Is english your first language? Becuase the grammer and writing needed a lot of work. I didn't understand a lot of the story--it jumped around. And what was the beeping coming from? The song was pretty though. But I am very surprised this is supposed to be for college.
omggg Such a nice story!!!! Is this story you made or Luis sing? I wonder what this song is about? I think I already know it's about rain... :) But what else?
@9PEARL9 I actually made this story up, the song is sing by a guy named Luis Fonsi. The song is with this story because I thought it would match this story, and yes your correct :) the song is called "llueve por dentro" which in english means "It rains inside of me" The song talks about a guy who feels that deep inside of him, it always rains because the person he loves is not with him. That basically what the song talks about. Thank you for the comment by the way :)
Yea except you forgot the part where they all die. LOL!!!!
REDMAN8767 8 months ago
Is english your first language? Becuase the grammer and writing needed a lot of work. I didn't understand a lot of the story--it jumped around. And what was the beeping coming from? The song was pretty though. But I am very surprised this is supposed to be for college.
Lizibela 1 year ago
omggg Such a nice story!!!! Is this story you made or Luis sing? I wonder what this song is about? I think I already know it's about rain... :) But what else?
9PEARL9 1 year ago
@9PEARL9 I actually made this story up, the song is sing by a guy named Luis Fonsi. The song is with this story because I thought it would match this story, and yes your correct :) the song is called "llueve por dentro" which in english means "It rains inside of me" The song talks about a guy who feels that deep inside of him, it always rains because the person he loves is not with him. That basically what the song talks about. Thank you for the comment by the way :)
NewJerseyNets11 1 year ago
@NewJerseyNets11 Nice meaning close to my situation. Your story is very creative and romantic. I like it very much!
9PEARL9 1 year ago
@9PEARL9 Thank you! I really appreciate it :)
NewJerseyNets11 1 year ago
umm i dont speak spanish wat does the song mean???
WerewolfFan888 2 years ago