"The Water is Rising" (ORIGINAL SONG) - dedicated to the QLD Flood Victims

[poka513]

I like this song the way it is, keep on keeping on.

[obrms]

i duno, i really lyk this song the way it is. simple. catchy. > < and u can downlowd 4 free? :o wow.

[LIFESKEY]

It might be worth fixing and redoing, because it's a great tune - and unfortunately, it's looking like we may be heading for even worse times ahead...and encouragement is what will be needed...

[hannahrosamusic]

@LIFESKEY

Thank you for your comments! :) I appreciate all the suggestions etc. I can get.

That is a very valid point. (Y)

I had been developing and editing this song a bit anyway - because I uploaded this song within a day of writing it, this version here is a rough one.

Thank you so much for your suggestions!! :)

[LIFESKEY]

missed a bit lol ... 'but we're together - we'll make things better - cuz we aren't ever gonna give up."

[LIFESKEY]

It's a great tune etc, but it doesn't match up to the beginning and what Ann Bligh is saying. She was being adamant that together we will conquer the flood, but the lyrics are not - they give the impression of someone doing nothing but just sitting around watching the rain fall down and wondering when it's going to stop. So my suggestion is, instead of 'we're all wonderin when's it gonna stop', it might have been better to sing 'but we're together and we're not gonna give up'. :o)