has no power. I think you have a lot of potential and become extremely talented. Just keep working hard ^.^
shadeylane 3 years ago
awsome!! ^^ u have a great singing voice its soo cute and nice i wish mine was like it ^^
sasukelover795 3 years ago
you should try dubbing the 2nd ending to Full Metal Alchemist!
tococrazy123 3 years ago
Okay! Thanks for your request! And if your are the person who requested that in my other fandub I meant to reply but accidently deleted it! Sorry! And if your not, lol.
CinnamonPunch 3 years ago