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Wow!!!
This keeps getting better and better...
Love the story line and the background music,
Eugene
EUGENEH0RNSWAGGLE 3 years ago
Oh very nice second half. The closeup and the two monologues mixing. You could have spun that a bit more but the 'break' to reallity with 'the question' was great. That white lit face in the top right corner just magic.
Great drama
Having a bit of a problem with a sigarette that does not seem to get shorter though >:-)
PuppyZwolle 3 years ago
wow, that was an excellent script!
dogpatchdebbie 3 years ago
LOL - and I thought it would be under 10 minutes. I'm such a maroon. I have a fellow Ytuber that helps me with my snappy dialog: cim75. Has a gift for creeply story telling and giving Zahn that old fashioned flowery language... you should check him out!
toolgirl150 3 years ago
I'm subbed to cim75..he is a really cool guy! I entered his halloween contest!
I've not kept up that much lately...he was off for a little while!
dogpatchdebbie 3 years ago
Yeah, did a lot of stickam time and just moved, I think he's going to be making more vids soon :D
toolgirl150 3 years ago
Those flashbacks are extremely effective, reminding us that the vampire was once human, and allowing us to empathise with him, despite the evil within him.
podpictures 3 years ago
Ah - a storyteller after my own heart.... :DDDD
toolgirl150 3 years ago
I'm impressed that you focus on psychological aspects of being a vampire, not just the 'biting' part, or how 'evil' vampires must be. I love that you illustrate how evil is within us all along, and that, given a choice, some decide to embrace it willingly.
podpictures 3 years ago
Flashback was awesome!
prismaya 4 years ago
You nailed it.
Wonderful, Lauren :)
tomken8d 4 years ago
Awesome, Lauren. Absolutely awesome. You should be very pleased with yourself. xxx
jenzatron 4 years ago
thanks so much babe and yes I am. A bit tired too. But exciting about moving forward.
toolgirl150 4 years ago
4:51 to 5:30, the lighting across the eyes.. perfect. Absolutely PERFECT.
cim75 4 years ago
that one was especially sweet
toolgirl150 4 years ago
Oh My Fucking God, the flashback!!! Yesssssss!!!
cim75 4 years ago
hehehee- we shall see more of that in 3
toolgirl150 4 years ago
Wow.
captainfury2007 4 years ago
Pure genius.
captainfury2007 4 years ago
thanks cap'n - :)
toolgirl150 4 years ago